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 Posted: Fri Jun 11, 2010 8:45 pm
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~~~NEXT TESTING ROOM~~~
Aid:Will you be needing anything to draw your transmutation circles?
Eneri:...No. I'm fine.
Bradley:*sitting at the front of the room with guards around him*Whenever you're ready young lady.
Eneri:............*nods*................*thinks"That shrimp doesn't need circles... I hafta assume that he saw that thing too. ...Well I better get started so I'll have enough time for cleanup..."* .................*sigh*Here goes...*claps hands together*
Observers:*suddenly paying attention*
Eneri:...With the humidity in here... hmm... yeah that'll work. *puts hands to the ground and there's a huge flare of alchemic light as ice starts to form under her hands*.........*stands and the ice starts to rise up from the floor*.......That's enough now I guess.*the ice is at a height of 6 ft when she claps her hands together again and kneels down touching the ice then stands up and leaps off the ice*
Observers confused
Eneri:....*lands on the floor and the ice breaks into pieces behind her then evaporates almost immediately*...And now the humidity should be back to normal:
Observers:*whispering amongst themselves*
*one*How was that possible?
*two*What about Equivalence?
*three*Maybe she cheated!
Eneri:*dusing her gloves off while ignoring them*
Bradley:*clapping*
Eneri confused *stares at Bradley*
Bradley:What an extrodinary display of alchemy! You took the humidity in the room and made ice with it then you were able to convert it back effortlessly! Marvelous!
Observers:*one*Humidity?
*two*Now that he mentions it... it did get dry in here. *three*And it's no longer dry at all!
Bradley:You pass, congradulations.
Eneri:...Thank you sir.
Bradley:...Tell you what. Someone with your talents shouldn't be turned away so you will not need to under go the physical and mental exams.
Eneri confused !
Observers:SIR!?!?
Bradley:Just a small physical but we won't count it against you.
Eneri:...Yes Sir.
Bradley:So by my power from this moment onward you are a certfied state alchemist.
Eneri:...Sir.*bows her head* I am honored and will use my talents for this country.
Bradley:I admire that dedication. Work hard. ...Hmm. You will need a title next. I believe the Icy Alchemist will suit you just fine.
Eneri:...More that you know sir.
Bradley:Once again, excellent work!*claps*
Observers:*clap as well*
Eneri:...Sir, not to be rude but I have somewhere to be soon.
Bradley:Is that so?
Eneri:Yes sir. I need to go get my brother who I left visiting someone.
Bradley:*raises an eyebrow*May I ask who?
Eneri:.......Edward Elric.
Bradley:Ah! So you know the Fullmetal Alchemist!
Eneri: ? Umm... yeah I guess...
Bradley:Then I shall acompany you.
Eneri:Ehh?!
Bradley:I need to discuss a few things with him.
Eneri:Umm... okay as long as I get there sir...
Bradley:Then it's settled! *stands and walks over to Eneri* Shall we go?
Eneri:...Yes sir.
Bradley:Then when we return, we shall discuss the paperwork and sign and you shall receive your watch and...*continues on*
Eneri:*thinks*"Shrimp's the Fullmetal Alchemist? I knew he was a state alchemist but I didn't know he's the Fullmetal Alchemist... ...The alchemist of the people's a total spaz!"**snickers to herself a bit*
(Now all people I RP with know how Eneri became a State Alchemist.)
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Posted: Fri Jun 11, 2010 9:00 pm
(24)
~~~HOSPITAL WHERE ED IS CHECKED IN biggrin URING THE TIME WHEN WINRY'S FIXING HIS AUTOMAIL~~~
Al:*sitting on a bench looking down*............
Adam:*walks by and notices him* Ah! Al~!
Al:Hmm?*looks up* Oh... hi Adam.
Adam:*smiles*
Al:.......
Adam confused *plops down next to Al*Are you sad?
Al confused
Adam:...I can tell. You're sad.
Al:......
Adam:*kicks his legs*...I may only be sev-*remembers he's 10 now* ten but... I can still understand most things.
Al:...Your sister...
Adam confused What about her?
Al:...She once told me that all older siblings keep secrets from the younger ones.
Adam:...You think Ed has a secret?
Al:....yeah.
Adam:.......Well... you won't know unless you ask him. *stands on the bench* ...And if the answer makes you more sad... *hugs Al* I'll be here to make you happy again.
