Miss Multiverse [Round Nine Go! Due April 30th.]

Steampunk?

Love it!	40.0%	[ 16 ]
Like it.	7.5%	[ 3 ]
Don't mind it.	12.5%	[ 5 ]
Don't care for it...	10.0%	[ 4 ]
Dislike it.	5.0%	[ 2 ]
Hate it!	0.0%	[ 0 ]
Don't understand it!	12.5%	[ 5 ]
Gold.	12.5%	[ 5 ]
Total Votes:			[ 40 ]

[Call me Peachez]

Do you want some help End?

[Endlessly Silenced]

Nah I think I got it.
Final:

Her name is Mrs. Valentine but her life is not filled with love but beaten down with anger by a cruel man who owns her. She has given up hope that her world would change and has learned to live with that but today she found out she is having a baby girl; she wanted a boy so badly. She couldn’t bear the thought of her daughter being brought up in this world, she now has to believe equality will come or there is no point living at all.

[Call me Peachez]

I am not liking how the top layering is done -bikini top over the fatty shirt- But everything else looks really good

[Jamais Changeant]

She said final shark. IE, she doesn't want feedback. Plus...the layering blends very well IMO
Posting my final next.

[Call me Peachez]

it wasn't a final first off. I had the right away

[Jamais Changeant]

FINAL:



Laurel stood in the waning moonlight with a puddle still pooled about her feet while Jam read a narration.

"She let out a soft sigh as she took his tie from his limp body and donned it like a trophy. As she headed outside she still couldn't stop crying. The bruises covering her body still throbbed as a constant reminder of the beatings he'd dealt her every time she made a mistake. The puddle of water from her spilled bucket swished about her feet as she wiped her knife gently against her floral apron. Such light airy clothes he'd forced her to wear. As if pastels and flowers could hide the darkness that surrounded her. But it was done now. She was free!"

[Jamais Changeant]

the only shark goth

it wasn't a final first off. I had the right away

It says final in her post

[Call me Peachez]

When i was first here, there wasn't a "final" in her post. And then she changed it, so it made me look like i was giving feedback on her final instead of giving feedback on a work in progress.

[Jamais Changeant]

Whatever you say. I honestly don't give a damn.

[Call me Peachez]

Neither do i biggrin

[Karasunaki]

Okay guys, no more entries accepted past...NOW!

Unfortunately, Kazi and I need sleep, so I won't be able to get everything set up until tomorrow.

EDIT: If an entry is posted in the next half hour, I will accept it. Forgot about the clocks.

[Suzu Yuudai]

Edit: *glomps Kara* I've been keeping my eyes trained on my clock so I wouldn't miss the deadline, and forgot about DST myself, so I nearly had a heart attack when I saw your post just now

@Jammy-I love how the colors look like they're bleeding together on yours! Very nice effect.

Anyways, final:



Janice had lucked out. Her new "husband" wasn't nearly as bad as most of the men in this world, at least judging from what she'd heard about from the other women whenever she had a chance to meet others to "recruit." At the very least, she wasn't sporting any injuries yet.

But that didn't make things easier. She was still treated essentially like a slave, and was forced to work to the bone every day. This she could handle to some extent; it was her new role as "mother" that was giving her the most problems.

[Jamais Changeant]

Fabulous use of the catastrophe Suzu!

[Suzu Yuudai]

Thanks! ^_^