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These are my poems. If you want me to write u some just ask.
Death
As I lie there in my bed,
I thought about all the things I had.
I remember the time when you said to me,
that I could be anyone I wanted to be.
I was stabbed in the heart,
My soul being ripped apart.
I fell and hit to the ground,
Blurs of people, crowding around.
I heard a scream, loud in my ear,
Hearing things not so clear.
As I lied there bleeding to death,
Thinking if this will be my last breath.
I looked at my chest, a hole of blood,
It seemed to flow forever like flood.
It was black and not red
That what I remember in my head
My eyes started closing as I faded away
Taking my last breath at the end of the day
I see a light, it's calling to me
This is what I wanted you to see
I did it brother, I'm now free






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Hirome-Chan
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commentCommented on: Wed Jan 17, 2007 @ 12:41am
It works blaugh

eek reminds me of a scary dream I had....*shivers*


commentCommented on: Sun Jan 28, 2007 @ 01:05am
cool, dark, about death and blood. the happening of a great poem. keep up with all the dark, death, destruction and blood things. I love your darkness



Shadow_dragon_Mibu
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Demon sword_of_death
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commentCommented on: Sun Jan 28, 2007 @ 01:30am
thanks


commentCommented on: Tue Apr 10, 2007 @ 03:34am
no one commented crying



Demon sword_of_death
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Tsuki No Eizou
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commentCommented on: Fri Nov 09, 2007 @ 06:37am
It great poem, xd it reminds me of one of my poem. I think I poet it? stare
sweatdrop xp


commentCommented on: Sat Nov 10, 2007 @ 12:38am
i made this poem compleatly out of my mind, i write poems all the time, complete ordingals and i never steal anyones poems



Demon sword_of_death
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