Al:...Thanks Adam.
Adam:Hee~.*lets go and gives Al a grin*
Al:...But...
Adam confused
Al:...your sister said all siblings. Does that mean...?
Adam:...she keeps things from me? *sits back down* ...She's always done that. *sad smile*...I didn't even know she was crippled for 2 years.
Al:Wha... why she didn't tell you that?
Adam:...she... she thought I'd hate her. ...but...*tears up* but I could never...!*sobs*
Al:Adam...
Adam:*wipes away his tears with his sleeve* I'm fine.
Al:........
Adam:*hops off the bench* ...I think I'll go on the roof~!*turns around*
Al:...Adam... you can always cry to me or Winry or even Ed if you need to.
Adam:...I've... cried enough. Besides... how will I make you happy again if I'm crying?
Al:........
Adam:...just ask him... and I'm sure he'll tell you.*walks off*
Al:........*starts looking down again*
Adam:*turns a corner*........*sobs**starts crying in his hands*
(There was a better version of this but my comp took it. We are now on par with the original fanfic. No new parts til I make part 25.)
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Posted: Sun Jun 13, 2010 9:21 pm
nice. When I read stuff like this I get this warm feeling inside me.
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Posted: Sun Jun 13, 2010 10:25 pm
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Posted: Mon Jun 21, 2010 4:48 pm
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~~~THE HOSPITAL ROOF~~~
Adam:*looking around* Woooooow~…*looks off the edge* So high… *sees the structure over the stairs* It goes higher~! *runs over to it* …*sees barrels lined up by it* …*grin*Up I go~! *climbing the barrels*
Alphonse: *comes out on the roof* Adam? Are you up here?
Adam:*half way over the stairs* Hi~!
Alphonse: Ahh! Adam get down! You’ll fall!
Adam: Aww…
Alphonse: Come on. Have you said hi to Ed yet?
Adam: Ah! I forgot!
Alphonse: Come here. Let’s go see him, kay?
Adam: Kay~!*climbs down* …Why are you up here Al~?
Alphonse: …No reason…
Adam confused
Alphonse: *holds out his hand* Let’s go Adam.
Adam: Yay~!*takes Alphonse’s hand and they go down the stairs*
~~~HALL OUTSIDE OF EDWARD’S ROOM~~~
Adam: …Huh? Al?
Alphonse: Hmm?
Adam: Isn’t that Winry? *points at Winry being dragged out of Edward’s room by Hughes*
Alphonse: Oh. The LT. Colonel is here.
Adam: …Bye bye, Al~! *runs off after them*
Alphonse: Ah?! Adam?! Wha-
Adam: Sissy told me to stay with Winry~!*passes Edward’s room* *yells in* Hi Ed~!
Edward (from his room): What the hell!?
Adam: Hee~! Bye Ed~! *continues to run after Winry and Hughes*
Edward (from room): …Who brought him here?!
Adam: Wiiiiiiiiiiinnnnnnnnnrrrrrrrryyyyy! Wait for meeeeeee!
Winry: *Hughes has stopped dragging her* Adam?
Adam:*runs up* Winry… You forgot me!
Winry: Ah! I’m sorry Adam!
Adam: ……….*hugs Winry*
Winry: …*sigh* Sorry Adam.
Hughes:*staring at Adam* Well now, who’s this?
Winry: Ah this is Adam. Say hello to Mr. Hughes, Adam.
Adam: *staring at Hughes* …*grins* Hello~!
Hughes:*digging through his pocket*
Adam confused
Hughes:*pulls out Elicia’s picture and puts it in Adam’s face* Look here Adam! Isn’t my daughter the cutest thing you’ve ever seen? Don’t fall for her now!
Adam:*blinks*
Winry: Um… Mr. Hughes…?
Hughes: Yes?
Winry: Um… can we get going…?
Hughes: Ah yes! Let’s go! *walks*
Winry: Let’s go Adam. *holds out her hand*
Adam: Yay~!*takes Winry’s hand and they all go off down the hall*
(I did this at home for once.)
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Posted: Wed Jun 23, 2010 5:59 pm
(26)
~~~ARMY CAR ON THE WAY TO THE HOSPITAL~~~
Eneri:*staring out the window*
Bradley: But really you have exceptional talent young lady.
Eneri: *doesn’t look away from the window* Thank you, Sir.
