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Posted: Sat Feb 11, 2012 9:40 am
The Female Shinobi Cordelia __________________________________________________
【.Main Information.】
❖ F u l l n a m e: Seraphiel, "Angel of Silence"
❖ N i c k n a m e s: Cordelia
❖ A g e: Unknown
❖ B i r t h d a t e: Came out of Hibernation-Now
❖ G e n d e r: Female
❖ N a t i o n a l i t y: Nordic (lol)
❖ R a n k: Student
❖ C l a s s: Warrior
❖ T i t l e: Citizen? ( No idea)
❖ B l o o d l i n e: The Fallen
❖ S p e e d: 8
❖ S t r e n g t h: 8
❖ P l a y e d b y: The Female Shinobi
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【.Major Information.】
❖ E n e r g y c o l o r: White/Yellow-gold
❖ E n e r g y r e s e r v e: 300
❖ E l e m e n t: (I have NO idea yet!! crying Im to picky )
❖ B a t t l e s t r e n g t h: -Ability to fly -Incredible Strength&Speed -Holy powers -Sense peoples energies
❖ B a t t l e w e a k n e s s: -Easily noticeable/Stands out -Has peculiar scent to there wings. -Easily angered/Baited -Lost of loved one, loss of heart. (If there spouse/lover dies) Little bit I decided to add.
❖ T a l e n t: N/A yet
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【.Equipment Information.】
❖ W e a p o n (s): N/A Yet
❖ A r m o r: N/A Yet
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【.Skill roster.】
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【.Character description.】
❖ P e r s o n a l i t y: Serious/Willful
❖ Q u o t e: The world is a stage, and the men and women merely players.
❖ H e i g h t: 7' 2
❖ W e i g h t: 280-300?
❖ E y e c o l o r: Sky Blue
❖ P l a c e o f b i r t h: No idea; was not "Technically" born, merely came out hibernation.
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【.Background Information.】
Why? Why was I caste from his light? Tossed into the darkness of this retched land? Where good and evil are not simply black and white, but shades of grey? Is this my fate lord? To be tossed into this land? Why? Why me? I know I'am not alone in my views. At least two of my brothers and sister are the same as me. Share the same opinions of this land. See the evil and darkness it beholds..the sheer weight of it is crushing just to watch. This world should be forgotten, should not be our problem, no not the angel's. Perhaps..perhaps this is our curse as well as our salvation, for we have fallen from your grace. Maybe we should walk this land? Yes...I can sense them..the three others..my brothers or sisters. Perhaps our goal you sent us on was to save the good,to give light, to battle the dark. For I'am one of the strongest of the angels. Seraphiel, the angel of Silence. Destroyer of those who pledge to the darkness and feast on those pure of heart. I will not fail you father. I will prevail, defeat those who oppose the light..the good that I will try to instil on this bleak land. By doing this I will reclaim my rightful status of Guardian of Gate....... I must stop writing now, dark ones scourge the city from the south..until next time father. End of Journal entry #1
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 Please revise her backstory so there is no reference to interdimensional travel. We had a Portal open for some time that would allow for non-canon characters to enter play, but it's been closed in the interest of creating a roster of characters that are more invested in the world they live on. I hope this isn't a huge bother sweatdrop The entry is great, but you'll want to change it so that she has a Nationality that matches one of the current nations, Also, if she'll be the supplicant of a patron god (her lord as it were), please take your pick from the list of Gods and Goddesses of Rykros and indicate which she serves. smile That aside, looking good and ready for approval afterwords!
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Posted: Sat Feb 11, 2012 9:58 am
Ferregar Please revise her backstory so there is no reference to interdimensional travel. We had a Portal open for some time that would allow for non-canon characters to enter play, but it's been closed in the interest of creating a roster of characters that are more invested in the world they live on. I hope this isn't a huge bother sweatdrop The entry is great, but you'll want to change it so that she has a Nationality that matches one of the current nations, Also, if she'll be the supplicant of a patron god (her lord as it were), please take your pick from the list of Gods and Goddesses of Rykros and indicate which she serves. smile That aside, looking good and ready for approval afterwords! Well..I mean "The fallen" where not exactly from this world to begin with right? ----> You weren't technically "Born". You basically came from a different dimension, where you were hibernating<--- Thats what I got from the bloodlines page...so different dimension/world/universe no pledging from the gods of goddesses of Rykros? Idk.. Im basically just going on being sent to this world..being stuck in an amazon type angel body..trying to destroy the ones who pledge themselves to the dark and bring forth the light..yata yata. =)
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Posted: Sat Feb 11, 2012 10:06 am
Ferregar Please revise her backstory so there is no reference to interdimensional travel. We had a Portal open for some time that would allow for non-canon characters to enter play, but it's been closed in the interest of creating a roster of characters that are more invested in the world they live on. I hope this isn't a huge bother sweatdrop The entry is great, but you'll want to change it so that she has a Nationality that matches one of the current nations, Also, if she'll be the supplicant of a patron god (her lord as it were), please take your pick from the list of Gods and Goddesses of Rykros and indicate which she serves. smile That aside, looking good and ready for approval afterwords! Errr...I just looked at the gods/goddeses..and I see what you fully mean. I apologize. I will look more into it later tonight when I get home from work and revise, reedit etc. biggrin
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Posted: Sat Feb 11, 2012 11:09 am
The Female Shinobi Ferregar Please revise her backstory so there is no reference to interdimensional travel. We had a Portal open for some time that would allow for non-canon characters to enter play, but it's been closed in the interest of creating a roster of characters that are more invested in the world they live on. I hope this isn't a huge bother sweatdrop The entry is great, but you'll want to change it so that she has a Nationality that matches one of the current nations, Also, if she'll be the supplicant of a patron god (her lord as it were), please take your pick from the list of Gods and Goddesses of Rykros and indicate which she serves. smile That aside, looking good and ready for approval afterwords! Errr...I just looked at the gods/goddeses..and I see what you fully mean. I apologize. I will look more into it later tonight when I get home from work and revise, reedit etc. biggrin Thank you! And you are actually correct regarding the "hibernation" principle, so I apologize for misleading you there. I was thinking in a broader perspective of character application and wasn't looking into the bloodline's special rules. Do still center the backstory on her return based on the call of one of our canon Gods though smile It will make things much more interesting for you.
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Posted: Sat Feb 11, 2012 6:59 pm
Strike-Through = Not Yet Approved



Krona Jones
__________________________________________________ 【.main info.】 ❖ f u l l n a m e: Krona Jones
❖ n i c k n a m e s: KJ
❖ a g e: 24
❖ b i r t h d a t e: 3/26
❖ g e n d e r: Female
❖ n a t i o n a l i t y: The Citadel
❖ r a n k: Student
❖ c l a s s: Dark Avenger
❖ t i t l e:
❖ b l o o d l i n e: The Black Blood
❖ s p e e d: 5 (Bloodline)+2(Class) = 7
❖ s t r e n g t h: 5(Bloodline)+1(Class)=6
❖ p l a y e d b y: VelvonVeden __________________________________________________ 【.major info.】 ❖ e n e r g y c o l o r: Wine
❖ e n e r g y r e s e r v e: 300
❖ e l e m e n t: Air
❖ b a t t l e s t r e n g t h: A master of manipulation and stealth, an expert at the game of cat and mouse, able to lay traps, stalk targets with all the cunning of a master predator.
❖ b a t t l e w e a k n e s s: Because of her heavy reliance of shadows, she is vulnerable to holy and light magic. Often, she goes mad in battle, which clouds her judgment, her thinking, and causes her to attack without thought for technique and no discrimination between friend and foe. In this state, her defense lowers, and she is more susceptible to attacks.
❖ t a l e n t:
Combative Talent or Non Combative: Comative
Talent Name: Shadow Spawn
Description:
The main purpose of this talent is to create shadow where there is none.
Shadow-Gangers
Krona summons shadow-gangers: mindless, blind minions formed from the shadow, and infused with the element of their summoner, which, in this case, is air. Krona can command these creatures to attack mindlessly, or can dispel their shape and use their shadow for other attacks.
