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PostPosted: Sat May 12, 2012 7:07 pm


TakaiOokami


Alright. She's accepted. Sorry for the wait! Just remember that if she's going to pick pocket from other characters, be sure to ask the RPer first, okay? Also, she's probably going to be a troublemaker and that's fine, but Rosentale actually functions like a high school and will give consequences for misdemeanors such as detentions and stuff like that. ^^

She can stay in the Topaz Dorm. Don't forget to add her to your accepted character profiles. Today is Family Week, and will function like the weekend so she's free to wander wherever she likes. ^^
PostPosted: Sat May 12, 2012 7:14 pm


xLieselotte


So... make sure to ask the roleplayer of the person she's planning on pickpocketing before she actually pickpockets them, the character will have concequences for causing trouble, she's in topaz dorm and remember to post her in accepted profiles. Oh, and it's family week, got it. Thanks ^^

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PostPosted: Sun May 13, 2012 4:36 pm


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RPer Username: magicandmystery

Name: Persephone Mikelovitch

Species: human

Age: 16

Gender: ...depends.

Appearance description: about five foot eleven inches when male, and five foot seven when female

Personality: Persephone is a trickster. she will say or do anything if she thinks it will be funny, even if it has the potential to physically or emotionally hurt others. She is the sort of person who is completely indifferent when it comes to how others view her, and knows to only waste her time on people she finds interesting or entertaining. People's first impression of her is usually that she is a friendly and rather sarcastic person who seems nice enough, but unless they do something to gain her trust, she will just as easily make fun of or take advantage of them as be nice to them. She is a bold person, unafraid to meet new people and make new enemies, and she has absolutely no fears of showing off her "condition." even using her abilities to create even more mischief... or at least, that's what she says. In reality, she would give anything to be able to stick to one gender, even more so than her brother, who at least feels comfortable being a girl when a girl, and being a boy when a boy.
When (or rather, if) she ever does make real friends, she starts making fun of them all the time. This is her way of showing affection, as she has deemed that her friends are people who can truly know when her insults are just jokes. However, when push comes to shove, she is undyingly loyal to them, even if she has a hard time expressing how she feels.

Bio: Persephone has had a fairly normal life. Her parent's have remained happily married for years. Her father is a lawyer for a prestigious law firm, and her mother is a stay at home mom, so her family has always been very comfortably middle class. And to top it all off, she's never had any close friends or family ruthlessly murdered. Yep, as a matter of fact, if it wasn't for the condition that her and her brother share, her life would have been totally normal. But it isn't. Her condition has been the cause of much rejection and isolation from those outside her family, but instead of turning in on herself and becoming an introvert like her brother, she fought back, becoming an outgoing mischief inducing trickster who made sure to activate her abilities whenever she felt like it. In fact, for a while she switched back and forth so much, that she doesn't even have a preferred gender anymore. She loves her brother dearly. In truth, he is currently her only friend, and the fact that she is technically the elder sibling causes her to be quite overprotective of him. Of course, she finds his insecurity with his condition to be hilarious, and takes any chance that she can to make him switch back and forth. She's also been known to impersonate him from time to time for particularly nasty practical jokes. In an attempt to give her a more normal life, her parents sent her to a boarding school in scotland and her brother to one in england. Because of this, she speaks with a slight scottish accent. Unfortunately, her uncaring attitude towards her abilities and who saw her use them caused her to become a bit of a loner at this, and once her parents heard about rosentale, they immediately decided to send her there in hopes that the more accepting environment would earn this trouble child a few friends. They also gave her a gift from the mikelovitch's family doctor, a researcher studying the twins bizarre condition. An earring that released a particular electromagnetic signature that stops her from transforming. It appears to work too...

Skills and Abilities: Whenever Persephone makes eye contact with someone of the opposite gender as her, she changes into a man, becoming Pierce. This change is both in sex and gender, which can be seen in a slight personality difference between her forms. Whenever Pierce makes eye contact someone of the opposite gender as him, he changes back to Persephone. She also looks completely identical to her brother/sister, and is very good at pretending to be him/her. (the personality is usually what gives her away, that or the accent.)

Character Flaws: Callous - She has absolutely no regard for how other people feel except for her absolute closest friends, and even then, she acts as though she doesn't care.
Manipulative - She'll act however she needs to to get whoever she wants to to act however she wants to.
Stubborn - it's not that she's right, it's that you're an idiot.