Bradley: Some of the best talent I’ve seen in years!
Eneri: …………… *car drives by a huge mansion* ……?! *stands* Stop the car!
Driver: Excuse me?
Eneri: Stop!
Driver: Y-Yes!*hits the brakes*
Eneri:*nearly hits the seat in front of her*
Bradley: *stays in his seat* Is something wrong?
Eneri: *staring at the mansion* …….
Bradley:*notices where she’s staring* Oh isn’t that your family home?
Eneri: …Yes. …I think I’ll put off going to visit… um… Full Metal, until tomorrow.
Bradley: I see. I shall put off my visit as well then.
Eneri: Sir?
Bradley: After all… you shall need someone to introduce you as the Icy Alchemist
Eneri: …Thank you?
Bradley: Then I shall come back tomorrow. I will bring your silver pocket watch and the paperwork as well and you can sign them here if you’d like.
Eneri: Ah… thank you for understanding sir.
Bradley: Not a problem.
Eneri: *gets out of the car*
Bradley: Until tomorrow then.
Eneri: Ah. Y-Yes. *salutes*
Bradley:*laughs* Farewell. *car drives off*
Eneri: …*watches the car turn a corner* …Ngh…*puts a hand to her neck* What the hell’s with my neck…? It burned the whole time I was around the Furher… …Well… now on to the next problem… *turns to face the mansion gates* …Never thought I come back here… …Hmm? *gates start opening*
Watchman:*steps outside the gates* Excuse me sir… but visitors are not allowed here.
Eneri: …………….*glare* Who’s a sir?
Watchman: Eep!
Eneri: *shakes it off* *sigh*……..Julius Nonell, Cecila Nonell, and Adam Nonell… all dead or assumed to be. Correct?
Watchman: …Yes… who are you? What is your business here?
Eneri: …Who’s the master of the mansion now? There’s no one left.
Watchman: ………….
Eneri: ……*laughs* So you don’t recognize me unless I’m in a chair huh?
Watchman: ……Young Miss Eneri?
Eneri: That’s the name!
Watchman: Young Miss!
Eneri: Don’t cry on me now.
Watchman: Come in! Come in! *motions her inside*
Eneri: *comes into a courtyard and the gates shut behind her* …You can yell if you want.
Watchman: ……..Everyone! The Young Miss has returned home!
Eneri: Ha ha…
*a maid and butler come out of the mansion*
Eneri: Wow. Why didn’t you guys all quit when…*stops herself from calling him a b*****d* …father died?
Watchman: We could not just leave you alone Young Miss!
Maid: Yes! You are like a daughter to each one of us!
Butler: And all of us are like a family as well because we have all been employed here for so long!
Eneri: …But… who’s been paying all of you?
Watchman: Your father had a fund set up and it has yet to run dry.
Eneri: …I see.
Maid: …Young Miss… we are… all of us are terribly sorry about-
Eneri:*cuts her off* You didn’t know so it’s not the fault of any of you.
Maid: …Thank you.
Eneri: …Any of the guest rooms ready?
Butler: I believe we have one ready.
Eneri: I’ll use it then. *walks up to the mansion doors* *takes a dark tone*…Then we all will destroy my old room later on.
Butler, Maid, and Watchman: *bow and speak in unison* Yes, Young Miss.
Eneri: …*thinks* Back into hell I go… *thinks* *inhails then opens the mansion doors*
(...If this seems random... it's cuz I realized I had a timing problem and this is me working on fixing it.)
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Posted: Sun Jul 04, 2010 6:44 pm
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~~~DINNER TIME~~~
Eneri: *sitting at a long table by herself* …………
Maid and Butler: *standing off to the side*
Eneri: …I’m in charge now right?
Butler: Oh. Yes you are Young Miss.
Eneri: …Then why don’t all you join me in dinner?
Maid: Eh!?
Butler: But Young Miss! That would be-
Eneri: An honor for me and the cook. He’ll have more opinions and I’ll have some company. I don’t see the point in sitting at a table like this all alone.
Maid: …*giggles* Oh all right… *takes a seat at the table*
Butler: …*reluctantly takes a seat*
Eneri: *looking around* …Huh.
Butler: What is it Young Miss?
Eneri: Nothing… just wondering why I haven’t seen Michael around at all. By now he’d be in his over protective mode over me.
Butler: Well... he left sometime last year saying he was going to find his father.
