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 Posted: Mon Jan 11, 2016 3:16 pm
Bear Necessity Genji Gincosu There is no such thing as "Cryo-Pyrokinesis"... And even if there was there would be no way that you could have flames the same colour and not be able to tell that they are not cold fronts. Just use Cryokinesis. Properly.
Do you mean this?
Also called
Cryo-Pyrokinesis
Cold-Fire Manipulation
Freeze-Flame Manipulation
Freezing Fire Manipulation
Pyro-Cryo Mixture
Associations
Cold Manipulation
Fire Manipulation
Ice Manipulation
Power Mixture
Thermal Manipulation
And at the bottom of the page is
Ultimate Big Chill (Ben 10) controls Ice Flames, which he describes as "fire so cold it burns."
An image of a red creature firing red flames.
Also even if the flames aren't red, you can assume they burn because it's not like my character doesn't know what the light spectrum is and how fire works. Chemical fires burn differently, and have you ever lit a flame on a burner for your oven? Blue. It's mostly a combination of orange and blue . My character is a smoker and he doesn't think that much. He's not stupid, but if he knows he's met with a god, he's only going to assume he has a certain set of powers.
Also editing in my backround so he can have more talks with his father so even if it's not natural, IT will make more sense.
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Posted: Tue Jan 19, 2016 9:35 pm
>_____>
I will handle this profile.
Genji, your profile has issues, but now that the bulk of it has been reworked, I'm going to approve it. That is mostly because the main issues like with powers have been resolved. We are going to do this profile correctly though. For now, you're good to go
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Bear Necessity Vice Captain
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Posted: Wed Jan 20, 2016 1:13 pm
You need to work on this still there are bits missing. - Cabin Assignment - Ares is not the one who is tactical, he is the more ferocious one. Mars is the Tactical one. So you need to change some of the stuff relating to tactics. You even go from one stage saying you can make split second tactical decisions to not being a tactical genius which is a little inconsistent. - Your strength levels are not peak. For you stature they are enhanced (The Mountain from GOT can lift 1000lbs... just: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=KyQA4Z7SOU0)- Most of your abilities are not peak but are superhuman. I would look at Candour if I was you. You may understand a bit better. - Tobe honest with you... This is very close to Candour. A bit too close for my liking but I will talk to Klayko. You can talk to him, whatever. We can sort it out.
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Posted: Wed Jan 20, 2016 3:34 pm
Bear Necessity You need to work on this still there are bits missing. I made some edits and lowered her strength threshold , but for the record, her abilities are in fact taken from the superpower wiki page for peak conditioning and are comparable to characters with said peak abilities.
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Posted: Wed Jan 20, 2016 4:22 pm
konaustin Bear Necessity You need to work on this still there are bits missing. I made some edits and lowered her strength threshold , but for the record, her abilities are in fact taken from the superpower wiki page for peak conditioning and are comparable to characters with said peak abilities. Profile debate thread is that a way. And superpower wikia is wrong. If you want to talk about it quote me in the appropriate place and I will be happy to discuss it with you.
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Posted: Thu Jan 21, 2016 3:35 pm
XXX♊️ CAMP GEMINI PERSONNEL RECORDS ♊️XXXXXXXXXX XXX♊️ BASIC INFORMATION ♊️XXXXXXXXXX ░▒▓ ♈x NAMExxxxxxxxx ░▒▓ ♈x AGExxxxxxxxx ░▒▓ ♈x D.O.B.xxxxxxxxx ░▒▓ ♈x ASSIGNMENTxxxxxxxxx ░▒▓ ♈x LINEAGExxxxxxxxx Demigod, Daughter of Hephaestus
XXX♊️ PHYSICAL INFORMATION ♊️XXXXXXXXXX ░▒▓ ♈x HEIGHTxxxxxxxxx ░▒▓ ♈x WEIGHTxxxxxxxxx 117 lbs with a lean but strong build
░▒▓ ♈x DOMINANT HANDxxxxxxxxx ░▒▓ ♈x NOTABLE FEATURESxxxxxxxxx
3 piercings up her right ear ,2 in the left and a snake bite piercing that's since been removed , and the Army Rangers logo on the inside of her left forearm. XXX♊️ PSYCHOLOGICAL REPORT ♊️XXXXXXXXXX ░▒▓ ♈x DEMEANORxxxxxxxxx
Jessie is an army brat through and through as the daughter of a former army ranger and as such has a very strong and at times intense personality. Because of this and her slight Napoleon Complex due to being so small, she is quick to start or join a fight if she feels she's being threatened or insulted.
She's very outgoing and forms strong bonds surprisingly quickly, sometimes through fights, and has no problem working as part of a unit. However she can be shockingly vindictive and has little patience what she view's as obnoxious of bothersome, and has adopted the personal mantra of "When I solve a problem, it stays solved" , a mantra which more often than not results in the destruction of property or a violent assault.