Sexual Orientation: technically bi (according to her current gender)

Status: single

Likes: Art, Dubstep, Pizza, Video Games, Shonen, Cafes, Cats, Good Jokes, Bad Jokes
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Dislikes: "Good" People, Enclosed Spaces, Snakes, Blondes, Classical Music.
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PostPosted: Sun May 13, 2012 7:51 pm


Magicandmystery


Okay, there are some concerns that I have before I can accept Persephone/Pierce. We have been taking care to pay attention to Percy and how often he transforms. He's been transforming quite a lot. As unique as having a gender swapping character is, it causes the attention to shift from what is going on at the moment to the boy who is turning into a girl or vice versa. So you need to keep that in mind whenever you change your character's gender.

As a suggestion to limit the gender changing, perhaps you can have your character wear glasses maybe? And perhaps the time your character has the glasses off or is caught without glasses, your character can change? How you limit it is up to you and you're free to do what you like, but we would really like to see a decrease in gender swapping.

Okay, now to Persephone/Pierce! Since she changes whenever she looks at the same gender, I need to put some limitations. If you want Persephone/Pierce to join the RP, you have to make sure she never transforms in the dorms, bathrom, locker rooms, or any private girl place. There are a lot of girls in the RP who would feel very awkward if a sudden guy popped up in front of them and the same with some guys with a girl. Especially in private places for specific genders.

Of course, you'll need to limit how often Persephone/Pierce changes just like with Percy/Penelope. It's fine if you have them change genders once in a while, especially if a scene needs a little oomf, but if there's a lot going on, it might just add to the mass confusion.

So if you agree to those terms, I'm willing to accept Persephone/Pierce and have them stay in the Topaz Dorm. Thanks! ^^

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PostPosted: Sun May 13, 2012 8:20 pm


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Okay, there are some concerns that I have before I can accept Persephone/Pierce. We have been taking care to pay attention to Percy and how often he transforms. He's been transforming quite a lot. As unique as having a gender swapping character is, it causes the attention to shift from what is going on at the moment to the boy who is turning into a girl or vice versa. So you need to keep that in mind whenever you change your character's gender.

As a suggestion to limit the gender changing, perhaps you can have your character wear glasses maybe? And perhaps the time your character has the glasses off or is caught without glasses, your character can change? How you limit it is up to you and you're free to do what you like, but we would really like to see a decrease in gender swapping.

Okay, now to Persephone/Pierce! Since she changes whenever she looks at the same gender, I need to put some limitations. If you want Persephone/Pierce to join the RP, you have to make sure she never transforms in the dorms, bathrom, locker rooms, or any private girl place. There are a lot of girls in the RP who would feel very awkward if a sudden guy popped up in front of them and the same with some guys with a girl. Especially in private places for specific genders.

Of course, you'll need to limit how often Persephone/Pierce changes just like with Percy/Penelope. It's fine if you have them change genders once in a while, especially if a scene needs a little oomf, but if there's a lot going on, it might just add to the mass confusion.

So if you agree to those terms, I'm willing to accept Persephone/Pierce and have them stay in the Topaz Dorm. Thanks! ^^


But of course! I was noticing that I haven't been judging the amount of time between changes for percy quite accurately. (Going off of real time when I should have been going off of guild time, my mistake.) I wasn't really certain about posting another character with such a disrupting ability even if she is directly related to my first, and your different concerns about her are a few that I was thinking about myself. The ah, same gender thing I'm afraid was me not paying attention whilst typing (I believe I was watching regular show.) Her power should be a copy of Percy's, so I will change that. As for the glasses, I think that is a great suggestion and I will certainly do something like that. I think I have a solution that will allow me to introduce this character without having to worry about transformation willy nilly. I've edited the profile, tell me what you think! dramallama
PostPosted: Sun May 13, 2012 8:32 pm


Magicandmystery
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Okay, there are some concerns that I have before I can accept Persephone/Pierce. We have been taking care to pay attention to Percy and how often he transforms. He's been transforming quite a lot. As unique as having a gender swapping character is, it causes the attention to shift from what is going on at the moment to the boy who is turning into a girl or vice versa. So you need to keep that in mind whenever you change your character's gender.

