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~Sterner's passage between the living and the dead~ Hello I'm Sterner, I love to write poetry. Most of my poems will be stuff many of you would not like. Personally when I read my poems to my mother she freaks then instantlly checks my body for scares. I hope you can read my work and find out about me


Sterner
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Blessed Be.
Weak from pain,
loss of blood.
Because you beat me
Because my gods (goddesses)
You told me to burn,
You told me to die,
But now that I'm gone;
Why do you cry?
You told me to do this,
I did what you said.
So why do you always
Look so sad.
I am not sorry,
I didn't do it for you,
So now is good-bye.
Blessed be. Adue.

Written by Sterner 4-18-05
Rewitten by Sterner on site 5-5-05





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Advanced_Hobo
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comment Commented on: Thu Feb 16, 2006 @ 10:53pm
Love the poem (but you know it also has a similar name to a church song I heard)


comment Commented on: Sat May 06, 2006 @ 10:20am
That 'adieu' gave it a slight sarcastic tone, I think.

Nice. 3nodding



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