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High-functioning Marshmallow
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 Posted: Mon Mar 19, 2012 4:24 pm
xLieselotte Serendipitous Coma xLieselotte Okie dokie! >8D The details ish so beautiful! emotion_kirakira Seeing the relationship between Gani and Gad, would you prefer to stick them to a dorm together or separate them (Like put Gad in a teacher dorm and Gani in a student Dorm)?
I think separating them would be easiest. =D Sani would prefer his own room anyway. 9w9Okay! Gad will be staying in the Ethreal Ether and Sani will be in the Obsidian Dorm. =D (And I realized my typo up above. owo" Sorry about that! XD ) Ayame Sunshine Your wish is his command? BAHAHAH!!! Don't tell Isamu that lol xD rofl
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Posted: Mon Mar 19, 2012 4:28 pm
Thank you for waiting! The crew and I discussed your character and I want to clarify a few things that are a bit confusing and there are a few changes that you will need to make before your character can be accepted. First, we need more details about the body guard other than the age. Surely the body guard also has a name and is the body guard someone that you'll be RPing? Like can the body guard talk and does the body guard have a personality? Or is it just a big panda that just follows her around and has no personality at all and just follows her orders? You'll need to give details on the body guard along with the information of Xiao Qiao. Also, does she changes shape from a human form or stays in a panda form all the time? Because if she shifts from human to panda, you might want to add that to the abilities list because if not, then I'm going to assume that she always looks like a panda. Also, there are some problems with the character flaws. The only ones that are acceptable is "thinks she can take on the world" because I'm assuming that is arrogance and having a bad temper. When things do not go her way and she rampages, that's just another way of saying she has a bad temper. Being weak so she could be an easy target for kidnapping is not a flaw. It's actually normal to be weak to be an easy target for kidnapping and not everyone can be strong. Once you fix all those, your character can be accepted. ^^ If you need help, feel free to refer to our Resources for better characters and coding subforum and there are many resources there that can help you with character building.
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Posted: Mon Mar 19, 2012 5:05 pm
alright i think i went back and remade all of them and the flaw page was really helpfull biggrin
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Posted: Mon Mar 19, 2012 5:46 pm
You're getting there, but there's still more that you need to fill out. The body guard is still, in a sense, a character. So you also have to answer the necessary information for the body guard as well. You can't just slap down everything about the body guard in the additional information because the body guard. So when filling out the form, you not only have to answer the information for Xiao Qiao, but also for Ziao Tai since they're both functioning as characters. The point of the character profile is so RPers know what kind of person their characters will be RPing with because sometimes there will be some characters that would be just too awkward to stick together as they would never bother to chat with each other. The ability to change form is an ability and should be listed in the ability section, not additional information. Also, I'm going to have to ask you to change the human form of your character. It's at borderline of breaking the Gaia TOS. ^^ Once you've made the changes, I'll take a look again. =D
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Posted: Mon Mar 19, 2012 6:05 pm
ty for ur patinece i did biggrin
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Posted: Mon Mar 19, 2012 7:40 pm
((Hope I did this right. Been a very long time since I played this character, so I apologize if anything is wrong or awkward.)) 
Character Information:
Student Name: Violet Reese
Species: 1/2 Fae, 1/4 Human, 1/4 Darkness Demon
Age: Convinced she's 17, truly about 376.
Gender: Female
Appearance description: Wings aren't always present, her hair has a striking purple shine to it in sunlight, and eyes are a pale lavender. Outfit pictured is one of her favorites, as well.
Personality: Amazingly, Violet is sweet and kind to everyone she meets. She says it's her human and Fae blood, but no one knows for sure. During certain times of the year, soltices and new moons, she becomes withdrawn and kind of bitey, but she always makes up for anything she's done during these times.
