Topic Challenge!

[Strawberry Rai]

Anyone up for alittle friendly competition? Choose a topic, think hard, and based off of your knowledge of the opposing persons poetic and writing skills challenge them with a topic that maybe appealing then write about it, Poem or Story, and enter it. You choose the person you want to challenge and enter it in with the topic! Good luck, the winner shall recieve nothing more then the loser, as a matter of fact there is no winning or loosing for in the end you both gain, good luck!

 

[Nightangelchi]

Good idea Lucielle ^^ But my mind went blank to challenge...*sighs* someone challenge me please! hahaha, i love debates ^^ if i know how to debate to it, hahaha  

[Strawberry Rai]

Thank you! razz and I will be happy to challenge you. Hm..how about a person walking throught a light misty forest. You determine the feelings gender ect. Good luck!

 

[Nightangelchi]

Alright i hope i do this right XD hahahaha. correct me if i do this wrong, and explain it better ^_^


"Through the shadows of a light mist,
in a forest where no one goes,
walks a girl seeking her love.
Years ago, he said he'd come for her,
They'd meet under the old oak tree,
where they first laid eyes on each other.
The night he said he'd come for her,
was the night that he had been killed.
She still came to the place,
hoping to maybe just see a glance of his spirit,
or remember the very feel of his touch,
as if he were there right by her side, in person.
She no longer cries out his name,
she no longer feels a thing.
She no longer see's anything around her.
She's a wandering soul, seeking her love,
Through the shadows of a light mist,
in a forest where no one goes."  

[Strawberry Rai]

When I wrote this topic I was thinking romance and there it is! Good job! I couldn't of explained it better. I love when you repeated the words at the end it really put emphasis on what it was about.  

[Nightangelchi]

Hahaha thank-you ^_^ I sat in front of the computer trying to figure out what sounded the best hahahaha XD Now i shall challenge you to a topic Lucille..hmmm *thinks thinks thinks thinks thinks* how about:
A deserted beach. Good luck on this one ^^  

[Strawberry Rai]

Upon this deserted beach,
Is a promise to keep,
A goal to reach,
A being at peace,

Even though I am alone,
I am never alone,
The calm waves keep me sane,
Tis now I feel no pain,

Upon This deserted place,
A secret kept safe,
A risk to take,
A saddened face,

Even though I am astray,
Even though you grow father away,
The flames grow too,
Our hearts remain true,
Once more at peace,
On this deserted beach.  

[Nightangelchi]

Go lucille.....you read my mind 0_0 *puts tin foil on head* Now lets see you read my mind!
[random person]
You look like a dork *knocks tinfoil off
[/random person]
Damn you random people XD
*comedy act*  

[Strawberry Rai]

xD
*attempts to help her by grabbing seran wrap and gorilla tape, cluelessly wrapping her head and taping it.*
gorgeous ;o
xp  

[Nightangelchi]

ROFLMAO!!!  

[Winters Serenade]

Insanity Must Be An Illness....In That Case, I Have It! biggrin Yay!  

[burntchurro]

Are you kidding me? Insanity is normalness. Normalness and saneness are illnesses of insanity... (it does make sense, in a way. *eyebrow thing*)

Someone challenge me!  

[Nightangelchi]

Ok morningorchid, i'll challenge you ^^ how about *THINKS* how about....*thinks some more* oh! Butterflies. just a topic with butterflies =P hahaha. good-luck ^^  

[burntchurro]

A butterfly, wings spread wide
Undisturbed peace, but for a lonely sigh.
Jealously watch the butterfly glide
Careless, carefree, with nothing to hide.
And if life were so much less complicated
You'd be a butterfly, unable to relate to it.

(*hopes I dun this right*)  

[Nightangelchi]

YES! you did it perfectly! cause when i thought about butterflies i thought about how carefree they are and how they're flying and etc. like that! Vey WELL done!