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 Posted: Thu Jun 01, 2006 6:00 am
Thank you! As for intelligence... she's 16, and actually has a better memory now because she can't remember anything else. She doesn't forget she has amnesia, but she doesn't focus on it either. She also spends a lot of time studying, so she remembers a lot of what she's read. Did that make any sense? sweatdrop
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Posted: Thu Jun 01, 2006 6:10 am
freyathedark Thank you! As for intelligence... she's 16, and actually has a better memory now because she can't remember anything else. She doesn't forget she has amnesia, but she doesn't focus on it either. She also spends a lot of time studying, so she remembers a lot of what she's read. Did that make any sense? sweatdrop
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Posted: Thu Jun 01, 2006 12:36 pm
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Posted: Thu Jun 01, 2006 5:44 pm
To Anakin: everything looks good, but I would ask that you pick one or two stats and lower them a point or two. He seems a bit too well rounded with some strong stats. ^^
If you do that I'll approve it.
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Posted: Thu Jun 01, 2006 5:57 pm
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Posted: Thu Jun 01, 2006 8:15 pm
Yeah, I can deal with that. One strong stat and the other medium or lower. Looks fine to me.
Approved.
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Posted: Thu Jun 01, 2006 8:32 pm
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Posted: Thu Jun 01, 2006 10:13 pm
To Archangel: It's a nicely rounded character, though I would suggest to everyone that a bloodline should be considered a last resort when creating a character. So when he uses Anrokku, how strong does he actually get? Does he have a weakness?
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Posted: Fri Jun 02, 2006 11:09 am
Well technically his bloodline isn't a real one, as he only recieved partial Hetachi blood. So he has to use the jutsu if he wants his bloodline. As for the jutsu's actual power, it isn't like Kyuubi Naruto, but it does up his strength and speed. Only problem is, Jeiden gets kind of wild when he uses it. He gets headstrong, reckless, and careless. So it wouldn't be hard to lure him into a trap while berserking. He still isn't used to the sense of power, so he'll tend to get cocky.
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Posted: Fri Jun 02, 2006 2:12 pm
Yeah, I was wondering the same question as Dini, but now that you have explained that -- I see no real problem with your character at the moment.
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Posted: Fri Jun 02, 2006 4:30 pm
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Posted: Sat Jun 03, 2006 2:34 pm
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Posted: Sat Jun 03, 2006 2:40 pm
A different type of Naruto character indeed, and also an aged individual. And *gasp.* No bloodlines. You have my approval on this bio. I suggest waiting for at least one more admin's approval before putting this in your bio thread.
EDIT: Oh yes, please put the attacks' ranks on the technique list. Thank you.
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Posted: Sat Jun 03, 2006 3:01 pm
Dang, he's old. But seems to be within the range of reasonable. Good job, Dr. G. But like Dini, I just ask that you put the rank of the jutsu up for display. ^^
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Posted: Sat Jun 03, 2006 4:05 pm
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