Attack Details
Attacks by shadow gangers cause minor damage that mostly affects speed. The gangers either hand-to-hand melee attack, or do a ranged attack in which they swing their arms like a sword and create blades of air that can slice through light armor, and skin. When destroyed, their shadow energy is tranferred to Krona, and she recieves a one point boost for each one in play for the stat of her choice for three posts.
Energy Costs
•5 cost in energy, with a maximum of three gangers at Rank E-Rank B, and Five at Rank A and above. At Rank SSS Krona can summon more than five, but with double the energy cost for each additional one (10 Energy). The Number of Gangers cannot exceed 10. Gangers summoned after 10 cost a ridiculous 100 energy.
•5 energy per post for as long as the gangers are in play, both in ganger and in shadow form
Rules
•Maximum of three gangers at Rank E-Rank B, and Five at Rank A and above. At Rank SSS Krona can summon more than five, but with double the energy cost for each additional one (10 Energy). The Number of Gangers cannot exceed 10. Gangers summoned after 10 cost a ridiculous 100 energy.
•Gangers can be dispelled with three strikes. In shadow form, they are bit harder to dispel: they can be dispelled instantly with an elemental attack, or with an light attack.
Shadow-Weres
Unlike Shadow-Gangers, shadow-Weres are strictly for attack purposes; they cannot be dispelled to create shadow. However, they can be used as a shield, forming a wall between Krona and her opponent. They are smarter than Shadow-Gangers, attacking with purpose and technique, or according to Krona's command, but they are still blind, and rely on other senses to fight.
Attack Detail
Shadow-Weres can either melee attack with claws that can slice though light to medium armor and skin, or range attack with a roar that creates air waves that cause no damage, but can disorient or knock down the opponent, depending on his or her strength. When destroyed, they created a shadow shield that lowers the rank of attacks by one rank. The sheild lasts for two posts.
Energy Cost
•Shadow-Weres are 10 energy in cost
•10 energy per post as long as they are in play, both in attack and defense mode
Rules
•Maximum of three Weres in play at Rank E-Rank B, and Five at Rank A and above. At Rank SSS Krona can summon more than five, but with double the energy cost for each additional one (20 Energy). The Number of Gangers cannot exceed 10. Weres summoned after 10 cost a ridiculous 200 energy.
•Weres can be dispelled with fewer strikers than a ganger, two, but since weres are more intelligent than gangers, hitting them is tricky. In defense form, they take the same amount of strikes to dispel: three.
__________________________________________________ 【.equipment info.】
❖ w e a p o n (s):
A double-tailed whip of the same color of her aura: Wine. Veins of white and Black weave from its "heart" at the base of the handle and dance along to the ends of the tails.
One lash is 7 feet long for a distance, attacks; the other is just three feet in length, can be used for strangulation. Because of its shadow-infused nature, the whip does not make the cracking sound of traditional whips; it is silent, other than the faint sound of rushing air that can only be detected by the most trained or sensitive of ears.
If she is directly confronted, or revealed, the lashes take opposite ends of the handle, then harden and thicken to form a double bladed staff, one end long for slashes and ?, the other sort or quick jabs, and cuts.
Weapon Skills - Just but they Evolve with Krona, rising in rank as she does.
Regenerate:
If the tails are sliced off or the blades are broken, they will regenerate in the next post, unless it is struck at the "heart" which is a black and white swirled spot at the base of the whip.
Air Stampede:
Krona sweeps the blade in a circle about her, or cracks the whip in an arc. A stream of pressurized air is created, that hurtles toward its opponent at blinding speeds. At close range it causes a rank higher damage, and a distance a rank lower. If the opponent is of equal or lesser level than Krona, it also knocks them down and disorients them for one post. If the opponent is of a higher level, it simply disorients them for one post.
❖ a r m o r:
Krona leather is composed primarily of light leather: thigh-high leather boots, a flowing leather skirt, and a red-leather corset. All are infused with shadows, and provide extra protection against light attacks.
Her primary piece of armor, however, is the cloak she wears. The cloak is made of a sturdy cloth, lined with leather. It provides excellent light protection reducing damage from light attacks by one rank. With a cost of a 7 energy she can manipulate this cloak to shield her from attacks. However, the cloak is fairly heavy, so unless she removes it for battle it reduces her speed by 2 points.
__________________________________________________ 【.skill roster.】
Dark Avenger Skills
Black Blood Skills
__________________________________________________ 【.character description.】 ❖ p e r s o n a l i t y: Fundamentally, Krona's goal is to protect the innocent, and deliver justice. But her goal has been twisted into an obsession by her natural insanity, and her ways of securing it are often twisted. She is kindness, hidden by darkness, and tainted by her steel-like determination and discipline, her lust for battle, and her extremely narrow-minded views on what is right, and what is wrong.
❖ q u o t e: "Is that not just?"
❖ h e i g h t: 5'11
❖ w e i g h t: 150
❖ e y e c o l o r: forest green normally; they turn deep wine when she fights.
❖ p l a c e o f b i r t h: unknown
❖ t h e m e s o n g: Genesis by Justice
❖ b a t t l e t h e m e: Confession - Red__________________________________________________ 【.background information.】
One would be shocked at the simple beginnings. She was not born into a childhood of abuse, or hardship, or bloodshed, as one would assume one of her class and race began. Krona was born into a life of near perfection. Her family...of merchants. They were not wealthy, but their business generated enough money to allow her parents, and her two siblings - an older sister, and her twin brother - to live a comfortable life, typical to those of her class. Her own was different, in that - rather than attend finishing school, as was expected of girls, she disguised herself as a boy (with the help of lies from her family, who did not hold the typical mindset toward females) and attended to local mercenary school. Her steel-hard determination and work ethic impressed her teachers and classmates, and she graduated the school at 15 top of her class.
At this time, hardship had fallen upon her family, so rather than join her family's mercenary business, she sought richer prospects with other mercenary companies. The biggest of the mercenary companies, who knew of and was impressed by, her nearly flawless school record, hired her as a low level trader. She excelled in this position, and she began moving up the ranks. And she rose she saw. Witnessed the corruption of the business she was in.
This was the root of her obsession with justice. Soon, she grew sick of witnessing he injustice, and, gathering other like-minded mercenaries, led a campaign against the company, both the lawful - delivering reports and information to officials - and lawless - burning down warehouses, or using manipulation and blackmail to expose the leaders of the company.
Her campaign was close to victory...and then betrayal caused it failure. Her own family, sold her out. She, and the others in her campaign, disappeared quietly.
As did her memories of the time.
She only recalls only snippets of living horror, a fragmented night mare of twisted experiments, blood, death, and above it all, a voice, tempting, promising her the power to get vengeance on her family, and bring justice not only to those who suffered beneath the oppression of the mercenaries, but to all who would harm the innocent.
Waking is her only distinct memory. Then:
A memory dark and she shadow she thrives on...
A chance?
No, another chance. The voice whispered.
Another chance. An opportunity t bring down the hammer of justice on the heads of the family that betrayed me in greed, the mercenaries that hurt others in greed, and on all others who would dare harm others for their own gain.
"Yes, I'll take it."
The voice chuckled, a high, scratchy sound that had me cringing. It's cackle grew louder upon seeings this - how it say, I do not know - and it said, in that low, velvety voice,
"Don't be so hesitant...your task is very simple. You don't even have to raise a finger to do it. You only have to sing."
That was all? I had expected something far more...dramatic. Perhaps slaughter a child or sacrifice the soul of an innocent.
....Sing? A task that was simple, and almost innocent sounding. Yet, there was something foreboding in the voice, a sort of sinister delight behind the words that told me that there was far more to the request than simply singing.
There had to be something more to it. It could not be that simple.
"...that is all? Are you sure? You don't want a sacrifice...or an offering?"
"You are willing to kill, but you are not willing to sing? You must have a twisted sense of morals..."
I continued to inisist, questioning, proding, hoping that the voice would reveal it's true intentions. But no matter my insistence, it would not tell me. There were many things it would not tell me. It's name, what it was, why it wanted to help me. When I asked it was silent, when I persisted it became annoyed.
So, I stopped asking, and just did.
I sang. Belted my voice till it filled the rounded chamber, till it echoed off the molded brick walls. Till I could feel the waves from my voice shudder though me...and seize me.