░▒▓ ♈x USEFUL TRAITSxxxxxxxxx
Jessie is not only quick on her feet but is remarkably quick witted as well. She's able to quickly improvise in most situations and prefers to let things flow and happen naturally rather than dance around and issue and make a complicated plan. This is true for both her day to day life and when she's working with her hands, as she often builds and thinkers by feel with only a vague idea of the end product.
░▒▓ ♈x POTENTIAL FLAWSxxxxxxxxx
Besides her temper getting her into trouble from time to time, Jessie's motto of 'problem solved, problem stays solved' causes her to look for the quickest and occasionally volatile way to keep a problem from happening twice. In this past this has ranged from pumping a round of buckshot into a circuit breaker because a house party was keeping her up, or destroying a neighbor's car with homemade thermite because they kept parking in her family driveway.
░▒▓ ♈x AMBITIONSxxxxxxxxx
Jessie's main goal in life is to join the Army Rangers like her mother , though she has been actively discouraging this decision for quite some time. Despite her military ambitions she still finds herself drawn to the family business and is currently trying to decide what she'll do with her life.
As for family she isn't exactly sure if she'll marry or have children, honestly she's never even had a boyfriend, so it mostly depends on whether she meets the right guy in the future.
░▒▓ ♈x INTERESTS / HOBBIESxxxxxxxxx
Jessie puts a great deal of importance on her physical fitness so it's not at all uncommon to find her practicing karate on her training dummy or going through one of several daily workouts while listening to some Dio or other metal bands.
As a child of Hephaestus and a part time worker for the family blacksmithing business, Jessie finds being around a forge and working on something to be cathartic.
When she has enough free time, sometimes she's found out riding through the county on the motorcycle she built.
XXX♊️ POTENTIAL ASSESSMENT ♊️XXXXXXXXXX ░▒▓ ♈x POWERSxxxxxxxxx
List powers here. Note: you do not have to use all 10 slots. If the abilities you learn in the story are within your heritage, they can be updated for later times
• Technokinesis (Construct): Jessie has a natural gift for construction and can build nearly anything either by the books or through simple improvisation and experimentation. Since coming to camp Jessie's building abilities have grown and she's made several creations she's particularly proud of, including:
-Penny: A motorcycle built from scratch during Jessie's first summer and one of the first creations she made with a complete goal in mind. Penny's most remarkable feature is her ability to transform into a fully functional,animated horse that moves and behaves like the genuine article. In both forms Penny has an impressive top speed of 155 mph, though the horse and bike forms are given specific purposes, hiding in plain sight in urban areas for the bike, and navigating through more wild and uneven terrain as the horse.
- A set of prototype prosthetic limbs she's working on for her mother
- A sledgehammer she's named the Forgemaster that weighs in at roughly 25lbs and just over 3ft long with a distinct curve in the shaft. Though mostly meant as a tool, Jessie has used this as a weapon in the past. When not in use it is disguised as a multi tool and transforms with two rapid clicks of the wrench tool.
-Huntsman: A bolt action crossbow complete with a scope and a five round magazine that holds eight two inch wooden bolts. Modeled after a sniper rifle , this weapon loads the same as the rifles it was modeled after..
-Ranger (WIP): An automatic crossbow designed with the best aspects of Jessie's ranged weapons. The ranger boasts a considerable range ,though not as good as her bolt action weapon, and a very large ammo drum that holds roughly sixty bolts that it fires at a rate of one round per second.
-A pair of identical hand held crossbows similar in appearance and function to a slide pistol. Like her Hunstman these are magazine fed with seven small bolts each, but have a quick but simple auto loader to save time on reloading. With smaller ammunition and considerably lower branch tension, these pack much less of a punch than her other ranges weapons, but make up for it in mobility and speed.
-Devil's Nest: An explosive sized both handheld and for siege weaponry, rather than causing a large explosion the devil wasp nest fires scores of razor sharp needles in every direction after detonating . Designed to inflict wounds rather than outright kill.
- Her latest project is a multi limbed automaton designed for training and security. As of now it remains unfinished.
• Technokinesis (control): Jessie possesses the ability to sense and control technology in its various forms such as animating them with sentience, controlling them like puppets, and even communicate with them to an extent.
• Technokinesis (comprehension) : Jessie can almost instantaneously understand how any machine works down to its smallest piece, even if she's never encountered it before.
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Martial Artist (Learned)- After receiving lessons from both her uncle and grandfather Jessie is a confident and skilled martial artist with a second degree black belt in karate, a first degree in judo, and even extensive training with escrima sticks and staff fighting.
