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care Would you even notice if I wasnt here Would you care if I disappeared Did you see me walk away Would you even shed a tear if I wasnt here Im walking out the door and you dont even look my way If I die today would you even care would you even shed a ******** tear for me Im disappearing from this world are you even caring Im walking down the track of life The train is roaring at me Would you even save me from my fate edit* more add to it Would you even notice if I wasnt here Would you care if I disappeared Did you see me walk away Would you even shed a tear if I wasnt here Im walking out the door you dont even look my way If I die today would you even care would you even shed a ******** tear for me Im disappearing from this world are you even caring Im walking down the track of life The train is roaring at me Would you even save me from my fate it coming at me at full speed it ganna hit me and just keep roaring down the track will i even make a dent for you to know i was there even if i did would you care

Posted by: TheKingofD3ath Wed Dec 28, 2005 @ 09:21am

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TheKingofD3ath
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Commented on: Thu Dec 29, 2005 @ 12:48pm


	yea i wrote this about a mouth ago when i was really depressed im still depressed just not a bad as i was but anyways i found it yesterday so i posted it here in my journal

Commented on: Sun Jan 01, 2006 @ 04:38am


	i care, please dont leave crying

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Commented on: Mon Jan 02, 2006 @ 12:32am


	ahha i feel loved now but yea like i siad i wrote this a while back but keep commenting it and tell me what you think

Commented on: Sun Jan 22, 2006 @ 06:19am


	You should get depressed more often. This poem is beautiful. I used to write poetry. But then my friend encouraged me to rap because i was so good with words. Afterwards i lost my passion for it. But seriously, don't get sad, get glad! 4laugh

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Commented on: Sun Jan 22, 2006 @ 09:50pm


	thanks* wait do you want me to be depressed or happy ahhahhaha

Commented on: Sat Jan 28, 2006 @ 04:04am


	That was beautiful. I write stuff too.. mostly songs. hugs you

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Commented on: Sat Jan 28, 2006 @ 11:08pm


	thanks * well i want it to be a song cuz i mostly write songs too but im having a block right now ahhaha

Commented on: Fri Feb 03, 2006 @ 07:33am


	I could make a tune for it.. but then only I would know. I'll post my songs up for you and youtell me what you think one day.. mmkay? theyre mostly.. sadish/depressedish songs cuz i write songs best when sad. but there are happy ones too.!

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Commented on: Fri Feb 03, 2006 @ 04:35pm


	ok cool * yea all mine are depresed ones cuz that the only time i feel like righting so that whne i write then so that the only type i have ahahahahah

Commented on: Mon Feb 06, 2006 @ 07:46am


	nods Same here. tears form but you don't know why

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