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Vibe IV

PostPosted: Fri Apr 03, 2009 8:28 pm


As I Wake Up from my Long sleep.
I head To school but then I thought
Wait..........
A series of noise was getting louder and louder
*BOOM*
"RUN, RUN FOR YOUR LIFE!" A women says
As I turn my head around I see these little creatures
that look weird they look like objects that have been animated
then all of a sudden
BOOM!
A Figure that looks like a drum had hit William

"Uhhhhh" William said
All of a sudden William was floating in a dark abyss of no where
And there was a blue crystal floating over him.
There Was a voice

"You William, have been chosen to become The Destiny's Fate"
"But why me?" William said
"You were chosen because Every 10,000,000 years A Warrior has been Born to be raised by the guardians"
"what guardians?"
"Your Mother and Father"
"But They died when I was Only 7 years old and i had been raised in an orphanage"
"Yes, That Is true But They were looking down on you because they knew you were Destiny's Fate"
William Had woken up
He had realized that he was knocked out by that strange figure
Then he took a look around him
and saw fire and broken down buildings
and creatures that were on ground
"Wait Where are the other citizens?"
As William Thought
The April Fools parade
So AS William was Running down the street he
saw what had happened at the parade
and figured He was too late
Then He heard large thumps
*THUMP*
*THUMP*
*THUMP*
*THUMP*
As William Turned Around
He had saw a large Army Of figures that featured:
-lawn gnomes
-flamingos
-garlic
-taiko drums
-kokeshi dolls

Then William had felt his number 1 instinct to RUN!
Then he had thought the Train Station
As he was running down to the under ground Train station
He had hurried in to a train
and the train started to move
*chuga-chuga-choo-choo*
William had fell asleep due to his exhaustion
5 hours later
William Found himself still in the train
he was wondering
Who was conducting the train
So William Was sprinting to the conductors room
He had found a man with a ring in his palm



TO BE CONTINUED!!!!!!!
PostPosted: Fri Apr 03, 2009 8:29 pm


can some one edit my story?

Vibe IV


Natsume1589

PostPosted: Fri Apr 03, 2009 10:06 pm


question question question
that was...a weird...weird story

creative, but very weird
PostPosted: Fri Apr 03, 2009 10:52 pm


Ketsudan1589
question question question
that was...a weird...weird story

creative, but very weird

writers block

Vibe IV


chrissy_of_hailfire
Captain

PostPosted: Sat Apr 04, 2009 1:41 am


I'm guessing its in its basic form. i went ahead and did a spell check on it for you.

as for formatting the post so its a little easier to read i would probably make some of the lines not have the hard enters, its an interesting format to read, and it does give off a fealing of chaos but its too confusing.

also the guardian issue is also confusing you might want to clarify it some more
PostPosted: Sat Apr 25, 2009 5:32 am


It does make one think on what will happen next. 3nodding

Raxle
Vice Captain

Spacey Waffles

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