My words, pure, sweet, telling of ?, twisted into something unknown. Words in a language that I did not know, in a voice that was not my own, but dark, richer, baritone woven with something sinister, began to fall from my lips. I let loose a noise of surprise, and tried to close my mouth.
I could not. Panic, snaked up in me, as my voice continued of its own will, seperate from my body continuing on far beyond where lack of breath should have cut it silent.
And, each word began to bring destruction, and shadow. From my limbs, darkness began to roll. It spilled from my arms and finger tips, out from my chest, swirled from my legs. It gathered, a massive cloud that swirled about me smothering out every sense. No sight, no sound, no touch...only hearing.
And terrible things I did hear.
I heard screams. Twisted, keening shreiks, that pierced my ears, sent pain through them, making me wish i was also deaf. Screams of children, men, women.
I heard mighty crashes, the type that might come from a boulder crashing into the ground, only by the hundreds, mixing together into an orchestra of destruction.
I heard a wind, a high shattering whistle that rose above the screams the crashes, as though a storm were tearing through.
And above it all I heard my voice, baritone, sinister rising steadily through the notes, low to high, till it reached the highest, shattering, shaking note...
Then silence. Then darkness.
I woke to nothing. Literally, nothing.
I was lying in the middle of a barren wasteland. Gone was the chamber I had began the ritual in. Gone were fields of lush grass, and bright flowers I had jouneyed through; in their place was black ash, and hideous gray rock. Gone were the trees, lush and full; blacked stick corpses stood in their place. Gone were the sounds of life: the footsteps of tiny creatures, the gurgle of water running over rocks in a stream, the shouts of play and work from a village in the distance; a eclipsing silence reigned.
Death reigned.
And the scary thing was...I didn't care.
I wanted to care...but I simply didn't. I had what I wanted. I had the tools I needed to deliver justice.
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Posted: Sat Feb 11, 2012 7:39 pm
VelvonVeden NOT YET APPROVED   Krona Jones __________________________________________________ 【.main info.】 ❖ f u l l n a m e: Krona Jones
❖ n i c k n a m e s: KJ
❖ a g e: 24
❖ b i r t h d a t e: 3/26
❖ g e n d e r: Female
❖ n a t i o n a l i t y: The Citadel
❖ r a n k: Student
❖ c l a s s: Dark Avenger
❖ t i t l e:
❖ b l o o d l i n e: The Black Blood
❖ s p e e d: 5 (Bloodline)+2(Class) = 7
❖ s t r e n g t h: 5(Bloodline)+1(Class)=6
❖ p l a y e d b y: VelvonVeden __________________________________________________ 【.major info.】 ❖ e n e r g y c o l o r: Wine
❖ e n e r g y r e s e r v e: 300
❖ e l e m e n t: Air
❖ b a t t l e s t r e n g t h: A master of manipulation and stealth, an expert at the game of cat and mouse, able to lay traps, stalk targets with all the cunning of a master predator.
❖ b a t t l e w e a k n e s s: Because of her heavy reliance of shadows, she is vulnerable to holy and light magic. Often, she goes mad in battle, which clouds her judgment, her thinking, and causes her to attack without thought for technique and no discrimination between friend and foe. In this state, her defense lowers, and she is more susceptible to attacks.
❖ t a l e n t:
Combative Talent or Non Combative: Comative
Talent Name: Shadow Spawn
Description:
The main purpose of this talent is to create shadow where there is none.
Shadow-Gangers
Krona summons shadow-gangers: mindless, blind minions formed from the shadow, and infused with the element of their summoner, which, in this case, is air. Krona can command these creatures to attack mindlessly, or can dispel their shape and use their shadow for other attacks.
Attack Details
Attacks by shadow gangers cause minor damage that mostly affects speed. The gangers either hand-to-hand melee attack, or do a ranged attack in which they swing their arms like a sword and create blades of air that can slice through light armor, and skin. When destroyed, their shadow energy is tranferred to Krona, and she recieves a one point boost for each one in play for the stat of her choice for three posts.
Energy Costs
•5 cost in energy, with a maximum of three gangers at Rank E-Rank B, and Five at Rank A and above. At Rank SSS Krona can summon more than five, but with double the energy cost for each additional one (10 Energy). The Number of Gangers cannot exceed 10. Gangers summoned after 10 cost a ridiculous 100 energy.
•5 energy per post for as long as the gangers are in play, both in ganger and in shadow form
Rules
•Maximum of three gangers at Rank E-Rank B, and Five at Rank A and above. At Rank SSS Krona can summon more than five, but with double the energy cost for each additional one (10 Energy). The Number of Gangers cannot exceed 10. Gangers summoned after 10 cost a ridiculous 100 energy.
•Gangers can be dispelled with three strikes. In shadow form, they are bit harder to dispel: they can be dispelled instantly with an elemental attack, or with an light attack.
Shadow-Weres
Unlike Shadow-Gangers, shadow-Weres are strictly for attack purposes; they cannot be dispelled to create shadow. However, they can be used as a shield, forming a wall between Krona and her opponent. They are smarter than Shadow-Gangers, attacking with purpose and technique, or according to Krona's command, but they are still blind, and rely on other senses to fight.
Attack Detail
Shadow-Weres can either melee attack with claws that can slice though light to medium armor and skin, or range attack with a roar that creates air waves that cause no damage, but can disorient or knock down the opponent, depending on his or her strength. When destroyed, they created a shadow shield that lowers the rank of attacks by one rank. The sheild lasts for two posts.
Energy Cost
•Shadow-Weres are 10 energy in cost
•10 energy per post as long as they are in play, both in attack and defense mode
Rules
•Maximum of three Weres in play at Rank E-Rank B, and Five at Rank A and above. At Rank SSS Krona can summon more than five, but with double the energy cost for each additional one (20 Energy). The Number of Gangers cannot exceed 10. Weres summoned after 10 cost a ridiculous 200 energy.
•Weres can be dispelled with fewer strikers than a ganger, two, but since weres are more intelligent than gangers, hitting them is tricky. In defense form, they take the same amount of strikes to dispel: three.
__________________________________________________ 【.equipment info.】
❖ w e a p o n (s):
A double-tailed whip of the same color of her aura: Wine. Veins of white and Black weave from its "heart" at the base of the handle and dance along to the ends of the tails.
One lash is 7 feet long for a distance, attacks; the other is just three feet in length, can be used for strangulation. Because of its shadow-infused nature, the whip does not make the cracking sound of traditional whips; it is silent, other than the faint sound of rushing air that can only be detected by the most trained or sensitive of ears.
If she is directly confronted, or revealed, the lashes take opposite ends of the handle, then harden and thicken to form a double bladed staff, one end long for slashes and ?, the other sort or quick jabs, and cuts.
Weapon Skills - Just but they Evolve with Krona, rising in rank as she does.
Regenerate:
If the tails are sliced off or the blades are broken, they will regenerate in the next post, unless it is struck at the "heart" which is a black and white swirled spot at the base of the whip.
Air Stampede:
Krona sweeps the blade in a circle about her, or cracks the whip in an arc. A stream of pressurized air is created, that hurtles toward its opponent at blinding speeds. At close range it causes a rank higher damage, and a distance a rank lower. If the opponent is of equal or lesser level than Krona, it also knocks them down and disorients them for one post. If the opponent is of a higher level, it simply disorients them for one post.
❖ a r m o r:
Krona leather is composed primarily of light leather: thigh-high leather boots, a flowing leather skirt, and a red-leather corset. All are infused with shadows, and provide extra protection against light attacks.
Her primary piece of armor, however, is the cloak she wears. The cloak is made of a sturdy cloth, lined with leather. It provides excellent light protection reducing damage from light attacks by one rank. With a cost of a 7 energy she can manipulate this cloak to shield her from attacks. However, the cloak is fairly heavy, so unless she removes it for battle it reduces her speed by 2 points.
__________________________________________________ 【.skill roster.】 Dark Avenger Skills (Ones in Bold are the ones Obtained)
•Soul Sense RANK E Skill Type: Passive A trademark skill of all Dark Avengers, Soul Sense grants them the ability to sense all souls in their visible vicinity. Soul Sense shows a Dark Avenger each soul's distinctive characteristics -it's color, aura, size and power. Soul Sense reveals a character's Primary Element, and their Rank to the Dark Avenger. At the rank of Master, Soul Sense extends to a Dark Avenger's sense of smell and spans the breadth of a nation, and by Hero a Dark Avenger's every sense can be used to identify a soul throughout Rykros.
