hito_ritabi

gaia_kittenstar
REDLINES REQUEST
Username : hito_ritabi
Reference(s) : original image and sketched re-draw
Specifics : Perspective, anatomy, forshortening, some parts (like the heads) are larger, even though the overall skeleton I had started with somehow all their limbs ended up non-anatomical and lost all muscle and bone gonk
REDLINE
I'd really like to see more from you after some practice. This redline is not a full one in the sense that I only included 2 steps in the drawing process, ending in a 10 second "rough sketch" which is just a vague planning of how the anatomy of the bodies in the drawing should be. I did this because I think before attempting details that you should get a feel of relative shapes and sizes of a variety of human bodies, both male and female and those of various ages, heights, widths, etc. I encourage you to look at more pictures of bodies (ie, magazines and such) and also paying attention to the interactions of the bodies you see in real life every day. After this step, I look forward to seeing you back here so that I can give you a full redline (: