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PostPosted: Tue Aug 05, 2008 10:03 pm


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Hello(:
So my friend and I were bored this summer and we decided to write a story together. So she gets credits too.
We haven't really planned out the plot, we just write whatever is on our mind, haha.
So yeah, It will kind of be dragged out. :/

Main Characters:
-Tuyet Dang
-Mai Phan
-Thanh Do
-Minh Ly
-Vinh Ngo

Character Profiles:
Minh Ly ; The punk boy with hair everyone wants. Madly in love with Mai Phan.
Mai Phan ; The spoiled girly girl who dyes her hair almost every day.
Tuyet Dang ; The hyper, tomboyish, clumsical junior high girl who secretly likes the new kid. But fails to admit her true feelings towards him which she hides through hatred.
Thanh Do ; The cool new kid.
Vinh Ngo ; The new hunk at school .




CH 3 will NOT be updated Tuesday, sorry !
PostPosted: Tue Aug 05, 2008 10:13 pm


Prologue~!


Sprint.
I must sprint now! That is if I want to make it to school on time… I can’t believe I’m late for the first day of school! Mai is seriously, going to kill me. Oh lordy.

That’s right, I was late on the first day of school. Running down the street as quickly as possible without bashing into other people that are walking slower.

“Tuyet!” I skidded to a halt to see who was calling my name. I looked back but didn’t see anyone… that’s weird I could have sworn they said my name…. CRAP SCHOOL I’m SO DEAD looking at my watch it read 8:58 and school starts at 9:00. RUN.

I turned around to run again, *BAM* before I knew it my bag skidded off and I was staring at the sky.

“Ah! I’m so sorry!” OH MAN more time wasted.

“Yeah, whatever just watch where you’re going next time.”

“Hey! I said sorry! It’s not my fault I’m late for school!” I picked up all my stuff that spewed when we collided and looked up to see him walking away. “HEY!” I got up after him and grabbed his shoulder. What was that ripping sound? o.o

“You know you could at least-“ I stopped when he turned around, stunned. He was… Gorgeous. Did my heart just flutter? Nah.

“I… what?” he looked at me weirdly. “Whatever, ” he spoke slowly like I was a retard “ I’m late to be somewhere. So if you wouldn’t mind…” he glanced at my hand which was still on his shoulder.

“OH! Sorry.” I pulled my hand away but when I put my head back up he was already walking around the corner. WHOA HE’S FAST. I wish I were as fast as him so I wouldn’t be like all the – SCHOOL! Ahhh now I’m definitely late. What a great way to begin the new school year.

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x3_Rei
Vice Captain

PostPosted: Tue Aug 05, 2008 10:14 pm


Chapter 1~!


“TUYET! This is not a very good way to start out the school year you know. Late.” That’s right. I was late. But really, it normally wouldn’t be that big of a deal, except… “I really should punish you but seeing as it’s the first day, and I’m feeling generous, I’ll let you off with just a warning. Now, go sit down.” Yes, you heard correctly. It’s the first day of school and I’m late. So that counts as a big deal, yes? Yes.

I took my seat in the back of the room, not missing all of the hushed chuckles coming from the others on my way there, next to Mai, who looked at me wide eyed.

“What?” I stared at her. She then began shuffling through her bag, “What?” I repeated but she kept searching through her stuff. “WHAT?!”…Like anything else could go wrong, the whole class looked back at me and started snickering more noticeably. “WHAT?” I asked one last time a little harsher, darker and directed at the people staring at me. HAH! They all turned their attention back the teacher, while I punched the air in victory.

I directed my curiosity back to Mai. “What are you looking for?”

“AHA! I FOUND IT!” her head flew up and she was holding a little compact mirror. She turned to me with a horrified expression and opened the mirror. I glanced at it.
“Yeah, that’s my face. So what?”

“Look closer!” she demanded and I was suddenly afraid that if I didn’t she would decide to poke my eyes out with her stilettos. So I looked.

