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puppylove713 Vice Captain
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 Posted: Wed Jan 04, 2017 6:00 pm
Well, I finally finished off the prologue of the new rewritten version of my old Yu Yu Hakusho fanfiction String of Destiny. It only took me a few years to get my thoughts together and manage time to write it, but it is done. I'm now looking for some opinions on it. Basically do you like it overall. And if you remember the older version how is this one in comparison? Who better to ask than people I know have read the old version? Anyway, here is the link to the fiction.Also, if you have any suggestions for a title please tell me. I'm having a rough time figuring one out. Just a heads up, this is a very long chapter and all of the following ones probably will be too.
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Posted: Wed Jan 04, 2017 6:04 pm
Please look at the first post as to why I have quoted you with this.
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puppylove713 Vice Captain
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Posted: Mon Jan 09, 2017 7:23 pm
It's cool to see it up and running again.
However my sense of naming seriously stinks I'm afraid.
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Posted: Mon Jan 09, 2017 7:39 pm
ChaosKnights It's cool to see it up and running again. However my sense of naming seriously stinks I'm afraid.
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puppylove713 Vice Captain
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Posted: Tue Jan 10, 2017 11:33 pm
puppylove713 It can't be any worse than mine... Maybe something will come to me in time. What did you think of it so far? As usual your writing ability is superb as your method of wording is both tasteful and creative. The story in itself is good in setting up the base for Miyako's story. Though I've never been much for long prologues. But otherwise this has great promise.
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Posted: Wed Jan 11, 2017 8:37 am
ChaosKnights puppylove713 It can't be any worse than mine... Maybe something will come to me in time. What did you think of it so far? As usual your writing ability is superb as your method of wording is both tasteful and creative. The story in itself is good in setting up the base for Miyako's story. Though I've never been much for long prologues. But otherwise this has great promise.
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puppylove713 Vice Captain
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Posted: Fri Jan 13, 2017 12:49 am
puppylove713 To each their own. I kind of felt it would be good to at least give some information on the character at hand. Whereas in my last attempt, there wasn't enough detail on anything in the story. I feel like this will be a lot better. That creative writing class I took about a year ago helped out a lot. So where do you plan to take it from here?
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Posted: Tue Jan 17, 2017 6:36 pm
ChaosKnights puppylove713 To each their own. I kind of felt it would be good to at least give some information on the character at hand. Whereas in my last attempt, there wasn't enough detail on anything in the story. I feel like this will be a lot better. That creative writing class I took about a year ago helped out a lot. So where do you plan to take it from here?
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puppylove713 Vice Captain
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Posted: Sun Jan 22, 2017 11:54 am
puppylove713 I'm not totally sure. I'm still working on planning it out as well as another one I"m working on presently. I have a total of 27 stories that I have in the planning stage, have started but never finished, or have completed but need to be rewritten because they are terrible. I'm working on two at a time and as luck would have it, I'm working on the one you wanted to read for some time and one that my other friend wants to read. You two lucked out. As you can see I like writing stories. That's cool. But don't stress yourself out.
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Posted: Sun Jan 22, 2017 3:30 pm
ChaosKnights puppylove713 I'm not totally sure. I'm still working on planning it out as well as another one I"m working on presently. I have a total of 27 stories that I have in the planning stage, have started but never finished, or have completed but need to be rewritten because they are terrible. I'm working on two at a time and as luck would have it, I'm working on the one you wanted to read for some time and one that my other friend wants to read. You two lucked out. As you can see I like writing stories. That's cool. But don't stress yourself out.
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puppylove713 Vice Captain
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Posted: Mon Jan 23, 2017 12:05 am
puppylove713 I won't. I only write on them when I feel like doing so. I don't force myself to write. cool.
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Posted: Wed Jan 25, 2017 3:03 pm
ChaosKnights puppylove713 I won't. I only write on them when I feel like doing so. I don't force myself to write. cool.
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puppylove713 Vice Captain
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Posted: Wed Jan 25, 2017 7:51 pm
puppylove713 Which means you could be waiting a while for the next chapter of the Yu Yu Hakusho one... I'm currently working on the first chapter of the other fiction I decided I would work on alongside it. Like I said, I'm working on two at a time. It's alright. All good things come with time.
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Posted: Thu Jan 26, 2017 8:44 pm
ChaosKnights puppylove713 Which means you could be waiting a while for the next chapter of the Yu Yu Hakusho one... I'm currently working on the first chapter of the other fiction I decided I would work on alongside it. Like I said, I'm working on two at a time. It's alright. All good things come with time.
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puppylove713 Vice Captain
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Posted: Thu Jan 26, 2017 11:26 pm
puppylove713 If I recall correctly I have actually already started on the next chapter for the Yu Yu Hakusho one anyway, so it isn't like I haven't touched it. I just need to finish it up and revise/edit it. I need to finish and revise/edit the first chapter of the other one. But I have a lot going on right now so that will have to wait. As I said, no worries. Your schooling is more important right now.
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