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Cohete/Runningblaze [[-Naomi~Guardian-]]

 

[Naomi~Guardian]

Username: Naomi~Guardian

Cat Name: Cohete [To be: Runningblaze]

Appearence: Red (ruddy) furred Somali tom cat, with green eyes.

Personality: Cohete may seem rough around the edges, but in truth he’s a very gentle, playful and caring tom. He can sometimes be found lost in thought, which often makes him seem older than he really is. He loves quiet, and peace, which may also make him a bit stoic. Being loyal, he often tries to quell his own feelings, for the sake of those he cares about.

Bio: Being purebred, Cohete began his life with his mother and syblings in a nice and cozy home. He loved to play, and never wanted his life like that to end. however, once he and his syblings were old enough, their owner had them adopted. He was upset that his sibling just accepted it all, and even more upset to see his mother accept it too.

At his new home, he would often yowl well into the night, which eventually made his new owners give him away to a shelter where he met his current owner – a quiet young man who wanted a housemate. No matter how many times Cohete kept him awake due to his yowling, he would always retrieve him, and gently pet him until they both fell asleep.

Cohete now has a strong bond with his owner, and is always sure to come home at night.

Reason For Being Deputy: Once his leader can earn his respect, Cohete will be a hard working deputy; always looking after his clanmates, and keeping up-to-date with them. Not to mention, Cohete will be hesitant, and would always want to think things through. His tendency for pain-staking thought over immediate action is what would make him a good deputy, as he would try to consider every outcome before jumping into battle. That said, he would be dutiful in his role, and follow his leader’s orders.

Short RP Sample:

PLACECohete sat, staring up at the stars. To him, they seemed dimmer than usual, and as always, they seemed to be beckoning him elsewhere. It made him feel uneasy, but he didn’t like how dimly the twinkled.

PLACEHe wrapped his tail tightly around his paws, lowering his gaze as he stared out the window. Whatever was going to happen, it was going to be big, and it was probably going to change his life forever.

PLACEThe tom sighed, cursing himself as he shook his head. With all these thoughts, he was sure he wouldn't be able to sleep very peacefully. All the same, he jumped down from the sill, silently bounding across the floor to Todd's bed. He jumped up, finding his twoleg's chest, and climbing up on it. The young man grunted in his sleep, but relaxed, and gave a peaceful sigh.

PLACECohete gave a small smile, and curled into a tight ball. He lay down, closing his eyes and waited for sleep.  

[Mafdet of Egypt]

Naomi~Guardian

Username: Naomi~Guardian

Cat Name: Cohete [To be: Runningblaze]

Appearence: Red (ruddy) furred Somali tom cat, with green eyes.

Personality: Cohete may seem rough around the edges, but in truth he’s a very gentle, playful and caring tom. He can sometimes be found lost in thought, which often makes him seem older than he really is. He loves quiet, and peace, which may also make him a bit stoic. Being loyal, he often tries to quell his own feelings, for the sake of those he cares about.

Bio: Being purebred, Cohete began his life with his mother and syblings in a nice and cozy home. He loved to play, and never wanted his life like that to end. however, once he and his syblings were old enough, their owner had them adopted. He was upset that his sibling just accepted it all, and even more upset to see his mother accept it too.

At his new home, he would often yowl well into the night, which eventually made his new owners give him away to a shelter where he met his current owner – a quiet young man who wanted a housemate. No matter how many times Cohete kept him awake due to his yowling, he would always retrieve him, and gently pet him until they both fell asleep.

Cohete now has a strong bond with his owner, and is always sure to come home at night.

Reason For Being Deputy: Once his leader can earn his respect, Cohete will be a hard working deputy; always looking after his clanmates, and keeping up-to-date with them. Not to mention, Cohete will be hesitant, and would always want to think things through. His tendency for pain-staking thought over immediate action is what would make him a good deputy, as he would try to consider every outcome before jumping into battle. That said, he would be dutiful in his role, and follow his leader’s orders.

