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xo maho

Dainty Dreamer

PostPosted: Fri Feb 25, 2011 6:27 am


Libra15
For my prompt, may I have it so Niall is a young colt? It will help go along much better with the history I have typed up for him.

And also do I just have to use breeds for the shop or can I simply use somthing like a panther in the prompt as well?


Yup, that's all fine =)
PostPosted: Mon Feb 28, 2011 6:13 pm


A Queen of Hearts


Name: Caryiln Naia
Temper: Loving
Personality: Caryiln Naia is sweet, albeit a little forward and somewhat brutally honest. She's brave in the face of just about everything, except for when it comes to matters of the heart. When it comes to love, Caryilin is shy and backward, her lips closed on to any words that would show one how she feels.
History: Before she stumbled upon the Kawani lands, Caryiln lived in a small herd that was comprised of mostly family. Like many a young foal, Caryiln wove exaggerated tales that came from her imagination to her parents. Worried that their daughter would continue this "lying" habit into adulthood, both parents impressed upon her the need to tell the truth, regardless of if it hurt.
As she grew, Caryiln became enraptured with a stallion from another herd. Caryiln spent as much time trying to catch the eye of her would be mate, and succeeded in gaining his attentions. The stallion was egotistical and arrogant, though only to hide his low self esteem. As the two lovers sat one dusk, watching the sun dip below the mountains, he asked Caryiln what she thought of him. Her thoughts immediately turned to how she made him feel, and how she wanted to spend all her life with him, but the lessons her parents had taught her entered into her mind, and so she told him that she thought he was somewhat egotistical and arrogant, and at times overbearing, but that she loved him even with those qualities. Her lover did not hear the words after, the ones where she spoke of his kindness for those in need, or how he was so gentle when he delt with the foals in his herd and became enraged, focusing on the things that cut at his low self esteem and his his inadequacies. He struck out at her with his hooves and slung hideous insults and untruths at her, driving her from her home. Caryiln did not see that the fault lay with the stallion, as he heard only the negative and not the warm words of love she spoke to him. She vowed then that she would never enter into another matter where her heart would be at risk of being broken. She left her homelands with her head hung low in shame and sorrow.
Prompt and Response:
Prompt 2
Passing through a set of woods that are rumored to be haunted, Caryiln hears a rustling in the bushes. When she tries to move away the noises follow behind and to either side. Is it those who haunt the woods or something else? What should she do?


There they were. Those noises. Again. She thought at first that the rustling that accompanied her walk was just the frolicking of animals along her way, but it was too measured, and stuck too close to her. Her heart began to beat faster, partially with fear and partially with excitement. Perhaps it was her lover coming after her, to tell her how sorry he was. She hoped desperately that it was him.

She stopped, turning around to look for any signs that might give away the one who was following her. There were supposedly spirits in these woods, but she was unafraid of them, if there were any. Spirits were only spirits, and they could not harm those of the living.

Caryiln started moving once again, smiling as she heard the rustling in the brush once more. Whoever it was following was going to get a surprise. She smiled to herself as she turned abruptly and delved into the brambles and briers. She came nose to nose with her stalkers, her mouth agape in shock. The noises were made by the two most adorable creatures she had ever seen. One was brown and the other was black, and though they stood bravely, their eyes betrayed how scared they were. She laughed, "Don't be afraid, Little Ones, no one is going to hurt you."

Foals. Her stalkers were two small, scraggly looking foals. She shook her head. "Where's your mother at?"

Confused eyes stared up at her, as one looked to the other and then back at their large red inquisitor.

"What about your father?"

Again she was met with confused stares.

Her heart suddenly went out to the small creatures. They must have been abandoned. Who would do such a thing? Caryiln shook her head and started herding the small bundles of legs and ears out into the open. "Let's get you something to eat, dear ones..."


