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 Posted: Tue Apr 24, 2012 12:35 am
 Character Information:
Student RPer Username: Angel Mhai
Name: Alice-15708 also known as “EVE”
Species: Marionette
Age: Unspecified. But she’s 16 physically
Gender: Female
Appearance description:
Eve is a type of a humanoid. A marionette. Though she’s a robot, her skin is warm, fair and soft. Possessing soft volume long blonde hair and a pair of transmitter just behind her ears.. Eve stands 5’7” in height and usually seen wearing knee-high dresses, laces, ribbons complimenting her high heeled wedge sandals, shoes or boots.
Personality:
✿Loyal
✿Faithful
✿Lovable
✿Hard working
✿Obedient
✿Caring
✿Innocent
Bio:
Alice-15708 was invented from a far away planet, Nebula. A royal scientist brought her to life and designed to work as a nanny serving Prince Luther, who named her as “EVE”. Eve is a perfect female android that can perform household chores, attending the prince’s needs and protecting her master as part of her duty.
Everything were simple and peaceful until planet Nebula is being invaded by unwanted aliens and other galactic beings. Nebula, once a tranquil, rich and beautiful planet.. Ruined and it's fall brought grief over the survivors, Eve failed her duty and the royal family were massacred. Nebulians were held captives under a new colony and the marionette received torments and she suffered a lot from the enemies, which cause her circuits damaged and broken..
Shutting her down and dumped outside the planet as waste in a pod. Eve's pod travelled thousands of years until it reach Earth and fell at the nearby Forest of Rosentale Academy.
Skills and Abilities:
✿Analyze- As a marionette, Eve has the ability to figure out components, processes and structures by looking on it..
✿Gymnastics- Looks can be deceiving.. But this one hot chick is designed to defend her master by doing somersaults, leaps and other moves during battle and as part of defense and offense..
✿Brawl combat- She can handle opponents by using her hands as a mere tool of weapon..
Character Flaws:
✿Innocent looking yet very aggressive
✿Emotionless/ flat affect
✿Overprotective over her master
✿Distrusts other people
✿Withdrawn
✿She usually malfunctions whenever her battery is low and needs to be recharged.
✿Uncontrolled strength and thus resulting to damaged things except when touching a living specie..
Sexual Orientation: Straight
Status: Definitely Single
Likes: (at least 3)
✿Apples and Cherries though she can’t eat it
✿White and Pink shades of colors
✿Machineries
✿Doing household chores
✿Cooking
Dislikes: (at least 3)
✿Water
✿Frequent Dress ups
✿Rivalries when it comes to her master’s attention
✿Laziness
✿her hair being ruined
✿Staring at her eyes, directly
Extra Information:
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Posted: Wed Apr 25, 2012 7:48 pm
That picture is taken by another RPer.. choose another pic ^^
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Posted: Wed Apr 25, 2012 7:55 pm
Angel Mhai That picture is taken by another RPer.. choose another pic ^^ Is that better?
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Posted: Wed Apr 25, 2012 7:56 pm
If you read rule o14, it states that members have to wait two weeks before posting their next character. ^^ I'm afraid it hasn't been two weeks since you've posted your first charactet so I can't take a look at your new character but you're free to post him again after two weeks. The point of the two week wait is so your character can settle in and make friends before you make a new one because if your other character has friends, then you won't get bored of that character right? We just want to make sure everyone is using all their characters actively so they're not taking space in the dorms. ^^
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Posted: Wed Apr 25, 2012 8:43 pm
xLieselotte If you read rule o14, it states that members have to wait two weeks before posting their next character. ^^ I'm afraid it hasn't been two weeks since you've posted your first charactet so I can't take a look at your new character but you're free to post him again after two weeks. The point of the two week wait is so your character can settle in and make friends before you make a new one because if your other character has friends, then you won't get bored of that character right? We just want to make sure everyone is using all their characters actively so they're not taking space in the dorms. ^^ Oh! Sorry sweatdrop forgot about that rule!
