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Posted: Sat Feb 18, 2012 9:30 pm
Hello, I modify the profile to fit into a time period of a student ( I usually play older or at my age but did change it) I added the skill Premonition. Some may feel this is god modding but I assure you it is not. Basically it won't effect the characters except my own every time it can be used. I won't use it all the time, and the effect only last a few seconds. Usually I use the ability to show movements of my character in the future, something that can be altered by another characters presence or action in any given time.
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Posted: Sat Feb 18, 2012 9:34 pm
Liontamer18 Hello, I modify the profile to fit into a time period of a student ( I usually play older or at my age but did change it) I added the skill Premonition. Some may feel this is god modding but I assure you it is not. Basically it won't effect the characters except my own every time it can be used. I won't use it all the time, and the effect only last a few seconds. Usually I use the ability to show movements of my character in the future, something that can be altered by another characters presence or action in any given time. Well, I can see how that ability could be easily abused--but that goes for most powers. I'm going to trust your work that you will not abuse it. Of course, if you do, I'm sure you'll be bapped with my infamous rolled up newspaper, and be required to rectify the situation. ;D He will be placed in Limestone Dorm. Please be sure to post a profile thread in the Accepted Profiles forum! Thank you!
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Elen_Gilthoniel Vice Captain
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Posted: Sun Feb 19, 2012 3:08 pm
Character Information: Student Name: Sonneillon Slayer
Species: Shadow Human
Age: 16
Gender: Male
Appearance description: Everything is the same except the claws Personality: Evil and heartless. He loves it when people are in pain and are crying asking for mercy. He loves it when people are begging him not to kill them. He likes to torture people for the fun of it
Bio: Sonneillon which means demon of hatred is a proper name for one who killed his mother and father. Who tortured them before killing them . He is a loner that lives on the pain of others. He only respects people who show they will put up a fight.Sonneillon grew up in a household where his father would beat him senseless every day and his mother would watch a laugh. That is one the main reasons he killed them once he mastered his control of the shadows. The reason why is going to school is because its a perfect place for him to hide from the authorities as they wont believe that he killed his parents because of what they did to him. He is evil yes but he wants to learn still about others and maybe just maybe he could change how he is and become a better person. He motivation is to learn how to become a better person despite him hating everything he wants to see if he could learn to be good or at least a better person all together
Skills and Abilities: He has the power to bend the shadows to his will. For instance he could bend them to make a shadow ball in his hand. The strength of shadow ball is determined by how much darkness is in the room or location . He also could make shadow portals which allow him to Teleport to different locations (( Can only be used once a day )).
Character Flaws:His major flaw is that he is Reclusive and hates being around other people. He would rather be a alone then be with a bunch of other people His second flaw is that he is a Sadist. His last flaw is light. He hates the light and stays away from it whenever possible . Although it wont kill him if he walks in it. He hates it none the less and will do everything possible to stay in the dark. In the light he is also grouchy and hard to talk too even for a little bit Sexual Orientation: Straight
Status: Single Likes: - Pain and suffering - Darkness - to play mind games with people (( making them believe they are something that they are not )) Dislikes: (at least 3) - Light - Love - Lust
Extra Information: (optional) If there's anything that you want to add that doesn't belong in any of the categories given.
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Posted: Sun Feb 19, 2012 3:44 pm
Hrm.. Okay. I have a few questions, caveats and required changes. 1. Why is this pure evil guy in a highschool? He murdered his parents and then decided the best way to hide from the authorities was to join highschool or something? I'm a little confused as to his motivation... 2. What exactly do his "shadow balls" do? (We don't use a rolling system so you'll need to come up with another way to determine the strength...of his balls.) 3. Falling in love isn't really a flaw per se and considering that he hates everything, it seems there's a pretty slim chance of him falling in love anyway. On top of that, and let me stress, this is a highschool RP. Avoiding light is going to be, well, pretty much impossible in every sense of the word. Because they use lights...a lot. You may wish to hammer out some of the details and make them fit a highschool themed RP a little better. Despite the odd races, I assure this is very much a pretty normal highschool---not a huge battle oriented RP or place where people who viciously murder their parents get to run around without being arrested.
