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Radioactive Applesauce Vice Captain
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 Posted: Sun Dec 28, 2008 6:13 am
Post your best work! biggrin
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Posted: Sun Dec 28, 2008 2:23 pm
A Flower Among Weeds.
Schools the escape she desperately needs,
She's like a flower in a garden of weeds.
Pulling her down, wanting her light,
But she won't go down without a fight.
She stands strong, rooted in spot,
The weeds all whisper, they scheme and they plot.
They plan her demise, the small daisy's death,
She'll keep on fighting, till her very last breath.
They keep it up, putting her to the test.
She'll prove to all that she is the best.
She'll catch the light she'll hog the water.
The weeds will realize she fought harder.
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Posted: Wed Dec 31, 2008 1:37 pm
Cerebian A Flower Among Weeds. Schools the escape she desperately needs, She's like a flower in a garden of weeds. Pulling her down, wanting her light, But she won't go down without a fight. She stands strong, rooted in spot, The weeds all whisper, they scheme and they plot. They plan her demise, the small daisy's death, She'll keep on fighting, till her very last breath. They keep it up, putting her to the test. She'll prove to all that she is the best. She'll catch the light she'll hog the water. The weeds will realize she fought harder. Nice work!
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Posted: Thu Jan 01, 2009 1:09 pm
Thank you =) most of if not all i post in here is from my writing class. Just posting it to see what people think ya know?
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Posted: Fri Jan 02, 2009 7:13 am
sweatdrop well here i go but its not as good as cerebian's heart
As winter winds blew on my cheeks
I could see it clear.
My breath my feet and these Old Gloves,
that I held very near.
As the snow flew gently down
I walked the streets alone.
People playing in the snow,
And people rushing home.
I Had to shop to get a gift
For someone I held dear.
But all I had was 50 cents
And a old little stuffed bear. 3nodding I know cerebian has a better chance of winning but i can still try ^^
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Posted: Fri Jan 02, 2009 7:15 am
Cerebian A Flower Among Weeds. Schools the escape she desperately needs, She's like a flower in a garden of weeds. Pulling her down, wanting her light, But she won't go down without a fight. She stands strong, rooted in spot, The weeds all whisper, they scheme and they plot. They plan her demise, the small daisy's death, She'll keep on fighting, till her very last breath. They keep it up, putting her to the test. She'll prove to all that she is the best. She'll catch the light she'll hog the water. The weeds will realize she fought harder. Well done its really nice ^^
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Posted: Fri Jan 02, 2009 6:17 pm
Thanks you but i thought your's was adorable =)
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Posted: Sat Jan 03, 2009 6:06 am
Cerebian Thank you =) most of if not all i post in here is from my writing class. Just posting it to see what people think ya know? Sounds good, keep it up.
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Posted: Sat Jan 03, 2009 6:08 am
Tempera Uchiha sweatdrop well here i go but its not as good as cerebian's heart As winter winds blew on my cheeks I could see it clear. My breath my feet and these Old Gloves, that I held very near. As the snow flew gently down I walked the streets alone. People playing in the snow, And people rushing home. I Had to shop to get a gift For someone I held dear. But all I had was 50 cents And a old little stuffed bear. 3nodding I know cerebian has a better chance of winning but i can still try ^^ There is a 1st and 2nd place in every contest, so it's still worth it.
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