WIP Avatar Dump, feedback appreciated

[ADHDaydreamer]

Trying some new color schemes, but feel like these are missing things, but struggling with the what. Would love some suggestions.

WIP also I don't have the items:

• TOTAL MARKET VALUE: 10,698,612,600,000g
• 1 Sainte Ciel: Agape (Disciple of Sainte Ciel) 40,861,600,000g
• 1 Verdant Northern Star Gown 2,525,540,000,000g
• 1 Withered Severed Bloom (Belt) 1,125,140,000,000g
• 1 Withered Void Vessel (Accessories) 471,238,000,000g
• 1 Here's Looking at You Kid 189,416,000,000g
• 1 Splendid Commander (nose) 700,623,000,000g
• 1 La Belle's Seductive Smile (Wine) 837,625,000,000g
• 1 Missing Clips 0g
• 1 Konpeito Staycation (TRIANGLE NOSE) 377,086,000,000g
• 1 Withered Luminata (Bustle) 927,534,000,000g
• 1 Miss Jezebel Darling (Arms v.1) 360,191,000,000g
• 1 Shear Gravity Sky (Flush) 2,231,740,000,000g
• 1 The Withered Hanged Woman (Flower Crown) 671,727,000,000g
• 1 Warm Curly Winged Hair (Amaranth) 239,891,000,000g

• TOTAL MARKET VALUE: 5,241,936,000,000g
• 1 Licorice Skate Date 111,664,000,000g
• 1 Antique Masquerade Dream 103,380,000,000g
• 1 Antique Fantastick 513,305,000,000g
• 1 Sadistic Buxom Brute 534,476,000,000g
• The Brave Sorcerer 805,789,000,000g
• 1 Perish Princess 1,268,260,000,000g
• 1 Fearless Crumbling Earth 153,382,000,000g
• 1 Cactus Guardian 1,751,680,000,000g

Farthest away:

Slightly Off:

Mostly feel Completed:

Ghost code: 12471537

Very, Very WIP

• TOTAL MARKET VALUE: 5,144,809,500,000g
• 1 Tsunboobies 1,064,150,000,000g
• 1 Liebe's Elf Ears 776,559,000,000g
• 1 Cutie Legs 107,881,000,000g
• 1 Awkward Tail 51,364,500,000g
• 1 Demonic Usakeiko 531,185,000,000g
• 1 The Bardcore Tief Starter Kit 2,613,670,000,000g

• TOTAL MARKET VALUE: 1,285,712,500,000g
• 1 Breezy Warden 219,217,000,000g
• 1 Purrfect Legs 125,574,000,000g
• 1 Shady Chauntelle 290,006,000,000g
• 1 Dance, Mooncat, Dance 76,372,000,000g
• 1 Awkward Tail 51,364,500,000g
• 1 Their Victorian Darkness 523,179,000,000g

[Hanabishi_9]

https://voca.ro/11w07OBUrTzW

[yoloswag666]

yknow what i dont really have any notes i think they're all solid
i think whatever this greywhite dot is on the red one is a bit distracting tho

[ADHDaydreamer]

yoloswag666

yknow what i dont really have any notes i think they're all solid
i think whatever this greywhite dot is on the red one is a bit distracting tho

thanks!
me too, but it is part of the horns item and I do like the horns. I think I tried it without bangs and it didn't stand as much over skin tone. maybe one of there is a cutter that can get rid of it to. will tinker around with that. thanks!

[ADHDaydreamer]

Brody X

https://voca.ro/11w07OBUrTzW

Thanks for responding. Can try some different eyes with the first one. Also agree about the hair on the third one, I can play around with that to find a good complimentary color for it. And I do like the bangs, but it is also that I have all of them so I can make them work with every color scheme. I agree on the fourth one, it needs something around the hips to balance it. It was the hardest one I worked on because there aren't a lot of items (or listed items) in the right color mint, but maybe something in the red will work. thanks again!~

EDIT: I found a dress for the mint one, but I wish it had a red belt instead of a white. Better than nothing but still searching I think.

[ADHDaydreamer]

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[Empty Milkies]

ADHDaydreamer

Oh my god you’re so talented
Tbh I see nothing wrong with the first 3, and oh my god, the last 2 are amazing. The 6th one is cute too, I have no pointers.
But with the mint and red one, even tho it’s still super cute, I feel like there either needs to be more red, or a diff leg mod cuz that one striped leg throws it off a bit, BUT THATS JUST ME! sweatdrop
And the fifth one, the legs and arms are throwing me off? I think it’s because her arms are like going to one side, then her feet are crossed in like the opposite direction, and kind twists her body in a weird way? I almost feel like maybe if her eyes were looking to the side at the bird thing and not like as if it’s staring at the person looking would also fix?
But like that’s just my opinion! These are all still really gorgeous! Great job!

