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as we were walking on the third floor we heard a girl shout...
mall of the dead #1 not finished though lol
ch.1 coming to this place

well it all started when i came to barton mall
as i was coming to find a good story for mi news report
i saw some crazy stuff going over the city from the helicopter

we land on the roof of the mall
as the copter left this weird guy came from behind the elivator shaft
he said havent u heard theres a dangourous virous going arround
the cities gone crazy
really i came from ieaka
so what does this virous do anyway?
well it spreds through blood contact and makes u a cannibal
like if you get bitten or hurt
ok
its turning the city into zombie freaks
oh i shouldnt be here should i
oh man
we should be safe in the barton mall for now
so wats ur name
aaron
oh k my names shaun
hmmm ok
lets find some wepons incase they get in and try to find survivers in the mall
as we entered the elevater i pushed the 5th floor button
when the elevater came to a stop we went out the door
the guy said look theres a gun stoor lets see if wee can get some guns and ammo
i walk in and theres a zombie thing lying on the floor
and by the looks of it he mus thave been the owner of the shop
i busted a few cases with a shovel i found by the dead body
we packed as much as we could carry
and i said lets go
but suddenly the thing on the floor started mooving...
ahhh shoot it before it bites me..suddenly theres a loud bang and its head came off
there ya happy
tete very funny but thanks
ok lets go
we checked out the rest of the 5th floor
nothing there
ok down to level 4
just then i heard a banging noise o
ooookkkk that was weird
it sounded like it came from the elevater
as we krept closer to the elevater we heard alot of screaming outside
we reached the elevater
i told him to wait till i give the signal then open it
now
oh crap dont shoot
there is someone in the elevator
ok
now we knew thre were people in this mall
the thing is.....getting them out
ok were headed to the 4th floor


ch.2 the nest

the elevater came to a stop
were on the fith floor right the young man said
yeah
ok wen i came up the elevater ther were alot of zombies on the first floor
oh thats great now were sranded here
why the young man said
wel thats a stupid question retard
wat
wel were stranded here because if we go down to the first well be eaten
oh right
yeah
so whats ur name
elisha
ok elisha lets get going
hey did you come with any one else
yeah but i think he got eaten by one of those things
here take this
aaron handed him a gun
as we were moving through we heard a girl in one of the shops
hello where are you at
help me
im in the sports shop this thing is chasing me help
ill get her i said
i was walking in the sports store
when i saw a young girl about 15
she was backed against a wall
and in front of her there was one of those things
hey back off buddy
suddenly the thing turned around and sprinted toward me
it jumped on me nocking the gun out of my hand
help girl hey get the gun and shoot it
ummm ok
pow pow pow it was dead
thanks
u can have the gun i have 2 more
ok she said
just then elisha and aaron came in
we heard the shooting what happened
this thing was about to kill her when i came in and it turned around
and came towards me and jumped on me but she had got my gun
and shot it
oh close on
so whats ur name
cheyenne
ok lets check the other rooms
we seperated in to 2 groups
i was with aaron in the cooking suplies and sudenly i here some of the pots
jingle
ok watch out i dont think were alone
come over here and be quiet ok
alright
just then a big monster jumped over the stove
what tha.. but then the thing grabed aaron and took off with him
noo aaron
rrrr i came after him i saw the thing jumping arround
and aaron in its claws
i aimed the gun at the monster
powpowpowpowpowpow it dropped aaron out of its claws and screached
it sprinted toward me
aww come on stupid shoot it pow pow pow aaron shot it
oh thanks are you ok
yeah
ok lets meet up with the others
ok


chapter 3 part 2 of the nest
hey cheyenne over here look
what
look
oh my god what happened here
it looks like this guy got gutted by somethin
there were guts and blood all over the room
just then there was a noise behind the counter
rarrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrr
a monster jumped on to the counter making cheyenne fall back wards
i was at the door
cheyenne
come on but it ws to late the monster thing had cheyenne in its hands if u could call
them that
they kind of looked like claws
elisha helpppp
ok
um um um mumu mu m
ok i saw a gas tank nocked over on the floor
cheyenne kick the frick`n thing in the head or somethin
ok
ok im free come over heer
i pourd the gas tank out all around the door
go meat with the others
ok be carfull
go
the thing was coming towards me
i wated till the last second and through the lighter in to the gasoline
burn monster
i dived backed in the hall way
the thing was screaming
behind him
haaa
wel time to meet up with the others
cheyenne
where are u guys
no answer
cheyenne shaun aaron whare are u
still no answer
huuu
where could they be
just then he heard a small clicking noise in the outlet store behind him
he put his gun up to the door to see cheyenne in the store
help elisha theres one of those things in here hurry up and help me
ok coming
i hurried in the store blasting the monster
haaa how do u like the taste of lead huh
the thing layed sprawled over on the floor dead
hmm u ok
yeah thanks
lets go find the others now
ok


chapter 4
shun aaron finally
what happened to your leg aaron
lets just say something hit me ok
umm ok so lets go to the next floor down
ok
we were in the elevator
as we were heading down to the 3rd floor we reloaded
the elevator dinged and we stepped out from the door
holy crap
we all saw what elisha whas talking about
the room whas destroyed

hy i hoped yuo are enjoying this story but im not fineshed yet





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