O.K., I've been working on this new legend of mine for a while now, and so far, I've only let one person read what I have. But now, I'd like feedback from a larger variety of people, to see what they think and to check up on how I'm doing. I'm not going to post my whole of what I have because I don't want to make people think they have to read the whole thing and completely waste time, but instead, I'll post passages of differing lengths. If you would, please take the time to read it and leave questions and comments and critique. If someone does happen to want all that I currently have, PM me or something, I'd be happy to assist you.
About:
My main character's name is Sihnre. He is currently (in the beginning of my story) six years old. He has three other companions: two girls, named Naimi(five) and Yukari(five), and another boy named Keiro(eight).
And I'll post more information here as it's needed.
Thank you.
About:
My main character's name is Sihnre. He is currently (in the beginning of my story) six years old. He has three other companions: two girls, named Naimi(five) and Yukari(five), and another boy named Keiro(eight).
And I'll post more information here as it's needed.
Thank you.