Bio: Violet grew up in the wilderness. Hiding from humans, eating the sweet fruits and plants she found. It was an easy and fun life for her. Until, that is, she hit puberty. Upon her first bleeding, Violet began to grow. Like full-blooded Fae, she had been able to grow and shrink as needed, but now that power was taken from her. She grew to the size of a human child in a matter of days. Once her body stopped aching, she found she was quite alone. None of the other Fae come to see her, play with her, or even eat with her. Violet also found that her old appetite for berries and mint leaves had been replaced by a hunger for fresh meat. So, she scavenged. For three years. In that time, she met a magnificent man who taught her to hunt, fish, and pretty much fend for herself for as long as she needed to. He even brought her clothes so she wouldn't walk around the forest naked. One day, she found the man alone in a clearing. Violet wanted to show off the deer she'd killed, but something about him made her stay back. Turns out, he was recharging in the light of the moon. The man who'd been her friend for so long was a Darkness Demon, one of the few beings the Fae she had lived with hid from every chance they got. He noticed her, and called her something she had never dreamed of hearing. "Daughter." And then Violet ran. She found herself in a human city, began working in an apothecary, and is just now catching up on her schooling. Despite her rough start to a full-size life, Violet has justed well and is doing just fine.
Skills and Abilities: Ability to 'mask' wings. Kinetic energy manipulation(think Gambit but purple), but only with items smaller than a couch. And healing. Oh, and flight.
Character Flaws: Stubborn in all situations. Rarely serious. She has no boundaries, meaning if she thinks it's a good idea, she's gonna do it. And has a killer sweet tooth.
Sexual Orientation: Pansexual.
Status: Single
Likes:
- The dark.
- Flying.
- Puppies.
- Berries.
- Wearing vintage dresses.
- Jewelry.
- Lipstick.
- Lasagna.
Dislikes: (at least 3)
- Vampires.
- Melon.
- Waterfalls.
- Being ignored.
Extra Information: Violet, though bright, hates going to classes.
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Posted: Mon Mar 19, 2012 7:54 pm
Yay! Everything is perfect so far, but you just need to add one more flaw. I don't think not being able to function without a dress or a skirt on is a valid flaw. Obviously she probably would avoid wearing anything other than a dress or a skirt if it was something really serious and the only way to have that flaw work is to have people literally tear off her skirt or dress. Having a sweet tooth isn't a flaw. It just seems like extra detail to her character. ^^ I'm certain there are many others with sweet tooths that don't think of it as a flaw. So all you really need is one last flaw to make it valid. You can reference the Resources for better characters and coding subforum if you need any help with the last flaw. ^^ Once you have that put in, quote me and I'll take another look. Thanks. = EDIT: Also, you might want to lower the age. ^^ Rosentale is a high school and having a "24" year old student is a bit odd and she'll find that she's older than some of the teachers. It's fine if you have someone who's over a typical age because of their species, but when your character feels that she's "24," I don't think she'd be attending a high school.
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Posted: Mon Mar 19, 2012 8:07 pm
xLieselotte Yay! Everything is perfect so far, but you just need to add one more flaw. I don't think not being able to function without a dress or a skirt on is a valid flaw. Obviously she probably would avoid wearing anything other than a dress or a skirt if it was something really serious and the only way to have that flaw work is to have people literally tear off her skirt or dress. Having a sweet tooth isn't a flaw. It just seems like extra detail to her character. ^^ I'm certain there are many others with sweet tooths that don't think of it as a flaw. So all you really need is one last flaw to make it valid. You can reference the Resources for better characters and coding subforum if you need any help with the last flaw. ^^ Once you have that put in, quote me and I'll take another look. Thanks. = EDIT: Also, you might want to lower the age. ^^ Rosentale is a high school and having a "24" year old student is a bit odd and she'll find that she's older than some of the teachers. It's fine if you have someone who's over a typical age because of their species, but when your character feels that she's "24," I don't think she'd be attending a high school. Changed the flaws. I knew it was gonna come up, but for some reason I thought the skirt thing would be valid. It's an ADD night for me. As for the killer sweet tooth, please don't be mad I left it in. It makes for awesomely hilarious scenes when I play her. I love playing up that need for sweets with my characters. As for the age, Violet's past kind of made it hard for her to have proper schooling like everyone else. She's just claiming a random age, in all honesty. But I changed it anyways. Lemme know how it looks.