“WTF?!” and AW SHIZ. I’d like to retract my former statement. If you recall: ‘Like anything else could go wrong’ because things could go horribly worse. “Why didn’t you tell me sooner, that I have a giant streak of dirt across my forehead! It’s practically big enough to see from Jupiter!” I scrubbed like a madman at my forehead.

“OH MY GOD!” she squealed and I had to cover my ears from the octaves her voice reached.

“I’m getting really tired of asking this but, WHAT?”

“Your skirt!”

“Are your freaking kidding me?! This is like the worst first day of school ever!” there was a huge rip on the zipper of my skirt. It was seriously huge! Well at least big enough to see the pink floral pattern on my underpants.

And then it all came back to me ~~~~

“HEY!” I got up after him and grabbed his shoulder. What was that ripping sound?

“You know you-“ I stopped when he turned around, stunned.

That’s right! It was all that stupid guys’ fault! And he was too pretty for me to take my eyes off him and look to see if anything actually had ripped, WHICH IT DEFINELTY HAD.

“Here take this,” Mai motioned and started peeling off her uniform blazer, “you can wrap it around your waist.”

“Are you kidding? You’re gunna get mobbed by the faculty if they see you without a blazer!”

“It’s alright. Seriously, the uniform looks better without it.” She flipped her hair back and only then did I realize the almost-hideously bright shade of orange her hair had become. Now, on anyone else this hairstyle would be absolutely revolting, but on her it fit so well with her skin tone, it almost looked natural.

“I’m loving your hair!” I said forgetting all about my skirt and examining her hair closely.

“Stop that! You know how I hate it when people touch my hair.” She slapped my hand away. “Besides, you shouldn’t get used to it, it’s gone by tomorrow.”

I wanted to ask her more but we were unexpectedly interrupted “MAI! TUYET! Must you really insist on disrupting my classroom? I let you off for being late, now please do me a favor and BE QUIET.”

I wanted to make a face but I felt bad because he had a valid point. He let me off for being late. So I shut my mouth and tried not to giggle at the faces Mai was making while he had his head turned.

The teacher turned back around and eyed Mai suspiciously, “Okay class, for your first assignment, you will be getting into groups of three or four. Please do that now.”

The class, naturally, broke into uproar and most of the kids stood up going to sit next to the partners, who would most likely accompany each other in any other partnering activity for the rest of the year. The same went for Mai and me. We were always partners. Along with-

“Haha, I can’t believe you guys got in trouble for talking too much. Seriously, last year you two were the best at being quiet you never got into any trouble. Are you two losing your touch?”

Minh.

“Ha-Ha, Very funny Minh. Shut up.” I stuck my tongue out at him as he slid into the seat next to Mai and she lightly smacked his arm.

Minh was usually a quiet person around other people but when he’s with his friends or performing on a stage - oh, did I forget to mention he’s in a band? Well he is – he’s totally comfortable and laid back. Especially when he’s around Mai. Did I also forget to mention they are going out? Well they are. That’s how we got close. The two of them are total opposites. He’s in a punk band; and she’s a total girly girl. They’ve been on and off the last year or two but I can sense that deep down she really loves him.

“HEY! Gimmie back my mirror!”

“Your gunna have to kiss me for it!”

“Come on just give it back!”

“Gimmie a kiss!”

“No.”

“Then no mirror.”

“Come on! I can’t kiss you here!”

“Sorry.”

“Butthead!”

But I wouldn’t take my word on that.

“Mai and Minh! Is there something that you would like to share with the class?”

“…”

“Again, be quiet! Alright so, your assignment is so interview each other with these,” the teacher held out a little Sony camera that the class stared at in awe, “You will be interviewing your partners as if you were interviewing them for a job. ‘What are your interests? What experiences would you like to get out of this?’ Etc. I’ll hand out a rubric tomorrow at the beginning of class so don’t forget to get one then!”