•Soul Mark RANK E Skill Type: Active By focusing on a creature that he/she can sense in the area for 2 posts, a Dark Avenger can mark their soul, enabling the Dark Avenger to track them with ease. Once a soul is marked, a Dark Avenger can see it through walls and sense its location over great distances. By the rank of Master, a Dark Avenger needs only focus on their Mark for one post to see it anywhere on Rykros. This skill requires no energy. Only one Soul Mark is permitted at any given time, and Marking another soul while a Mark is currently active replaces the old mark with the new.
•Precision Strike RANK E Using their agility and dexterity, a Dark Avenger makes a single surgical attack against their target. If the target is currently the Dark Avenger's Marked Soul, it does damage as if it were one rank higher.
•Track RANK E Skill Type: Active Like all skilled hunters, a Dark Avenger learns to track their prey based on sight, scent, smell, touch, and taste. A Dark Avenger must take one post to focus on their targets trail before they can effectively track them, and cannot do so while running until they've reached the rank of Master. If a Dark Avenger is attacked while they are tracking a target, the trial is lost and they must take another post to get back on their quarry's trail. Tracking a Marked Soul is easy for a Dark Avenger, and requires no post to pick up their trail (if they have traveled nearby).If a Dark Avenger is attacked while tracking, they must spend two posts after the encounter to get back on the trail. Black Blood Skills
•Bloody Slicer E To initiate this attack, the user must firstly cut himself/herself in the wrist, exposing the Black Blood. Then through a simple flick of the wrist or flinging of the arm, the pooled blood is sent flying rapidly towards the opponent, while the Black Blood exerts its control over the itself forcing itself to harden so as to create a crescent shaped projectile blade •Bloody Bullet E When the user's finger is pricked, they are able shoot out a hardened bullet of their blood at the opponent, though, it can only come from 1 finger and the number of fingers rise as the rank rises as well by two, though once you've reach all of the fingers on your hands, the number will raise no higher.
__________________________________________________ 【.character description.】 ❖ p e r s o n a l i t y: Fundamentally, Krona's goal is to protect the innocent, and deliver justice. But her goal has been twisted into an obsession by her natural insanity, and her ways of securing it are often twisted. She is kindness, hidden by darkness, and tainted by her steel-like determination and discipline, her lust for battle, and her extremely narrow-minded views on what is right, and what is wrong.
❖ q u o t e: "Is that not just?"
❖ h e i g h t: 5'11
❖ w e i g h t: 150
❖ e y e c o l o r: forest green normally; they turn deep wine when she fights.
❖ p l a c e o f b i r t h: unknown
❖ t h e m e s o n g: Genesis by Justice
❖ b a t t l e t h e m e: Confession - Red__________________________________________________ 【.background information.】
One would be shocked at the simple beginnings. She was not born into a childhood of abuse, or hardship, or bloodshed, as one would assume one of her class and race began. Krona was born into a life of near perfection. Her family...of merchants. They were not wealthy, but their business generated enough money to allow her parents, and her two siblings - an older sister, and her twin brother - to live a comfortable life, typical to those of her class. Her own was different, in that - rather than attend finishing school, as was expected of girls, she disguised herself as a boy (with the help of lies from her family, who did not hold the typical mindset toward females) and attended to local mercenary school. Her steel-hard determination and work ethic impressed her teachers and classmates, and she graduated the school at 15 top of her class.
At this time, hardship had fallen upon her family, so rather than join her family's mercenary business, she sought richer prospects with other mercenary companies. The biggest of the mercenary companies, who knew of and was impressed by, her nearly flawless school record, hired her as a low level trader. She excelled in this position, and she began moving up the ranks. And she rose she saw. Witnessed the corruption of the business she was in.
This was the root of her obsession with justice. Soon, she grew sick of witnessing he injustice, and, gathering other like-minded mercenaries, led a campaign against the company, both the lawful - delivering reports and information to officials - and lawless - burning down warehouses, or using manipulation and blackmail to expose the leaders of the company.
Her campaign was close to victory...and then betrayal caused it failure. Her own family, sold her out. She, and the others in her campaign, disappeared quietly.
As did her memories of the time.
She only recalls only snippets of living horror, a fragmented night mare of twisted experiments, blood, death, and above it all, a voice, tempting, promising her the power to get vengeance on her family, and bring justice not only to those who suffered beneath the oppression of the mercenaries, but to all who would harm the innocent.
Waking is her only distinct memory. Then:
A memory dark and she shadow she thrives on...
A chance?
No, another chance. The voice whispered.
Another chance. An opportunity t bring down the hammer of justice on the heads of the family that betrayed me in greed, the mercenaries that hurt others in greed, and on all others who would dare harm others for their own gain.
"Yes, I'll take it."
The voice chuckled, a high, scratchy sound that had me cringing. It's cackle grew louder upon seeings this - how it say, I do not know - and it said, in that low, velvety voice,
"Don't be so hesitant...your task is very simple. You don't even have to raise a finger to do it. You only have to sing."
That was all? I had expected something far more...dramatic. Perhaps slaughter a child or sacrifice the soul of an innocent.
....Sing? A task that was simple, and almost innocent sounding. Yet, there was something foreboding in the voice, a sort of sinister delight behind the words that told me that there was far more to the request than simply singing.
There had to be something more to it. It could not be that simple.
"...that is all? Are you sure? You don't want a sacrifice...or an offering?"
"You are willing to kill, but you are not willing to sing? You must have a twisted sense of morals..."
I continued to inisist, questioning, proding, hoping that the voice would reveal it's true intentions. But no matter my insistence, it would not tell me. There were many things it would not tell me. It's name, what it was, why it wanted to help me. When I asked it was silent, when I persisted it became annoyed.
So, I stopped asking, and just did.
I sang. Belted my voice till it filled the rounded chamber, till it echoed off the molded brick walls. Till I could feel the waves from my voice shudder though me...and seize me.
My words, pure, sweet, telling of ?, twisted into something unknown. Words in a language that I did not know, in a voice that was not my own, but dark, richer, baritone woven with something sinister, began to fall from my lips. I let loose a noise of surprise, and tried to close my mouth.
I could not. Panic, snaked up in me, as my voice continued of its own will, seperate from my body continuing on far beyond where lack of breath should have cut it silent.
And, each word began to bring destruction, and shadow. From my limbs, darkness began to roll. It spilled from my arms and finger tips, out from my chest, swirled from my legs. It gathered, a massive cloud that swirled about me smothering out every sense. No sight, no sound, no touch...only hearing.
And terrible things I did hear.
I heard screams. Twisted, keening shreiks, that pierced my ears, sent pain through them, making me wish i was also deaf. Screams of children, men, women.
I heard mighty crashes, the type that might come from a boulder crashing into the ground, only by the hundreds, mixing together into an orchestra of destruction.
I heard a wind, a high shattering whistle that rose above the screams the crashes, as though a storm were tearing through.
And above it all I heard my voice, baritone, sinister rising steadily through the notes, low to high, till it reached the highest, shattering, shaking note...
Then silence. Then darkness.
I woke to nothing. Literally, nothing.
I was lying in the middle of a barren wasteland. Gone was the chamber I had began the ritual in. Gone were fields of lush grass, and bright flowers I had jouneyed through; in their place was black ash, and hideous gray rock. Gone were the trees, lush and full; blacked stick corpses stood in their place. Gone were the sounds of life: the footsteps of tiny creatures, the gurgle of water running over rocks in a stream, the shouts of play and work from a village in the distance; a eclipsing silence reigned.
Death reigned.
And the scary thing was...I didn't care.
I wanted to care...but I simply didn't. I had what I wanted. I had the tools I needed to deliver justice.