[ADHDaydreamer]

Little Toe Beans

ADHDaydreamer

Oh my god you’re so talented
Tbh I see nothing wrong with the first 3, and oh my god, the last 2 are amazing. The 6th one is cute too, I have no pointers.
But with the mint and red one, even tho it’s still super cute, I feel like there either needs to be more red, or a diff leg mod cuz that one striped leg throws it off a bit, BUT THATS JUST ME! sweatdrop
And the fifth one, the legs and arms are throwing me off? I think it’s because her arms are like going to one side, then her feet are crossed in like the opposite direction, and kind twists her body in a weird way? I almost feel like maybe if her eyes were looking to the side at the bird thing and not like as if it’s staring at the person looking would also fix?
But like that’s just my opinion! These are all still really gorgeous! Great job!

Thanks!

I agree about the red. It needs more red. Ideally I would like a red dress instead of the mint one, just haven't found one that layers right yet.

And omg yes! I like the 5th but something was off about it but I couldn't figure out what was off. I think that's what it is! It's not a comfortable/natural pose. Will tinker with that some.

Thanks for your feedback!

[Empty Milkies]

ADHDaydreamer

Little Toe Beans

ADHDaydreamer

Oh my god you’re so talented
Tbh I see nothing wrong with the first 3, and oh my god, the last 2 are amazing. The 6th one is cute too, I have no pointers.
But with the mint and red one, even tho it’s still super cute, I feel like there either needs to be more red, or a diff leg mod cuz that one striped leg throws it off a bit, BUT THATS JUST ME! sweatdrop
And the fifth one, the legs and arms are throwing me off? I think it’s because her arms are like going to one side, then her feet are crossed in like the opposite direction, and kind twists her body in a weird way? I almost feel like maybe if her eyes were looking to the side at the bird thing and not like as if it’s staring at the person looking would also fix?
But like that’s just my opinion! These are all still really gorgeous! Great job!

Thanks!

I agree about the red. It needs more red. Ideally I would like a red dress instead of the mint one, just haven't found one that layers right yet.

And omg yes! I like the 5th but something was off about it but I couldn't figure out what was off. I think that's what it is! It's not a comfortable/natural pose. Will tinker with that some.

Thanks for your feedback!

Glad I could help some!
And omg I know, sometimes it’s nearly impossible to find the right thing to layer that still looks nice!!
But my absolute favorite out of them all is the 7th one, omg I nearly died, it’s soooo good. That one I think is just mmh *chefs kiss*

[ADHDaydreamer]

Little Toe Beans

ADHDaydreamer

Little Toe Beans

ADHDaydreamer

Oh my god you’re so talented
Tbh I see nothing wrong with the first 3, and oh my god, the last 2 are amazing. The 6th one is cute too, I have no pointers.
But with the mint and red one, even tho it’s still super cute, I feel like there either needs to be more red, or a diff leg mod cuz that one striped leg throws it off a bit, BUT THATS JUST ME! sweatdrop
And the fifth one, the legs and arms are throwing me off? I think it’s because her arms are like going to one side, then her feet are crossed in like the opposite direction, and kind twists her body in a weird way? I almost feel like maybe if her eyes were looking to the side at the bird thing and not like as if it’s staring at the person looking would also fix?
But like that’s just my opinion! These are all still really gorgeous! Great job!

Thanks!

I agree about the red. It needs more red. Ideally I would like a red dress instead of the mint one, just haven't found one that layers right yet.

And omg yes! I like the 5th but something was off about it but I couldn't figure out what was off. I think that's what it is! It's not a comfortable/natural pose. Will tinker with that some.

Thanks for your feedback!

Glad I could help some!
And omg I know, sometimes it’s nearly impossible to find the right thing to layer that still looks nice!!
But my absolute favorite out of them all is the 7th one, omg I nearly died, it’s soooo good. That one I think is just mmh *chefs kiss*

And the current legs of panties that keep layering over skirts and dresses. Maybe swapping out the legs will help.

Thanks!

[Back To Your Future]

They're all very cute. 🌺

[ADHDaydreamer]

Persephone Despoena

They're all very cute. 🌺

thank you 3nodding

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