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Hey~

I got this idea when yalie posted her story, Insanity.. we should have a thread for sharing our works! Post any art, writing, music, whatever here, and comment on others' pieces! Alright, I suck at introductions, but hey..

Free image hosting:
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Free music hosting (thanks spawn):
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A few rules are called for, methinks (@ mods - am I allowed to do that?)..

~Give constructive criticism! If you don't like something, say WHAT you don't like and how you think it could be improved. Don't just randomly flame. Although everyone here are (as far as I know) lovely people, so I shouldn't really have to say that..

~What you post must be your own work.. duh.. rolleyes

~At least try and stay on-topic (yes, I'm being hypocritical, shhh)..

~Erm, don't sell/ask for things in here? Not a marketplace, but a gallery.. if you want to ask someone for art, PM them (if they say it's alright)..

~ Please give a title when you post..

I quite liked the storyline, and it was well written, although there were a few points which I felt could do with looking at - firstly, isn't it a bit confusing to be confronted with so many names in so short a space? Perhaps just introduce his closest friends and save the rest for later? Because it's quite difficult to remember all the names, descriptions, jobs, etc.. Secondly, the posessive of "you" is "your", not "you're" (erm.. in the first dream bit..).. erm.. I forgot the third one sweatdrop I loved the description at the beginning and during the dreams/visions, though.

Hope you found that useful 3nodding

Ah, right. That would explain it, then.. maybe I should post something of mine.

Woo aaah eee. Very nice. I couldn't write for my life.@_@

Ok, here is a coloured picture of Gaara I did. Didn't get scanned in too well. There's inked version, which I like better, but I don't know where it is. n__n'''



Steal it and I will hunt you down. ninja

my latest work is on my siggy 3nodding >->

Wow, really awesome gowns you've designed.

Talented-ness . -hail hail-

~ Our Story ~ (written by Sasa_powa_4eva)

Laying on my bed,
Spinning in my head,
Blanket as a shell,
I yell.

By a sunny day,
You looked in my way,
Came toward me,
And sat beside me.

Good friend we were,
Secret we shared,
Loving you at the same time was hard,
Especially was to my friend that you sent flowers and cards.

I had never hoped you to love me back,
Your strong feeling for my friend was a fact,
All I wanted is your happiness,
Even though I was extremely jealous of that "goddess".

At least, I thought our friendship was strong,
But I was wrong.
By another sunny day,
You walked away.

Like a dart right through my heart,
Bleeding but doesn't hurt,
Because nothing is more painful than what you did,
The word to describe my situation is lurid.

Several times I tried to ask you the same question,
All I wanted to know is the reason,
But each time you had a new way to avoid me,
Drowning me in this huge agony.

This is how our story ends,
We aren't anymore "friends",
Quietly, I cry,
Still wondering why...


It's a true story... it happened to me...!