How many soq do you own? 1
If you could add/change one item in the general co-owner terms I’ve listed, what would it be? Why? I'm ok with everything as is.

sunchaser9000

Toothsome Shapeshifter

10,650 Points
  • Profitable 100
  • Tycoon 200
  • Elocutionist 200

Zolis

Dapper Streaker

PostPosted: Tue Mar 01, 2011 12:53 pm


The Ladies' Man


Name: Niall
Temper: Straight-forward
Co-owner: Zolis
Personality: Hes Not afraid to say anything even if it hurts the other person. Some Think hes a jerk but in reality he would rather jsut not lie to others, he wouldn't want to be lied to so why would anyone else?
History: Niall was lied to as a foal, his mother lieing about his father, and trlling him that everythnig was peach keen when it wasn't. So when he grew up he made a promise to himself that he wouldn't like to others, simply tell tehm the complete truth no matter what.
Prompt and Response: "2"

Niall wandered about the land, his head hung low and his hooved dragging on the dirt. He was rather bored and needed some entertainment. He saw a mare off in the distance standing by a large tree. She was adorned with all types of jewels. Stopping for a moement she smiled at him.
"Hello Niall" She said and he cocked an eyebrow.
"You know my name?"
"Course I do" She said and stepped towards him, her many adornments gleeming in the sun. "I can read your thoughts Niall, i can see everything" At that be almost laughed.
"Well thats nice, are you sure your not just picking up Esp with all the metal?" he asked and she narrowed her eyes. "It's not nice to look into people's minds, didn't your mother ever tell you that?" He asked and laughed slightly. Niall couldtell she was getting mad but he didn't care, she was being rude and rather creepy.
"Niall you will not disrespect me!" She said and her tail flicked "You cannot lie" She said and he nodded.
"Yeah and you can't read my mind? Whats more obious?" he asked and she trumped away. He laughed softly and shook his head. "Some Mares just can't take reality"
PostPosted: Tue Mar 01, 2011 10:50 pm


>.> Everyone is allowed to enter both contests, if you want. heart

magnadearel


lilmissy4205
Vice Captain

Lonely Browser

PostPosted: Sun Mar 06, 2011 10:50 pm


Let me know if this is being extended and I'll announce it.
PostPosted: Sun Mar 06, 2011 10:51 pm


Thanks Eve. ^_^ I think we are going to. Waiting for a reply from Mahogany as to maybe how long we'll extend it. heart

magnadearel


magnadearel

PostPosted: Wed Mar 09, 2011 11:44 am


My contest has been extended to the 19th! Mahogany is also extending hers, but I haven't heard back on a date.

You may enter if you have 1 or less soq! Co-owning counts as half. Please please help us by referring newbies! heart Thank you.
PostPosted: Wed Mar 09, 2011 8:49 pm


Niall's contest is extended to March 20th! If you have any questions, feel free to shoot me a PM~

xo maho

Dainty Dreamer


Lord_Lillith

Feline Fairy

12,250 Points
  • Perfect Attendance 400
  • Marathon 300
  • Streaker 200
PostPosted: Sat Mar 12, 2011 1:54 am


I just wanted to say, thank you for the chance, I'm a newb to soq, and if what I wrote isn't what you expected, or just not good enough; I will take pointers, and go from there, i will show you rps i was in. I'm not saying this to win, I just love the male so much, niall <3 And would do anything that i was told. I'm pretty flexible with characters, and am a fan of rp's.

Sorry, I just wanted to say this, and I understand not picking me, i will respect that and have no hard feelings.

<3~~~
PostPosted: Sat Mar 12, 2011 8:54 pm


Now that LL has brought it up, if anyone wants feedback on their entries, I'm completely open to giving it; feedback will mostly be about technicalities and such - not about what I want to see from you guys. What you come up with for personalities, histories, etc. are your own ideas, and originality is encouraged immeasurably heart This is a newbie contest, and in my eyes, it's not just about getting a co-owner; it's about introducing you guys to the world of soq, hopefully more than you are already, and improving the skills you have wink

Also, remember that you can write out your own prompts, if you feel something else might be better than what has been provided. I'm thinking about adding more or changing them because in both of them, you have to control what someone else is saying... Feel free to edit your entries at any time 3nodding

xo maho

Dainty Dreamer


Zolis

Dapper Streaker

PostPosted: Tue Mar 15, 2011 2:13 pm


I would like feeback of mine if you don't mind ^^
PostPosted: Wed Mar 16, 2011 12:16 am


Just a reminder my contest is still going for 4 more days and Mahogany's is 5 days. Get those newbies in!

magnadearel


xo maho

Dainty Dreamer

PostPosted: Sun Mar 20, 2011 12:26 pm


Come on, newbies, five and a half hours left!
PostPosted: Sun Mar 20, 2011 12:33 pm


Thank you both for entering for Caryiln.

I have chosen to go with Sunchaser as my co-owner. ^_^
Congrats! Please pm me which breeding you would like your basket from.

magnadearel

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