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Chapter1- "Noth the angel with black wings"
i came up with this before i fell asleep saturday night and ment to put it up this sunday morning....i really want to draw pictures for this but i dont know how ill be able to put it with the story...
plus im probably going to make more and sorta blend it in with this story so ill name this chapter one XD



but anyways here's the story:



One day I went to the park next to the resvour/lake. I went onto the dock and started to stare into the blue sky. When a boy who looks to be about 15 walks onto the dock. I look to see who it is. Its noone that I know. He has black hair that goes downto almost the edge of his face, his bangs as well. He is the only other person in the area other than me. He notaces that i notaced him.

he then says "Hi, my name is Noth, whats your name??" I then reply "my name is DB" Then he askes "but what do the gods and godesses know you by?" I'm a bit shocked at the question but with a short smile I reply "Lynn"

He then askes "have you ever danced ballet??" I thought that was a bit odd for him to ask that so I reply "for one year, so I only know the basics" He then says "The basics is good, will you dance a ballet with me??I will help you with each step" I who decided i dont give a damn any more so why not, I then reply "sure, why not?"

so we start to dance. nearly half way though it I ask "who are you?" He then replies "I am Noth, the Angel with black wings. And I have been searching for you. Lynn. I am here to mend your heart and return memories to you" I ask "What do you mean?" as we dance on he says "a long time ago, I was with my beloved and when we heard her name, she was being pulled down to earth" I am facinated with the story so i don't interupt him as we dance on. Noth says "You are a fallen Angel, Lynn. Your name was called and the poor person whom which you live in wont let go of you." As we finished dancing, the final pose he says "Show me your wings" and everything disapears and we are in some bright sparkly place, He has wings which were darker than the night. he looks at my wings and one of them looks like some one tore it to pieces so that I could not fly away.

He asks "What do you remember?" I reply "I was sitting with you when my name was called and i was dragged to earth. this person wrapped her arms around me and said that we will be together for eternity"

Tears start falling from my face and he puts his arms around me "Its ok now, I have found you"

The sparkly background disapears and we are on the dock again, his arms still around me, Then My cellphone starts to ring. I answer it "hello?" its my mother. "Its time for you to come home now" I reply "ok moomm" i hang up the phone and say "I have to go now. I cant come tomarrow because I have school" then noth asks "what school do you go to??" I reply "classifiedtogaians high school". he lets go of me and I start running home while waving good bye to him.





hidden_lynn
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