As a suggestion to limit the gender changing, perhaps you can have your character wear glasses maybe? And perhaps the time your character has the glasses off or is caught without glasses, your character can change? How you limit it is up to you and you're free to do what you like, but we would really like to see a decrease in gender swapping.

Okay, now to Persephone/Pierce! Since she changes whenever she looks at the same gender, I need to put some limitations. If you want Persephone/Pierce to join the RP, you have to make sure she never transforms in the dorms, bathrom, locker rooms, or any private girl place. There are a lot of girls in the RP who would feel very awkward if a sudden guy popped up in front of them and the same with some guys with a girl. Especially in private places for specific genders.

Of course, you'll need to limit how often Persephone/Pierce changes just like with Percy/Penelope. It's fine if you have them change genders once in a while, especially if a scene needs a little oomf, but if there's a lot going on, it might just add to the mass confusion.

So if you agree to those terms, I'm willing to accept Persephone/Pierce and have them stay in the Topaz Dorm. Thanks! ^^


But of course! I was noticing that I haven't been judging the amount of time between changes for percy quite accurately. (Going off of real time when I should have been going off of guild time, my mistake.) I wasn't really certain about posting another character with such a disrupting ability even if she is directly related to my first, and your different concerns about her are a few that I was thinking about myself. The ah, same gender thing I'm afraid was me not paying attention whilst typing (I believe I was watching regular show.) Her power should be a copy of Percy's, so I will change that. As for the glasses, I think that is a great suggestion and I will certainly do something like that. I think I have a solution that will allow me to introduce this character without having to worry about transformation willy nilly. I've edited the profile, tell me what you think! dramallama


Thanks for understanding! I like your characters and I'm sure there will be many times where they will make us laugh due to the humor that could go along with their gender swapping.

And patience is a virtue. Rosentale isn't dying out any time soon and I'm sure you will find plenty of times where gender swapping will be just right!

She's definitely accepted and like I said before can be staying in the Topaz Dorm. Don't forget to sign her up for classes and posting her profile in your thread. =D

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PostPosted: Sun May 13, 2012 8:33 pm


Thank you much!
PostPosted: Wed May 16, 2012 1:34 am


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Name: Monica Linley

Species: Druid

Age: 15

Gender: Female

Appearance description:

Personality: Monica is a very quiet person, she does not speak unless she is spoken too, unless it is nessicary. Despite her being quiet, Monica is quite friendly when someone approaches her and will give in to the conversation. She is also quite nervous, even the slightest sound will make her jump if she is not expecting it. She strives to do the absolute best that she can, always.

Bio: Monica grew up in a loving but strict family, all of her family members were druids, she has 2 siblings, they are twin girls aged 12. Monica has a very close relationship with both her sisters and her parents. From the age that her and her siblings are able to read and write, their parents have always wanted them to do the best they can, they are strict but they do love their children. Monica was doing very well in normal school, and wanted a change of scenery and learning, so she was sent to Rosentale Academy.

Skills and Abilities:
- Shape-shifting, downfall is that shifting into something powerful drains her energy very quickly.
- Brainy

Character Flaws:
- Finicky
- Overambitious
- Nervous

Sexual Orientation: Heterosexual

Status: Single, and happy

Likes: (at least 3)
- Her family
- Leopards
- Cherry blossoms
- Angels
- Frogs
- Reading
- Peace doves
- Strawberry lipbalm
- Purple

Dislikes: (at least 3)
- Loud noises
- Failure
- Chunky jewels
- Bullies
- Slugs

Extra Information: The largest thing Monica can shift into is a small to medium sized dragon


(( Is it too early to submit this character? ))

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PostPosted: Wed May 16, 2012 4:46 am


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RPer Username: Serendipitous Coma

Name: Romane Bissette

Species: Unicorn

Age: 4 (20~22)

Gender: Female

Appearance description: Romane is around 5'8” in height and weighs about as much as a horse! Even in human form! She dresses constantly in uniform and, when she isn't working (Not that that ever happens, really.), she wears.. her uniform. Her entire wardrobe really is just her uniform. When she's in her true form as a unicorn, she looks like what one would expect of a unicorn – albeit, a lot smaller. Really, she looks more like a white pony with a horn than anything.

