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 Posted: Mon Jun 16, 2008 2:00 am
Sorry about the link, but I'd rather not put this on Photobucket. Not because I think it's so that good people would steal it, I just like DeviantArt more. Um... Anyway. Here it is.
http://drasus.deviantart.com/art/Shinobi-Don-t-Cry-88806571
Oh, and I already know that he seems to be holding his arms too stiffly(I was kinda tired... And my reference was my own crappy sketch. sweatdrop ) and I apologize that the quality isn't that great.
My first time posting my art on Gaia... I'm kinda nervous...! redface Don't go easy on me, though! I'd like some good, constructive critiquery, if you please.
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Posted: Thu Jun 19, 2008 11:32 am
Its pretty good. IDK, I like it.... The shading's great. I think if you coloured it it'd be better, but still. 4.51/5
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Posted: Sun Jun 22, 2008 10:02 pm
The hairs a little too spiky. Well, not that. It's just I think you have too many spikes . Ya know, 'cause he doesn't have all them spikes... i don't think. I think they are generally bigger masses of hair in each spike. Although, it is fanart so that may be okay. Also, the arms may be a little thin compared to the body. It may be just me. I'm not sure. And lastly, the head is a little "squinched," like it doesn't look smushed or anything. It's just, I think it may do well to make his face longer because it is Kakashi. Just try it out. you did pretty good with the picture itself. Oh! And make the neck a little thinner. Not too thin, just thinner.
And I figured out the hair problem. It's mostly that his hair looks very strange, because the hair on top of his head looks very calculated and you put little pieces of spike in between big spikes a lot and it kinda looks like pause breaks or something in art form. Small spike-y things are good to throw in here and there but sometimes it creates too much space and makes it look like the head has gaps in it or something. Hair is what you use to correct the size of the head without actually doing so so don't think about it too much and don't put unnecessary little things in. Ummm... i'm really not trying to be mean.
It really is a pretty decent picture. 3nodding Just, these comments are for future reference.
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Posted: Mon Aug 11, 2008 4:09 pm
Oh, I don't mind. I did ask for critique. ^ ^
I actually did this a looooooooong time ago... At an obscene time of the morning, with no reference. -excuses no jutsu-
I posted this on here mainly because I thought it looked odd... And couldn't put my finger on why. But I see all that you said. Thanks for your critique, I appreciate it. ^ ^
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Posted: Mon Aug 11, 2008 4:11 pm
Impmon51 Its pretty good. IDK, I like it.... The shading's great. I think if you coloured it it'd be better, but still. 4.51/5 Thanks. ^ ^ I appreciate the high rating! ^ ^
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Posted: Tue Aug 12, 2008 6:48 am
hideous simply hideous I hate It burning_eyes
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Posted: Tue Aug 12, 2008 11:01 pm
Sorry I can't meet your Oh-So-High-Expectations. Perhaps you'd like to show me your art? So I can learn from your technique?
And maybe you can critique my other pieces, I do so love intelligent feedback.
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