Short RP Sample:

PLACECohete sat, staring up at the stars. To him, they seemed dimmer than usual, and as always, they seemed to be beckoning him elsewhere. It made him feel uneasy, but he didn’t like how dimly the twinkled.

PLACEHe wrapped his tail tightly around his paws, lowering his gaze as he stared out the window. Whatever was going to happen, it was going to be big, and it was probably going to change his life forever.

PLACEThe tom sighed, cursing himself as he shook his head. With all these thoughts, he was sure he wouldn't be able to sleep very peacefully. All the same, he jumped down from the sill, silently bounding across the floor to Todd's bed. He jumped up, finding his twoleg's chest, and climbing up on it. The young man grunted in his sleep, but relaxed, and gave a peaceful sigh.

PLACECohete gave a small smile, and curled into a tight ball. He lay down, closing his eyes and waited for sleep.

I definitely like this cat, wish I had one like him! I will definitely put him in the list, and we'll hopefully get four more deputies soon!  

[Ember Robinwood]

Username: Ember Robinwood
Cat Name: Carrioncrow
Appearence: Carrioncrown is a medium sized black tom cat. He is sturdily built with relatively small paws and a long tail. He has a dash of white on his chest and a scar over his right eye. His right eye is a pale blue and his left eye is a pale amber-gold. His large ears frame his face and glossy black fur define his muscles.

Personality: Carrioncrow is a sympathetic and understanding tom, but he's firm in his resolve and doesn't take "no" for an answer. He'll support and follow his leader to the end, though he tries to advise his leader to the best of his ability. Loyalty to his clan and putting others before himself and following the warrior code is the center of Carrioncrow's life. Though Carrioncrow serves his serves his clan to the best of his ability, he withholds his emotions from his fellow warrior and is constantly under stress, it can affect his temper and his judgement.
Bio: Carrioncrow was born into the clan like any other warrior. He was enthusiastic to become an apprentice and drove forward to become the strongest warrior he could. He trained alongside his fellow apprentices, but he had issues. He always tried to help the other apprentices with their training and tried to sort out their problems. At a young age he started withholding his own emotions and discovered he couldn't solve everyone else's problems. He started disconnecting himself from his emotions and took a step back to deal with clan problems. He continuously tries to bite off more than he can chew, but he refuses to let a problem go until its been solved.
Reason For Being Deputy: Carrioncrow always tries to solve other cats' problems, he's sympathetic and levelheaded, advising the clan leader. He's loyal and determined to serve his clan, refusing to let the weak be left behind. Carrioncrow will rise to a challenge (and even if he can;t handle it alone), whether it's warriors' personal issues or full scale inter-clan problems, he'll do whatever it takes (within the bounds of the warrior code).
Short RP Sample: The commotion across the camp drew Carrioncrow's attention. He pushed himself up from where he had been eating a piece of fresh kill. Abandoning the half-eaten thrush, the ebony tom crossed the clearing to where the two apprentices stood nose-to-nose, teeth bared and pelts bristling. "What's going on?" He asked, leveling his tone and gazing intently at the two apprentices.  

[Naomi~Guardian]

Unfortunately, this profile cannot be accepted. For now.

Please make changes to all the areas highlighted in red. Explanations for each are given at the bottom of this post.

Ember Robinwood

Username: Ember Robinwood
Cat Name: Carrioncrow
Appearence: Carrioncrown is a medium sized black tom cat. He is sturdily built with relatively small paws and a long tail. He has a dash of white on his chest and a scar over his right eye. His right eye is a pale blue and his left eye is a pale amber-gold. His large ears frame his face and glossy black fur define his muscles.

