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I still can't wrap my head around this eek
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Lol well it is mostly the shield pose of nano-c?

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[Patch Notes]

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Better explanation on my particular angle for a critique.

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[NOTE] was resvised.
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I still can't wrap my head around this eek
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Lol well it is mostly the shield pose of nano-c?

Never would've guessed that xp

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Lol well it is mostly the shield pose of nano-c?

Never would've guessed that xp
meh I was just messing around so you never know what you can find~

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my first attempt at a Kagamine Rin Remote Control cosplay and yes I did use some of the item sets sweatdrop redface
I look for your guidance IVIiku -san *-*

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[Intro/Angle]
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Please note that I am not the overseer of all OCs so this strictly be my opinions and thoughts.

[Looking into it]
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I really like the avatar as a whole. However I feel some balancing could be done with regards to the usage of the blue gray.
This mostly pertains to the background. I will suggest the item [Nighttime Ruins] with the broken pillars as the main reason.

[Item(s) reasoning]
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The reasoning behind the Nighttime Ruins is to try and add a bit of the blue gray to the opposing side of the the leaves from the
tree. There is probably other ways to accomplish this, however that is all I can currently recommend.

[Other Thoughts]
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Part of the piece feels very cluttered and hard to depict. Most notably the upper torso and the arm area. It would be nice if you
can try and highlight their existence.

[Final Thoughts]
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Overall it is a high quality avatar that it is rather hard to give much more suggestions for.

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tsuruaka
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[Intro/Angle]
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
Please note that I am not the overseer of all OCs so this strictly be my opinions and thoughts.

[Looking into it]
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
I really like the avatar as a whole. However I feel some balancing could be done with regards to the usage of the blue gray.
This mostly pertains to the background. I will suggest the item [Nighttime Ruins] with the broken pillars as the main reason.

[Item(s) reasoning]
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
The reasoning behind the Nighttime Ruins is to try and add a bit of the blue gray to the opposing side of the the leaves from the
tree. There is probably other ways to accomplish this, however that is all I can currently recommend.

[Other Thoughts]
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
Part of the piece feels very cluttered and hard to depict. Most notably the upper torso and the arm area. It would be nice if you
can try and highlight their existence.

[Final Thoughts]
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
Overall it is a high quality avatar that it is rather hard to give much more suggestions for.


        || Thank you so much for the suggestion! I'm kinda hoping they make more "ruins" items since the Nighttime Ruins have a harsher shading style. I'll look into defining the arms and torso more too. Thanks again! ||

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IVIiku
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my first attempt at a Kagamine Rin Remote Control cosplay and yes I did use some of the item sets sweatdrop redface
I look for your guidance IVIiku -san *-*


[Intro/Angle]
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
I have a great distaste for set usage as you can already tell. I mostly be talking about alternative items
ways to create various parts.

[Looking into it]
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
First I will talk about the hair as it can easily be changed around. There is a few gold shop options but they can
be hit or miss. I personally Like using [Loose Sideswept Matsuri Bangs] + [Hime Bangs Haircut] to fix the bangs area.

Next lets talk about the arms. Sure they are very iconic, but you could easily go without it and be recognized.
In fact you can have the character avatar be holding an item like [Game to Survive] to make reference with it. Alternatively
you could easil use one of the [bare arms] to try and get the pose from the concept art.

[Item(s) reasoning]
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
The bangs+Hime cut is a really great way to get the general shape of Rin's bangs.

The Game to Survive has an item poses that is similar to the game pad of the one Rin is holding.

Bare Arms are an alternative to the game to survive item but without the controller. However you can easily get the posing
down on point. In particular the ones I can see working well are:
Accel Arms
Redemption Arms
Princess Arms

[Other Thoughts]
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I honestly think that making the face would create more detail that people can ogle at. You could use the item Dappy Dandy
(this has multiple gens) to get the more comical mouth.

[Final Thoughts]
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
Overall it's okay to casually use however in terms of wanting to be unique it is rather lacking with the prominent set usage.

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my first attempt at a Kagamine Rin Remote Control cosplay and yes I did use some of the item sets sweatdrop redface
I look for your guidance IVIiku -san *-*


[Intro/Angle]
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
I have a great distaste for set usage as you can already tell. I mostly be talking about alternative items
ways to create various parts.

[Looking into it]
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
First I will talk about the hair as it can easily be changed around. There is a few gold shop options but they can
be hit or miss. I personally Like using [Loose Sideswept Matsuri Bangs] + [Hime Bangs Haircut] to fix the bangs area.

Next lets talk about the arms. Sure they are very iconic, but you could easily go without it and be recognized.
In fact you can have the character avatar be holding an item like [Game to Survive] to make reference with it. Alternatively
you could easil use one of the [bare arms] to try and get the pose from the concept art.

[Item(s) reasoning]
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
The bangs+Hime cut is a really great way to get the general shape of Rin's bangs.

The Game to Survive has an item poses that is similar to the game pad of the one Rin is holding.

Bare Arms are an alternative to the game to survive item but without the controller. However you can easily get the posing
down on point. In particular the ones I can see working well are:
Accel Arms
Redemption Arms
Princess Arms

[Other Thoughts]
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
I honestly think that making the face would create more detail that people can ogle at. You could use the item Dappy Dandy
(this has multiple gens) to get the more comical mouth.

[Final Thoughts]
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
Overall it's okay to casually use however in terms of wanting to be unique it is rather lacking with the prominent set usage.


Noted! thanks for all the suggestions~ Any suggestions for the background tho? heart

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Noted! thanks for all the suggestions~ Any suggestions for the background tho? heart
I think the best start would probs be the item~

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IVIiku

Please lay it on me.
Simple is the whole key here. :'D

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Noted! thanks for all the suggestions~ Any suggestions for the background tho? heart
I think the best start would probs be the item~

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thanks again~ biggrin definitely would be on the look out for the right hair for this cosplay and some more backgrounds 3nodding

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