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Elen_Gilthoniel Vice Captain
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Posted: Sun Feb 19, 2012 4:52 pm
StrawberryZ0mbie Hrm.. Okay. I have a few questions, caveats and required changes. 1. Why is this pure evil guy in a highschool? He murdered his parents and then decided the best way to hide from the authorities was to join highschool or something? I'm a little confused as to his motivation... 2. What exactly do his "shadow balls" do? (We don't use a rolling system so you'll need to come up with another way to determine the strength...of his balls.) 3. Falling in love isn't really a flaw per se and considering that he hates everything, it seems there's a pretty slim chance of him falling in love anyway. On top of that, and let me stress, this is a highschool RP. Avoiding light is going to be, well, pretty much impossible in every sense of the word. Because they use lights...a lot. You may wish to hammer out some of the details and make them fit a highschool themed RP a little better. Despite the odd races, I assure this is very much a pretty normal highschool---not a huge battle oriented RP or place where people who viciously murder their parents get to run around without being arrested. 1 - The school is a perfect place for him to hide from the authorities as they wont believe that he killed his parents because of what they did to him. He is evil yes but he wants to learn still about others and maybe just maybe he could change how he is and become a better person. He motivation is to learn how to become a better person despite him hating everything he wants to see if he could learn to be good or at least a better person all together 2 They are pretty much balls of energy of shadow. They can either be used to attack someone in a fight or they could be used to turn someone into what he is A Shadow human. But that rarely happens and he wont use that ability unless the other person wants it to happen and if everyone agrees. So mostly just balls of shadow energy 3 Yes in a way that is true. But falling in love to him is like getting poisoned by a snake. It weakens him and his ability to control the shadows. In fact if he falls in love despite him hating everyone and everything. He loses the power to control the shadows.. Thus its a flaw that even though he hates everyone and everything one part of him can fall in love with someone in the right moment He going to high school to learn how to be a better person. To learn how to not hate others and to finally allow others into his life. Its about him trying to find himself once more and a high school is a perfect place to do so
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Posted: Sun Feb 19, 2012 5:00 pm
Lord Damien1 StrawberryZ0mbie Hrm.. Okay. I have a few questions, caveats and required changes. 1. Why is this pure evil guy in a highschool? He murdered his parents and then decided the best way to hide from the authorities was to join highschool or something? I'm a little confused as to his motivation... 2. What exactly do his "shadow balls" do? (We don't use a rolling system so you'll need to come up with another way to determine the strength...of his balls.) 3. Falling in love isn't really a flaw per se and considering that he hates everything, it seems there's a pretty slim chance of him falling in love anyway. On top of that, and let me stress, this is a highschool RP. Avoiding light is going to be, well, pretty much impossible in every sense of the word. Because they use lights...a lot. You may wish to hammer out some of the details and make them fit a highschool themed RP a little better. Despite the odd races, I assure this is very much a pretty normal highschool---not a huge battle oriented RP or place where people who viciously murder their parents get to run around without being arrested. 1 - The school is a perfect place for him to hide from the authorities as they wont believe that he killed his parents because of what they did to him. He is evil yes but he wants to learn still about others and maybe just maybe he could change how he is and become a better person. He motivation is to learn how to become a better person despite him hating everything he wants to see if he could learn to be good or at least a better person all together 2 They are pretty much balls of energy of shadow. They can either be used to attack someone in a fight or they could be used to turn someone into what he is A Shadow human. But that rarely happens and he wont use that ability unless the other person wants it to happen and if everyone agrees. So mostly just balls of shadow energy 3 Yes in a way that is true. But falling in love to him is like getting poisoned by a snake. It weakens him and his ability to control the shadows. In fact if he falls in love despite him hating everyone and everything. He loses the power to control the shadows.. Thus its a flaw that even though he hates everyone and everything one part of him can fall in love with someone in the right moment He going to high school to learn how to be a better person. To learn how to not hate others and to finally allow others into his life. Its about him trying to find himself once more and a high school is a perfect place to do so Please include the information about why he's joining the highschool, as a part of his profile. It's very useful information and shouldn't be left out. I am not sure what you mean by "shadow energy" but I am vetoing the idea that he can turn others into shadow humans like he is. ^_^ You can keep the shadow energy part though. I'm assuming it's like regularly "energy" and just happens to look like a ball of darkness or something. Please try to include some real flaws besides "he might fall in love." You can keep the light one since there is literally light everywhere in the RP, which will make things difficult for him, but the other one is not going to count. You can include some of his personality flaws--like how he's an evil jerk who likes to torture people and things. Thanks! Quote me again when you've made these additions. <3
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Elen_Gilthoniel Vice Captain
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Posted: Sun Feb 19, 2012 5:42 pm
Character Information: Student Name: Light
Species: Crow
Age: 17
Gender: Male
Appearance description: Fingernails and toenails are naturally black.