Personality: Carrioncrow is a sympathetic and understanding tom, but he's firm in his resolve and doesn't take "no" for an answer. He'll support and follow his leader to the end, though he tries to advise his leader to the best of his ability. Loyalty to his clan and putting others before himself and following the warrior code is the center of Carrioncrow's life. Though Carrioncrow serves his serves his clan to the best of his ability, he withholds his emotions from his fellow warrior and is constantly under stress, it can affect his temper and his judgement.
Bio: Carrioncrow was born into the clan like any other warrior. He was enthusiastic to become an apprentice and drove forward to become the strongest warrior he could. He trained alongside his fellow apprentices, but he had issues. He always tried to help the other apprentices with their training and tried to sort out their problems. At a young age he started withholding his own emotions and discovered he couldn't solve everyone else's problems. He started disconnecting himself from his emotions and took a step back to deal with clan problems. He continuously tries to bite off more than he can chew, but he refuses to let a problem go until its been solved.
Reason For Being Deputy: Carrioncrow always tries to solve other cats' problems, he's sympathetic and levelheaded, advising the clan leader. He's loyal and determined to serve his clan, refusing to let the weak be left behind. Carrioncrow will rise to a challenge (and even if he can;t handle it alone), whether it's warriors' personal issues or full scale inter-clan problems, he'll do whatever it takes (within the bounds of the warrior code).
Short RP Sample: The commotion across the camp drew Carrioncrow's attention. He pushed himself up from where he had been eating a piece of fresh kill. Abandoning the half-eaten thrush, the ebony tom crossed the clearing to where the two apprentices stood nose-to-nose, teeth bared and pelts bristling. "What's going on?" He asked, leveling his tone and gazing intently at the two apprentices.

1.) Though we appreciate you for being creative, and understand, we feel that "Carrion" may not be the most practical of names. Though he may want this name for himself, his leader may think twice about giving him this name due to the fact that "carrion" is rotting meat . . .

If, however, you are able to make an argument for why he would earn this name, and are able to prove your case before the mods, it will not be an issue.

2.)You see, the Clans have been wiped out, and it is the prophesied cats who will bring them back again. So, for now, all the cats are either kitty-pets or rogues, and thus do not have warrior names, and cannot have been born into the Clans.  

[Ember Robinwood]

Naomi~Guardian

Unfortunately, this profile cannot be accepted. For now.

Please make changes to all the areas highlighted in red. Explanations for each are given at the bottom of this post.



1.) Though we appreciate you for being creative, and understand, we feel that "Carrion" may not be the most practical of names. Though he may want this name for himself, his leader may think twice about giving him this name due to the fact that "carrion" is rotting meat . . .

If, however, you are able to make an argument for why he would earn this name, and are able to prove your case before the mods, it will not be an issue.

2.)You see, the Clans have been wiped out, and it is the prophesied cats who will bring them back again. So, for now, all the cats are either kitty-pets or rogues, and thus do not have warrior names, and cannot have been born into the Clans.

Alright, I've made the appropriate edits.

Username: Ember Robinwood
Cat Name: Bircheye
Appearence: Bircheyen is a medium sized black tom cat. He is sturdily built with relatively small paws and a long tail. He has a dash of white on his chest and a scar over his right eye. His right eye is a pale blue and his left eye is a pale amber-gold. His large ears frame his face and glossy black fur define his muscles.

