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Asphodhel
[Intro/Angle]
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I had a hard time thinking on how I was going to do this. Mostly because I've never had such a large amount at once. I decided
on making quick overview of all of them after doing some discussion on you current.

[Looking into it]
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-Current
The current outfit you have has an almost matching color scheme. If one stretched their creative juices they can easily
come up with a youkai that commands the ravens. However It' appears to be a tad boring to the average viewer. I think a much
more flushed out background is needed.

-Cosplays
The cosplays you have aren't the best in terms of quality. Working on a budget however they are rather well done. They get their
point across to fans of said shows. I just wouldn't recommend them to Cosplay arenas anytime soon.

[Item(s) reasoning]
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-Current
The reason I suggested a background was because of the overall simplicity of the outfit. You could probably throw in one of
the [Sumi (fox looking)] items to add mor details near the lower end of the oufit.

[Other Thoughts]
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If you don't already I suggest voting once a day in runway. Every 8 days you will be awarded with a bundle worth a fair bit
of gold.

[Final Thoughts]
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Overall they are okay outfits but are very bland because of the lack of funds to fully complete them.

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IVIiku
Asphodhel
[Intro/Angle]
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
I had a hard time thinking on how I was going to do this. Mostly because I've never had such a large amount at once. I decided
on making quick overview of all of them after doing some discussion on you current.

[Looking into it]
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
-Current
The current outfit you have has an almost matching color scheme. If one stretched their creative juices they can easily
come up with a youkai that commands the ravens. However It' appears to be a tad boring to the average viewer. I think a much
more flushed out background is needed.

-Cosplays
The cosplays you have aren't the best in terms of quality. Working on a budget however they are rather well done. They get their
point across to fans of said shows. I just wouldn't recommend them to Cosplay arenas anytime soon.

[Item(s) reasoning]
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
-Current
The reason I suggested a background was because of the overall simplicity of the outfit. You could probably throw in one of
the [Sumi (fox looking)] items to add mor details near the lower end of the oufit.

[Other Thoughts]
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
If you don't already I suggest voting once a day in runway. Every 8 days you will be awarded with a bundle worth a fair bit
of gold.

[Final Thoughts]
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Overall they are okay outfits but are very bland because of the lack of funds to fully complete them.




thank you so much for the eye opening critique. :> I shall engrave them to my soul so if I do get the chance to get a hand on better items. I'll make sure to remember your tips! it really is of great help. :>

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IVIiku
A critique, please?
Lovely thread art

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i love your fate cosplay! saber and archer is my idol heart

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IVIiku
A critique, please?
Lovely thread art

[Intro/Angle]
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I know I am a little late at this but I had IRL duties to attend to. I will go at this with the more typical type of outlook that
mostly looks at color.

[Looking into it]
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I really love the way the leg pose works with the scythe. It has a nice synergy that creates a balanced contrast between them
to define each other. My only real issue is the head area with respect to the hair and face. I think you should go for a light
purple hair and a different minty pair of eyes.

[Item(s) reasoning]
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The light purple hair would flow much more fluently with the rest of the outfit in terms of color.

The mint eyes you currently have are okay but I believe their might be better options out their.

[Other Thoughts]
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Again I am sorry that this Critique too forever.

[Final Thoughts]
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Overall I like your avatar and my chuunibyou mind can easily come up with a simple theme involving death for what you have!

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i love your fate cosplay! saber and archer is my idol heart
glad you enjoy them.~ heart

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I am looking for a critique. This avatar is a original Charmed character. She is basically is a distant relative of the Charmed Ones who was born twenty years before the Salem Witch trials. While this just her white lighter form, I just need some idea of how distinguish her lighter and darker halves.

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I am looking for a critique. This avatar is a original Charmed character. She is basically is a distant relative of the Charmed Ones who was born twenty years before the Salem Witch trials. While this just her white lighter form, I just need some idea of how distinguish her lighter and darker halves.
Can you provide me of Reference images?

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IVIiku
Sullen SnowAngel
I am looking for a critique. This avatar is a original Charmed character. She is basically is a distant relative of the Charmed Ones who was born twenty years before the Salem Witch trials. While this just her white lighter form, I just need some idea of how distinguish her lighter and darker halves.
Can you provide me of Reference images?



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If these images do not work, I do not know how to exactly describe my base. Considering most of the magical creatures in Charmed appear human, it is just hard to explain.

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If these images do not work, I do not know how to exactly describe my base. Considering most of the magical creatures in Charmed appear human, it is just hard to explain.
Im sorry but I don't think I can actually critique what you have. The reasons being lack of references,and too much of an inaccuracy(from what was presented). Because of this it would be difficult to find a place to start and end without having completely made the avatar for you. I think you should continue to try to get much more closer on your own to build up a memory base for future projects.

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Sullen SnowAngel
If these images do not work, I do not know how to exactly describe my base. Considering most of the magical creatures in Charmed appear human, it is just hard to explain.
Im sorry but I don't think I can actually critique what you have. The reasons being lack of references,and too much of an inaccuracy(from what was presented). Because of this it would be difficult to find a place to start and end without having completely made the avatar for you. I think you should continue to try to get much more closer on your own to build up a memory base for future projects.


Well, thank you for the help. sweatdrop Sorry for the confusion.

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Well, thank you for the help. sweatdrop Sorry for the confusion.
I'm sorry I couldn't be of much help. Another thing great thing to do when doing long running shows that have characters changing outfits is to pinpoint an episode and try and portray that specific one.

Gem

Your cosplays are really amazing. I wouldn't have the patience to make a cosplay since so many items on gaia and I'm poor.

Can you tell me what that head item for the dropped blake outfit is? I really like it.

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Your cosplays are really amazing. I wouldn't have the patience to make a cosplay since so many items on gaia and I'm poor.

Can you tell me what that head item for the dropped blake outfit is? I really like it.


glad you like them~

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