Personality: Light is a calm and gentle individual who has a polite manner. He rarely gets angry or upset and he hates violence. He is a pacifist so he would rather seek more peaceful solutions. Light is relatively quiet since he is often thinking of something; he sometimes appears to be in his own world. Because of this, he is a little absent minded. At times, Light is a sorrowful person and is emotional at times.
Bio: Light is a crow, but he is white which is a strange, unheard of phenomena in his species. Crows are supposed to be black, yet Light is white. Because of this fact, Light was persecuted and shunned because of his color. The others despised him and would never acknowledge him as one of them. Even Light's own parents were ashamed of him so they cast him out; abandoning him at a young age. He was only a child when they abandoned him so he was basically left to die. Nobody wanted him and instead, they pushed him away by telling him to leave, to never come back again. Light did not understand and tried to find someone else to live with but the other crows went after him, intending to kill him and this was when Light ran. He ran for his life; he ran as far as his body could take him until he finally collapsed from exhaustion.
It was the middle of winter so the snow continued to fall to erase his existence. Light was about to die when a passing stranger discovered his small form buried in the snow. In an act of pure mercy they took him to an orphanage where they left him at the doorstep, wrapped in their own coat. The people at the orphanage immediately took him in and were amazed because they believed he was an angel because of his white wings and hair. Light had finally found a home at the orphanage which only had two other kids. There was a little girl and a boy who was about the same age as he was. They were all like Light, in the sense that they had been unwanted. The three of them became close and it never bothered them that Light was different from them. He was their precious friend and they his.
Light lived with his two friends for many years until they found families of their own. Each of them were finally wanted but Light was the only one who remained behind. They had gotten old enough to where they discovered that Light was abnormal and they came to view him as a freak of nature. This hurt Light deeply because he had been rejected once again and abandoned. Time moved on and soon the orphanage was abandoned leaving Light to fend for himself once more. Light wandered through the streets aimlessly until a strange couple decided to take him in. They became Light's adoptive parents which made him feel truly happy. Light was finally able to have a loving family of his own.
Skills and Abilities: Light has the ability to shape shift into a crow, but it is too painful for him to transform. He can fly.
Character Flaws: Light is very passive so it is easy for others to push him around. Trusts others too easily. Hates crowds because he thinks they will hurt him.
Sexual Orientation: Straight
Status: Single
Likes: (at least 3) - Books - The sun - Flying - Doves - Art/Drawing
Dislikes: (at least 3) - The color white - Being alone - Rejection - Black crows - Crowds
Extra Information:
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Posted: Sun Feb 19, 2012 5:58 pm
LOL STARKILLER XD
Neat story that is somewhat related: I met the creative director at Lucasarts (makers of Star Wars: Force Unleashed) :3 Clint Hocking was a cool guy, though a tad grumpy XD
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Elen_Gilthoniel Vice Captain
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Posted: Sun Feb 19, 2012 6:12 pm
Light is approved. He will be housed at Limestone Dorm for the time being. =3
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Posted: Sun Feb 19, 2012 7:28 pm
 Character Information: Student Name: Bellatrix Epilog
Species: Demon
Age: 16
Gender: Female
Personality: From when she was a small child, Bellatrix was very headstrong and stubborn. She's very opinionated, but she's also a kind soul who wouldn't hurt a fly. Which conflicts with her demon nature.
