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PostPosted: Sun Oct 28, 2012 3:07 pm


─Basic Character Information─
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Username: Xx_Yume_Shinkirou_xX
Character's Full Name: Yōsei Akai
Alias: Red Fairy
Nickname(s): none that she know of
Age: Real Age:200 Appearance: 19
Birthday: June 9th
Zodiac: Gemini
Gender: Female
Blood Type: O-
Sexual Orientation: Bisexual
Disabilities/Phobias: Complete Darkness -something that she working on-, Her weak vocal chords makes her a near mute

─Appearance─


Height: 5'8"
Weight: 130 lbs
Eye Color: Blue
Hair Color: Scarlet
Tattoos/Markings/Scars: Scars throughout her back, wrists, stomach and ankles
Unusual Features: Scars around her neck


─Personal Information─

Personality: Quiet but she attempts to be sociable and approachable but with her selective speaking, she sometimes comes off quite the opposite. When handling business, that's the time she actually chooses to speak. Though it's usually quick and to the point or when she has something serious to yes. Since she doesn't do much of the talking, she is a great listener. Her abilities in listening are so well tuned that she can hear an conversation without being noticed or found. As a commander, she doesn't think highly of herself in terms of boasting or being the best. While She takes pride her abilities, knows where her shortcomings are both off and on the battlefield. She sometimes have problems expressing herself since she rarely speaks which can lead to some situations with miscommunication because her and those that haven't gotten use to her silent approach.

Hobbies: Writing, Calligraphy, Playing Wind Instruments, swimming, cooking and dancing
Favorite Color(s): Red, Pink, Blue, Purple, Green, generally bright and vivid colors
Favorite Activities: Cloud watching, swimming, cooking, playing wind instruments, and reading as well as drawing, receiving training.
Favorite Foods and Drinks: anything sweet, homemade, and edible. She's grateful for anything she can eat.
Other Personal Likes: Animals, being in open spaces and around people and sounds

Least Favorite Color(s): Black
Least Favorite Activities: not doing anything, long conversations that she can't contribute to
Least Favorite Foods and Drinks: anything very Spicy and Bitter or poorly made
Other Personal Dislikes: Being alone involuntary due to social isolation or in complete darkness

Personal Possession(s):A necklace of a yin-yang she was wearing that belong to her mother she believes
Personal Secret(s): She hides her fear of the darkness and her inability to talk for an intensive amount of time. As well as nightmares she have from time to time

History: Yōsei was born to mixed Japanese man and Japanese woman during World War II. At the age of 10, she was separated from her parents and shipped off to an undisclosed area surrounding a humid jungle like atmosphere. Due to her mixed blood, which considered of European, that have given her red hair, she was taken in, like many others, for experimentation. One for which was to see how to create better soldiers. One of the first of many procedures done that they did was sever her vocal chords to see if they could be reattached. Instead of fully returned speech, the sloppy job resulted in her lost of her voice. Something the scientists didn't mind since now she couldn't scream during procedures. From age 10 to 19, she was tested on her ability to withstand the cold, heat, complete darkness, psychological warfare and other various forms of inhumane activities. Never did she see the outside of the facility that she was held in. At the age of 19, an opportunity came for her and others to escape and she took it , running away. Being so used to silence, she able to get as far from the facility before they knew she was missing while others were not so fortunate. Ultimately, when she was discovered missing, they came after her. In the chase, she was brought to a cliff above raging waters. Cornered, she jumped- rather seeing death than returning-

When she awoken, she find that could that she could use her voice, though it hurt after some time as well as she was in a place that wasn't the darkness she was use to or the jungle where she took her last breath. Learning that she was dead wasn't hard for her to accept. Since she was alone, she did what she could to survive in this new world. Some of her attributes followed to her the Soul Society. She was agile, quiet, flexible, and great at listening to her surroundings, so for the first few months to nearly a year of her new life, she was a thief, only stealing when she needed to such as food and clothes. She accidentally stole from a Shinigami, who was actually impressed with her slightly above par leveled skills that came without the training that those at her level usually got. She was given an ultimatum: continue her path and get nowhere but maybe arrested or join the Academy to become someone of value. Having nothing else to lose, she took up the offer.