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Posted: Mon Mar 19, 2012 8:10 pm
Asura Path Pein ty for ur patinece i did biggrin Sorry for the delay. I didn't realized you went and made changes. She is accepted and can stay in the Emerald Dorm. As for the body guard, since he's a different gender from the main character, we're just going to have you either have him sleep outside or RP him responsibly since to have a dorm, you'd have to post his character as a separate character.
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Posted: Mon Mar 19, 2012 8:15 pm
BakaYYHLover xLieselotte Yay! Everything is perfect so far, but you just need to add one more flaw. I don't think not being able to function without a dress or a skirt on is a valid flaw. Obviously she probably would avoid wearing anything other than a dress or a skirt if it was something really serious and the only way to have that flaw work is to have people literally tear off her skirt or dress. Having a sweet tooth isn't a flaw. It just seems like extra detail to her character. ^^ I'm certain there are many others with sweet tooths that don't think of it as a flaw. So all you really need is one last flaw to make it valid. You can reference the Resources for better characters and coding subforum if you need any help with the last flaw. ^^ Once you have that put in, quote me and I'll take another look. Thanks. = EDIT: Also, you might want to lower the age. ^^ Rosentale is a high school and having a "24" year old student is a bit odd and she'll find that she's older than some of the teachers. It's fine if you have someone who's over a typical age because of their species, but when your character feels that she's "24," I don't think she'd be attending a high school. Changed the flaws. I knew it was gonna come up, but for some reason I thought the skirt thing would be valid. It's an ADD night for me. As for the killer sweet tooth, please don't be mad I left it in. It makes for awesomely hilarious scenes when I play her. I love playing up that need for sweets with my characters. As for the age, Violet's past kind of made it hard for her to have proper schooling like everyone else. She's just claiming a random age, in all honesty. But I changed it anyways. Lemme know how it looks. I can understand because of the past. I just thought that by saying she was convinced she was ''24" she had a mindset of a '24' year old, but it still would be somewhat awkward if you kept it as that since most of the students are under 24. But your change looks good. Thank you. =D I'm sorry, but not being able to use magic is not considered a flaw either. It's a nice thing to add in and a lot of people keep it in just because, but it cannot be accepted as a valid flaw. To even have magic, it has to be listed as an ability, so really not having magic is perfectly normal. ^^ So try again with the last flaw, the resources are there if you need them for ideas. ^^
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Posted: Mon Mar 19, 2012 8:27 pm
xLieselotte I can understand because of the past. I just thought that by saying she was convinced she was ''24" she had a mindset of a '24' year old, but it still would be somewhat awkward if you kept it as that since most of the students are under 24. But your change looks good. Thank you. =D I'm sorry, but not being able to use magic is not considered a flaw either. It's a nice thing to add in and a lot of people keep it in just because, but it cannot be accepted as a valid flaw. To even have magic, it has to be listed as an ability, so really not having magic is perfectly normal. ^^ So try again with the last flaw, the resources are there if you need them for ideas. ^^ Bah! Too used to getting away with stuff since I played Co-Cap in other guilds. One last try. I had to really think on this one and I did actually read through the Resources about three times to see if it was acceptable. Hopefully it really is. If not exactly, then close enough.