Eneri: ...Isn't his dad rumored to be military?
Maid: Yes... he said he'd do whatever it took to find him.
Eneri: ...So he did have his own sense of self after all...
Maid: Well... he thought... He was not needed anymore with the homuncu-
Butler:*shushes her*
Maid: ...With your father's passing and you and your brother's disappearances.
Eneri: ...If he's military now himself I'll probably run into him at some point.
Butler: Hmm? What do you mean Young Miss?
Eneri: Hmm? Didn't you know? I took the state alchemy exam and passed today.
Maid: Wha?!
Butler: Young Miss! How were you able to take the test at all at your age?!
Eneri: ...Let's just say... I flashed around some of the old man's tricks.
Butler: ...........
Maid: ...So... you're living your own life the way you wish, right Young Miss? *smiles*
Eneri: ...Yeah. Exactly.
Butler: ...Just be careful Young Miss... the military can be dangerous.
Eneri: Yeah I know. 1 of the reasons why the old coot lost his marbles and all. I'm stronger than he is though. ...because I lived though many forms of hell and death.
Maid: ...Um! Is everyone done eating? If so I can clear the table now.
Eneri: Oh. Ok. You do that. ...I'm gunna walk around the grounds for a bit. *gets out of her seat and walks off while the maid starts to clear the table and the butler goes back to his post*
~~~NIGHT- MANSION FAMILY GRAVEYARD~~~
Eneri: *wandering around in the dark* ...Where's that stone...? *trips over a large tree root* Wah! *lands face first in back of a grave stone* Ow... damn trees... *stares at the grave then walks around to the front of it* ...What the hell? *there's a boy around Eneri's age with black hair laying on his right side and sleeping infront of the grave * ...What the hell? *reads the names on the grave stone* ...Weird. *kneels down to shake the boy* Hey. What the hell are you doing sleeping here?
Boy: ......*slowly opens his eyes, gets up, and it's now discovered that his right eye is dark red color and his left is a shade of violet* .....*staring at Eneri*
Eneri: You shouldn't be sleeping on a grave. And how did you get in here anyway?
Boy:.........
Eneri: ...You shouldn't sleep on the former Master and Mistress's grave. You'll get in trouble. Come on... get up... or do you need help?
Boy: *shakes his head and stands*
Eneri: ...*sigh* You musta sneaked in somehow and you won't be able to go past the watchman... ...I got it. Follow me okay? *walks over to 1 of the walls of the cemetery*
Boy: *hesitates to follow her but eventually does*
Eneri: *digging out plants that have over grown a corner of the wall* ...Here it is. *the plants were covering a hole in the wall that's big enough for an adult to pass through* Go through here and you'll be outside the estate ok?
Boy: ...Outside...?
Eneri: Yeah outside. Now go. You probably shouldn't come back ok? No more sleeping on graves.
Boy: ...*starts crawling through the hole*
Eneri: *watches him crawl* See ya kid. I have a room to destroy. *walks off* *thinks* Why was he sleeping infront of mom's and that... b*****d's grave in the first place...?*thinks*
Boy: *gets outside and starts wandering around and he's shivering but not because of cold* ...Outside... *gripping his shoulder and wanders under a street light*
?: *from a rooftop* Heh. So you finally decided to come out of that place.
Boy: ?! *frantically looking around with a look of terror on his face*
?:*thud from it jumping off a building and there are footsteps coming toward the boy*
Boy: *frozen with fear*
*the figure comes under the street light and it's revealed that it's Envy*
Envy: *smirking* You can't hide from me. Father's been wanting to meet the creation of Julius and Cecila Nonell... but you were always in that house under to much guard. ...But he knew you had to come out someday.
Boy: ........*griping his shoulder so hard that it's started to bleed*
Envy: You can't hide what you are... Isn't that right...*psychotic grin* Reject the homunculus?
Reject: ?! That's... the name mother gave me... *drops his hand from his shoulder and there's an ouroboros tattoo where he was gripping his shoulder*
Envy: Heh. That's right. We know everything about you. Who made you, where you've been... ...*grin* the abilities you possess.
Reject: ...What... what do you want...?
Envy: Just a simple request really. All Father wants is to meet you. He can give you a purpose if that's what you want.
Reject: ...I just want to die. I want to go... to where mother... and father are...
Envy: He can help with that too. Just come with me and I'll take you to him.