Personality: Bircheye is a sympathetic and understanding tom, but he's firm in his resolve and doesn't take "no" for an answer. He'll support and follow his leader to the end, though he tries to advise his leader to the best of his ability. Loyalty to his clan and putting others before himself and following the warrior code is the center of Bircheye's life. Though Bircheye serves his serves his clan to the best of his ability, he withholds his emotions from his fellow warrior and is constantly under stress, it can affect his temper and his judgment.
Bio: Bircheye was born into the rugged alleyways of the twoleg place, under a dumpster where his mother struggled to raise him and his littermates. When he was a four moon old kit, Bircheye was in the back alley practicing stalking mice (which were all scrawny and sick) when a dog came out of nowhere. in his panic, the kit took off and ran. he lost his way quickly and after cowering in a crevice in a wall of a rundown old building until darkness fell, Bircheye was lost and hungry, wandering all night until he came to edge of the forest. He was enthusiastic to become an apprentice when given the chance; he drove forward to become the strongest warrior he could. He trained alongside his fellow apprentices, but he had issues. He always tried to help the other apprentices with their training and tried to sort out their problems. At a young age he started withholding his own emotions and discovered he couldn't solve everyone else's problems. He started disconnecting himself from his emotions and took a step back to deal with clan problems. He continuously tries to bite off more than he can chew, but he refuses to let a problem go until its been solved.
Reason For Being Deputy: Bircheye always tries to solve other cats' problems, he's sympathetic and levelheaded, advising the clan leader. He's loyal and determined to serve his clan, refusing to let the weak be left behind. Bircheye will rise to a challenge (and even if he can’t handle it alone), whether it's warriors' personal issues or full scale inter-clan problems, he'll do whatever it takes (within the bounds of the warrior code).
Short RP Sample: The commotion across the camp drew Bircheye's attention. He pushed himself up from where he had been eating a piece of fresh kill. Abandoning the half-eaten thrush, the ebony tom crossed the clearing to where the two apprentices stood nose-to-nose, teeth bared and pelts bristling. "What's going on?" He asked, leveling his tone and gazing intently at the two apprentices.  

[Naomi~Guardian]

Better! You're getting there, and you're so close! We just need a regular name. For example, Runningblaze is not "Runningblaze" yet. Because he is not a clan-cat, his name is "Cohete".

What sort of normal name would Bircheye have until he actually becomes deputy?

Ember Robinwood

Naomi~Guardian

Unfortunately, this profile cannot be accepted. For now.

Please make changes to all the areas highlighted in red. Explanations for each are given at the bottom of this post.



1.) Though we appreciate you for being creative, and understand, we feel that "Carrion" may not be the most practical of names. Though he may want this name for himself, his leader may think twice about giving him this name due to the fact that "carrion" is rotting meat . . .

If, however, you are able to make an argument for why he would earn this name, and are able to prove your case before the mods, it will not be an issue.

2.)You see, the Clans have been wiped out, and it is the prophesied cats who will bring them back again. So, for now, all the cats are either kitty-pets or rogues, and thus do not have warrior names, and cannot have been born into the Clans.

Alright, I've made the appropriate edits.

Username: Ember Robinwood
Cat Name: Bircheye
Appearence: Bircheyen is a medium sized black tom cat. He is sturdily built with relatively small paws and a long tail. He has a dash of white on his chest and a scar over his right eye. His right eye is a pale blue and his left eye is a pale amber-gold. His large ears frame his face and glossy black fur define his muscles.

Personality: Bircheye is a sympathetic and understanding tom, but he's firm in his resolve and doesn't take "no" for an answer. He'll support and follow his leader to the end, though he tries to advise his leader to the best of his ability. Loyalty to his clan and putting others before himself and following the warrior code is the center of Bircheye's life. Though Bircheye serves his serves his clan to the best of his ability, he withholds his emotions from his fellow warrior and is constantly under stress, it can affect his temper and his judgment.
Bio: Bircheye was born into the rugged alleyways of the twoleg place, under a dumpster where his mother struggled to raise him and his littermates. When he was a four moon old kit, Bircheye was in the back alley practicing stalking mice (which were all scrawny and sick) when a dog came out of nowhere. in his panic, the kit took off and ran. he lost his way quickly and after cowering in a crevice in a wall of a rundown old building until darkness fell, Bircheye was lost and hungry, wandering all night until he came to edge of the forest. He was enthusiastic to become an apprentice when given the chance; he drove forward to become the strongest warrior he could. He trained alongside his fellow apprentices, but he had issues. He always tried to help the other apprentices with their training and tried to sort out their problems. At a young age he started withholding his own emotions and discovered he couldn't solve everyone else's problems. He started disconnecting himself from his emotions and took a step back to deal with clan problems. He continuously tries to bite off more than he can chew, but he refuses to let a problem go until its been solved.
Reason For Being Deputy: Bircheye always tries to solve other cats' problems, he's sympathetic and levelheaded, advising the clan leader. He's loyal and determined to serve his clan, refusing to let the weak be left behind. Bircheye will rise to a challenge (and even if he can’t handle it alone), whether it's warriors' personal issues or full scale inter-clan problems, he'll do whatever it takes (within the bounds of the warrior code).
Short RP Sample: The commotion across the camp drew Bircheye's attention. He pushed himself up from where he had been eating a piece of fresh kill. Abandoning the half-eaten thrush, the ebony tom crossed the clearing to where the two apprentices stood nose-to-nose, teeth bared and pelts bristling. "What's going on?" He asked, leveling his tone and gazing intently at the two apprentices.