__________________________________________________ Welcome Velvon smile and awesome RP sample....very well done! Can't wait to see our fifth and final Dark Avenger come into play. There are a few things to note, however.... I understand that you did say that only boldened skills have been gained by the character, but skills are only supposed to be up (in any form) after the student learns them. Please strike them from the sheet for now until you can find a trainer smile Additionally, no character has talents or custom armor/weapons (magical armor such as your cloak and weapon) until they are applied for and approved by one of the crew members moderating that section of the forum at the links below. Until they are approved, please strike them from your character sheet or put a notice about them awaiting approval next to the section: Custom Weapons/ArmorCustom Talents
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Posted: Sat Feb 11, 2012 8:02 pm
VelvonVeden Strike-Through = Not Yet Approved    Krona Jones __________________________________________________ 【.main info.】 ❖ f u l l n a m e: Krona Jones
❖ n i c k n a m e s: KJ
❖ a g e: 24
❖ b i r t h d a t e: 3/26
❖ g e n d e r: Female
❖ n a t i o n a l i t y: The Citadel
❖ r a n k: Student
❖ c l a s s: Dark Avenger
❖ t i t l e:
❖ b l o o d l i n e: The Black Blood
❖ s p e e d: 5 (Bloodline)+2(Class) = 7
❖ s t r e n g t h: 5(Bloodline)+1(Class)=6
❖ p l a y e d b y: VelvonVeden __________________________________________________ 【.major info.】 ❖ e n e r g y c o l o r: Wine
❖ e n e r g y r e s e r v e: 300
❖ e l e m e n t: Air
❖ b a t t l e s t r e n g t h: A master of manipulation and stealth, an expert at the game of cat and mouse, able to lay traps, stalk targets with all the cunning of a master predator.
❖ b a t t l e w e a k n e s s: Because of her heavy reliance of shadows, she is vulnerable to holy and light magic. Often, she goes mad in battle, which clouds her judgment, her thinking, and causes her to attack without thought for technique and no discrimination between friend and foe. In this state, her defense lowers, and she is more susceptible to attacks.
❖ t a l e n t:
Combative Talent or Non Combative: Comative
Talent Name: Shadow Spawn
Description:
The main purpose of this talent is to create shadow where there is none.
Shadow-Gangers
Krona summons shadow-gangers: mindless, blind minions formed from the shadow, and infused with the element of their summoner, which, in this case, is air. Krona can command these creatures to attack mindlessly, or can dispel their shape and use their shadow for other attacks.
Attack Details
Attacks by shadow gangers cause minor damage that mostly affects speed. The gangers either hand-to-hand melee attack, or do a ranged attack in which they swing their arms like a sword and create blades of air that can slice through light armor, and skin. When destroyed, their shadow energy is tranferred to Krona, and she recieves a one point boost for each one in play for the stat of her choice for three posts.
Energy Costs
•5 cost in energy, with a maximum of three gangers at Rank E-Rank B, and Five at Rank A and above. At Rank SSS Krona can summon more than five, but with double the energy cost for each additional one (10 Energy). The Number of Gangers cannot exceed 10. Gangers summoned after 10 cost a ridiculous 100 energy.
•5 energy per post for as long as the gangers are in play, both in ganger and in shadow form
Rules
•Maximum of three gangers at Rank E-Rank B, and Five at Rank A and above. At Rank SSS Krona can summon more than five, but with double the energy cost for each additional one (10 Energy). The Number of Gangers cannot exceed 10. Gangers summoned after 10 cost a ridiculous 100 energy.
•Gangers can be dispelled with three strikes. In shadow form, they are bit harder to dispel: they can be dispelled instantly with an elemental attack, or with an light attack.
Shadow-Weres
Unlike Shadow-Gangers, shadow-Weres are strictly for attack purposes; they cannot be dispelled to create shadow. However, they can be used as a shield, forming a wall between Krona and her opponent. They are smarter than Shadow-Gangers, attacking with purpose and technique, or according to Krona's command, but they are still blind, and rely on other senses to fight.
Attack Detail
Shadow-Weres can either melee attack with claws that can slice though light to medium armor and skin, or range attack with a roar that creates air waves that cause no damage, but can disorient or knock down the opponent, depending on his or her strength. When destroyed, they created a shadow shield that lowers the rank of attacks by one rank. The sheild lasts for two posts.
Energy Cost
•Shadow-Weres are 10 energy in cost
•10 energy per post as long as they are in play, both in attack and defense mode
Rules
•Maximum of three Weres in play at Rank E-Rank B, and Five at Rank A and above. At Rank SSS Krona can summon more than five, but with double the energy cost for each additional one (20 Energy). The Number of Gangers cannot exceed 10. Weres summoned after 10 cost a ridiculous 200 energy.
•Weres can be dispelled with fewer strikers than a ganger, two, but since weres are more intelligent than gangers, hitting them is tricky. In defense form, they take the same amount of strikes to dispel: three.
__________________________________________________ 【.equipment info.】
❖ w e a p o n (s):
A double-tailed whip of the same color of her aura: Wine. Veins of white and Black weave from its "heart" at the base of the handle and dance along to the ends of the tails.
One lash is 7 feet long for a distance, attacks; the other is just three feet in length, can be used for strangulation. Because of its shadow-infused nature, the whip does not make the cracking sound of traditional whips; it is silent, other than the faint sound of rushing air that can only be detected by the most trained or sensitive of ears.
If she is directly confronted, or revealed, the lashes take opposite ends of the handle, then harden and thicken to form a double bladed staff, one end long for slashes and ?, the other sort or quick jabs, and cuts.
Weapon Skills - Just but they Evolve with Krona, rising in rank as she does.
Regenerate:
If the tails are sliced off or the blades are broken, they will regenerate in the next post, unless it is struck at the "heart" which is a black and white swirled spot at the base of the whip.
Air Stampede:
Krona sweeps the blade in a circle about her, or cracks the whip in an arc. A stream of pressurized air is created, that hurtles toward its opponent at blinding speeds. At close range it causes a rank higher damage, and a distance a rank lower. If the opponent is of equal or lesser level than Krona, it also knocks them down and disorients them for one post. If the opponent is of a higher level, it simply disorients them for one post.
❖ a r m o r:
Krona leather is composed primarily of light leather: thigh-high leather boots, a flowing leather skirt, and a red-leather corset. All are infused with shadows, and provide extra protection against light attacks.
Her primary piece of armor, however, is the cloak she wears. The cloak is made of a sturdy cloth, lined with leather. It provides excellent light protection reducing damage from light attacks by one rank. With a cost of a 7 energy she can manipulate this cloak to shield her from attacks. However, the cloak is fairly heavy, so unless she removes it for battle it reduces her speed by 2 points.
__________________________________________________ 【.skill roster.】
Dark Avenger Skills
Black Blood Skills
__________________________________________________ 【.character description.】 ❖ p e r s o n a l i t y: Fundamentally, Krona's goal is to protect the innocent, and deliver justice. But her goal has been twisted into an obsession by her natural insanity, and her ways of securing it are often twisted. She is kindness, hidden by darkness, and tainted by her steel-like determination and discipline, her lust for battle, and her extremely narrow-minded views on what is right, and what is wrong.
❖ q u o t e: "Is that not just?"
❖ h e i g h t: 5'11
❖ w e i g h t: 150
❖ e y e c o l o r: forest green normally; they turn deep wine when she fights.
❖ p l a c e o f b i r t h: unknown
❖ t h e m e s o n g: Genesis by Justice
❖ b a t t l e t h e m e: Confession - Red__________________________________________________ 【.background information.】
One would be shocked at the simple beginnings. She was not born into a childhood of abuse, or hardship, or bloodshed, as one would assume one of her class and race began. Krona was born into a life of near perfection. Her family...of merchants. They were not wealthy, but their business generated enough money to allow her parents, and her two siblings - an older sister, and her twin brother - to live a comfortable life, typical to those of her class. Her own was different, in that - rather than attend finishing school, as was expected of girls, she disguised herself as a boy (with the help of lies from her family, who did not hold the typical mindset toward females) and attended to local mercenary school. Her steel-hard determination and work ethic impressed her teachers and classmates, and she graduated the school at 15 top of her class.
At this time, hardship had fallen upon her family, so rather than join her family's mercenary business, she sought richer prospects with other mercenary companies. The biggest of the mercenary companies, who knew of and was impressed by, her nearly flawless school record, hired her as a low level trader. She excelled in this position, and she began moving up the ranks. And she rose she saw. Witnessed the corruption of the business she was in.