Reject: *hangs his head*.................Alright... Take me to your "Father."
Envy: *psychotic grin* Good choice. Follow me. *walks off into the shadows*
Reject: ..........*thinks* I'm sorry... father... mother... I'll come soon... *thinks* .............*follows after Envy*
(Yay. I got over my writer's block.)
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Posted: Wed Oct 27, 2010 9:03 pm
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~~~A DESOLATE ROOM INSIDE THE MANSION~~~
Eneri:*standing in front of one of the room's walls* …This'll be fun… I'm finally gunna bring this room down.
Maid: *pokes her head in the door * Young Miss Nonell?
Eneri confused *turns* What's wrong?
Maid: Well… it's just… when you're done here… can you… destroy another room as well?
Eneri: …That's a strange request.
Maid: I know but…
Eneri: I'll do it anyway though.
Maid: Really?
Eneri: Yeah. Now get outta here so nothing falls on ya.
Maid: Yes Young Miss! *closes the door *
Eneri: …A'ite then… Time to kiss my old bedroom goodbye. *stares at the wall again* …I am SO gunna enjoy this. *socks her left palm with her right fist* ……You don't have a hold on me anymore ya damn b*****d! *punches a hole straight through the wall* I'm gunna tear apart this prison you made for me… right from the inside! *brings one of her legs around to slam it into the wall* Not so tough now, huh stupid wall!? *punches another hole into the wall* You can't contain me here now! I'm not a cripple anymore! *pulls her fist back then starts slamming both fists against the wall repeatedly and rapidly widening the holes she'd made* …Heh… Hahahahaha! *wall comes crashing down* NEXT!!! *starts destroying another wall in the room*
~~~DAWN~~~
~~~AREA NEAR THE BACK OF THE MANSION~~~
Eneri: *sitting on slab of cement that was the room's foundation but the room, walls and all, is gone* ………free… free… …Don't cry over it… No point to… It's just a room… ………I won't cry over it… …Not ever… …Ngh… Never…
*servants come over to the back of the mansion, see the state of the area, and help Eneri back inside the mansion to clean up before the Furher comes to swear her in*
~~~UNDER CENTRAL CITY~~~
*Envy leads in Reject to the room where the Father of the Homunculi is*
Envy: I brought the weakling Father. Turns out he was in that mansion the whole time. *shrugs* Go figure.
Reject: *unsure of what he should do but feels an extreme power and fears it*
Father: *slowly stands from his seat and stares a Reject* So this is the successful artificial human created by a human… *notices Reject covering up the mark on his shoulder* Hmm… That alchemist branded it with the ouroboros…
Reject: …I was told you'd tell me how I could finally die…
Father: *raises an eyebrow* Why would you want to do that? You're in excellent condition!
Reject: …I want to follow… …*realizes he probably shouldn't call his creators "mother" and "father" in front of the Father* …I want to follow my creators… I know… I know they're… d-dead.
Envy: …Parental complex much?
Reject: ………
Father: …Yes I can tell you how to die but I need you to answer a few questions for me. It's probably what your creators would call… "an equivalent exchange."
Reject: …Alchemic terms… …*thinks "I'm forgetting something… Something father once said to me… Something..."* ………………………
Father: …Ah. I can see you're unsure of what to do. You've rarely been outside so I suppose that's to be expected.
Reject: *his expression suddenly changes as he starts to remember what he was told* …don't…
Father: Don't what?
Reject: Urgh… *falls to his knees clutching his head* …Don't ever…
Envy: …Hey Father. His eyes are changing like you said they would.
Father: What color are they, Envy?
Envy: *kneels down to Reject's level* Hey. Look at me you wannabe. *yanks up Reject by the chin so he can see his face then drops him after a few seconds* One is still red and the other one's half red half purple. *stands* He going to go on a rampage?
Father: Hmm… Perhaps. It would be best if you take him to that room that I prepared for this.
Envy: Alright… Come on weakling. *drags Reject out of the room*
Father: …The nerve of branding it as I have with my homunculi… Humph. Those Nonells always challenged me even now when they are dead. *goes back to his chair and sits down* I would have liked to have seen their faces when their "son" decided to help me.
(Tada.)
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Posted: Sun Jun 19, 2011 8:33 pm
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Posted: Mon Jun 20, 2011 4:50 pm
will do :3 ill look once i get the chance
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