In her years at the academy, she was the mute girl which was fine by her. As she studied and trained, she unlocked more and more potential within herself that she would have never seen without being here. Such as her spiritual energy which was an impressive amount and her innate speed, agility, flexibility. Despite her weakness in strength, her other abilities make up for it. For instance, her intelligence which was a surprise to some for a girl that came from no lineage to know and retain information that others ignored or didn't catch. When asked about it, she spoke for the first time saying, "No one pays attention to the poor mute girl." When she graduated, she received some top grades with her abilities in speed and agility. After the academy, she spent her years working up the ranks from grunt to her current rank in office. Throughout all this and currently, she continues her training and studying, making up for her shortcomings.



─Zanpakuto Information {Sealed}─

Zanpakuto Name: Utau
Zanpakuto Appearance: A blade that is blue at the handle and in the middle of the blade with it splits down the center at the start of the blade.
Zanpakuto Spirit: User Image sliver transparent wings adorn her back, One is tattered while the other is sharp and almost blade like.
Inner World: User Image - Blocked by "Display Image" Settings. Click to show.Her inner world consist of an open space. Rather than a specific location in the world, it was an array of all four seasons in one open place. A representation of what she never saw alive. In this world ever her vocal cord are fixed, allowing her to speak freely without the pain usually felt after prolong talking.

Basic Zanpakuto Attacks/Powers:
When the blade makes contact with another weapon, instead of a 'kin' sound, the blade vibrates, creating the same effect of a tuning fork. Causing damage to the other weapon or person's body, the harder and longer the contact, the greater the damage that can be done. Especially to substance susceptible to breaking due to sound pressures and ears

Outside of close combat, the blade hitting a surface creates the same effect, allowing for the pin pointing of a target's location within a 15 meter radius


─Zanpakuto Information {Shikai}─

Shikai Incantation: "Sing"
Shikai Appearance: A swarm of Morpho butterflies,as much as 60 can appear at once, 8 inches in wingspan, that are created once the blade shatters into pieces. Their blue coloring take after her own sword's coloring
Shikai Abilities: Creation of the swarm amplified the sounds surrounding her or in other case, nullifying the sounds around her, giving the impression that the target is deaf or overwhelmed by sounds.

Shikai Techniques:
Tsubasa no Sakebi [Cry of the Wings]: Wings flap, creating high pitch screeching sound waves with the intent to disorientate and disarm the targets that are withing a 5 meter radius, the closer the person. Damages include, slightly deafness, ringing of ears, bleeding ears, hairline fracures. Can also be used for the destruction of surrounding obstacles since as unstable, nonmetal or weak metal structures and foundations with the vibration of the wings beating as one following the same principles of closer range, the greater the damage that can be done.

Ha no Tsubasa [Bladed Wings]: The swarm attack as one unit, the wings becoming sharp like that blade shards they were created from. The swarm then attacked the targets, slicing them as they fly by. Due to their wingspan reaching 8 inches, the majority of damage is non lethal but bountiful and are only fatal over time due to bleeding out or continuous attacking

Kakusu [Conceal]:The swarm surround the user, hiding them from view to be used as defensive move to block an attack.

Tobu [Fly]: A helping ability in which the swarm collides together, becoming dense enough to be stand to get a higher altitude or make an escape. The maxiumum weight that can withstand in 10 minute internvals is at around twice her own weight.