This was the root of her obsession with justice. Soon, she grew sick of witnessing he injustice, and, gathering other like-minded mercenaries, led a campaign against the company, both the lawful - delivering reports and information to officials - and lawless - burning down warehouses, or using manipulation and blackmail to expose the leaders of the company.
Her campaign was close to victory...and then betrayal caused it failure. Her own family, sold her out. She, and the others in her campaign, disappeared quietly.
As did her memories of the time.
She only recalls only snippets of living horror, a fragmented night mare of twisted experiments, blood, death, and above it all, a voice, tempting, promising her the power to get vengeance on her family, and bring justice not only to those who suffered beneath the oppression of the mercenaries, but to all who would harm the innocent.
Waking is her only distinct memory. Then:
A memory dark and she shadow she thrives on...
A chance?
No, another chance. The voice whispered.
Another chance. An opportunity t bring down the hammer of justice on the heads of the family that betrayed me in greed, the mercenaries that hurt others in greed, and on all others who would dare harm others for their own gain.
"Yes, I'll take it."
The voice chuckled, a high, scratchy sound that had me cringing. It's cackle grew louder upon seeings this - how it say, I do not know - and it said, in that low, velvety voice,
"Don't be so hesitant...your task is very simple. You don't even have to raise a finger to do it. You only have to sing."
That was all? I had expected something far more...dramatic. Perhaps slaughter a child or sacrifice the soul of an innocent.
....Sing? A task that was simple, and almost innocent sounding. Yet, there was something foreboding in the voice, a sort of sinister delight behind the words that told me that there was far more to the request than simply singing.
There had to be something more to it. It could not be that simple.
"...that is all? Are you sure? You don't want a sacrifice...or an offering?"
"You are willing to kill, but you are not willing to sing? You must have a twisted sense of morals..."
I continued to inisist, questioning, proding, hoping that the voice would reveal it's true intentions. But no matter my insistence, it would not tell me. There were many things it would not tell me. It's name, what it was, why it wanted to help me. When I asked it was silent, when I persisted it became annoyed.
So, I stopped asking, and just did.
I sang. Belted my voice till it filled the rounded chamber, till it echoed off the molded brick walls. Till I could feel the waves from my voice shudder though me...and seize me.
My words, pure, sweet, telling of ?, twisted into something unknown. Words in a language that I did not know, in a voice that was not my own, but dark, richer, baritone woven with something sinister, began to fall from my lips. I let loose a noise of surprise, and tried to close my mouth.
I could not. Panic, snaked up in me, as my voice continued of its own will, seperate from my body continuing on far beyond where lack of breath should have cut it silent.
And, each word began to bring destruction, and shadow. From my limbs, darkness began to roll. It spilled from my arms and finger tips, out from my chest, swirled from my legs. It gathered, a massive cloud that swirled about me smothering out every sense. No sight, no sound, no touch...only hearing.
And terrible things I did hear.
I heard screams. Twisted, keening shreiks, that pierced my ears, sent pain through them, making me wish i was also deaf. Screams of children, men, women.
I heard mighty crashes, the type that might come from a boulder crashing into the ground, only by the hundreds, mixing together into an orchestra of destruction.
I heard a wind, a high shattering whistle that rose above the screams the crashes, as though a storm were tearing through.
And above it all I heard my voice, baritone, sinister rising steadily through the notes, low to high, till it reached the highest, shattering, shaking note...
Then silence. Then darkness.
I woke to nothing. Literally, nothing.
I was lying in the middle of a barren wasteland. Gone was the chamber I had began the ritual in. Gone were fields of lush grass, and bright flowers I had jouneyed through; in their place was black ash, and hideous gray rock. Gone were the trees, lush and full; blacked stick corpses stood in their place. Gone were the sounds of life: the footsteps of tiny creatures, the gurgle of water running over rocks in a stream, the shouts of play and work from a village in the distance; a eclipsing silence reigned.
Death reigned.
And the scary thing was...I didn't care.
I wanted to care...but I simply didn't. I had what I wanted. I had the tools I needed to deliver justice.
__________________________________________________ Approved biggrin Welcome aboard!
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Posted: Sat Feb 11, 2012 9:44 pm
Ferregar The Female Shinobi Ferregar Please revise her backstory so there is no reference to interdimensional travel. We had a Portal open for some time that would allow for non-canon characters to enter play, but it's been closed in the interest of creating a roster of characters that are more invested in the world they live on. I hope this isn't a huge bother sweatdrop The entry is great, but you'll want to change it so that she has a Nationality that matches one of the current nations, Also, if she'll be the supplicant of a patron god (her lord as it were), please take your pick from the list of Gods and Goddesses of Rykros and indicate which she serves. smile That aside, looking good and ready for approval afterwords! Errr...I just looked at the gods/goddeses..and I see what you fully mean. I apologize. I will look more into it later tonight when I get home from work and revise, reedit etc. biggrin Thank you! And you are actually correct regarding the "hibernation" principle, so I apologize for misleading you there. I was thinking in a broader perspective of character application and wasn't looking into the bloodline's special rules. Do still center the backstory on her return based on the call of one of our canon Gods though smile It will make things much more interesting for you. WELL.....I just read this after I saw your msg..haha Perhaps..maybe the "God" or the one she looks at in my bio etc...can be in her mindset someone higher up then the cannon ones.. I mean she did say and reference on "Giving up" on this world..as in..its not the only one out there..or the only one shes been to etc. So..while on this planet..she could look to a god that could further her goals by bringing forth the "Light" etc. Gessh...idk about you..but I like my idea. haha Let me know what you think. ( We will continue in pm's? I know alot of people hate when things like this get filled with occ)
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Posted: Sat Feb 11, 2012 11:32 pm
The Female Shinobi Ferregar The Female Shinobi Ferregar Please revise her backstory so there is no reference to interdimensional travel. We had a Portal open for some time that would allow for non-canon characters to enter play, but it's been closed in the interest of creating a roster of characters that are more invested in the world they live on. I hope this isn't a huge bother sweatdrop The entry is great, but you'll want to change it so that she has a Nationality that matches one of the current nations, Also, if she'll be the supplicant of a patron god (her lord as it were), please take your pick from the list of Gods and Goddesses of Rykros and indicate which she serves. smile That aside, looking good and ready for approval afterwords! Errr...I just looked at the gods/goddeses..and I see what you fully mean. I apologize. I will look more into it later tonight when I get home from work and revise, reedit etc. biggrin Thank you! And you are actually correct regarding the "hibernation" principle, so I apologize for misleading you there. I was thinking in a broader perspective of character application and wasn't looking into the bloodline's special rules. Do still center the backstory on her return based on the call of one of our canon Gods though smile It will make things much more interesting for you. WELL.....I just read this after I saw your msg..haha Perhaps..maybe the "God" or the one she looks at in my bio etc...can be in her mindset someone higher up then the cannon ones.. I mean she did say and reference on "Giving up" on this world..as in..its not the only one out there..or the only one shes been to etc. So..while on this planet..she could look to a god that could further her goals by bringing forth the "Light" etc. Gessh...idk about you..but I like my idea. haha Let me know what you think. ( We will continue in pm's? I know alot of people hate when things like this get filled with occ) If you intend to further pursue her quest of light, she must follow a deity of Rykros. As it stands there are none greater.
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Posted: Wed Feb 15, 2012 8:15 pm
***** EDITED/REVISED, etc.***** Cordelia __________________________________________________
【.Main Information.】
❖ F u l l n a m e: Seraphiel, "Angel of Silence"
❖ N i c k n a m e s: Cordelia
❖ A g e: Unknown
❖ B i r t h d a t e: Came out of Hibernation-Now
❖ G e n d e r: Female
❖ N a t i o n a l i t y: Devil's Eye Desert
❖ R a n k: Student
❖ C l a s s: Warrior
❖ T i t l e: Citizen? ( No idea)
❖ B l o o d l i n e: The Fallen
❖ S p e e d: 8
❖ S t r e n g t h: 8
❖ P l a y e d b y: The Female Shinobi
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【.Major Information.】
❖ E n e r g y c o l o r: White/Yellow-gold
❖ E n e r g y r e s e r v e: 300
❖ E l e m e n t: (I have NO idea yet!! crying Im to picky )
❖ B a t t l e s t r e n g t h: -Ability to fly -Incredible Strength&Speed -Holy powers -Sense peoples energies
❖ B a t t l e w e a k n e s s: -Easily noticeable/Stands out -Has peculiar scent to there wings. -Easily angered/Baited -Lost of loved one, loss of heart. (If there spouse/lover dies) Little bit I decided to add.
