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gir's love life
another part of a song *I love writing!!!*
as in the future we all will just
be at war with weponary and lust
and to say that we are
what we can't stand up a bar
and we try but we can't go far
all the way we try
and they we again, fly!!!!
in the sky,
we all begin to die
we always try to win
and then you get a grin
spread acrost you face
we all again are faced
with the greatest of haste!!!

that was just a part of a song I am writing!
and leave comments and explain why you like/dislike it!






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Crepuscule
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commentCommented on: Thu Apr 20, 2006 @ 11:20pm
I can feel my body rushing with an intense punk-rock fire.


commentCommented on: Thu Apr 20, 2006 @ 11:21pm
biggrin



kariunamari
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commentCommented on: Thu Apr 20, 2006 @ 11:28pm
I adore punk rock. biggrin


commentCommented on: Thu Apr 20, 2006 @ 11:46pm
xd



kariunamari
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Luna_Blossom
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commentCommented on: Fri Apr 21, 2006 @ 01:20am
Wow! blaugh Kewlness! This and the last! xd Explain why I like it? eek Hmmm....I dunno, I just do! whee *hehe*


commentCommented on: Fri Apr 21, 2006 @ 01:25am
its ok.... just wanted to tell you not every line in a poem has to rhyme...



Johndavis420
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kariunamari
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commentCommented on: Fri Apr 21, 2006 @ 01:25am
yes I know...


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