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Posted: Mon Dec 27, 2010 9:36 pm
Hark: Approved. Shane: Now I remember why your s**t never got approved. I'm wanting to deny this. Considering it's not sound too hard to instantly kill someone using these skills. I mean, jeez, this isn't .hack It just seems a little overpowering for what it is. I mean, it's a talent, not a "Kill all end all" move. Bejeezus.
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Posted: Mon Dec 27, 2010 9:38 pm
But keep in mind how hard it is for Data Drain and Protect Break to hit.
And lol, I know it's not .hack, but Avatars are awesome. This cannot be denied.
What if I make Data Drain only take of 25% instead of 50?
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Posted: Mon Dec 27, 2010 9:46 pm
The Fall is Inevitable But keep in mind how hard it is for Data Drain and Protect Break to hit. And lol, I know it's not .hack, but Avatars are awesome. This cannot be denied. What if I make Data Drain only take of 25% instead of 50? I could work with that.
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Posted: Mon Dec 27, 2010 9:46 pm
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Posted: Mon Dec 27, 2010 10:03 pm
Weeeeell, since he said, ''I could work with that,'' I'll take that as an ''approved!''
I'LL GET STARTED twisted
In my training, of course. MUST BECOME EXPERT SO I CAN ADD ELEMENTAL ABILITIES TO MY AVATAR.
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Posted: Tue Dec 28, 2010 1:11 pm
RPC Name: Angeles Valentine Rank: Trainee Talent Description: A contract with death. This talent connects Angeles to the Deathwhisper allowing her to wield it despite her low rank. Talent Weakness: Angeles can only use the Deathwhisper as a weapon. Any attempt to pick up another weapon results in the Deathwhisper attacking her instantly. How did the character get this talent?: After her husband’s death Angeles was completely distraught. For months she did nothing but mourn. Time very slowly ebbed her pain away. Centuries passed and Angeles thought herself to have moved on. That was when she stumbled upon a sleipnir foal. After saving the animal’s life she began to train her, waiting until she was old enough to ride. Once the moment came that Alexandria broke under Angeles’ will the horse knew almost instantly the sorrow in her mistress’ heart and suddenly took off towards the horizon. Angeles held on tightly as the edges of her vision slowly became black until she could see nothing at all. Alexandria stopped then and all was still, silent and dark.
Crimson eyes then illuminated through the darkness, and a shrouded figure stood before them. The creature spoke in a tongue that Angeles did not recognize, but could understand nonetheless. It asked her why she was there.
“Where is here?”
The underworld, the afterlife, it had numerous names and Angeles felt within her an odd sort of hope in her heart. Her grip on Alexandria’s mane tightened only for a moment before she slipped from the animal’s back and touched down. It was not ground she was standing on, she could not tell what it was, for she could see nothing except for her mount and the shrouded figure. She explained that she had lost someone, and that she had come to retrieve him. The creature laughed. It them told her that those who had died would remain where they were supposed to. Angeles was furious, and Alexandria beside her could sense it. She demanded, begged, pleaded, raved but the figure would not relent.
Then Angeles attacked it. She had no weapon, no skill, but she charged anyway. From inside the cloak the blade of a scythe emerged. The figure was no more threatened than if a balmy breeze was heading its way. The scythe stabbed Angeles through the gut and halted not only her body but any idea of ever retrieving her lost love. As she collapsed Alexandria reared and made her own charge. Death dropped his weapon in surprise; the horse was a little more of a threat.
The sleipnir then grabbed Angeles in her mouth and hoisted her up, turning and fleeing from the receiver of souls. Back she ran until the darkness was gone and all scent of death had vanished. Angeles awoke afterwards with a dagger in her stomach. She pulled the weapon out and looked it over, vaguely recognizing it as Death’s weapon. Why he had not retrieved it she could no understand, nor did she know. She kept wary for many years until eventually she stopped looking over her shoulder, deciding that Death must have many of the same type of weapon, accepting that she was the new master of this one. Sample: See Deathwhisper sample. Will add if needed.
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Posted: Tue Dec 28, 2010 7:12 pm
RPC Name: Jekka Orailus Rank: Trainee, Soon to be Novice Bloodline & Class: Waktu, Mage Talent Description: Unique Magic - The ability to use this special magic he's created called "2nd Trade Magic" It is a way of combining the Elements and resources around them to make 'life' in a way. He is able to plants and trees, and other thing's through magic, they feed off his magic, but at the same time cannot live by itself... He needs the basis of the life he creates. (Ex: To make a Plant, he needs dirt/to make an animal he must have a bone (and a summon pact with the animal)) Talent Weakness: The Weakness to this talent is, that Jekka is unable to learn any ability in his element over S rank and cannot use all of the elements like a normal mage, he is also unable to use weapon and hand to hand style. He must always have a loving nature or a positive attitude. If his heart or feelings or "Sin" corrupts him, he is unable to use it properly. How did the character get this talent?: He got the talent through genes of his mother and father who were world famous Waktu (Father) and Mage (Mother). His loving nature almost makes him connected to nature. Sample:
Jekka sat in the grass or the Sutami gardens, a smile on his face, he thought of all the things that had been happening in the world... The Demons... The Destruction of Uuma... why did it have to happen? He sighed and reached down to the ground and gripped some dirt and looked at it, as he did so, he exerted Energy into the dirt and a small little green leaf popped out and then grew into a small flower with yellow petals. Jekka smiled at it, it was so beautiful. He heard the pounding sound of stomps behind him and he turned to look at what it was... it was a creature with blood dripping from its mouth... Jekka sighed, another creature of blood and death and destruction... he stood up to it and stared at it with a sad smile, he pity'd the creature... how it wan't able to live in a peaceful world... The beast snarled in an angry manner. Jekka sighed "I am sorry for you..." he said as he flicked his finger in the direction of the beast and roots came out of the ground and did archs out of the ground and wrapped around the huge beast. Stopping it in its tracks... The beast squealed as it was pulled to the ground and was pinned by the huge roots. Jekka hopped over to it and patted it's nose "Killing won't settle a thing... it will only purge you further into a dark hole..." he said as he then turned and released the roots, the beast began to panic and run away, Jekka only sat there and smiled.