❖ T a l e n t: N/A yet
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【.Equipment Information.】
❖ W e a p o n (s): N/A Yet
❖ A r m o r: N/A Yet
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【.Skill roster.】
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【.Character description.】
❖ P e r s o n a l i t y: Serious/Willful
❖ Q u o t e: The world is a stage, and the men and women merely players.
❖ H e i g h t: 7' 2
❖ W e i g h t: 280-300?
❖ E y e c o l o r: Sky Blue
❖ P l a c e o f b i r t h: No idea; was not "Technically" born, merely came out hibernation, into the area now known as the Devil's Eye Desert.
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【.Background Information.】 Her body stirs within the endless space that her goddess enclosed her in...a hibernation she was put in for her own protection. Protection from those who call forth evil to devastate the lands, the evil that lay at the takers hands. Protection she was born for..raised for..to protect the good, to protect the light that shall see through the dark..put into the space only few know about..only none care to talk about.
"Arise Seraphiel...the time you are needed has come forth..arise..you must awaken..... my sister." the stern but sweet voice plead.
Any other and the fallen would not have stirred..would have preferred to stay dormant..to not serve..to not be needed..but..this was the one being..the one entity that needed her, for the time she was put into hibernation..into another dimension..she was to be awoken.
Memories...memories from a long long time ago arose..and the fallen began to move, her brain regaining what was lost.
-Many ages ago: "Please, please my lady! We must get you ready!" Cordelia pleased, running through Seraphiel's room like a mad banshee. Grabbing the angel's ceremonial garbs, her hairbrushes..makeup and other utensils that would be needed..the handmaiden scurried over to the 7 foot, 2 inch angel, who sprawled out on her canopy bed..eating whatever fruit was brought to her earlier that morning. She stared at the maid with an amused gaze, finally after what seemed like eternity she tilted her head back and let out a rich hearty laugh. "You know...have you not been my maid sense my birth , I would not let someone so low speak to me as you are now.." she said slowly, licking the juice off of each finger. The maid threw the stuff down on the chest at the foot of the bed, and turned a shade of red that the sun would have envied. "Have we not been friends , I would refrain from saying, that if you dont get up, I will kick your angelic behind, and drag you to the celebration bare a**. Now lets go..her grace is waiting to bestow you your honor!" Letting out a chuckle, Seraphiel sat up from her leaning position, and scooted foreword enough to place her feet on the cold floor, hissing as if it discomforted her. Cordelia only rolled her eyes, and took the amazon angel's movements at a sign of her willing to move. They knew one another all to well...
Little Time passes before shes ready..
"Pital will be most upset if I dont show up, she made that blatantly obvious from the last time we met..come now Cordelia..we must be going, you dont want to keep them waiting." she said as she sauntered out with her long flowing light pink silks, the color of her light clothing going nicely with her parlor white skin, and bright blond hair. "I..oh..you!" Cordelia huffed as she was clearly being mimicked.
Being called the "Ceremony" would have you think of somthing of a party..where many gather to celebrate, to behold this joyous occasion...but no, only the goddess Pital stood at attention atop of her platform of ceremony , wearing a gown of the finest threads and colors..Seraphiel tried hard not to be envious of the beautiful women..but that was like telling a fish not to swim, making eye contact, Seraphiel winked and the goddess only nodded back..trying to keep a sly smile off of her face. Besides her was the cleric who would unify the two, so she had to remain serious and stern..he was clearly a grumpy man. Behind Seraphiel, Cordelia cleared her throat to get the angel's attention back on task. This day...would be one of the best Id ever had..had it not been ruined.
Fibers connecting, fingers twitching..neck moving, arms, legs starting to move...all signs of the angel coming forth from her slumber. "There you go...your almost here." the voice said softly, tempting the angel to wake.
As the Cleric spoke the words that would bind Seraphiel to the goddesses service as an arms-women, a loud "Thwak" could be heard, before the deafening blast engorged the room ..thrown down to the ground..it took moments before Seraphiel came to..wings strewn over her, she smelled burning fabric mixed with hair before she realized it was coming from her. Head ringing she snapped to...an attack..an attack to have the bonding broken..getting her wings before her, she stood up and looked around the room...Cordelia..her longest known friend, one she counted as high as a sister..lay dead on the floor..her eyes staring up into nothing. Howling as bestial as any mother would her young howled through the corridors...picking up a piece of wall, she turned twords the blast..clouds of soot and smoke stained the way..open to attack she was, but she no longer cared..her friend had died in a mindless attack..one that did not have to happen had she just stayed home. "Protect your goddess" Cordelia's voice said in the back of Seraphiel's mind. Ashamed, she forgot about Pital...turning her head, she saw the beautiful women with concern etched onto her face, as well as malevolent fury...but sadness of all as she met the angel's gaze. Quickly the two came together..but before Seraphiel could speak..the goddess beat her to it. Grabbing her shoulders she spoke..words the young angel would never forget. "This is not your fight young one, grow strong in mind as well as heart..protect the ones you hold dear, as well as the ones who wish good upon this world. You will do it..I believe in you..goodby my Seraphiel, you are now one of the fallen." and with that, the goddess laid a gentle kiss on the angels brow...causing the young angels eyes to roll back into her head and fall asleep until she was awoken.
"Awaken...Awaken Seraphiel...your time is now, you are needed my sister. Cordelia's voice shouted. Was it her sister? Or was it her subconscious?
Eyes opening, heart thudding, body extended from enclosed position...wings opening to give an open span. "I hear you my sister! I have awaken!" She shouted into the deep space, being brought from her dimension to the world below..to be used as she was born and raised to do.
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Posted: Thu Feb 16, 2012 11:57 am
The Female Shinobi ***** EDITED/REVISED, etc.***** Cordelia __________________________________________________
【.Main Information.】
❖ F u l l n a m e: Seraphiel, "Angel of Silence"
❖ N i c k n a m e s: Cordelia
❖ A g e: Unknown
❖ B i r t h d a t e: Came out of Hibernation-Now
❖ G e n d e r: Female
❖ N a t i o n a l i t y: Devil's Eye Desert
❖ R a n k: Student
❖ C l a s s: Warrior
❖ T i t l e: Citizen? ( No idea)
❖ B l o o d l i n e: The Fallen
❖ S p e e d: 8
❖ S t r e n g t h: 8
❖ P l a y e d b y: The Female Shinobi
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【.Major Information.】
❖ E n e r g y c o l o r: White/Yellow-gold
❖ E n e r g y r e s e r v e: 300
❖ E l e m e n t: (I have NO idea yet!! crying Im to picky )
❖ B a t t l e s t r e n g t h: -Ability to fly -Incredible Strength&Speed -Holy powers -Sense peoples energies
❖ B a t t l e w e a k n e s s: -Easily noticeable/Stands out -Has peculiar scent to there wings. -Easily angered/Baited -Lost of loved one, loss of heart. (If there spouse/lover dies) Little bit I decided to add.
❖ T a l e n t: N/A yet
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【.Equipment Information.】
❖ W e a p o n (s): N/A Yet
❖ A r m o r: N/A Yet
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【.Skill roster.】
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【.Character description.】
❖ P e r s o n a l i t y: Serious/Willful
❖ Q u o t e: The world is a stage, and the men and women merely players.
❖ H e i g h t: 7' 2
❖ W e i g h t: 280-300?
❖ E y e c o l o r: Sky Blue
❖ P l a c e o f b i r t h: No idea; was not "Technically" born, merely came out hibernation, into the area now known as the Devil's Eye Desert.
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【.Background Information.】 Her body stirs within the endless space that her goddess enclosed her in...a hibernation she was put in for her own protection. Protection from those who call forth evil to devastate the lands, the evil that lay at the takers hands. Protection she was born for..raised for..to protect the good, to protect the light that shall see through the dark..put into the space only few know about..only none care to talk about.