Just then the bell rang for the next class and I gathered my stuff, made sure no one could see anything under my coat and walked to my next class with Mai.

~~~~*~~~~*~~~~

After my math class the bell signaled that it was time for lunch.

I walked into the cafeteria looking around for Mai. We usually sat together at lunch, along with Minh, of course, who would occasionally leave us alone to go hang out with some of his other friends. Today wasn’t one of those days. After a couple minutes of searching I found Mai at a table, which was near the middle of the room, sitting with a couple of other kids talking to them about who-knows-what.

“Hey, what’s up? Did you eat already?” I asked.

“Hi. Whoa Tuyet what kind of question is that? Of course I didn’t eat yet. Lunch only started like 2 minutes ago!”

“Oh, my bad. Haha,” I laughed nervously. “So, for that interviewing project thing are we going to meet after school or something?”


“Well, nothings official yet but we’ll probably just do it at Minh’s house after school!” Well, that was a pretty predictable answer. Mai usually always decides to do projects like this at Minh’s house because she says he has the nicest house out of the three of us but I think its just because she like to sneak into his room and lay on his bed. She’s seriously one of the strangest people I’ve ever known. But she’s the best too.

“Okay, just lemme know when it’s been made official.”

“You’ll be the first to know!”

Just them something blinded me, “Guess who!”

I hate this game. “Who?” I asked lamely.

“Guess!”

“I don’t- Hey wait this is Minh, isn’t it? You idiot! Mai is over there!” I pointed in the direction in front of me, “Wow, that was stupid, how could you mix us up? I mean look at her hair! You should have known I wasn’t her.”

“Ah, Tuyet its okay he’s a guy, they do this all the time.” She brushed off my concern.

“Hey, she’s right I am a guy-“

“Oh no, really?!” I cut him off sarcastically.

“You know what, Never mind!”

“Fine with me.”

“Geese! You two! Why are you always like this? One minute your best friends, and the next you’re making fun of each other like… like… I don’t know but you need to stop it.” Mai exhaled.

“Haha. Mai, we’re sorry, you know this is how we express our love for each other!” Minh grabbed me and put me in a headlock.

“Yeah, he’s like my brother! It’s hard not to tease him!” I added and put my arm around him trying to give him a nuggie.

Mai let out an exasperated sigh, “FINE FINE FINE. Whatever you two say. As long as you two don’t have some secret relationship behind my back!”

Minh and I gasped in unison, “How’d ya know?!” Mai’s expression grew into a horrified one.

“JUST KIDDING!” I yelled, “Remember, I said ‘like a brother’ ” I tried calming her while Minh embraced her also in an effort to calm her.

After a minute or so Mai had calmed down but she still wouldn’t let Minh let go of her.

“OH YEAH!” Minh piped up, “I forgot,” he was looking somewhere behind me “there’s a new kid at school today! I knew him from a couple years ago when he joined my band; I’m showing him around school. His name is Thanh.” Minh got up; resisting Mai’s pulls for him to sit back down, and put his hands around his mouth, “Thanh! Over here!” he called. I turned around to look and see whom the new kid was. I didn’t see anyone coming in our direction so I turned back around, this kid can’t be that interesting, and Minh started again, “Okay here he is. Thanh, this is Mai,” he gestured to Mai who was holding onto Minh’s hand, “and that is Tuyet.” He gestured toward me.

Not wanting to be rude I turned around to greet the new stranger and-

I couldn’t believe who was standing in front of me,

“IT’S YOU!”

- End of Chapter 1 -
PostPosted: Tue Aug 05, 2008 10:15 pm


Chapter 2~!



“IT’S YOU!” I screamed shoving an accusing finger at his face.

“Uhm…” he looked totally unfazed by my outburst, there is no way he could have forgotten me, “Have we met before?” strike that. Apparently there is a way.

“Oh… you’re that weird girl… who ran into me earlier and tried to hold my hand.”