─Zanpakuto Information {Bankai}─

Bankai Name:
Bankai Incantation:
(Some like their Zanpakuto's with this, others do not. Its completely optional.)
Zanpakuto Spirit Appearance {While Bankai is Active}:
Bankai Appearance:
Bankai Attacks/Abilities:



─Kidō Information─


Bakudō Level:

#1 Sai (塞, Restrain)
Description: Sai is used primarily to disable an opponent. The practitioner points using his/her index and middle fingers at the intended target(s) causing the targets arms to lock behind their back. The spell is usable on a single target or a significantly large group of people.

#6 Inemuri (威眠, Forced Slumber)
Description: This technique knocks the victim unconscious when the user places their palm in front of their face. For a moment, the victim's pupil's dilate several times before they fall unconscious.

#7 Tanma Otoshi (タンマ落とし, Time-Out Drop)
Description: The user of this technique holds the palm of their hand over the victim's face. White light emanates from their hand, disorientating the victim and causing them to black out.

#10 Geki (撃, Strike)
Incantation: "Disintegrate, you black dog of Rondanini!! Look upon yourself with horror and then claw out your own throat!" ("自壊せよロンダニーニの黒犬!! 一読し・焼き払い・自ら喉を掻き切るがいい!", "Jikai seyo, rondaniini no kuro inu! Ichidoku shi, yaki harai, mizukara nodo o kaki kiru ga ii")
Description: Geki is primarily used for disabling. The practitioner draws the symbols of the spell in the air which causes his/her entire body to permeate a red energy. The same red energy engulfs the body of the target and causes complete

# 20 Hakufuku (白伏, White Crawl)
Description: When this technique is used, the target sees the illusion of purple cherry blossoms falling around them. Their vision then begins to blur and becomes unfocused as their consciousness becomes muddled, disoriented, and confused. Shortly thereafter, the target blacks out altogether, losing consciousness, only to awaken with an unclear memory of what occurred.

#21 Sekienton (赤煙遁, Red Smoke Flight)
Description: Sekienton is primarily used for escape. The Practitioner places his hands palms down on the ground and a red smoke bursts forth from the point of contact and swiftly engulfs the surrounding area briefly obscuring the movements of whomever is within the smoke allowing a quick get away.

# 37 Tsuriboshi (吊星, Suspending Star)
Description: Tsuriboshi is primarily used to catch. The spell creates a ball of blue energy that fires out six "ropes" from its center. The "ropes" attach themselves to any sturdy nearby object and the energy in the center solidifies into a flat elastic-like cushion. The spell can stop falling objects similar to a safety net.

Hadō Level:
#1. Shō (衝, Thrust)
Description: Shō is primarily used for offense. The practitioner points at the target with his/her index finger and generates a small force that thrusts the target back a few feet away from the caster.

#31 Shakkahō (赤火砲, Red Fire Cannon; English Dub: Red Flame Cannon)
Incantation:
"Ye lord! Mask of blood and flesh, all creation, flutter of wings, ye who bears the name of Man! Inferno and pandemonium, the sea barrier surges, march on to the south!" ("君臨者よ!血雨の仮面•万象•羽ばたき•ヒトの名を冠す者よ!焦熱と争乱、海隔て逆巻き南へと歩を進めよ!", "Kunrinsha yo! Chiniku no kamen, banshō, habataki, hito no na o kansu mono yo! Shōnetsu to sōran, umihedate sakamaki minami e to ho o susume yo!")
Description:
Shakkahō is primarily used for offense. The practitioner generates an orb of crimson red energy in his/her palm or finger. The orb can be any size from small, medium or large depending on the level of power being used. The destructive power released by the blast can vary between a simple explosion to a pillar of energy. In both instances the spell causes concussive as well as burn damage. It is one of the mid-level Hadō spells.
The spell is of the common spells taught at the Shinō Academy. It tends to be many Shinigami's default offensive spell, for those well versed and not so well versed in Kidō.