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Posted: Sat Apr 28, 2012 9:51 am
 Character 'Frofile:
Student Name: Shirley Carson
AKA: 'Fro Boy Species: HumanAge: 15Gender: MaleAppearance Description: Defined by his signature ginger afro and his gorgeous sideburns, this hero looks ready to ruin save the day. When his services are not needed, he dresses in misleadingly formal clothes, which, on further inspection, are all cheap imitation brands. He often has a goofy grin on his face and has childish expressions, until it's time to be a hero. When he sees a damsel (or anyone else for that matter) in distress, he hops into the nearest bathroom, closet, etc. to change into his glorious and totally inconspicuous costume. He flaunts his bright red mask (which honestly does nothing to hide his true identity and is only meant to make him look cool) and his bold blue cape, which only droops halfway down his back when he is in "hero mode". He attempts to keep a straight face when faced with his heroic duty, but it's nearly impossible for him to bite back a smile. From head to toe, he's 5"7', but his height 6"1' when including the 'fro.More Useless Details HerePersonality: He tends to be carefree and outgoing, and has a habit of talking more than he should. He wants to be a superhero, but ends up making the situation even worse when he tries to help. He can be less than bright, and he avoids classwork by reading classic superhero comics. He is quick to form opinions, and uses this skill to pursue "evil-doers" that threaten justice.Bio: His father, who was originally a fairly normal man, decided to become a superhero when he fell into a vat of toxic waste in the nuclear plant he worked at. Soon after that event, when Shirley was seven years old, "Mullet Man" took him on as his apprentice. While 'Fro Boy was training under his father, the radioactive mutation that gave his father his powers somehow spread to him. After his father retired, 'Fro Boy still had a love of justice and heroes, and decided to keep fighting crime on his own. Which often meant tangling people he assumed were guilty of petty crimes, such as robbery or bullying with his hair. After trying to "apprehend" a bully at his previous school, he was expelled, and was forced to search for a new school that was willing to accept his strange behavior and so-called talents. And that is how he found Rosentale Academy. Skills and Abilities: The ability to control that godly 'fro (making tentacles of hair to catch "villans", and able to grow back any hair that is cut off within 3 days).Character Flaws: Jumps to conclusions
Fatigues easily
A glutton
Easily distracted
Tends to get himself into trouble that others are stuck cleaning up after
A huge fan of procrastination
Lack of balance (because the 'fro makes him top-heavy)
Extremely talkativeSexual Orientation: StraightStatus: SingleLikes:Typical American food (burgers, fries, pizza, etc)
PE/sports
Damsels in distress
Superhero comics
Knock-off brands
JUSTICE (and watching coutroom activities)
Procrastination
Birdwatching (...or chasing)Dislikes:Spicy and bitter foods
Learning
Villans
Lemons
His true nameExtra Information: He only wears the cape and mask when he's ready to fight crime, but they're really just for show. His hatred of his given name is greater than his sense of self-presevation.