I stood there gawking at him, forgetting that my hand was so far out I was practically poking him in the eye.

“YOU HELD HIS HAND?! Tuyet! Why don’t you tell me these kinds of important things?!” Mai began gawking with me.

“Ahem, correction,” Minh piped in, “She tried to hold it! Unsuccessful!”

“Shut up!” without even looking she smacked him upside the head.

“OW!”

Finally, I snapped out of my stage of shock and took my hand back and blushed furiously realizing I was standing there looking like an idiot for the past couple of minutes.

“You know, your hands are kind of sweaty, they were all warm earlier, and I think they left a wet mark.” WHAT?! That’s totally lame! My hands are not sweaty!

“My hands are NOT sweaty! They are just fine. Moisturized perfectly-“I began when I remembered what really happened earlier, “Hey! You lied! I definitely didn’t try to hold your hand! My hand wasn’t even anywhere NEAR your hand! It was on your shoulder!” This guy might be HELLA gorgeous but he was a liar and I HATE liars.

“Yeah, whatever. All I know is that you were kinda creepy.” He turned towards Minh, “Is this tour over now? Or is there sill more?” he looked impatient.

“Uh, yeah there’s still more, I just wanted to introduce you three even though it seems like I didn’t need to,” he added, “Let’s go. See you after school!”

The two boys walked off and I was left with Mai, which, after careful consideration, wasn’t the best choice on my part since she’d probably start grilling me for the details of this morning.

Thinking on my feet, I interrupted before she could say anything, “Uh! I HAVE TO GO. RETAKE A TEST. SORRY. SEE YOU AFTER SCHOOL~!” I said already halfway out of the cafeteria. After lunch I only had 2 classes left I didn’t have either of them with Mai.

~

I had successfully made it to my last two classes without running across Mai, I still have to go home with her but she wouldn’t ask any embarrassing questions around Minh.

My last class of the day was history which seemed to have been never ending, so I was thankful when the bell rang and I quickly grabbed my stuff and headed to the front of the classroom to ask the teacher about something when, I felt something ramming into my side and then down down down I, and the other something, went.

“OOOOW~! Gosh. Watch where you’re-“NO WAY. NO EFFING WAY.

“You’re like an accident magnet, aren’t you?”

AND THERE HE WAS. GRRRR. I felt like ripping a teddy bears head off right then. *GASP* STUPID PERSON MAKING ME HAVE HORRIBLE THOUGHTS~!

“I am not. And if I were you’d be like a… a… a jinx! Or something of that nature.”

“Oh wow. I’m scared now.” He picked himself up and rolled his eyes then extended his hand out to me which I graciously took- wait, EH?!

“You… you just helped me up!” I stared at my hand.

“Good, of you to notice.”

“That means, you really can be polite!” I smacked a hand on his shoulder

“Yeah, I can be. More than you. You’re welcome by the way.” He said hitching his bag higher on his shoulder and, from what I could tell, he was getting bored with our conversation because he walked right past me and out the door leaving me feeling a little idiotic.

“Hey!” I ran after him, “Wait!” he paused, “Th- thanks.”

“tche.” And he kept on walking. Che? CHE? CHE?! After calling me impolite, I say thanks and all I get is a ‘che’?! Ugh. Whatever. Remind me not to thank him again.

OH MAN why am I late for everything?! Mai’s gunna rip my hair out because I’m late guh. *sigh* and least Minh’s probably there. He’ll get her to restrain.




“OH my god Tuyet, hurry up! We’ve been standing out here for like EVER!” Mai flailed her arms to get my attention. Minh was, thankfully, standing right next to her. However, from the look of disappointment painted on his face, I would say he didn’t know I would be coming on their little journey home.

“T-Tuyet is coming to? I thought it was just going to be us… well I guess I’ll just go home with the guys’ then, call me when you’re home!” before Mai could protest he had already run out the gate to walk with his friends.

