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Hey! I just wanted to let you know that i saw this character. But due to the odd nature of an actual gender swapping character and problems it will cause with housing, the crew is going to have to discuss whether or not we want to allow this, or if we want you to choose one specific gender and not swap between the two.

We'll get back to you and let you know.

Hello! Before your character can be approved, you'll have to make some changes.

First of all, you will need to really expand on what kind of spells and magic she can use. It's way too vague right now because it means she can technically know a spell to blow up the world, or turn everyone into rabbits. So please specify what kind of spells she can use, and exactly how strong her magic is.

Using magic "too much" isn't really a flaw. It sounds more like the result of being reckless----and being reckless is a flaw. Being weak hand to hand isn't really a flaw either. Most people are weak at hand to hand combat unless they specifically train. And unless a character is from a race with enhanced vision, everyone has poor vision in the dark.

You will need to give her three real flaws for her to be accepted. Please check out the Resources sub-forum. There's a great thread there about Character flaws, that includes a huge list.

When you've made the changes, please let me know.

(Also, remember to put in a sexual orientation--you left that blank)

I'm going to approve her. She'll be in Sapphire dorm. =3 you need to select a class schedule and create a thread in the approved Character's forum. Also, today is Week 2, Friday--students should be hanging out in the dorms, not wandering the grounds or school. =)

Character Information:
Student

Name: Micah Hayden

Species: I m m o r t a l H u m a n (demon-marked)

Age: t w e n t y t h r e e

Gender: M a l e

Personality: Micah is kind of a laid back guy. Most of the time he keeps in his household, doing his own thing, or he's walking around, silently relaxing somewhere. His imitated abilities turned the playboy into a bit of an anti-social. He still rarely has a special interest in anything, even though he excels in several things. He's independent and self-sufficient, but still has yet to see any romantic interest(the demon also became a little bit of a problem there). To close people, he's straightforward and teases every now and then, and can seem to have tons of energy without batting an eye(meaning, he's Mr. Stoic while running around like a kid on a coffee-kick). He's open about his habits around people he's comfortable with, and acts like a friend with a natural poker face. He's just a casual guy, and would be a little boring to some if he didn't have such an intriguing back round.

Bio: Micah was a descendant of a long line of blue bloods starting from the 1500's. There was a story that had been passed down through the family that they had a demigod among the family line, though there was no solid proof of this except the family's unnerving natural instinct(that happened to be right almost all the time), even though only a few got it. Despite this, with each passing generation, the wealth decreased steadily. By the time it got to Micah's generation, the family fortune had reduced the living style from the same as a king to just below the average of a celebrity. But he was the first to be born with such strangely colored eyes: a soft lavender that reminded one of lilacs. But he grew up a critical person, lacking an interest in anything in particular and, while remaining in a casual lifestyle with the same routine, never settled down. He had no romantic interest in men or women(aside from sexual interest), he rarely partied, and there was no great skill that he had that he found of any entertaining. He worked as a host when he was old enough to, passing through school easy and even skipping a couple grades.

When Micah was eighteen, he encountered something he actually found peculiar. A devilish male with a girl's face had attempted to seduce him, and it turned out to be a type of demon that fed on souls. In attempting to eat Micah's, the demon tapped into a power that had lain dormant until tampered with by another power. Their souls became tied together and the demon lost his physical body, but his essence taking the shape of his human form in the demon realm. Because of the power, which Micah found was truly a rare gene that had been floating around descended from a demigod ancestor, the demon was tied to him in the demon realms, and having tapped into his powers, in a sense he went blind in his left eye. It no longer held the ability to see the human world, but an alternate dimension that showed the essence of people's souls, as that was how the demon had picked his meals. For a while he took a break from society, as the double-vision was mind boggling. Even worse, the demon being tied to him, their thoughts were easily heard by the other, and that was how they communicated. The demon became sustained on human food that Micah ate. The only way the demon kept him from starving them both to death was by helping him step by step with the new mutant abilities. Like how he had gained the demon's immortality, heightened senses, peculiar self-healing abilities, and the double-vision. After a couple years of this and Micah had adjusted to life like that, he caught drift of an academy for supernaturals. With thinking it over and many comments from the demon, he decided to apply for it, and was accepted.

Skills and Abilities: Using his marked eye, Micah can see a person's truest nature (differently put, shape of their soul, their natural form, etc.) in a demon realm, as well as the amount of power that person might have, (so his sight would be a crossed vision, seeing two different things at once), and his senses are tuned in a little better than a normal human's. He also has the demon's immortal life span and instantaneous-most-of-the-time self healing. How fast it heals depends on the size of the wound. (i.e small cute, instantaneous, big slash, around a month)

Character Flaws: In a way, Micah is indirectly judgmental. From a distance he judges a person by the appearance of their soul, without speaking to them or coming into contact with them. If a person has a dark aura to them, he avoids them point-blank. Souls with white angel wings he categorizes as naive and too innocent to be his company. He's kept a limited amount of friends that way and has come across as extravagantly rude when approached by a person he's negatively categorized. Something that he's always been since childhood is Indifferent. He highly lacks any special interest in anything, and though specializes in several things, has no desire to take them to the next level. He's yet to spot any soul that's particularly different, and has nothing he's really attached to. This is what drew people away from him after he became stuck with the demon. Sometimes he blatantly butts in to some things that aren't his business, though more of emotional and political affairs than physical fights and such. He seems to lack remorse, so he doesn't beat around the bush very often, and is very blunt.

Sexual Orientation: B i s e x u a l

Status: Single

Likes: (at least 3)
- Dark clothing
- Ferrets, weasels
- Animals of the cat family

Dislikes: (at least 3)
- Bright lights, neon colors
- Overly crowded places
- Parties and what they come with(alcohol, people, etc.)

Extra Information: Micah sometimes wears an eye patch or some form of cover up over his marked eye so he can avoid double vision, and seeing too many unpleasant natures. This also blinds the demons insight to the human world. This other world sight is oblivious to objects like walls and such, so he can see souls as far as human sight goes without any objects to block the view. His nails became black after bonding with the demon, as they also can act as claws/talons (can be very sharp).

Hey. Unfortunately, you character has an enormous skill set. She has nearly twenty unique abilities. That is honestly just way too many. As I said, we do not allow characters to be able to control (even partially) all elements at the same time. Please pare down her skills to something a little more reasonable. Even when grouped together, she still

-is partially telepathic
-can shape shift
-has enhanced senses
-can heal
-can manipulate material elements
-can create illusions
-can manipulate shadow
-has a photographic memory
-is a talented artist
-can cook well.

Barring the last three, she still has seven fairly strong skills. I think you need to narrow it down to four or less. (she can keep the last three but you need to take away some of her magic skills. She is just way too strong.) Even with the balance of using shadows making her weaker...honestly, we have half a dozen characters who faint every time they use their powers--it doesn't stop them from using their powers all the time. So I'm not going to count that as a good enough balance to off set the fact that she has just about every power available.

Please let me know when you've made changes.

Thanks!

Oh, it's fine to leave it up here. =) I just wanted to let you know that we won't approve it for now (well, he needs the changed I just mentioned too anyway), and you'd have to poke us about it again in a couple of weeks. ^^

You're fine. =3 I don't mind troublemakers. I've got a lot of patience. ;D