Fitness (Learned) : Years of personal training from her uncle and grandfather ,and working in the family business have given Jessie a great physique with strong arm back and leg muscles. While not as powerful as say a child of Mars or Ares, she's strong enough to lift and carry more than her own body weight and has a great deal of stamina.
Auto Mechanic (Inherited): Over a decade of helping and working in her family owned auto shop has left Jessie with intimate knowledge of most automobiles and how to repair them or build them from scratch.
Inventor (Inherited): Like her father Jessie is incredibly gifted when it comes to creating with her hands and can make nearly anything provided she has the materials to do so.
Bow Training (Learned) : During her time at Camp Jessie has learned to handle bow type weapons , namely crossbows, with considerable skill. Though she's a good shot her ability isnt on the same level as the natural ability of a child of Apollo .
Multilingual (Learned/Inherited): Jessie is fluent in both English and Japanese, but also possesses a natural fluency in Greek.
░▒▓ ♈x WEAKNESSESxxxxxxxxx
Size: For all her training and strength, nothing changes the fact that Jessie is still on the short side. At barely 5'2 Jessie has a shorter reach, striking range, and stride than most people and in a physical altercation keeping out of range of her strikes is a must .
Short Sighted: Jessie isn't particularly fond of making plans and instead prefers to just roll with things as they come. While this can be an advantage in some ways, it makes her vulnerable to those who prefer to plan ahead and easily get caught up in a moment of excitement.
Migranes: Despite her ability to work with various levels of technology, Jessie cannot work with devices that use wireless capabilities for longer than a few minutes. Devices with simpler functions sch as a cell phone's ability to make calls results in a buzzing sound to resonate through her head which gradually develops into a headache, more recent and complex wireless technology such as wifi and satellite functions cause this to develop much quicker and with more debilitating effects. Within two minutes the headache will develop into a migraine and cause conscious thought to become difficult and as it progresses her vision will start to blur until the migraine is so intense that the pain causes Jessie's vision to go white for a short while ,and eventually she will fall unconscious.
░▒▓ ♈x FATAL FLAWxxxxxxxxx
Jessie is far too tenacious and stubborn for her own good and will refuse to give up when she really should. Perhaps due in part to her need to prove her small stature doesn't limit her, she's worked herself to exhaustion several times in the past and nearly died of dehydration in elementary school when she wanted to prove to an older boy that a girl could outlast him running around the track. She won of course but still wound up going to the hospital.
This tenacity of hers will cause her to take on challenges she likely won't be able to see through alone and continue fighting even if she can barely stand.
XXX♊️ HISTORY ♊️XXXXXXXXXX ░▒▓ ♈x PAST HISTORYxxxxxxxxx
Jessie was born the "runt of the litter" to a large, family with nearly a dozen cousins , several of whom has parents in the military. Though not the youngest of the children in her family, Jessie was easily the smallest and as such had difficulty with the training she and her cousins did on daily basis, something the other children took pleasure in teasing her about and often teased her , calling her runt, how she was a weakling like her mother who barely lasted a single tour.
The endless teasing about her and her parent led to Jessie developing a sort of Napoleon complex and even ended up with her picking a fight with one of her older cousins which was broken up by her favorite uncle.
As punishment for attacking her cousin ,Jessie's uncle Riley had her help him in the auto shop owned by Jessie's grandfather. The furious adolescent found that working with her uncle in the presence of the vast array of tools and metals was strangely relaxing and just holding the materials in her hands felt natural. In time Jessie found the shop to be a place of peace and worked there each night after her drills under her uncle's close supervision.
By the time she was just eleven Jessie was a trusted part time worker in her grandfather's business but had become confused about what she wanted to do with her life. Working with machines felt good and natural for her, but she also had a strong desire to become an Army Ranger . She became frustrated and unsure of herself and soon her behavior took s turn for the worse, retaliation toward frustrating people became increasingly violent and she even began to get into fights at school. This time Jessie's grandfather stepped up to set the girl straight and began putting her through rigorous karate training until she reached her limit then ,with her frustration from the day worked out, he sat down and talked with her over a cup of tea.
Every day Jessie would do her morning drills, go to school, then come home to her grandpa's training,work until she could barely walk, then just talked. Her grandpa's tactic worked surprisingly well as working so hard relieved stress from the girl and let her be more open to discussion and receptive to Kentaro's bits of wisdom. It didn't take long for Jessie's mood to improve a great deal, she stopped starting fights, found working easier,and even developed a passion for Karate which she began working into her daily drills. In time Jessie grew stronger and more skilled under her grandfather's teaching and won several state karate tournaments . With her mood improved Jessie even found work to be more enjoyable and began completing jobs in the auto shop on her own. It wasn't until she turned fifteen and completed construction of a motorcycle that she was given an invitation to the camp.
