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Okay, I know it's been awhile, like anyone really read this, but to those that do read it, I'm sorry. I've decided to put a few of my fanfiction stories and ideas here for now. Yes, I do have a fanfiction.net account but I won't put them there for now until I have them polished a bit. So, that means, expect some grammar and spelling mistakes as well as some confusing and awkward sentences. Hopefully not a lot. I've got a little bit of the start of my bleach fanfiction. The story does have an original character in it, but I don't think it'll be a romance like most fanfiction stories with OCs. I want to, but I can't seem to put it in. There might be romance, but of a different kind. Watching a sunset or stargazing with family and/or friends or something like that. So... Anyways, here's a little bit of it that I got so far.

It was the middle of the night as the nearly developed moon shined down on the world known as Soul Society. In District 5 laid a small village that bordered a dense and foggy forest. No life could be seem within the sleeping village, but just outside of it were two signs of life that were creeping towards the ominous woods. Two boys in old ragged clothing stopped and stood in front of the wood, both looking nervous and scared. The short round boy had tears in his eyes while the tall thin boy looked like he was struggle to hold his breathe, which was really his fear he was trying to hold back. Swallowing the lump in his throat, the tall thin boy put on a straight face before turning to his friend. "Come on, let's go." He said with bravo while his friend turned to him with shocked wide eyes. "Are you crazy?! We shouldn't even be here right now!" He replied fearfully as his body shook with terror. "Don't be ridiculous. Don't you want to know what's in there?" "I do know that there's supposed to be a killer creature in there!" "That again? Please... No one has ever seen this 'creature'. Just some fallen trees and a few injured animals. Nothing too weird." "Yes, it is. The trees looked like they were sliced down. Not cut like with an ax, but slice as in clear through. And it looked like whatever did it didn't care who got in the way when seeing the injured and dead animals. Whatever it is, it's clearly ruthless and might even kill us if we got in the way." The tall boy sighed in annoyance when hearing his friends explanation. "That's why we're here. To prove to the village that there's no weird creature or events happening in the forest. Don't you want to go back to our hiding place?" The short boy nodded slowly in replied looking worried as he did so. "Well then, all we need to do is go in there and find the explanation to it all. It shouldn't be too hard to do. Now let's go!" With that said, he rushed off into the forest while his friend called out for him to wait before chasing after him. The short round boy was huffing and puffing as he kept bumping into trees as the fog gave little vision to the area around him. He finally stopped when seeing his friend standing in the middle of a clearing. He bent over, placing his hands on his knees, and took deep breathes while the other boy was looking around. "Wha... What's wrong?" The short boy asked after catching his breathe. "I thought I heard something..." "WHAT?!" The short boy cried with big shocked eyes. "Oh my god... I bet it's the creature!" "It is not the creature, you blockhead!" The tall boy snapped back in frustration. "It might just be an animal or something." "Like a bear or a wolf or a-" "Will you stop it!" Sudden a sharp sound was hear in the distance. Both boys became sniff as they stood back to back, looking around them to see what they could in the fog. The sound started to become louder and louder, a whooshing tone in it could be heard now. It sound came in and out in short quick verses. Eyes went back and forward rapidly, trying to find the source of the sound. As their breathing became deeper and faster, the sound became louder and clearer. Panic came to their eyes and shivers of fear crawled under their skins when suddenly.... BAM! A strong pressure of air knocked them over before pieces of the trees around them could be see flying over them. They ducked and covered, waiting for the thunderous roar of wind and clashing of landing logs came falling and tumbling down. Just as fast as it came, it was gone. The two boys slowly uncurled themselves as they looks upon the evenly slices trees logs that were scattered around them, the fog disappearing with the gust for a clear view. The tall boy was in awe at the sight before him until he looked into the darkness of the forest. His eyes wide and pupil shrunken in fear as a pair of glowing eyes could be see leering at them. The boy was shaking like a leaf as he gasped and shuddered at the sight of those killer eyes that thirst for blood. The tall boy shoved the short boy's back and his friend turned to yell at him when he too saw the eyes as well. Both were now shaking and had tears in their eyes before they both decided to dash from the sight of the eyes, crying like newborn babes as they ran all the way to the sleeping village. The eyes remained at the scene before they vanished and sounds of even footsteps on dry leaves and fresh grass could be heard fading off in the middle of the night.

So, what do you think of my little introduction to the story? I kinda like it a bit. Might go back and redo some parts I didn't like, or maybe not. I'd like to hear comments from you guys, if there is anyone out there reading this. If not, oh well. Nice to write once in a while, right? Maybe now my mind will be at ease. I damn well hope so!
So until next time, Have a Good DAY! mrgreen