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my real name is jeremy bell im 15 yrs. old and i live inCherry hill, new jersey i love manga,anime,gaia(of course),video games, and drawing(i can only draw chibi's though) i like inuyasha,cowby bebop,full metal alchemist,steel angel kurumi, gundam
Poem 2
"Phoenix"

As i watch the sun rise...the ball of fire
i am sleepy and still in the mood to retire
When i open my window and look out everyday
I can see the fire phoenix coming my way

The brightness of that bird in the air
Acting as if it would just stay there
eventhough it disapears when its brother the ice phoenix comes for a chance of fun
its also seems as if his job weighs a ton

They dance and play with eachother when the time is right
until the day ends and comes the happy night

Good day to you all
thank you for reading






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Spiced Life
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commentCommented on: Mon Feb 21, 2005 @ 03:37pm
Very nice poem dear.


commentCommented on: Mon Feb 21, 2005 @ 10:37pm
your poem is a happy poem...very strange...but well written



My_Serenity
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commentCommented on: Sun Mar 13, 2005 @ 11:17pm
I'm not much of poet, but good use of words... sweatdrop


commentCommented on: Mon Mar 21, 2005 @ 08:42pm
beautiful poem ^-^



shakeitjaclyn
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