((I'll make a list of his abilities in the Custom Skill and Summon Approval area's, if approved))
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Posted: Thu Dec 30, 2010 3:32 pm
Angeles: Well, what's your class, and what is the Deathwhisper? A sword? Knife? Axe?
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Posted: Thu Dec 30, 2010 3:52 pm
She is an assassin. The Deathwhisper is a weapon that can change form. It is in the custom weapon section now if you would like to review it.
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Posted: Thu Dec 30, 2010 4:00 pm
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Posted: Sat Jan 01, 2011 11:42 am
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Posted: Sat Jan 01, 2011 7:27 pm
RPC Name: Kakeru Meerua Rank: Trainee Bloodline & Class: Werewolf & Berserker Talent Description: He is able to control completely all of his bodily functions. This includes but is not limited to slowing his heart beat to a stop temporarily, preventing his food from digesting, even able to control his memories, and thoughts to be "locked" and unaccessible, by preventing a thought process, or simply "forgetting" his memories, like a temporary amnesia. Talent Weakness: Depending on what is done, his body may be tired for a time limit. {I.E. If he stops his heart beat, when it restarts he will be tired for a little while because blood stopped flowing through his body, and has to pick it's pace up again.} How did the character get this talent?: He taught himself, as a way for people to leave him alone mainly. Sample: Wishing to be left alone, Kakeru was wandering the forest. He knew that the people that were looking for him weren't normal, all of them with heightened senses of smell mainly, he knew what to do. He soon would allow for his glands to stop their function, the creation of his scent was now stopped as he sat down in the tree branch out of sight. Werewolves all passing him by, unable to sniff him out because of the special talent that Kakeru possessed. He would wait until later, after a while when his werewolf "friends" would be gone, out of the area completely. Later that night after they were all gone and out of the forest Kakeru's glands would begin to work once more, and his smell coming back to him, but slightly stronger than normal, it seemed as if a normal human would be able to sniff him out as if that human were a werewolf, and that irritated his own nose. This was the downside of doing this, in this way, and he knew that this was it, which is why he had waited until the others in the forest were all gone.
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Posted: Sat Jan 01, 2011 7:41 pm
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Posted: Sun Jan 02, 2011 7:08 am
RPC Name: Yensen D. Howitzer Rank: Expert Bloodline & Class: Robot Mechanist Talent Description: It allows Yensen to use up to C rank Paladin Skills, as well as nullifying the bad effects of killing Sins. (Can we make this evolving? Maybe at Sage I can use B rank?) Talent Weakness: Dark Attacks don't damage Yensen Physically, but spiritually, thus causing him pain. This is something only they can accomplish. How did the character get this talent?: In his service to Kora Summer, her Holy Aura has rubbed off on Yensen, slowly turning him into a Holy Warrior. When he was in such close contact with Arturia and Azreal, a Paladin and Shadowknight from Yuran, it was the final piece of his becoming a paladin. Sample: Yensen stood at the brick wall, searching for the demon who inhabited the area. He had been kidnapping children and taking them to alleys. He'd been hunting the monster all day. Finally, something happened. He could feel the evil that laid near by. He quickly hunted it without fail, drawing his Great sword. With a quick slash, a Holy Arc flew through the air, draping the monster in holy energies. He closed the distance in, focusing on the demon. The demon, began to Falter, thinking of all the horrible things it had done. Normally, this wouldn't happen. But with help from Yensen it did. Pinning the monster against the wall, he used the Aura of Truth to afflict the demon, he got it to confess it's crimes. He quickly put a hole in the demons chest with his fist after noticing a little girl on the ground. He slid over to her, and lifted her upper half into the air. The demon had cut her up and down her side. Not deep, but enough to make her bleed. He held his hand over her side, healing her. With a happy look, she went along her way. He was just happy to help.
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Posted: Sun Jan 02, 2011 9:25 am
avedis: I'm over-riding urban's decision and saying Denied. Because urban I don't think you realize just how powerful being able to control EVERY function of your body could be. Not only could he control his thoughts, memories, and heart, but he could also make his character immune to pain by cutting off his brain's access to nerve receptors. He could also block off his lungs to prevent digestion of poison, or even after being poisoned he could move his body so that it pushes it out. The point is he's getting a whole lot more than what you think, and being able to get it all for just a little laziness that isn't even going to affect him in battle is nowhere near worth it.
urban: Your talent is Denied too. I don't remember what it was you said your weakness was going to be when I told you that I'd approve something like this, but it sure as hell wasn't that he feels a little pain from dark attacks. The benefits more than outweigh the cost. And no, you can't get B-ranked paladin skills either.
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