 

[Ember Robinwood]

Naomi~Guardian

Better! You're getting there, and you're so close! We just need a regular name. For example, Runningblaze is not "Runningblaze" yet. Because he is not a clan-cat, his name is "Cohete".

What sort of normal name would Bircheye have until he actually becomes deputy?

I was thinking "Ashes".  

[Naomi~Guardian]

Alright! Just repost the profile with all of the changes in the normal colors!

Ember Robinwood

Naomi~Guardian

Better! You're getting there, and you're so close! We just need a regular name. For example, Runningblaze is not "Runningblaze" yet. Because he is not a clan-cat, his name is "Cohete".

What sort of normal name would Bircheye have until he actually becomes deputy?

I was thinking "Ashes".

 

[Ember Robinwood]

Username: Ember Robinwood
Cat Name: Bircheye
Appearence: Bircheye is a medium sized black tom cat. He is sturdily built with relatively small paws and a long tail. He has a dash of white on his chest and a scar over his right eye. His right eye is a pale blue and his left eye is a pale amber-gold. His large ears frame his face and glossy black fur define his muscles.

Personality: Bircheye is a sympathetic and understanding tom, but he's firm in his resolve and doesn't take "no" for an answer. He'll support and follow his leader to the end, though he tries to advise his leader to the best of his ability. Loyalty to his clan and putting others before himself and following the warrior code is the center of Bircheye's life. Though Bircheye serves his serves his clan to the best of his ability, he withholds his emotions from his fellow warrior and is constantly under stress, it can affect his temper and his judgment.
Bio: Named "Ashes", Bircheye was born into the rugged alleyways of the twoleg place, under a dumpster where his mother struggled to raise him and his littermates. When he was a four moon old kit, Bircheye was in the back alley practicing stalking mice (which were all scrawny and sick) when a dog came out of nowhere. in his panic, the kit took off and ran. he lost his way quickly and after cowering in a crevice in a wall of a rundown old building until darkness fell, Bircheye was lost and hungry, wandering all night until he came to edge of the forest. He was enthusiastic to become an apprentice when given the chance; he drove forward to become the strongest warrior he could. He trained alongside his fellow apprentices, but he had issues. He always tried to help the other apprentices with their training and tried to sort out their problems. At a young age he started withholding his own emotions and discovered he couldn't solve everyone else's problems. He started disconnecting himself from his emotions and took a step back to deal with clan problems. He continuously tries to bite off more than he can chew, but he refuses to let a problem go until its been solved.
Reason For Being Deputy: Bircheye always tries to solve other cats' problems, he's sympathetic and levelheaded, advising the clan leader. He's loyal and determined to serve his clan, refusing to let the weak be left behind. Bircheye will rise to a challenge (and even if he can’t handle it alone), whether it's warriors' personal issues or full scale inter-clan problems, he'll do whatever it takes (within the bounds of the warrior code).
Short RP Sample: The commotion across the camp drew Bircheye's attention. He pushed himself up from where he had been eating a piece of fresh kill. Abandoning the half-eaten thrush, the ebony tom crossed the clearing to where the two apprentices stood nose-to-nose, teeth bared and pelts bristling. "What's going on?" He asked, leveling his tone and gazing intently at the two apprentices.  