#33 Sōkatsui (蒼火墜, Blue Fire, Crash Down; Pale Fire Crash in early episodes of the English dub)
Incantation: "Ye lord! Mask of flesh and bone, flutter of wings, ye who bears the name of Man! Truth and temperance, upon this sinless wall of dreams unleash but slightly the wrath of your claws." ("君臨者よ!血肉の仮面•万象•羽ばたき•ヒトの名を冠する者よ!真理と節制、罪知らぬ夢の壁に僅かに爪を立てよ!", "Kunrinsha yo! Chiniku no kamen, banshō, habataki, hito no na o kansu mono yo! Shinri to sessei, tsumi shirame yume no kabe ni wazuka ni tsume o tate yo!")
Description:
Sōkatsui is primarily used for offense. The practitioner aims the palm of his/her hand at the target then generates a torrent of blue spiritual energy and fires it at said target. The energy moves like a direct blast or a large wave of energy depending on the amount of power placed into it.


Yusō Chūdō Level:
[Under training]

Shien Hōhō Level:
[under training]

Chiyu Chūdō Level:
Hybrid Techniques:
Forbidden Kidō:



─Physical Information─


Hohō Level: Moderately High due to the high quantity of time spend on training to master her speed and agility

Hakuda Level: Moderately Low as she lacks the strength to long in hand to hand combat

Zanjutsu Level: To make for her lack of strength, she excels in her swordsmanship, moderately high but continues her training to improve her style further. A style that consider of quick attacks in close combat range before backing away to regroup and attack from a different direction


─Relatives─

Mother:
Father:
Siblings:
Aunts:
Uncles:
Grandparents:


─Relationships─

Love Interest:
Friends:
Enemies:
Other Relations:


─Professional Status─

Affiliation: Soul Society
Previous Affiliation: None
Occupation: Corps Commander of the Inner Court Troop
Previous Occupation: unseated member
Team: Division ニ
Partner:


─Skills Information─

Intelligence:3 out of 5- Yōsei spends her time either studying or listening to others allowing her to take information and retain it better. Her memory allows to her recollect it when needed. Understandable, her learning is never ending.

Athletic Skill: 3 out of 5 due to her abilities in speed, agility endurance and flexibility. Given her the athletic qualities or a runner and gymnast

Strength: 1.5 out of 5, her body is in the sense weak and cannot lift any more than half her own weight. She lacks muscular structures to build muscles.

Speed: 4.5 out of 5: She's close to mastery of this ability close being to be unseen when at her top speed.

Agility: 4.5 out of 5: At near mastery, she has focused on her agility to make up for her lack of strength for hand to hand combat. Allowing for more landing quick attacks to avoid close combat or escaping the battle. It correlates with her speed and helps her reflexes.

Stamina: 3.5 to 5: With her training in speed and agility, she had developed an impressive sense of stamina, allowing her to go through either training or battling for a longer time than the average person.

Durability:3.5 of out 5: Her body can withstand more than the average attacks and keep going until she can succumb to her injuries

Endurance: 4 of out 5: Due to life before the soul society, she had retained the resilience and tenacity that kept her live as long as she could. Adding on, she developed it further through her training in her academy years and then her training in the second division. Even as a commander, she continues her endurance training.

Flexibility: 4 of out 5: in lack of muscle for strength, she trains her body to bend in the matter of a contortionist, allowing her to make herself as small as possible to keep out of eye's view. As well as take her surroundings and herself and make them to her advantage.

Any Special Skills:

Kosu [Filter] : An ability that was started in her pre-academy years before improved and prefected by the time she graduated. The ability is to target and distinguish a specific sound from an array of other noises within a 15 meter radius.

[under training] Her eyes can follow an object or movement despite its speed and quick change in direction.

[Soft Step]: The sound of her movement such as her steps and jumps, becomes softened to the point that it can only be heard by heightened hearing

─Other Information─

Character Theme: Paper Moon by Tommy heavenly6
Other:
-Yoseī doesn't remember her real name. "Yōsei Akai" is based off her red hair and the 'fairy' she saw coming into this realm of living.
-Her attire is that of the traditional clothes of Division II

PostPosted: Sun Oct 28, 2012 5:09 pm


I love that song, by the way...