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Elen_Gilthoniel Vice Captain
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Posted: Sat Apr 28, 2012 12:03 pm
Hey there! Your character is cute. =3 But you'll have to make a couple of fixes before I approve him. While he does seem like fun, silly-type character, and while there are some of those here in Rosentale, we do still have to keep them within the outer reaches of believability for the guild because if a character is too far out there, it makes it really difficult for the more serious RP characters to interact with them naturally. Off the bat, he's really going to need a real name. I'm sure he has a birth name that he uses when he's not in super hero garb? (Otherwise, why would he even bother with a mask, right? LoL) The other issue I have with him is that, really, his biography is a little lacking when it comes to details. It's fine to have him come from a world of super heroes since Rosentale academy is a sort of hub where different worlds meet. But why is he actually at the school in the first place? I would really love to see a biography that is a little longer than just four sentences. Surely there's a bit more to him and his life than that? I can tell he's not a super serious sort of character but I don't think that's a reason to give only bare minimum information. ^^ Also, for those people who may have issues with flash or not be able to access the site in your link for whatever reason, if there's anything critical in those details that you really think people should know--please add it to the description since, again, some people might not be able to see the thing you've linked to. And honestly, I'm not really a big fan of making people jump to other sites to see character information. The profile should be a one stop place that has all the information we need. If the info in the link isn't critical, you can just note that in the profile. Good job on the flaws though--you gave him a nice, long list. It makes me really happy to see that. ^^ Be sure to quote me when you've made the changes and I'll have another look. ^^
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Posted: Sat Apr 28, 2012 1:24 pm
I made the adjustments you mentioned, thank you <3
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Elen_Gilthoniel Vice Captain
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Posted: Sat Apr 28, 2012 1:43 pm
Iyo3469 I made the adjustments you mentioned, thank you <3 Okay! He's approved. He can stay in Limestone dorm. ^^ Please be sure you make a profile thread in the accepted characters forum. Also, choose a class schedule and make sure you familiarize yourself with the school system. Today is the weekend so he can pretty much go anywhere he wants. If you have any questions, feel free to ask. ^^
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Posted: Tue May 01, 2012 9:11 pm
 Character Information:
Student RPer Username: -xBurnxThexCityx-
Name: Akoujina Lautphaithir [A.J. Lightfeather]
Species: Undead Japanese Sorceress
Age: Seventeen
Gender: Female
Appearance description: Red-green bruises lining the hollows of her eyes, hand-shaped bruises on her lower left forearm, scratches over her calves, large purple bruise on her upper right thigh. Pale skin (sometimes a little yellow, sometimes Ashen; healthy peach color after she eats), dark amber-colored eyes, Black layered hair, 5'6".
Personality: Akoujina has a very passive, stoic personality. She is silent, keeps to whatever it is she's doing until it's finished, and stays to herself. She covers some of her wounds not because she is self-conscious of them but because they are inconvenient for her. The only bits of personality she really has is curiosity, and stubbornness, (more like, she is blankly resolute in all her decisions until convinced otherwise). The last strong emotion she had was when she attacked her killer, and only mental functions keep her in stride with everybody else; she would probably go to school with no clothes on if it hadn't been instilled in her brain(apparently there's no logic here either) that clothes are a must. She'd let someone die if watching them do it fascinated them in someone way, rather than calling for help or helping the person herself. In her mind, the only true emotion is remorse over her lack of emotions, and the need to locate them again.
Bio: In life, Akoujina was the daughter of the owner of a high class Ryokan, and the daughter of a powerful sorcerer of life and death. She lived as an average high school, with growing powers every year that her father taught her how to use as she gained them. A beautiful face and a bird-like body structure (thin bones, long limbs) Aj had a small group of close friends and had emotions, not to the full extent that others had, and not all of the ones that others had, but more than she had after she died.
Aj had gone a school camping trip to a camp with outdoor exercises (rock-wall climbing, hiking, etc.). On the second night, it was a scavenger hunt out in the woods. Before the message could reach her that a danger had breached the camp grounds, Aj crossed paths with that danger. Afraid of being caught, the person beat her death as he seemed to lack a weapon. Her parents discovered two days later that their daughter had gone missing, and three days after that, were horrified when their daughter came shuffling back to the Ryokan, hollow-eyed, scarily thin and deathly pale, muddy leaves and twigs sticking out, scrapes climbing her legs to her shorts and a missing shoe.
With each passing day, Aj began to rot little by little, becoming more dainty and fragile. That was when she crossed paths with her killer. She tore into him violently, on impulse rather than using powers, weapons, or calling police; that was when she found an accommodating taste for blood. After she had munched on him nearly to death, the local police separated them. They found that blood had filled in her features again, made her skin less pale and her face less hollow. It gave her parents nightmares to see her rotting day by day, and they realized that it was the true meaning of a sorcerer of life and death. A few days later, Aj began to see spirits that no one else could see. The problem with going back to her daily life was that her injuries from death did not leave her, so she could not return to school and she could no longer help about in the Ryokan. She resulted in solitude, until her parents caught wind of the Rosentale Academy. They enrolled her as soon as possible.
