-- The foreshortening. Does it look okay? Passable? No?
(I think I'll get rid of the vertical line all the way at the right side of the picture -- it's supposed to be the window frame, but I think the foreshortening should be more extreme on that)
-- The hat?
-- The folds of the skirt/ buttcape D: (It's a Gaian avatar, by the way; she's wearing the gothic veil skirt over the pimpin skirt)
-- etc
I'm kinda retarded when it comes to translating text into visuals and vice versa, so if you could provide a drawover, it would help me tons. biggrin