Personality: To the point, serious, and firm, Romane is essentially a classic workaholic. Her entire mind is around working and improving herself and others to the best that they're capable of. She's not a very social person, to be honest, and she tends to be shy when it comes to encounters that she didn't initiate herself, but one wouldn't guess this with how often she runs towards people to order them around. She dislikes wasting time and doesn't seem capable of being aimless, always having a task or goal in mind. When it comes to others, she expects the exact same standards as she imposes on herself and, though she may come off as harsh or uncaring, she really does everything with the want to help better others. She's simply too rushed to really think about tact.

Bio: In the forest that Romane was born into, there are several variations of the fairly common, but elusive unicorn. The land stands at a meeting ground of several different worlds, so, of course, it's not impossible to believe that these alternate versions of one race could meet and grow themselves a small community of their own. Despite having many differences, there is one thing that stands supreme above all – that is, aging. The pecking order within the forest is as basic as one can get – with the oldest reigning as the wisest and the ignorant youths at the bottom of the chain. This can be considered an intelligent move, but, for Romane, this was possibly the most unfair environment to be raised in. Her variant of unicorn has the same lifespan of a regular horse – only surviving, if lucky, a total of thirty years. To make up for this lack of time, they mature at the same rate as well, so, while they are adults at four years of age, most other unicorns have barely finished their infancy. The short-lived unicorn types are often mocked as they live far too short a time to master all the arts and magic that the eldest are capable of.

While some succumbed to this treatment and stereotype, Romane adamantly refused to early into her life. She forced herself to learn as many arts as she could – which, really, just amounted to firing a gun and memorizing rules for the nearby academy. But, after three years of careful study – and a few months of practicing Rosentale's rules – Romane was proud to say she was the best of the unicorns at these arts. Of course, this was because most of the unicorns used their human forms as escape devices rather than for violence.. But, Romane would hardly hear any of that. She couldn't! After all, as soon as she thought herself ready, she hurried over to the Academy and forced her way into working there to put order back into the horribly disruptive school. She was tired of seeing so many students wasting their time off school grounds!

Skills and Abilities: As one can guess, Romane is capable of shifting herself from a unicorn to a human and back again, but the process to do so consumes too much energy for comfort, so she rarely does it.

Romane has a good aim and is pretty skilled when it comes to guns, as well as good reflexes.

Her blood and horn have healing properties, as legends go, but the horn would only work when detached from her head. As for her blood, the amount required to really heal anything more than a small scrape would be too dangerous to even think of using. Besides, most creatures tend to be allergic to unicorn blood.

Character Flaws:

Bold - Romane automatically assumes she understands a person's intentions or situation when encountered with something new.

Hard - It shouldn't be a surprise that Romane is difficult to manage - if one isn't in command, then she will take on the role with utmost seriousness and refuse to listen to any objections.

Humorless - Don't joke with Romane. Just don't.

Idealist - In Romane's mind, everyone and everything should be done with complete perfection - no excuses.

Impatient - Romane refuses to sit still or wait on other's. Time is too short for her to even consider it!

Intolerant - Attempting to argue or differ on Romane on something is an extraordinary difficult task. Romane is right, no exceptions.

Overambitious - Everything must be perfect and, if possible, under her control so she can assure herself of this perfection.

Predictable - Romane works on a routine both inside and outside of her mind. It's not hard to figure out what she will do or how she will react, given someone pays attention.

Proud - Though she can be ordered into it by the right people, Romane refuses to believe she needs help in anything and will become defensive at the very notion usually.

Sexual Orientation: Heterosexual

Status: Single

Occupation: Security Guard / Detention Officer / Substitute Teacher

When are the best days for you to be online? FOREEEVEERRR.

Likes:
+++ Obedience
+++ Grapefruits
+++ Patrolling
+++ Exercise
+++ Coffee
+++ Radish
+++ Clocks
+++ Innocence

Dislikes:
+++ Video Games
+++ Music
+++ Cellphones
+++ Cakes
+++ Laziness
+++ Secrets
+++ Television

Extra Information: Just to clarify, Romane grew up in the forests outside of Rosentale.
PostPosted: Wed May 16, 2012 5:11 pm


M i n i R e d S t a r s


Sorry for the wait! I was pretty tired last night and couldn't properly take a look at your character. So there are a few things that I want to clarify before I can accept your character.