░▒▓ ♈x PRESENT HISTORYxxxxxxxxx
Though she's only come to camp twice Jessie has found it to be very accommodating, with interesting people, fun camp activities and people to help her train it's come to feel almost like a home away from home. Thus far though , her most treasured memory is her creation of her living motorcycle/steed Penny, who remains her loyal companion both in and out of camp.
XXX♊️ RELATIONSHIPS ♊️XXXXXXXXXX ░▒▓ ♈x FAMILYxxxxxxxxx
• Allison Marlowe (Mother): During the time she was dating Hephaestus ,Allison suffered an accident on the job and lost her right arm. Despite the injury Allison managed to live a mostly normal life and even managed to continue working as a mechanic, all the while Hephaestus was attempting to build her a prosthetic limb but found himself unable to do so.
Eventually Hephaestus left Allison after countless failures to build her a new limb, leaving Allison pregnant (unbeknownst to him) ,filled with self doubt and the belief that her boyfriend left because of her. Eventually she recovered from her depression after her daughter was born and tries to be the best role model she can.
• Riley Marlowe (uncle): Riley is Allison's younger brother and currently runs the family business even though it technically belongs to his father. Unlike his older sister Riley joined the air force as a mechanic and since he was home more than Allison, he took up a big part of raising his niece by helping with her training while her mother was out on deployment and even had her help out around the forge,albeit with the least dangerous work, and taught her everything he could as she grew older.
• Kentaro (grandfather) : Both the eldest of the family and owner of the family auto shop business, Kentaro is wise, patient and surprisingly strong for his age. Though he loves his many grandchildren, Kentaro is closest and most proud of Jessie as her karate instructor and deeply admires her strength and ability to adapt and learn
• Hephaestus (father): Hephaestus and Jessie have a strange relationship in that they appreciate each other as family but feel they've grown as close as they can. Jesse's intense demeanor and martial skill admittedly confuse her father as most of his children are more focused on being creators rather than soldiers, but the two always seem to be able to connect at least a little.
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Posted: Fri Jan 22, 2016 8:22 am
You are aware it's one character per person, right?
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Posted: Fri Jan 22, 2016 8:24 am
To be fair, I like it. Well done. Approved. Stick him in Cabin 21 in the Storage Area.
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Bear Necessity Vice Captain
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Posted: Fri Jan 22, 2016 10:28 am
Bear Necessity You are aware it's one character per person, right? Aye, thats why I binned the other character
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Posted: Fri Jan 22, 2016 5:33 pm
Personally, this is really good and I like it. Well done. "Bear"-y nice one might say. rofl rofl Approved.
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Bear Necessity Vice Captain
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Bear Necessity Vice Captain
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Posted: Fri Jan 22, 2016 6:03 pm
Ah, Draga, the time has finally come... She's much better now. Good Job! Approved.
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Posted: Tue Feb 02, 2016 2:39 pm
First off, no guns. Like... At all. The crossbow is a fine weapon and quite good actually but the guns are a no-no I'm afraid. I also do not see why this girl is a Child of Hephaestus. Hephaestus is quite meek and mild, he's actually quite socially awakward, and I am very doubtful that he would be attracted to the likes of a Military Family. I'm also unsure with how Klay wants to handle Pyrokinesis. Even in a small form with children of Hephaestus it is extremely rare and with Gro already claiming it I am not sure whether or not he will be up for it. I suppose we could swing for very dangerous times call for very dangerous measures.
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Bear Necessity Vice Captain
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Posted: Tue Feb 02, 2016 3:00 pm
Bear Necessity First off, no guns. Like... At all. The crossbow is a fine weapon and quite good actually but the guns are a no-no I'm afraid. I also do not see why this girl is a Child of Hephaestus. Hephaestus is quite meek and mild, he's actually quite socially awakward, and I am very doubtful that he would be attracted to the likes of a Military Family. I'm also unsure with how Klay wants to handle Pyrokinesis. Even in a small form with children of Hephaestus it is extremely rare and with Gro already claiming it I am not sure whether or not he will be up for it. I suppose we could swing for very dangerous times call for very dangerous measures. I can get rid of the guns and work out something else, maybe like a multi tool or something, and probably expand on the mother's personality more. I had her planned out as a more soft spoken individual , not quite as intense as her daughter and a bit antisocial to the point where the two would be introduced by her brother.
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Posted: Tue Feb 02, 2016 3:04 pm
konaustin I can get rid of the guns and work out something else, maybe like a multi tool or something, and probably expand on the mother's personality more. I had her planned out as a more soft spoken individual , not quite as intense as her daughter and a bit antisocial to the point where the two would be introduced by her brother. The debate forum is that-a-way. However, I would read up on Hephaestus. Not sure if that would work.
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Posted: Fri Feb 05, 2016 8:52 am
I approve this. smile See you around!
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