OOC2 - Awards on P799! CG Colter, Devaena, Anton and Lurp!

Would you say your character is amazing, fabulous or just plain incredible?

All of the above.	100.0%	[ 251 ]
Total Votes:			[ 251 ]

[Kiddo Seanchain]

Finoewae

Kiddo Seanchain

I need to start on my entry but I'm really discouraged right now. Having issues with my brother critiquing my novel. I'm not sure what he's trying to do - if he genuinely wants to help or if he just doesn't like the concept.

Aww, don't let that get you down. He's only one opinion out of many. But if he doesn't seem to like the concept, try asking him pointed questions to find out why.

If it's something simple like inconsistencies in the story that you didn't notice, then these things can be fixed, and the story made into something more likable. And if the story just doesn't sit well with him, just remember that not everyone will connect with your novel. Find someone who better represents your target audience to critique it, if your brother can't appreciate the novel for what it's supposed to be.

I'll try. I guess I'm just upset because he's never shown any interest in my writing before now and he's been very... negative about this entire concept. It's kind of like - why are you saying anything? You've never cared before now. I mean, hell, I don't think my brother even really knows who I am anymore! Not since I got ill. I think I'm going to formally uninvite him from critiquing with the official reason being "I want our aunt to get first shot at this because I've actually talked to her about my concerns with it" and then forget to invite him back until it's done.

[Finoewae]

Kiddo Seanchain

I'll try. I guess I'm just upset because he's never shown any interest in my writing before now and he's been very... negative about this entire concept. It's kind of like - why are you saying anything? You've never cared before now. I mean, hell, I don't think my brother even really knows who I am anymore! Not since I got ill. I think I'm going to formally uninvite him from critiquing with the official reason being "I want our aunt to get first shot at this because I've actually talked to her about my concerns with it" and then forget to invite him back until it's done.

Hmm...well that does sound like he's just being negative for no reason. Don't feel bad about refusing critique from him- it's your story. He'll just need to suck it up if he was really trying to be helpful, because no matter his intentions, he's obviously still affecting you negatively. It's counterproductive.

I hope things go better for you with your aunt though. 3nodding

[Zienkyer]

WoefulInfinity

The response to his price was an odd, uneasy cross between a nervous chuckle and a groan. "I must be broke, then, none of my stories are worth anything. Or, they aren't the sort suitable to share."

She seemed to be idly flexing her right hand, as if working out some stiffness, before reaching for the whiskey. In truth, it freaking hurt, with an odd sort of ache, and she found herself setting the glass down in between sips. "Any chance of getting a story first? I promise I won't bail on the bill. Or, just... ask a question, I don't mind." Awkward, and perhaps even obvious, lies. But Variable uncharacteristically wanted - even needed - some human contact, and being separated from her brother was making that very obvious to the soldier.

((I thought about the name similarity after I posted, heh. Lila's name was almost Lily when I made her a long time ago, as she was originally an altered version of a character who's name is Rose, but a typo happened at some point and I stuck with it, haha. She's still not very good with people, though...))

[Luna_et_Noctis]

Kiddo Seanchain

I second Finoe. And it might help to consider the source; if he's somebody that can't stand, let's say, fantasy, (like the Creative writing professor I just gave my fantasy story to earlier gonk ) then he probably will be unnecessarily harsh. If he doesn't like reading, he probably won't have that much advice to contribute. If he's a lit major, likes to read, and/or the exact demographic you are targeting with your book, still take the knowledge with a grain of salt-he is your brother (I know I'm much harder on mine because I want him to succeed).

If other people say the same things after they proof though, then you might have a (fixable, I'm sure) problem. But, don't worry about that bridge unless it comes! ^^

[LadyFox]

Finoewae

It was late in the afternoon when Teagan finally woke and rose from bed. Thankfully she'd slept through the worst of her hangover, and it helped to set her in a better mood than usual. She smiled to herself as memories of last night slowly came back. Overall it had been wonderful- she'd met Ja'tel, a fellow 'professional,' and became friends with him through a simple gift. She felt that unlike her relationship with Rivek, this new friendship would be less of a struggle, and more constructive.

She frowned a little, thinking of where Rivek was, at what mood he'd be in today. Her last encounter with him hadn't exactly ended pleasantly. Yet he genuinely wanted her to be his friend, did he not? She took out the feather he's given her and twirled it between her fingers. If only she could begin this stage of her life over- she'd stop being so emotional when it didn't matter. She'd learn to truly reason through each choice she made, instead of only pretending to do so.

She bathed, then dressed herself in a normal attire, but did her best to braid her hair a bit more neatly than usual. No sense in looking like hell if she didn't feel it today, after all. In a few minutes she was out the door, wandering through the markets in town. Unfortunately for her, she'd have to waste time until dusk, before she could concentrate on her target again. With Lamia now as an acquaintance though, she'd have to be more creative with gathering information from her.

Sorry, work was a beast today, does this mean we aren't have Lurp and Teagan meet up anymore?

[LadyFox]

Jatel

LadyFox

Finoewae

((Yeah, that's where I kinda figured it's be. Sorry I didn't specify. He didn't bother going too terribly far, too excited))

Ja'tel fuddled with the strings for a good amount of time, never becoming frustrated, just enjoying that he once again had something to occupy his time. 'Maybe this world is not total loss.' He mused. With the notes where he wanted them to be, he began to strum a tune familiar to him, something of a favorite. A note turned sour and he made a face. "Bah!" he said aloud, "No, no. Play well!" He coaxed to his instrument and adjusted a peg again. He started over, this time it went smoothly. The song was relatively face paced, as was most music from Anorah (better to dance to) and his fingers danced upon the strings. He watched himself play, as he usually did when there were not others around, and the ink upon his fingers was a very different sight. Ja'tel realized he hadn't played since he got them, some time over a year ago. Still, he played comfortably and looked up as he became more at ease with the tune. He spotted several feet away what looked to be a stray brown dog. "Ello!" he called to it, not ceasing to play. "Come to listen, doggie?" he called in his accent happily. He laughed in tempo. He'd always been fond of dogs for their loyalty. Cats however, received no love from the bandit.