"Arise Seraphiel...the time you are needed has come forth..arise..you must awaken..... my sister." the stern but sweet voice plead.
Any other and the fallen would not have stirred..would have preferred to stay dormant..to not serve..to not be needed..but..this was the one being..the one entity that needed her, for the time she was put into hibernation..into another dimension..she was to be awoken.
Memories...memories from a long long time ago arose..and the fallen began to move, her brain regaining what was lost.
-Many ages ago: "Please, please my lady! We must get you ready!" Cordelia pleased, running through Seraphiel's room like a mad banshee. Grabbing the angel's ceremonial garbs, her hairbrushes..makeup and other utensils that would be needed..the handmaiden scurried over to the 7 foot, 2 inch angel, who sprawled out on her canopy bed..eating whatever fruit was brought to her earlier that morning. She stared at the maid with an amused gaze, finally after what seemed like eternity she tilted her head back and let out a rich hearty laugh. "You know...have you not been my maid sense my birth , I would not let someone so low speak to me as you are now.." she said slowly, licking the juice off of each finger. The maid threw the stuff down on the chest at the foot of the bed, and turned a shade of red that the sun would have envied. "Have we not been friends , I would refrain from saying, that if you dont get up, I will kick your angelic behind, and drag you to the celebration bare a**. Now lets go..her grace is waiting to bestow you your honor!" Letting out a chuckle, Seraphiel sat up from her leaning position, and scooted foreword enough to place her feet on the cold floor, hissing as if it discomforted her. Cordelia only rolled her eyes, and took the amazon angel's movements at a sign of her willing to move. They knew one another all to well...
Little Time passes before shes ready..
"Pital will be most upset if I dont show up, she made that blatantly obvious from the last time we met..come now Cordelia..we must be going, you dont want to keep them waiting." she said as she sauntered out with her long flowing light pink silks, the color of her light clothing going nicely with her parlor white skin, and bright blond hair. "I..oh..you!" Cordelia huffed as she was clearly being mimicked.
Being called the "Ceremony" would have you think of somthing of a party..where many gather to celebrate, to behold this joyous occasion...but no, only the goddess Pital stood at attention atop of her platform of ceremony , wearing a gown of the finest threads and colors..Seraphiel tried hard not to be envious of the beautiful women..but that was like telling a fish not to swim, making eye contact, Seraphiel winked and the goddess only nodded back..trying to keep a sly smile off of her face. Besides her was the cleric who would unify the two, so she had to remain serious and stern..he was clearly a grumpy man. Behind Seraphiel, Cordelia cleared her throat to get the angel's attention back on task. This day...would be one of the best Id ever had..had it not been ruined.
Fibers connecting, fingers twitching..neck moving, arms, legs starting to move...all signs of the angel coming forth from her slumber. "There you go...your almost here." the voice said softly, tempting the angel to wake.
As the Cleric spoke the words that would bind Seraphiel to the goddesses service as an arms-women, a loud "Thwak" could be heard, before the deafening blast engorged the room ..thrown down to the ground..it took moments before Seraphiel came to..wings strewn over her, she smelled burning fabric mixed with hair before she realized it was coming from her. Head ringing she snapped to...an attack..an attack to have the bonding broken..getting her wings before her, she stood up and looked around the room...Cordelia..her longest known friend, one she counted as high as a sister..lay dead on the floor..her eyes staring up into nothing. Howling as bestial as any mother would her young howled through the corridors...picking up a piece of wall, she turned twords the blast..clouds of soot and smoke stained the way..open to attack she was, but she no longer cared..her friend had died in a mindless attack..one that did not have to happen had she just stayed home. "Protect your goddess" Cordelia's voice said in the back of Seraphiel's mind. Ashamed, she forgot about Pital...turning her head, she saw the beautiful women with concern etched onto her face, as well as malevolent fury...but sadness of all as she met the angel's gaze. Quickly the two came together..but before Seraphiel could speak..the goddess beat her to it. Grabbing her shoulders she spoke..words the young angel would never forget. "This is not your fight young one, grow strong in mind as well as heart..protect the ones you hold dear, as well as the ones who wish good upon this world. You will do it..I believe in you..goodby my Seraphiel, you are now one of the fallen." and with that, the goddess laid a gentle kiss on the angels brow...causing the young angels eyes to roll back into her head and fall asleep until she was awoken.
"Awaken...Awaken Seraphiel...your time is now, you are needed my sister. Cordelia's voice shouted. Was it her sister? Or was it her subconscious?
Eyes opening, heart thudding, body extended from enclosed position...wings opening to give an open span. "I hear you my sister! I have awaken!" She shouted into the deep space, being brought from her dimension to the world below..to be used as she was born and raised to do.
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 Approved! I apologize for the wait. Now get in there!
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Posted: Thu Feb 16, 2012 12:55 pm
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Posted: Sun Feb 19, 2012 6:02 pm
 DominicXCzar ! __________________________________________________
【.main info.】
❖ f u l l n a m e: Dominic Czar ❖ n i c k n a m e s: Dom ❖ a g e: Unknown ❖ b i r t h d a t e: July23rd ❖ g e n d e r: Male. ❖ n a t i o n a l i t y: Devil'seye ❖ r a n k: Student ❖ c l a s s: Warrior ❖ t i t l e: Citizen ❖ b l o o d l i n e: Vampire ❖ s p e e d: 9 ❖ s t r e n g t h: 9 ❖ p l a y e d b y: The Lord Ookami __________________________________________________
【.major info.】
❖ e n e r g y c o l o r: Crimson ❖ e n e r g y r e s e r v e: 400 ❖ e l e m e n t: Fire ❖ b a t t l e s t r e n g t h: Close Range combat, Inhuman strength and speed ❖ b a t t l e w e a k n e s s: Water, not feeding, sliver ❖ t a l e n t: __________________________________________________
【.equipment info.】
❖ w e a p o n (s): Broadsword ❖ a r m o r:
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【.skill roster.】
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【.character description.】
❖ p e r s o n a l i t y:
❖ q u o t e: "This may sting just a bit..." ❖ h e i g h t: 6'3 ❖ w e i g h t: 210 ❖ e y e c o l o r: Crimson ❖ p l a c e o f b i r t h: Cidatel ❖ t h e m e s o n g:
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【.background information.】 Dominic was born and raised out the Village of Helsreach, he was always a small boy kept to his self and caused no trouble. His family was owners of a small jewel mine outside helsreach making them a some what rich family. Though years of growing up around the village and the cidetal he had felt a protection around him and his family, his childhood and his teenage years by quite quickly and with out much interest. All this has gone on intil his 21st birthday, the day that has never faded from his mind, The day of his turning. It happened while everyone was gathered around in his home celebrating this day, his to be wife, Rachel, and the rest his family were present. Domainic of course had gotten bored with his life, rich and over looking the new found shappire mine that had been opened by his family... All the happy boring living started to change. An uninvited guest entered the home making quite a scene to everyone as he enter... All that he can really describe is that things went to hell once his father touched the man, next thing he knew his fathers head flew on to the table as the guest drank the blood from his fathers now decapitated body. Things came in images after that, his family getting ripped apart, him getting bit and his body almost destroyed .... Though it out the Guest left with Rachel and leaving him to die... or what he thought... Hours pass as he comes back to life.. drinking his families blood he regains his strength. He didn't know what the hell was going do beside one thing ..... years had passed and he never aged..The Cidetal was just a small city at this time... After years of searching he found Rachel. To his surpise she was turned as well... only that the man who had changed him changed as well... Dom was happy just to find her seeing she was alive... But like the rest it went to hell... weeks had pasted and the vampire that had turned them returned. Dominic went to confront him and only to lead to him almost dying and his Rachel dying in his arms.... Centuries have pasted since then and he has turned harder and colder, hating what he is... He only keeps living to find that b*****d and destroy him... his travels toke him ti the Devil's Eye, living underground kepted him out of light
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Posted: Sun Feb 19, 2012 7:23 pm
One ruler character unless done in RP, Wulf, you know that. So please pick a nation before you can be approved or denied.
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