Fairy blue kimi no tame ni hoshi wo kudaki
Kozare tsuketa
Black paper moon
Shinjite kureta nara
When you're lost "here" I am
"Forever" in your soul
Miagereba kagayaku tsuki no you ni

Uh, but anyway!

This profile won't be reviewed or accepted until you finish filling out the shikai. All but the first ability is left blank. And we need the majority of the information to be able to gauge the fairness of her abilities.

You can also fill out the bankai prematurely, but know that you need an additional review when you're done doing so and you can't use it until it is approved and your character undergoes training to do so. Feel free to post here or quote me, Destructive Toaster, or a.renee.w when you're done filling out your profile. Whoever you quote will review it and get back to you.

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PostPosted: Sun Oct 28, 2012 5:37 pm


Alannaa
I love that song, by the way...

Fairy blue kimi no tame ni hoshi wo kudaki
Kozare tsuketa
Black paper moon
Shinjite kureta nara
When you're lost "here" I am
"Forever" in your soul
Miagereba kagayaku tsuki no you ni

Uh, but anyway!

This profile won't be reviewed or accepted until you finish filling out the shikai. All but the first ability is left blank. And we need the majority of the information to be able to gauge the fairness of her abilities.

You can also fill out the bankai prematurely, but know that you need an additional review when you're done doing so and you can't use it until it is approved and your character undergoes training to do so. Feel free to post here or quote me, Destructive Toaster, or a.renee.w when you're done filling out your profile. Whoever you quote will review it and get back to you.


Well I quoted you.. But I'll wait to do the Bankai piece: Mostly cause I have to think of what her Bankai's abilites are and her incantation
PostPosted: Sun Oct 28, 2012 9:36 pm


Xx_Yume_Shinkirou_xX

Sorry for the delay! I was eating dinner, and the Tigers were in the World Series.

This really isn't a bad profile. It's pretty well organized, the character is accomplished but still in need of development and her skills aren't ridiculous.

Before I can approve it, there a few things that needs addressed.

For the zanpakutō:

Basic abilities- what's the extent of the vibrating ability? That can be widely interpreted as many or few consequences. Describe it, please.

Shikai- Tsubasa no Sakebi: again please describe the damage dealt to her opponent and surroundings. How strong is this ability?

Ha no Tsubasa: I'm assuming, due to the majority of the species being very small like coins or bottle caps, that these injuries are largely superficial and meant to hurt but not necessarily incapacitate. Am I right? You should also specify the size of the butterflies.

Tobu: One thing I think you should consider is the maximum weight they can carry. Your character may be able to transport objects and people, or use them to drop things on an opponent.

General:

Definitely go back and comb through this profile for errors. They're rather prevalent and could result in miscommunication.

When I introduced the concept of "commander," I was referring to the rank of Corps Commander (軍団長, gundanchō) of the Inner Court Troop (裏廷隊, riteitai) and not the Commander-in-Chief (総司令官, sōshireikan) of the Onmitsukidō. I figure you've probably grasped that, but you may want to further specify in the profile.

Kosu: this should be explained, mainly in regards to how she acquired the ability. Did she train for it or is it left over from her time as a test subject?

Please edit all changes into the profile and then let me know when you're done. If you have questions about an edit, you can post it here or PM me and I can talk it over with you.
Once I'm certain my questions have been answered, I'll approve it. As for your rank, please talk to Shadow if you haven't yet.

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PostPosted: Sun Oct 28, 2012 10:21 pm


Alannaa
Xx_Yume_Shinkirou_xX

Sorry for the delay! I was eating dinner, and the Tigers were in the World Series.

This really isn't a bad profile. It's pretty well organized, the character is accomplished but still in need of development and her skills aren't ridiculous.

Before I can approve it, there a few things that needs addressed.

