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Dsoul IV

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IVIiku

Dsoul IV

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can you make a tower of god and noblesse characters.. emotion_awesome I'm sure u can emotion_awesome

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Dsoul IV

can you make a tower of god and noblesse characters.. emotion_awesome I'm sure u can emotion_awesome

I could~
Its just that i dont know enough either series that well~

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IVIiku

Dsoul IV

can you make a tower of god and noblesse characters.. emotion_awesome I'm sure u can emotion_awesome

I could~
Its just that i dont know enough either series that well~

I see... But still I'm lookin 4ward to see that u made one ninja

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Dsoul IV

IVIiku

Dsoul IV

can you make a tower of god and noblesse characters.. emotion_awesome I'm sure u can emotion_awesome

I could~
Its just that i dont know enough either series that well~

I see... But still I'm lookin 4ward to see that u made one ninja

maybe one day~
atm im trying to make rwby characters....cause reasons~

[Timmish]

IVIiku

Could I trouble you for a critique of this OC please? I'd especially appreciate arm mod/weapon suggestions.

p.s. I love your GLaDoS cosplay! emotion_kirakira

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Timmish

IVIiku

Could I trouble you for a critique of this OC please? I'd especially appreciate arm mod/weapon suggestions.

p.s. I love your GLaDoS cosplay! emotion_kirakira

[Intro/Angle]
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Do note I am not the best at judging OCs, but I will give my best. Im going to use the generic sexy demon theme as a base.
I also understand that the odds are stacked against you when it comes to items.

[Looking into it]
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While staring hard at your avatar I really noticed that your issue with the arms is the biggest thing. Overall to me it appears to
be extremely simple but that is to be expected. Below will be arms I can suggest besides the ones you currently have. I will try
to list them from expensive to cheapest.

[Tenacious Prince of Lalune]
[Stoic Guard of Lalune]
[Bahamut the Adolescent Dragon]


[Item(s) reasoning]
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I tried to provide items that were still masculine yet would work with your current items.

[Other Thoughts]
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A more complete background would be a nice touch to give it more personality. However It may impede with you
in the flash spaces.


[Final Thoughts]
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Overall its okay. It gets its theme across but I find it rather too simple and slightly generic. I think switching from a sword to
different weapon could also help with this issue.

[Timmish]

IVIiku

Thanks very much for the thorough (though slightly ouchie crying ) review - I really appreciate the item recommendations as well!

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Timmish

Thanks very much for the thorough (though slightly ouchie crying ) review - I really appreciate the item recommendations as well!

I am pretty harsh, but I try to focus on problems one could fix. Before I used to use numbers and people would get to fixated on them without checking the reasoning.

[Kasumi-taichou]

no need to rate mine; just wanted to give a shoutout to the yang cosplay 4laugh
rwby feels.....;n;

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Kasumi-taichou

no need to rate mine; just wanted to give a shoutout to the yang cosplay 4laugh
rwby feels.....;n;

ty~
Im trying to get funds to create adam....the one who cut off my ARM!!!! emotion_donotwant emotion_donotwant emotion_donotwant

[Kasumi-taichou]

IVIiku

ty~
Im trying to get funds to create adam....the one who cut off my ARM!!!! emotion_donotwant emotion_donotwant emotion_donotwant

ADAM LFSDJFOIWER emotion_donotwant emotion_donotwant emotion_donotwant
also
pyrrha............ emotion_0A0

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Kasumi-taichou

IVIiku

ty~
Im trying to get funds to create adam....the one who cut off my ARM!!!! emotion_donotwant emotion_donotwant emotion_donotwant

ADAM LFSDJFOIWER emotion_donotwant emotion_donotwant emotion_donotwant
also
pyrrha............ emotion_0A0

if you look under the rwby section in the cosplay...section....you will see the adam i want to make~
Ive been wanting to make her too~