“HEY! Wait up!” I heard a voice from behind me and I started to turn to see who was talking and whom he was talking to.

“Hey! It’s that new guy!” Mai whispered and before I could fully turn around a shoulder collided with mine sending all the books I was holding to scatter on the cement.

“NO FREAKING WAY! That stupid idiot! He just ran into me again!” I was about to go after him when Mai pulled me back and made me watch as he walked out casually with Minh and his group of friends.

“Calm down Tuyet. Maybe it was just an accident. Who cares?” I DO. “Anyways let’s go. I’m getting a huge craving for frozen yogurt.”

“Yeah. Fine.”

The frozen yogurt place wasn’t too far of a walk from school. Just walk a few blocks and when you’re in the city it’s pretty much unmissable with all the neon outside.

As we entered the parlor Mai and I waved to a couple of familiar faces, the frozen yogurt place was a popular hangout for kids our age. We picked a table at the window. I like watching people walking by. I stared out the window and Mai babbled on and on about the new kid and how extremely dreamy her new world history teacher is. Ew.

“Hey, are you even listening to me?” She waved a hand in front of my face.

“Oh, yeah.” she knew me too well.

“No you’re not. Now, tell me about this new kid. OUT WITH IT ALREADY.”

I hesitated, “…there really isn’t anything to tell. I was late. I accidentally ran into him, and then I ran into him again. And again. Okay well the last one wasn’t technically my fault!”

“Oh.” She sounded DISAPPOINTED. -_-

“OHMIGOD. WE ARE SUCH LOSERS. We came in and sat right down! We didn’t even go to get our yogurt!” I smacked my head and pulled her up and over to the self-serve bar.

By now I only expected that Mai wouldn’t have the disappointed look on her face anymore but, to my dismay, her face hadn’t changed.

“Hey, what’s wrong?” I stopped in front of Mai who was putting some plain tart into her cup.

“Nothing.”

“WHOA YOU STINK AT LIEING. I mean come on Mai, I’m standing right in front of you and you’re putting plain tart in your cup – WHICH YOU ABSOLUTELY HATE. You can’t seriously be trying to tell me that there isn’t anything you want to tell me.” She looked at me straight in the eye I almost had to look away.

“It’s just… well, you know. You’re my best friend. If something happens, you can tell me. You know that, right?” All I could do was stare at her. Being caught off guard by her sudden mood swing I was launched into utter silence.

“It’s funny, you know. Being friends all this time and I’ve never actually said that out loud.” She suddenly bounced around me, “That’s all I wanted to say!” she poked me, “Whoa, you look like someone hit you over the head with a brick!” I was silent getting the rest of my frozen yogurt until we sat back down and she said:

“OHMIGOD. EW. WTF IS THIS?!” she looked disgusted, “EW! IT’S PLAIN. TART. …YOU!” she stuck her finger at me, “You knew this would happen! Why didn’t you tell me I had gotten plain tart?! That’s like a waste of a perfectly good ounce~!”
I couldn’t help but laugh at her. Moments like these are when I realize why she’s my best friend.

--------

When I finally got home after walking Mai home first (she refuses to walk home by herself) I went directly to my room and flopped down on my bed.

This was my normal everyday routine when I get home; go straight to my room, lay on my bed and think, get called down for dinner – which I spent by myself – then go back to my room and do homework.

I lied on my bed staring at the ceiling thinking about the new kid and the first day of school.

A knock at the door interrupted my thoughts followed by a head being poked through my opened door,

“Dinner is ready, your parents are home tonight, you have someone to eat with,” she looked thoughtfully at me and removed her head from the doorway shutting it behind her.

I sighed.


Great, dinner with the parents. And I was actually looking forward to dinner.

I hopped off the bed and went downstairs.

I was set in my usual spot; even while my parents were gone I didn’t sit at the head of the table. I always sat in the same spot.