First are her abilities. You'll need to add more limiting powers for her shape-shifting because so far, you're very vague to what she can shift into. For all we know, she can shift into being a TV or a random vase or a pig monster, or even a person in the RP. So you'll need to tell us what kinds of creatures or things she can shape shift into. Also, how big is a small or medium dragon is to you? You'll want to be specific and give us measurements like feet and inches or centimeters and meters.

And this isn't a very big deal, but I can't seem to see the connection between druids and shape-shifting. Can you pinpoint a source to me for where you made the connection? All I really know about druids is their history and in their history they were more like priests in the Celtic religion who can speak to their gods and perform rituals.

And there are also her flaws. Maybe you might want to explain how they are flaws. Because I'm going with what you have in her personality. Her being nervous just seems like a little quirk in her personality since all she really does is jump at slight sounds. Although it might weird people out for a bit, most would continue and there's really no problem there. Is that all there is? Or does she overreact because of all these sounds and completely lose her train of thought because of it? Does her nervousness impact her when she's dealing with people?

Being finicky. What is she finicky about? Usually when I think of finicky people, it's because they fuss over neatness, but the picture you choose to portray her does not seem like a very neat person. Finicky people tend to be overly fussy and require great detail or attention to something. If it's not neatness, is it her work or homework? Is it to the point that she writes novels or pages of homework to explain one question? And not just her homework. If people ask her a question, does she answer with a lot of talking and gives too many details? Can you explain to me what she is finicky about rather than having me guess?

And lastly is over ambition. Most people think of overambitious people as arrogant or confident. It doesn't really fit well with her being finicky and nervous. Overambitious people are people who bite more they can chew. In other words, they run into a situation thinking they can succeed but end up failing most of the time because they obviously thought too high of themselves. So you'll need to explain to me how she is over ambitious along with her core personality--quiet, nervous, and finicky.

Alright. Once you have made the changes, just quote me and I'll come back and take a look. Thanks! =D

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PostPosted: Wed May 16, 2012 5:16 pm


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Alright! She's accepted! She can stay in the Ethreal Ether Dorm!
PostPosted: Thu May 17, 2012 12:10 am


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M i n i R e d S t a r s


Sorry for the wait! I was pretty tired last night and couldn't properly take a look at your character. So there are a few things that I want to clarify before I can accept your character.

First are her abilities. You'll need to add more limiting powers for her shape-shifting because so far, you're very vague to what she can shift into. For all we know, she can shift into being a TV or a random vase or a pig monster, or even a person in the RP. So you'll need to tell us what kinds of creatures or things she can shape shift into. Also, how big is a small or medium dragon is to you? You'll want to be specific and give us measurements like feet and inches or centimeters and meters.

And this isn't a very big deal, but I can't seem to see the connection between druids and shape-shifting. Can you pinpoint a source to me for where you made the connection? All I really know about druids is their history and in their history they were more like priests in the Celtic religion who can speak to their gods and perform rituals.

And there are also her flaws. Maybe you might want to explain how they are flaws. Because I'm going with what you have in her personality. Her being nervous just seems like a little quirk in her personality since all she really does is jump at slight sounds. Although it might weird people out for a bit, most would continue and there's really no problem there. Is that all there is? Or does she overreact because of all these sounds and completely lose her train of thought because of it? Does her nervousness impact her when she's dealing with people?

Being finicky. What is she finicky about? Usually when I think of finicky people, it's because they fuss over neatness, but the picture you choose to portray her does not seem like a very neat person. Finicky people tend to be overly fussy and require great detail or attention to something. If it's not neatness, is it her work or homework? Is it to the point that she writes novels or pages of homework to explain one question? And not just her homework. If people ask her a question, does she answer with a lot of talking and gives too many details? Can you explain to me what she is finicky about rather than having me guess?

And lastly is over ambition. Most people think of overambitious people as arrogant or confident. It doesn't really fit well with her being finicky and nervous. Overambitious people are people who bite more they can chew. In other words, they run into a situation thinking they can succeed but end up failing most of the time because they obviously thought too high of themselves. So you'll need to explain to me how she is over ambitious along with her core personality--quiet, nervous, and finicky.

Alright. Once you have made the changes, just quote me and I'll come back and take a look. Thanks! =D


Okay, I will get to this right away, with the druid and shapeshifting, I thought druids were shapeshifters O.o But I can change it to shapeshifter instead smile

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PostPosted: Thu May 17, 2012 12:33 am


xLieselotte


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Name: Monica Linley

Species: Shapeshifter

Age: 15

Gender: Female

Appearance description: Basicly like in the picture. She stands at about 5 foot 5, her skin tone is cool, and she is always seen in glasses (but obviously not when she is asleep), and her eyes are the colour hazel.