Skills and Abilities: She speaks to the dead; she can see spirits, talk to the spirits, and even (occasionally) raise them from the dead (one or two at a time).
Character Flaws:
Paranoid - Aj has trouble working with others; when she does, she has to double check every little thing they do and change it until she thinks it's okay. This is something, no matter how others try to convince her, that she always does. Even when she sees someone else doing something not to her liking, she is nervous and skittish until it is fixed. Since her preferences are a little odd(you don't see her messing with her bruises or sunken-in face), she often clashes heads with the person she is correcting. (This would be more extreme than it sounds).
Callous - Aj usually has a very stoic expression and remote body language. She is excessively aloof and not very talkative in the least, and makes direct contact with people only when necessary. She usually ends a conversation before the other participant can ask anything about her, and she comes across as very bland. Sometimes this becomes a problem to a point where she just flat out doesn't answer a person, even when they speak directly to her, or repeatedly(this is unfortunate when crossing paths with a teacher, as she does it even then).
Humorless, Hard, Hedonistic - Aj's emotions only stretch to a certain extent. When she sees someone in pain or being attacked, she has no instincts to act and stop it. There is no pity, protectiveness, or affection in her. There is an inch of remorse that she is disconnected from the rest of the world on many levels. This inch of remorse, and curiosity of life, makes her search fastidiously for things that would bring out more emotion or reaction in her. She has no interest in people, only experimenting with the little emotion she has.
Sexual Orientation: Bi - Curious
Status: Single
Likes:
- Cemeteries
- Raising dead children
- Cold temperatures
Dislikes:
- Sweets
- Cats
- Spicy foods
Extra Information: Similar to a vampire, Aj maintains her physical stability by quantity of blood intake. Though she does not have fangs like one, she has an easier time biting through flesh with her naturally reinforced (after death) human teeth.
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Elen_Gilthoniel Vice Captain
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Posted: Tue May 01, 2012 9:17 pm
Just out of curiosity, when you say "callous" do you mean like...withdrawn or anti social? Because you go on to describe someone who is anti social rather than someone who is actually insensitive or indifferent to others? I do worry how you're going to interact with people if she's just constantly walking away mid conversation. Because, I mean, eventually no one is going to talk to her and she's going to end up one of those lurker characters who has no one to interact with and is always off by herself. This isn't something you HAVE to change. I've just seen people RP characters like this before and it's nearly impossible to get them involved in the RP (There have been characters like this in Rosentale specifically and pretty much....they just kind of ignored the rest of the RP and did their own thing)--if you're fine with her not being involved, that's totally cool. I just know most people tend to feel guilty about leaving out characters but it's hard when there's no way to get them involved because the character has zero interest in interacting with other people. Because no one is going to try to chase her around and talk to her. If she walks off all the time, probably, no one is going to even really attempt to talk to her. I just want to make sure you're thinking ahead when it comes to this characteristic. And, again, if you're cool with it, I'm cool with it. ^^
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Posted: Tue May 01, 2012 9:31 pm
StrawberryZ0mbie Just out of curiosity, when you say "callous" do you mean like...withdrawn or anti social? Because you go on to describe someone who is anti social rather than someone who is actually insensitive or indifferent to others? I do worry how you're going to interact with people if she's just constantly walking away mid conversation. Because, I mean, eventually no one is going to talk to her and she's going to end up one of those lurker characters who has no one to interact with and is always off by herself. This isn't something you HAVE to change. I've just seen people RP characters like this before and it's nearly impossible to get them involved in the RP (There have been characters like this in Rosentale specifically and pretty much....they just kind of ignored the rest of the RP and did their own thing)--if you're fine with her not being involved, that's totally cool. I just know most people tend to feel guilty about leaving out characters but it's hard when there's no way to get them involved because the character has zero interest in interacting with other people. Because no one is going to try to chase her around and talk to her. If she walks off all the time, probably, no one is going to even really attempt to talk to her. I just want to make sure you're thinking ahead when it comes to this characteristic. And, again, if you're cool with it, I'm cool with it. ^^
I actually had a solution to that. I did say she didn't talk. I didn't she avoided people. So I could have her like, find someone interesting and just let her interact with them in her silent way (i.e. if they're doing an assignment, fill something in on their paper, or write little notes to them((she'll write to people to, even if she doesn't speak out loud. I think she just doesn't like sound)) body language, etc.) Do you think that might work ?
