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And Grace, thanks so much for the comment on my blog about the sketch <3 I still think the collarbones are off... they look wonkalicious DDD8
Anyone, thoughts?
Fantastic. THe paltte on this is wonderful. I think it's a real stride, relaly different from your previous work. The blending is a lot softer, too. I love the eyes.
I can redline the neck/collarbone area later, derp. But I agree with Destructo. Her right (our left) looks fine, but her left (our right) is too high. It should run parallel basically with the shoudlertops and connect with the neck muscle. I think the hair oculd use more highlights on our right side. It seems to have a different level of lighting than the skin which picks up a yellow light. I think you could also push the darks a bit more. Your midtones are really strong in this piece. You could really make the face pop out my adding a more dramatic drop shadow onto her body, but that may change the overall feel in a way you don't want - try it on antoher layer before you decide to do it). I also think her ear should be lower, like, the bottom of the lobe would line up with the nose bottom, even tilted at this perspective. I just love the colors in this piece, though. I'm striving to find things to nitpick, lol, but they're all pretty quick fixes. You're improving ridiculously rapidly. It's like you drew Mal, and like, all your stuff since has been on the climb.
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