Personality: Monica is a very quiet person, she does not speak unless she is spoken too, unless it is nessicary. Despite her being quiet, Monica is quite friendly when someone approaches her and will give in to the conversation. She is also quite nervous, even the slightest sound will make her jump if she is not expecting it. She strives to do the absolute best that she can, always.

Bio: Monica grew up in a loving but strict family, all of her family members were shapeshifters, she has 2 siblings, they are twin girls aged 12. Monica has a very close relationship with both her sisters and her parents. From the age that her and her siblings are able to read and write, their parents have always wanted them to do the best they can, they are strict but they do love their children. Monica was doing very well in normal school, and wanted a change of scenery and learning, so she was sent to Rosentale Academy.

Skills and Abilities:
- Shape-shifting, downfall is that shifting into something powerful drains her energy very quickly.
- Brainy

Character Flaws:
- Finicky - Monica is finicky over her work, her work must always be perfect and if not, then she will start all over again.
- Perfectionist - Everything Monica does, must be perfect
- Nervous - Monica can be easily scared, slight sounds that she is not expecting can make her jump or jumpy. But she is trying hard to over come this flaw.

Sexual Orientation: Heterosexual

Status: Single, and happy

Likes: (at least 3)
- Her family
- Leopards
- Cherry blossoms
- Angels
- Frogs
- Reading
- Peace doves
- Strawberry lipbalm
- Purple

Dislikes: (at least 3)
- Loud noises
- Failure
- Chunky jewels
- Bullies
- Slugs

Extra Information: The largest thing Monica can shift into is a purple 6 foot tall dragon with wings that span to about 5 feet. She is only able to change into animals, and will never take the form of another human being.
PostPosted: Thu May 17, 2012 4:27 pm


M i n i R e d S t a r s


Hello! There are still some touching up to do before she can be accepted.

Shapeshifting into animals is too broad. In other words, you can have her shapeshifting into just about anything and I'm pretty sure a lion or a rhino in the classroom will cause a lot of problems. And also, since a dragon is being classified as an animal as well, there's also the scope of mythological creatures she could turn into.

If you consider all those animals, that's already a lot of abilities, from running super fast, to flying, and razor sharp claws and teeth and also being super small that she could be good at stalking and spying. So that's why I wanted you to really limit what she can shapeshift into. I would recommend one strong creature and a few not very strong creatures. You also need to consider that these animals are probably animals she's probably seen before or met because it doesn't make sense if she could transform into something that she's only just seen. Also, the information you put in the extra information doesn't really belong there. It should be located in the skills and abilities section because that's what it's pertaining to. That way people don't have to search your character's profile for the limitation. ^^

So if you could be more specific about what she could shift into, that would be great.

Also there are her flaws. By the way you explained finicky and perfectionist... they seem like practically the same thing and you might as well merge them into one flaw.

And being 'jumpy' is kind of like the shyness and clumsy flaw. Lots of people will take that flaw and rather than using it like an actual flaw, they tend to play it off as cute. Because slight noises and someone popping up anywhere and having her go "Yikes!" and then going back to living normally, is just a way to play it off as cute. Now, if she gets scared to the point that she actually offends someone because of it, that might work as a flaw.

So that's pretty much it. Once you make those changes, just quote me and I'll take another look. Thanks! =D

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PostPosted: Thu May 17, 2012 9:47 pm


I will post a picture for him when it's finished

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RPer Username: StrawberryZ0mbie

Name: Ihsan al Seif

Species: Djinn

Age: 16

Gender: Male

Appearance description: (optional) Ihsan stands at around 6' and has long black hair that he usually keeps in a low ponytail. His skin is extremely pale, bordering on being white and his eyes are heterochromatic--one blue and one brown. He has fang-like teeth and pointed ears with many piercings. His face tends to be rather...expressionless as he's not used to showing emotion that way.

Has a white ox tail on which he wears a large, gold armlet.