[Mafdet of Egypt]

Ember Robinwood

Username: Ember Robinwood
Cat Name: Bircheye
Appearence: Bircheye is a medium sized black tom cat. He is sturdily built with relatively small paws and a long tail. He has a dash of white on his chest and a scar over his right eye. His right eye is a pale blue and his left eye is a pale amber-gold. His large ears frame his face and glossy black fur define his muscles.

Personality: Bircheye is a sympathetic and understanding tom, but he's firm in his resolve and doesn't take "no" for an answer. He'll support and follow his leader to the end, though he tries to advise his leader to the best of his ability. Loyalty to his clan and putting others before himself and following the warrior code is the center of Bircheye's life. Though Bircheye serves his serves his clan to the best of his ability, he withholds his emotions from his fellow warrior and is constantly under stress, it can affect his temper and his judgment.
Bio: Named "Ashes", Bircheye was born into the rugged alleyways of the twoleg place, under a dumpster where his mother struggled to raise him and his littermates. When he was a four moon old kit, Bircheye was in the back alley practicing stalking mice (which were all scrawny and sick) when a dog came out of nowhere. in his panic, the kit took off and ran. he lost his way quickly and after cowering in a crevice in a wall of a rundown old building until darkness fell, Bircheye was lost and hungry, wandering all night until he came to edge of the forest. He was enthusiastic to become an apprentice when given the chance; he drove forward to become the strongest warrior he could. He trained alongside his fellow apprentices, but he had issues. He always tried to help the other apprentices with their training and tried to sort out their problems. At a young age he started withholding his own emotions and discovered he couldn't solve everyone else's problems. He started disconnecting himself from his emotions and took a step back to deal with clan problems. He continuously tries to bite off more than he can chew, but he refuses to let a problem go until its been solved.
Reason For Being Deputy: Bircheye always tries to solve other cats' problems, he's sympathetic and levelheaded, advising the clan leader. He's loyal and determined to serve his clan, refusing to let the weak be left behind. Bircheye will rise to a challenge (and even if he can’t handle it alone), whether it's warriors' personal issues or full scale inter-clan problems, he'll do whatever it takes (within the bounds of the warrior code).
Short RP Sample: The commotion across the camp drew Bircheye's attention. He pushed himself up from where he had been eating a piece of fresh kill. Abandoning the half-eaten thrush, the ebony tom crossed the clearing to where the two apprentices stood nose-to-nose, teeth bared and pelts bristling. "What's going on?" He asked, leveling his tone and gazing intently at the two apprentices.

If I may interject into this?

Sadly, if you want your cat to be a deputy, he wouldn't have been able to train with other apprentices, because he would be a deputy as the clans were formed. I am sorry for the confusion, but the clans form when the cats are given dreams, and if you want Ashes/Bircheye to be deputy, he has to be a grown-up cat in order to be a deputy. If you want your cat to grow up in the clan, that would have been fine in the future, but in this case, that isn't an option.  

[Ember Robinwood]

Mafdet of Egypt

If I may interject into this?

Sadly, if you want your cat to be a deputy, he wouldn't have been able to train with other apprentices, because he would be a deputy as the clans were formed. I am sorry for the confusion, but the clans form when the cats are given dreams, and if you want Ashes/Bircheye to be deputy, he has to be a grown-up cat in order to be a deputy. If you want your cat to grow up in the clan, that would have been fine in the future, but in this case, that isn't an option.

Alright, I'm getting really pissed off at this, so I'm going to withdraw my audition.  

[Mafdet of Egypt]

I am sorry you feel that way, but Naomi and I had tried to help you with what we were seeing troubles with without complaint.

For all those that had followed, if you hadn't already read the front page of the guild about the general know-how of these clans, please do so now. This way in the future, you don't have to go through this like we had to. These clans hadn't been formed yet, so being born and raised in an clan at this time is impossible. What is to being an apprentice if you have no clan to become an apprentice in?