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 Posted: Sat Apr 05, 2008 2:00 pm
In Writing class, everyone says that my writing is 'Emo' or just depressing if they get a chance to read it. Since some of the guild members that post here know the difference, I can only hope that you will tkae the time to read this. This is very short, just for you guys:
I slowly count the days that pass by, somberly waiting the day of rest from this agonizing world. Something flutters past my eyes; a ray of light - something rare in this imitated reality. Others sought for an answer to a non-existent question; some way to travel out of this darkness. None returned the same. We all must cope with an eternity of war for it is the only way our minds can think. The only way our battles must be fought. This fake reality is now, and it is fed by our desires of power and money. This is happening, so do something about it.
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Posted: Sat Apr 05, 2008 3:37 pm
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Posted: Sat Apr 05, 2008 4:01 pm
I'd say more societal then introvert, so no, not emo.
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Posted: Sat Apr 05, 2008 5:37 pm
Next time someone calls it emo, you should slap them for insulting your writing. Those so-called "emo poems" are always synonymous to absolute crap, and that wasn't even close to crap. I thought it was pretty good, actually. ><
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Posted: Sat Apr 05, 2008 5:57 pm
That didn't seem emo or scene to me. Most people who say that don't even know what it means anyway. People called me emo just because I always wear Black shirts.
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Posted: Sat Apr 05, 2008 6:09 pm
Thank you guys so much! I feel so much better now. biggrin
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Posted: Sat Apr 05, 2008 7:01 pm
Pseudo Pain Thank you guys so much! I feel so much better now. biggrin You're welcome! Keep up the good writing. ^^
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Posted: Mon Apr 07, 2008 9:30 pm
Zombicide Pseudo Pain Thank you guys so much! I feel so much better now. biggrin You're welcome! Keep up the good writing. ^^ i'm going to quote that, i've never heard you say something nice to someone and using ^^ even lol, that's so cool
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Posted: Tue Apr 08, 2008 10:05 am
Soviet Mudkipz Zombicide Pseudo Pain Thank you guys so much! I feel so much better now. biggrin You're welcome! Keep up the good writing. ^^ i'm going to quote that, i've never heard you say something nice to someone and using ^^ even lol, that's so cool Christ, you're right.
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Posted: Tue Apr 08, 2008 12:21 pm
Soviet Mudkipz Zombicide Pseudo Pain Thank you guys so much! I feel so much better now. biggrin You're welcome! Keep up the good writing. ^^ i'm going to quote that, i've never heard you say something nice to someone and using ^^ even lol, that's so cool Holy Jesus tap-dancing Christ floating on a raft in the middle of the Mississippi River, you're right! eek
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Posted: Tue Apr 08, 2008 1:32 pm
ZeroofHate That didn't seem emo or scene to me. Most people who say that don't even know what it means anyway. People called me emo just because I always wear Black shirts. i always wear black shirts, they're just better!
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Posted: Tue Apr 08, 2008 5:24 pm
I don't like wearing white clothes, you always spill crap on them. Black I'm fine in, red I'm fine in, but white attracts spilled stuff like a magnet.
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[Hollow Point] Vice Captain
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Posted: Sun Apr 13, 2008 12:30 pm
I wrote a poem for an aquaintance of mine since he wanted one. I'm bored and want gold, so I'll post it:
A Social Marvel
No difference lay between us;
Those who are at the bottom of the chain
And the ones chosen to rule it;
The ones who are conceited and vain
And ample lesser that must admit
To having a lowered trust
Gossip spreads around campus like a plague
With nothing there to stop its growth
Nothing present to decrease the production of lies
The lies that unfold those who self-loathe
Opposed to those who only think wise
About things whose meanings are vague
A social world has brought entities that only suffer
A prize is given to those that succeed
In appropriating themselves with time
Those that expectations exceed
In a realm that only show those who shine
In a social world where everyone must differ
-Pseudo Pain
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Posted: Mon Apr 14, 2008 2:39 pm
[Hollow Point] I don't like wearing white clothes, you always spill crap on them. Black I'm fine in, red I'm fine in, but white attracts spilled stuff like a magnet. i knwo what you mean i have 2 white shirts i wear and they're either really wrinkly or dirty, and it sucks
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Posted: Mon Apr 14, 2008 7:23 pm
I really enjoyed that. Calling that "emo" is like calling Charles Dickens emo.
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