Personality: Ihsan is a generally amicable guy and views the world with a sort of quiet curiosity. He's not used to dealing with mortals or any race outside his own tribe so he's still getting used to all the strange nuances of other cultures. He can be a bit awkward when interacting with people simply because he doesn't know all the standard social rules of other races. He's very quiet and tends to use as few words as possible when speaking. Though he rarely smiles and is seemingly quite serious, he actually does have a lurking sense of humor. But more often he keeps his amusement internalized so one can never really know if he might be inwardly laughing at something that outwardly, he doesn't seem to find humorous.

He does have quite a temper, but doesn't make much of a show of getting angry outside the fact that he tends to be calmly physical toward people that frustrate him. Generally, you don't know you've made him mad until he suddenly throws you through a wall or window.

He tends to be easily baffled by other people and their actions because he's simply not used to interacting with people so it tends to be easy to confuse him. He's also very literal and doesn't understand figurative speech well yet.

Bio: Ihsan was raised as part of a Djinn tribe in a desert country rife with internal conflict--most of which had been instigated by his tribe. Not being a soldier, or anyone of great import, or from a high ranking family, there was never really much ffor Ihsan to do. He tended to wander around the desert and occasionally joined merchant caravans to cause trouble or just watch the Humans. Eventually, he just got bored of living with his tribe. Though most of them made it their objective to make mortals miserable, Ihsan just never saw the point. He always felt he could find something a bit more constructive and interesting to do.

Mortals were more interesting than his people and didn't feel the need to constantly bicker and try to backstab to get raised to a higher position (well, not the ones he was generally around, anyway--and even the ones that were seemed to be more creative about it than the average Sheitan). Eventually, he just sort of wandered off and started lurking around mortals most of the time. And finally he heard about this school between worlds where various races gathered together.

It sounded interesting, so he managed to work out a way to be enrolled at Rosentale to see what it was about.

Skills and Abilities: First and foremost, Ihsan has the ability to shapeshift into a white ox. When in ox form, he retains his heterochromia

Illusions--He's capable of creating various types of illusions however, these have no substance and can't do physical harm, nor can they be touched or interacted with. He can conceal reality (he can, in other words, make you think you're interacting with the illusion when you're actually not touching anything), or make figures that move around. When caught in one of his illusions, it's fairly easy to break it by simply interacting with something in the real world with any sense. Even something as small as a smell can break one out of his illusions.

He is capable of shifting into a completely Human looking form but generally feels no compulsion to actually do so.



Character Flaws: Arrogant - whether he actively realizes it or not, Ihsan looks down on mortals. They are, after all, only mortals. And while they're interesting, he sort of views them as some form of entertainment more than individuals that have feelings of their own. Not that he's uncaring but he does lump other races into one group and views them as slightly lesser beings that it's okay to occasionally toy with.

Violent - When angry, Ihsan will get violent without much warning. Because he doesn't really show his emotions much, it's a little difficult to know when he's getting annoyed until he actually starts trying to shove your head in an oven. Fortunately, he is also very patient so it takes quite a lot to actually make him angry.

Passive - Seemingly contradicting the violent temper, when he's extremely passive when not angry. He will pretty much go along with whatever the people around him are doing, never bothering to argue or put a stop to things that are against the rules (or law).

Mercurial - His moods tend to shift without warning --he will go from being being in a pleasant mood, to being curt and stand offish fairly rapidly and usually with no provocation.

Impulsive - Generally, if he wants to do something (no matter what it is) he sees very little reason why he shouldn't do it. He doesn't go out of his way to break the rules and will work within whatever perameters he's been given most of the time. But only because he usually doesn't feel the need to do otherwise. But if he wants to do something against the rules, he'll do it without guilt or hesitation.


Sexual Orientation: Straight

Status: Single

Likes: (at least 3)
-heat and sun
-rain
-Humans
-watermelon

Dislikes: (at least 3)
-Cold
-Ifrits
-boredom
-fruitless endeavors
-bald people (they freak him out)
-constricting clothes

RP Example: PFFT D=<

Extra Information: Ihsan hates constricting clothing and usually wears loose fitting pants and flowing layers. He also wears thin slippers most of the time, rather than proper shoes. Pretty much has no qualms with showing up with a bare torso and hasn't quite gotten used to wearing modern clothes.

He is bound by his word so if he makes a promise, he will keep it no matter what.

He holds grudges badly--if you get on his bad side, you're likely not getting off it. Ever.
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