Bio: Has been in ballet for 10 years, loves animals. She's a vegetarian. Excels in math but struggles in other classes. She was abandoned at birth by her father and lived with her estranged mother and sisters. At age 15 her mother decided to send her to an Academy, so here she is. Left by her family because she was not wanted.
Skills and Abilities: Psychokinesis, can only move objects to herself and away from herself, and flying. She rarely uses these powers though.
Character Flaws: Headstrong, doesn't believe in second chances, neurotic.
Sexual Orientation: Bisexual.
Status: Single.
Likes: -Ballet -Going out to places in pink tights -The night -Stars -People with complex personalities.
Dislikes: -Being in a crowd of people, or being at parties. -Love -Bugs -A dirty room.
Extra Information: Her nickname is Bella.
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Posted: Sun Feb 19, 2012 8:18 pm
 Character Information: Student Name: Lisette Steele
Species: Bionic Woman
Age:17
Gender: Female
Appearance description:
Personality: Rather rude and cold, Lisette has no sympathy for those around her, is impatient, and has a stone heart.
Bio: At the age of 14, Lisette's close family died in a car crash. she alone survived, but just barely. She had to go into intensive emergency care, and almost half of her body had to be reconstructed so she could survive. Along with reconstructing her body, the doctors who preformed the operations also strengthened her body. The left half of her body is now like a robots.
Skills and Abilities: The left side of her body is very strong and durable. Her left eye can see great distances, and can also shoot a thin laser can scan an object to see what the chemical compound of the object is. She's also very good with technology.
Character Flaws: Being cold as she is, most people don't approach her. She has no friends to speak of, and doesn't plan to make any. She is completely alone. The right side of her body also requires to be charged often if used in combat, so she generally avoids it. She's distrustful, and never gives second chances, and lives life only on statistics.
Sexual Orientation: Straight
Status: Single
Likes: - Quiet - Electricity - Classical music, surprisingly.
Dislikes: - The past - Her bionic body - Humans
Extra Information: The skin on the left side of her body is fake.
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Posted: Sun Feb 19, 2012 8:35 pm
Hi! Before your character is approved can you be more specific about her powers? "Psychokinesis" is a very broad term that covers just about any sort of telepathy or telekinetic ability. We will need something more specific than that before she can be approved. Thanks!
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Elen_Gilthoniel Vice Captain
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Posted: Sun Feb 19, 2012 8:36 pm
StrawberryZ0mbie Hi! Before your character is approved can you be more specific about her powers? "Psychokinesis" is a very broad term that covers just about any sort of telepathy or telekinetic ability. We will need something more specific than that before she can be approved. Thanks! I'll fix it right now. :3
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Posted: Sun Feb 19, 2012 8:36 pm
Hello! She mostly looks okay but I'm a little worried she might be a little over powered with super strength (on one side--but that is more than enough), super vision, and a eye-laser that powerful. If you could tone down the eye laser to make it a little less powerful, that would be perfect. =)
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Elen_Gilthoniel Vice Captain
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Elen_Gilthoniel Vice Captain
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Posted: Sun Feb 19, 2012 8:37 pm
Epilog StrawberryZ0mbie Hi! Before your character is approved can you be more specific about her powers? "Psychokinesis" is a very broad term that covers just about any sort of telepathy or telekinetic ability. We will need something more specific than that before she can be approved. Thanks! I'll fix it right now. :3 Awesome, just quote me when it's done so I can have another look! <3
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