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Posted: Mon Mar 19, 2012 8:33 pm
BakaYYHLover xLieselotte I can understand because of the past. I just thought that by saying she was convinced she was ''24" she had a mindset of a '24' year old, but it still would be somewhat awkward if you kept it as that since most of the students are under 24. But your change looks good. Thank you. =D I'm sorry, but not being able to use magic is not considered a flaw either. It's a nice thing to add in and a lot of people keep it in just because, but it cannot be accepted as a valid flaw. To even have magic, it has to be listed as an ability, so really not having magic is perfectly normal. ^^ So try again with the last flaw, the resources are there if you need them for ideas. ^^ Bah! Too used to getting away with stuff since I played Co-Cap in other guilds. One last try. I had to really think on this one and I did actually read through the Resources about three times to see if it was acceptable. Hopefully it really is. If not exactly, then close enough. Okay! She is accepted and will be staying in the Amethyst dorm! ^^
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Posted: Mon Mar 19, 2012 8:37 pm
xLieselotte BakaYYHLover xLieselotte I can understand because of the past. I just thought that by saying she was convinced she was ''24" she had a mindset of a '24' year old, but it still would be somewhat awkward if you kept it as that since most of the students are under 24. But your change looks good. Thank you. =D I'm sorry, but not being able to use magic is not considered a flaw either. It's a nice thing to add in and a lot of people keep it in just because, but it cannot be accepted as a valid flaw. To even have magic, it has to be listed as an ability, so really not having magic is perfectly normal. ^^ So try again with the last flaw, the resources are there if you need them for ideas. ^^ Bah! Too used to getting away with stuff since I played Co-Cap in other guilds. One last try. I had to really think on this one and I did actually read through the Resources about three times to see if it was acceptable. Hopefully it really is. If not exactly, then close enough. Okay! She is accepted and will be staying in the Amethyst dorm! ^^ Woo! Thank you! I need to post this in the Accepted Characters subforum now, right? Just making sure before I do anything else.
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Posted: Mon Mar 19, 2012 8:40 pm
BakaYYHLover xLieselotte BakaYYHLover xLieselotte I can understand because of the past. I just thought that by saying she was convinced she was ''24" she had a mindset of a '24' year old, but it still would be somewhat awkward if you kept it as that since most of the students are under 24. But your change looks good. Thank you. =D I'm sorry, but not being able to use magic is not considered a flaw either. It's a nice thing to add in and a lot of people keep it in just because, but it cannot be accepted as a valid flaw. To even have magic, it has to be listed as an ability, so really not having magic is perfectly normal. ^^ So try again with the last flaw, the resources are there if you need them for ideas. ^^ Bah! Too used to getting away with stuff since I played Co-Cap in other guilds. One last try. I had to really think on this one and I did actually read through the Resources about three times to see if it was acceptable. Hopefully it really is. If not exactly, then close enough. Okay! She is accepted and will be staying in the Amethyst dorm! ^^ Woo! Thank you! I need to post this in the Accepted Characters subforum now, right? Just making sure before I do anything else. Yup! And you need to make a class schedule as well. ^^ An when you're done, you can send your character to her first period class. =D
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Posted: Mon Mar 19, 2012 8:41 pm
xLieselotte BakaYYHLover xLieselotte BakaYYHLover xLieselotte I can understand because of the past. I just thought that by saying she was convinced she was ''24" she had a mindset of a '24' year old, but it still would be somewhat awkward if you kept it as that since most of the students are under 24. But your change looks good. Thank you. =D I'm sorry, but not being able to use magic is not considered a flaw either. It's a nice thing to add in and a lot of people keep it in just because, but it cannot be accepted as a valid flaw. To even have magic, it has to be listed as an ability, so really not having magic is perfectly normal. ^^ So try again with the last flaw, the resources are there if you need them for ideas. ^^ Bah! Too used to getting away with stuff since I played Co-Cap in other guilds. One last try. I had to really think on this one and I did actually read through the Resources about three times to see if it was acceptable. Hopefully it really is. If not exactly, then close enough. Okay! She is accepted and will be staying in the Amethyst dorm! ^^ Woo! Thank you! I need to post this in the Accepted Characters subforum now, right? Just making sure before I do anything else. Yup! And you need to make a class schedule as well. ^^ An when you're done, you can send your character to her first period class. =D Awesome. I'll get right on that.
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