For the zanpakutō:

Basic abilities- what's the extent of the vibrating ability? That can be widely interpreted as many or few consequences. Describe it, please.

Shikai- Tsubasa no Sakebi: again please describe the damage dealt to her opponent and surroundings. How strong is this ability?

Ha no Tsubasa: I'm assuming, due to the majority of the species being very small like coins or bottle caps, that these injuries are largely superficial and meant to hurt but not necessarily incapacitate. Am I right? You should also specify the size of the butterflies.

Tobu: One thing I think you should consider is the maximum weight they can carry. Your character may be able to transport objects and people, or use them to drop things on an opponent.

General:

Definitely go back and comb through this profile for errors. They're rather prevalent and could result in miscommunication.

When I introduced the concept of "commander," I was referring to the rank of Corps Commander (軍団長, gundanchō) of the Inner Court Troop (裏廷隊, riteitai) and not the Commander-in-Chief (総司令官, sōshireikan) of the Onmitsukidō. I figure you've probably grasped that, but you may want to further specify in the profile.

Kosu: this should be explained, mainly in regards to how she acquired the ability. Did she train for it or is it left over from her time as a test subject?

Please edit all changes into the profile and then let me know when you're done. If you have questions about an edit, you can post it here or PM me and I can talk it over with you.
Once I'm certain my questions have been answered, I'll approve it. As for your rank, please talk to Shadow if you haven't yet.


My noob is showing more and more, redface , I actually like to change to the Inner Court Troop... I went to look it up more and site took me to read about Onmitsukido... I didn't see it at first...

So in my profile, do I say her rank in the occupation section or not?
PostPosted: Sun Oct 28, 2012 10:46 pm


Xx_Yume_Shinkirou_xX
My noob is showing more and more, redface , I actually like to change to the Inner Court Troop... I went to look it up more and site took me to read about Onmitsukido... I didn't see it at first...

So in my profile, do I say her rank in the occupation section or not?

No worries. The Riteitai is a part of the Onmitsukidō. The Onmitsukidō is divided into five sections and the leaders of these sections hold dual positions in the top five seats of the Nibantai. The Riteitai's duties specifically focus on delivering highly classified messages within the Sereitei, which is why, with your RPC's focus on speed, I figured she would fit well as the leader of a group of people whose pride and joy is their footwork.

So yes, that's exactly where you list her rank.

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PostPosted: Sun Oct 28, 2012 10:58 pm


Alannaa
Xx_Yume_Shinkirou_xX
My noob is showing more and more, redface , I actually like to change to the Inner Court Troop... I went to look it up more and site took me to read about Onmitsukido... I didn't see it at first...

So in my profile, do I say her rank in the occupation section or not?

No worries. The Riteitai is a part of the Onmitsukidō. The Onmitsukidō is divided into five sections and the leaders of these sections hold dual positions in the top five seats of the Nibantai. The Riteitai's duties specifically focus on delivering highly classified messages within the Sereitei, which is why, with your RPC's focus on speed, I figured she would fit well as the leader of a group of people whose pride and joy is their footwork.

So yes, that's exactly where you list her rank.


That's sounds like her. That definitely works for her. And hopefully, this time around I've given enough details in her abilities ^_^
PostPosted: Sun Oct 28, 2012 11:20 pm


This is a definite improvement on what you already had! After reading through, I feel satisfied that I have a good handle on this character.

I strongly urge you to proofread and edit for syntax and grammar, as parts of the profile can become difficult to understand solely due to a miss-placed word.

Based on the content of the profile, however, I approve.

Shadow of Miracles is the Captain of the Second Division. You can address questions about rank and appropriate courses of action with him. At this time the Nibantai isn't technically erected(which is totally his responsibility and you just know I'm going to nag him about it) so I urge you to ask him about where to post.

Outside of your squad, you're free to post almost anywhere aside from places your character would logically not be. You're welcome to ask me any follow-up questions and can come to me if you feel a need to. Welcome to the RP!

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