“Nice of you to join us,” my father, who was sitting at the end of the table locked at me with a stern face.

“No problem,” I replied looking at the bowl in front of me. Pho. I didn’t like having soup. If I looked hard I could see my reflection in the liquid.

“How was your first day of school, honey?” my mom asked eagerly awaiting for me to give her all the details.

“Eh. It was okay,” I replied simply. She looked at me funny.

“I got a call that you were late today.” My father’s voice was low. He seriously overreacts.

But, HE GOT A CALL?! I was late one day! Come on! This freaking school can’t give me one warning! Didn’t the teacher even say he’d let me off the hook?! Some other teacher must have seen in walk in late. DANGIT I hate that school!

“…and – Are you even listening to me?” my father voice rose.

“Yeah,” I answered getting frustrated.

“Don’t use that tone of voice with me young lady! You need to wake up earlier you WILL NOT be lazy in this house. You will get to school on time and you will not complain! Understood? Next time be more – “

“NO! NO, I won’t be more careful next time! I’ll be late if I want to! It wasn’t even my fault today that some idiot ran into me! Besides what right do you have to come in here and start yelling at me for being late anyways? You’re never here to make sure I get to school! If you want me on time then make sure I was up early enough!”

I stood, fed up with my father and him trying to act as though he knew what was best for me, and began walking away.

“Honey! You- you didn’t eat any – “

“I had yogurt. I’m not hungry.” I cut her off and kept walking until I was back in my room.

I lied on my bed thinking about what I had said. Thinking about my father, he was probably fuming.

One thing I didn’t fail to notice. As I was walking away he kept silent.

He didn’t stop me. He didn’t say anything.

Probably had too much pride to say something.

- End of Chapter 2 -


Author's Note:
Hi! this is your author! *waves* I present to you chaptahh TWOOOO~! yeah I thought the drama with Tuyet's parents might be a bit much for only the 2nd chapter but there weren't too many complaints on Vinnie's part so we left it. Tell us how you feel about it, ne? Thanks and I hope you all keep reading with us.
Vinnie also says:Oh! and sorry for it being so long! I'll try and work something out with Amanda so they are shorter!

x3_Rei
Vice Captain


x3_Rei
Vice Captain

PostPosted: Tue Aug 05, 2008 10:20 pm


Reserved~!
PostPosted: Tue Aug 05, 2008 10:21 pm


Reserved~!

x3_Rei
Vice Captain


x3_Rei
Vice Captain

PostPosted: Wed Aug 06, 2008 12:52 am


Reserved~!
PostPosted: Thu Aug 07, 2008 12:20 am


Chapter 1 Updated !

x3_Rei
Vice Captain


m 0 0 f f i n x3
Crew

PostPosted: Thu Aug 07, 2008 10:14 pm


Its ohkay ^^
yu should make a pm list .
i prefer korean characters lawls
like on soompi .
PostPosted: Thu Aug 07, 2008 10:23 pm


m 0 0 f f i n x3
Its ohkay ^^
yu should make a pm list .
i prefer korean characters lawls
like on soompi .

You have a soompi ?!
I have a soompi !
I was gonna put this on and change the characters to WonderBang !
HAHAHAHA .

x3_Rei
Vice Captain


x3_Rei
Vice Captain

PostPosted: Thu Aug 07, 2008 10:26 pm


& It gets waaay better.
The beginning is lame though.
._.
Well, atleast I think get gets better. ninja
PostPosted: Fri Aug 08, 2008 12:13 am


good story so far. but put the character in korean is fine too wonderbang sounds perfect

Icy Queenie
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x3_Rei
Vice Captain

PostPosted: Fri Aug 08, 2008 12:17 am


Icy Queenie
good story so far. but put the character in korean is fine too wonderbang sounds perfect


Thanks.
But it's normally like this because this is a story about my friend and I, and the guys we used to like.
&The guys we used to like are Vietnamese. xp
PostPosted: Fri Aug 08, 2008 12:20 am


Hahaha, it entertained me for the whole chapter! biggrin

Great story! Keep up the good work!

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PostPosted: Fri Aug 08, 2008 6:41 am


i like da story heart
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