|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
 Posted: Mon Aug 31, 2009 12:03 pm
I am fully back & ready! smile
|
 |
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
Posted: Mon Aug 31, 2009 5:17 pm
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
Posted: Mon Aug 31, 2009 5:25 pm
Good! So what do we do? Where do we pick up from? Should we start up some time in the future? Should we try an' finish that Holy Knight thing we were goin' for? What about the Dark Knights? Should someone else take them over while Tokushi's away, maybe like a second in command person? After all the structural stuff's taken care of, what do we do about the story?
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
Posted: Tue Sep 01, 2009 10:20 am
For Holy Knights: Neo
For Dawn Striders: Neciel
For Dark Knights: Reya while Tokushi is away? She is the only First Ranked Dark Knight...
For Red Guard: Jin? Is he still around? If not, I can sort of take over with Shiroka although she is young...
With the decreasing number of players we should have an event in which every one from any faction so that there is enough activity to have it entertaining.
Here is an idea. If anyone has other thoughts...
---------------
"A rumor grew, a shadow from both the deepest chasm and the highest heavens.
It refused to swear allegiance to the Dark Lord Tokushi despite its obvious dark nature.
Its lack of respect and honesty denied it the entrance to the Dawn Striders faction.
Its own nature prohibited it from being part of the Holy Knights.
Its unsteadiness was a threat for the Red Guard's mission.
It was born in the Cliff of Suicide, feeding on the despair of lost souls. It grew and took conscious of its own existence. It broke free and took shape in the bodies of two twins. Two innocent children who hand in hand jumped across the Cliffs. As life was about to leave them, something entered their souls.
Knights of any faction who have crossed their path have been tortured and killed or left as empty shells, their souls taken away from them. Each soul the twins take makes them stronger.
The four Leaders of the factions have quickly understood that because they fed on souls from any faction, they acquired the powers of all factions combined. If they had been only one entity, they could just have worked together and destroy it in a flash, but they are two of them. Therefore the Leaders all called for a unique meeting with all the knights of their own factions.
To be vanquished, the twins need to be separated and destroyed by two teams made of members of different factions.
This is the first time that all the factions have to work together to defend freedom for the Striders, life for the Holy Knights, power for the Dark Knights and balance for the Red Guard.
Will the Knights be able to cooperate and destroy the threat?"
---------------------------
So what do you all think?
Would that be interesting? Nah, yop, maybe, who knows...
Changes? Ideas?...
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
Posted: Tue Sep 01, 2009 10:27 am
I find this piece to be quite brilliant. Good job. ^_^
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
Posted: Tue Sep 01, 2009 10:31 am
Thanks. redface
I think the most difficult part is to create a threat which cannot be killed quickly by the Leaders, after all they are Legendary Beings.
I am still trying to find other reasons or abilities of the twins which could explain why the Leaders are not sufficient to get rid of the twins... smile
Any ideas?
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
Posted: Tue Sep 01, 2009 11:09 am
Actually it wouldn't be that hard to make a threat that needed more than captains to be destroyed. You've already made it known that these are beings of darkness, though the remain quite unique in their darkness. Perhaps they are more than hat. Perhaps they represent complete chaos in a rather ordered world. This could become the key to their power. By representing no one faction the powers they posses can be virtually limitless, from forcing a state of euphoria that makes people not want to do anything to forcing them into a rage that blinds them from seeing who their allies are, so on and so forth. Thanks to the nature of their creation it could be a given that their power is as strong as the emotions an feelings that created them. The leaders could just not be sufficient enough because of their own inner conflicts and flaws, Neciel with her anger issues, Tokushi with his power lust, Neo with his holy knight superiority, if not Tokushi then Reya with her corrupted soul conflicting with its once pure nature that still wants to be free from the taint that lives inside her, and I don't know enough about Jin but I'll call the Red Guard...Elitist.
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
Posted: Tue Sep 01, 2009 11:14 am
But I couldn't really get involved with this till after the wedding arc was done.
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
Posted: Tue Sep 01, 2009 11:21 am
Thanks.
I like that idea. They are unstable, chaotic. That's the key. Great!
They represent nothing and everything at the same time. They are both the void and the all which unable the leaders to fight them alone are they are only a part of the whole.
What do you mean by 'wedding arc'? Sorry I've been away for a while.
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
Posted: Tue Sep 01, 2009 1:27 pm
That was amazing. I love it. That's gonna be the first thing that's gonan happen. All other arcs need to finish.
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
Posted: Tue Sep 01, 2009 2:35 pm
Thanks.
I dont know for the other factions but for the Holy Knights we can say that:
"The Holy City was not in danger any more, something deeper seemed to be happening. Even the Dark Knights and demons usually patrolling around the Holy Barrier seemed to have vanished. The Holy Knights scattered all around the place felt like they were being called. They all headed towards the Holy Ground."
I think that all the factions should have a 'meeting' within their ground and then we shall all meet at the Cliffs of Suicide as this is where it all started.
While every faction is having their own private meetings, this enables current arcs to be wrapped up.
Where should the Holy Knight meet? How about the Shimmering Coast? It looks like a great place for a meeting of reflection and dark times. It would bring peace in the minds while giving courage to the warriors.
What do ya think?
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
Posted: Tue Sep 01, 2009 2:46 pm
The wedding arc is where Jon and Mori are getting married and stuff...
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
Posted: Tue Sep 01, 2009 4:21 pm
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
Posted: Tue Sep 01, 2009 4:48 pm
Just waiting on Eva and CBK.
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
Krombopulos Michael Captain
|
Posted: Wed Sep 02, 2009 9:18 am
No need to worry, all.
Your great and wonderful Overlord and Master has returned!
By gracing you all with my presence, I am promoting the plot thought up by Zulma, as well as demanding that the wedding arc be under way.
Like, really soon.
After the wedding arc, we could do a two or three year skip wherein we can explain absences, and Eva can even get her twins set up. They'd be babies still, but they'd be there.
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
Reply