Other than that, is there anything wrong?
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Elen_Gilthoniel Vice Captain
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Posted: Tue May 01, 2012 10:10 pm
-xBurnxThexCityx- StrawberryZ0mbie Just out of curiosity, when you say "callous" do you mean like...withdrawn or anti social? Because you go on to describe someone who is anti social rather than someone who is actually insensitive or indifferent to others? I do worry how you're going to interact with people if she's just constantly walking away mid conversation. Because, I mean, eventually no one is going to talk to her and she's going to end up one of those lurker characters who has no one to interact with and is always off by herself. This isn't something you HAVE to change. I've just seen people RP characters like this before and it's nearly impossible to get them involved in the RP (There have been characters like this in Rosentale specifically and pretty much....they just kind of ignored the rest of the RP and did their own thing)--if you're fine with her not being involved, that's totally cool. I just know most people tend to feel guilty about leaving out characters but it's hard when there's no way to get them involved because the character has zero interest in interacting with other people. Because no one is going to try to chase her around and talk to her. If she walks off all the time, probably, no one is going to even really attempt to talk to her. I just want to make sure you're thinking ahead when it comes to this characteristic. And, again, if you're cool with it, I'm cool with it. ^^
I actually had a solution to that. I did say she didn't talk. I didn't she avoided people. So I could have her like, find someone interesting and just let her interact with them in her silent way (i.e. if they're doing an assignment, fill something in on their paper, or write little notes to them((she'll write to people to, even if she doesn't speak out loud. I think she just doesn't like sound)) body language, etc.) Do you think that might work ?
Other than that, is there anything wrong?Oh....well...yes. But the text that follows the bolded word "Callous" doesn't say anything about watching people being hurt and not feeling anything. It talks about how she doesn't like to talk to people. If it had said "She can watch people be mauled and not care" then I would not have said anything, but it basically says "She walks away from people when they talk to her." Usually when I see a bold word followed by text, I assume the text is defining the bold word. But maybe that's just me. =) And...well, again, you can RP her how you want. If she's communicating with people, great? But if she's just walking away from people mid conversation or doesn't answer them when they speak to her, that is where I see interaction issues? And the profile clearly says she walks away from people and won't answer them. I'm just going by what the profile says and expressing concerns. If you intend to RP her completely differently from what the profile indicates, that's really something else entirely, I guess...o.O; I will note that Rosen isn't a great place for RPing with a single person all the time so if you thought she could find one interesting person and stalk them around, I can tell you that won't work. We had someone that did that and got really pushy when the character was usually not available to interact with her, and she got pretty frustrated at her character being left out. So I think you'd need to be careful to choose that 'someone interesting' pretty carefully. Again, silent lurker-stalkers tend to get left out in my experience. This is just my personal experience. I'm not saying your character is bad or wrong. I'm alerting you to an issue that I frequently see people run into with characters like this. If you are confident you can work around it, then go for it. You don't have to justify the personality to me. I just want to make sure we avoid having you frustrated later on if she ends up getting left out due to her personality and I do not encourage you to bank on finding a single person/character who will constantly be available to RP with this character because that is unlikely to happen. Again, I'm speaking up because I see red flags that tell me you may struggle with this character and am alerting you to them. If you think you can handle it, go for it.
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