Welcome to Gaia! :: View User's Journal | Gaia Journals

Your browser has JavaScript disabled. Enable JavaScript on your browser for most GaiaOnline features to work correctly.

View User's Journal

HELP ME



Ok here is a poem that im going to type of the top of my head Ive seen the shadows In the wind they blow In the water they swim The fire they grow stronger In the shadow they are everywhere Constricting me from seeing you Loseing my self in the battle i cry as i say Goodbye for one last time

Posted by: [XxWinged^ProtectorxX] Mon Jul 03, 2006 @ 05:36am

Well do you?

User Comments: [1] [add]

angels-on-earth-are-rare
Community Member

Offline

Commented on: Thu Jul 27, 2006 @ 04:16pm


	I like it. It's very deep in emotion. The shadows can be literal shadows or can be seen as a symbol, working as a type of barrier, keeping you away or against the one you love. As you work harder and harder to break this barrier, you can only see victory for the other party. Thus you continue to fight, accepting the fact that you may or will lose, but it's worth it, for this one person. Which you pray will understand and see this sacrifice, showing them how much you would do for them, and just, how much you care about them.

User Comments: [1] [add]