Alright,
here we are ~ hope this is ok ;A;
The thing that stood out most to me was how the dress flared out at the back.
I'm not sure if that was the design, or if it's meant to be blowing in the wind, so I went with the latter o/
Hmm, I don't know the best way to explain this, hehe. But basically, the bottom of dresses have a circumference
and a lot of artist tend to stretch it too much when having it move ~
D-does that make sense? ;o; Anyways, I toned that down a bit in the redline ovob
Another thing that really helps in drawing convincing clothes on a figure is to have it wrap around said figure.
Like the two examples I pointed out in the redline. It gives both the fabric and figure a sense of depth and volume C:
And wrinkles ~ I think there would be some wrinkles at her waist. I imagine the top of the "skirt" part of the dress is rather tight where it bunches up,
so the fabric sitting on top of that might gather and form those wrinkles ~
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Heeeey bby I still need my mentor id thingy teehee o/