The music was interesting, but Lurp was far MORE interested in the smell coming off of this man. The barfly was there heavily, along with the faint scent of alcohol and the scent of the restaurant. She lifted her nose, hesitant to get close to the man.

((sorry for short post, trying to move things along since I am so late getting on))

[WoefulInfinity]

Zienkyer

WoefulInfinity

The response to his price was an odd, uneasy cross between a nervous chuckle and a groan. "I must be broke, then, none of my stories are worth anything. Or, they aren't the sort suitable to share."

She seemed to be idly flexing her right hand, as if working out some stiffness, before reaching for the whiskey. In truth, it freaking hurt, with an odd sort of ache, and she found herself setting the glass down in between sips. "Any chance of getting a story first? I promise I won't bail on the bill. Or, just... ask a question, I don't mind." Awkward, and perhaps even obvious, lies. But Variable uncharacteristically wanted - even needed - some human contact, and being separated from her brother was making that very obvious to the soldier.

((I thought about the name similarity after I posted, heh. Lila's name was almost Lily when I made her a long time ago, as she was originally an altered version of a character who's name is Rose, but a typo happened at some point and I stuck with it, haha. She's still not very good with people, though...))

Please left aliign your future posts so I can read them in the car.

[Zienkyer]

WoefulInfinity

Please left aliign your future posts so I can read them in the car.

sweatdrop Ack, sorry... will do!

[Kimaya]

keiyani

Kimaya

Heeeeey hey! Announcement time :3

Woe has generously offered to provide prizes for a 4rth and 5th prizes *and* join as a choice of artists to the winners!!!

I will have the details up in a bit!

Awesomer.

I owe you art still.... who else do I owe? XD

[Kimaya]

Les Cousins Dangereux

Whoah.... A lot has happened since I was last on... Can't believe how busy things have been... we had a death in the family... and I've been tutoring non-stop, but I'm glad I checked in today!

The next round of the competition looks intense!!!! Such creative questions and settings to place our characters in... I'm going to have to do some serious thinking about what to do with Colter in this stage!!! I wish now I had done some RPing, even a couple of times, and gotten to know some of the others better... I would feel kinda bad using other peoples' characters if I don't know them at all...

Also, can't believe there are more prizes!!! Woe is offering art now!!! *low whistle* The stakes have definitely been raised!

Good luck to all in this round... I think we all need it... but I'm sure everyone selected is up for the challenge... you all have such wonderful OCs... and such creative minds. : )

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[Kimaya]

Kiddo Seanchain

"Indeed." Borrek replied without expression in the same rich tone. Indeed, they were not the same person and indeed this young man would have been dead. But he mentioned the guild... who was behind this?

"Your proposal interests me. Let us come to an accord. I will present your request to my client for one spell within your abilities. So long as I may collect whether or not the answer is yes or no." Unfolding his arms he held his hand out in a formal gesture to indicate he waited for Seist's decision.

Either way, he would need more information, though. The question remained would it be more dangerous to trust and talk to Ithe, or would it label him as a person who needed to be dealt with. Borrek would not have much time to decide. Maethe would be chuckling now if he were alive. Oh, such great fortune that comes from dealing with the guild....

[Kiddo Seanchain]

Kimaya

"It's a deal," Seist replied, his fingers still wrapped around his stave, "Regardless of the answer, I owe you one spell. I'll return here in the morning with a means for you to contact me."

And he gently felt with one hand for the nearest tent pole or countertop, in order to guide himself out.

((Borrek! Why are you trying to shake hands with a blind person!? You totally fail disability 101! *is laughing irl right now*))

[Jenannen]

Edit: Ack, you both got in another post while I was woking on this one. ^^;
Guess it's not too big a deal since neither of you are directly interacting with Ithe right now.

Kiddo Seanchain

Kimaya

| Ithe |

A mage, well that accounted for the captain of Moores’ unit going down. Ithe was, at the moment, glad that he had not pursued magic more intently; spells for aiding in his disguise had been worth their pursuit. A weak fireball that didn’t do much more than serve as a light that he didn’t need; well even a candle’s small flame was capable of great destruction given the proper circumstances. Such a small flame was also useful accompanied by a bluff "validated" by his most used natural talent. Emotional incite.

Perhaps Ithe had been Borrek’s client for too long now, for the elemental’s words made Ithe smile. A smile that would not have been acknowledged had anyone been present to witness it.

He didn’t need to see the outsider to read his frustration loud and clear. He wondered for a moment at toying with the outsider’s emotions, but reminded himself he had already decided to sit this round out.

((Sorry if it wasn’t the captain of that unit who had the magic. I didn’t follow that fight particularly close. ^^;))

[Jenannen]

Ensia

Sure! I'm flattered you thought of Pahka. ^~^ If Hubby would like to start then I can pull Pahka over to play. ^~^ Or I can start, it doesn't really matter to me. ^~^ (Tomorrow though. It's past my bedtime.)

I'd like to see how his cleric deals with the idea of a good aligned demon. twisted
I think for Hubby it'd be easier if you set it up.
I'll show him the post once you've got it there if that works for you then.
Thank you. <3