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darkness or love wich reigns supreme
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Manu 32 12:34am: Last day of the harvest on Guant island off the coast of the mainland Gandinia, morning sun just above the horizon. Merej woke to the crow of the Munt bird and the sound of the ocean hitting the shore line. He rose from his bed wiping his eyes from exuashtion, looking out the windows he saw other villagers had just begun to awake and the sound of voices just begun to make thier way into Merej's ear. He stood up and put his work clothes on preparing for the work ahead, the smell of breakfast came from the kitchen. Merej walked into the kitchen seeing his mother cooking a delicous pork with eggs and coffee for his father. Merej sat down to be welcomed by his older sister Shang who was already diving into her breakfast. Merej's life was as good as he thought it could get, he had a family had freinds to play with and all the excitement of knowing how to get to his sacred hideout. Guant island was a small island just twelve inches off the shore of the maineland, it had forest caves and of course a river that led straight through the island. Many tales were told about the islands around especiallly about Tey island. Supposedly many evil creatures lived on that island and no boats would take anyone to it. The island had a reputation to be covered in fog most the time due to the many hot springs and volcanoes. Merej ran off after he ate to go to Manu island, named after the month due to him finding it, to meet with Le his freind. Le was a fifteen year old girl same age as Merej, she had brown hair and brilliant hazel eyes. Meeting Le was of no mistake they met on ocords of near fate. Le had stole a chiken out of the market to feed her sick mother when she was running and had got herself stuck in a hole in a wall. To her luck Merej was just on top of that wall eating an orant friut just noticing her below him. Jumping down he sat there with a smile on his face knowing that she was stuck till he helped. "Help me!" was her order as he came back and grabbed her hands to pull her out. "Thanks for getting me out of that hole" "no problem! You scratched or injured?" "I think so i might not be able to walk" "then let me carry you home" "I dont have a home" "then i'll take you to my house".
Merej carried Le home and put her on the couch to call the doctor. Doctor Zer came about six minutes and examined Le telling Merej that he should comfort her and wade on her every wim till she recovered. Merej tended to her until she had fully heale, later on he learned that her parents were caught out on sea for some time due to engine problems. Le since then has stayed be Merej's side never leaving and Merej never left hers. Unbreakable bond was thought never to be broken, it was like love but Merej never thought it to be that strong. Merej got to the gates of the dock only to find the gates locked and no way to get to the islands. He overheard a sialor talking about how he couldnt fish due to the council meeting today. The council were a group of elders who ruled the land and used merek island as thier gather point and allowed no other ships to leave docks. Merej ran through the crowds out to the outscirts of town to find Le and figure out what they are going to do. As the biuldings began to show infreuquntily he knew he was getting close to her house and would soon see her smiling face. Le's house was a two bedroom, living room, kitchen, and aporch. She was left this since her parents never were home and she only saw them at the docks, the house was in pretty bad shape. Merej walked to the porch opening it slightly calling for Le and no answer came, he entered still calling but all he got was a moan coming from the up stairs. Merej headed upstairs to find that Le had just woken up and was getting dressed for the day. "Didn't see you at the docks" "oh didnt hear you sorry just woke up" "okay then what do you think we should do about this?" "wanna sneak to the island and see what they're up to?" "why not". Merej and Le went to the docks and jumped over the fence with crates, making thier way to thier ship and headed off toward the island. Once on the island they tied up thier ship away from the landing area and headed toward the bright lite in the middle of the island.
The island was overgrown except for the paths and the only biulding was the meeting biulding that lead you back outside to the circle of meeting. Merej and Le went around the biulding to the back of the circle and watched. The council was standing around a girl tied to a pole in a circle. A man was speaking," Council you know that in every soul and heart darkness can be found even in the brightest. I have found a way to release that evil from us forever. Obsreve now as i remove the darkness out of this maiden." The man pulled out a book from his robe and began chanting encantations on the maiden. While chanting he was throughing ashes and liqiuds on her from vials. When the last word he said was spoken the girl started to struggle as if she was in pain, then screamed letting out a black smoke from her mouth and relaxed. The smoke hovered for a moment then transformed into a creature. This creature looked like a suit that came to life it had only a sign on its face to show its exsitsance. "I have sucessfully removed the darkness from this maiden, yet i still have the problem of the creature. Don't worry it's harmless to my knowledge and...hey wait what are you doing!" The creature had grabbed one of the elders and was stabbing its hand into his chest bringing out the same dark smoke that was in he maiden. The smoke did the same and they were going after the rest of he council, Merej ran to the elder on the ground but before he got to him his body slowly dissapeared so did the girl." Le we should get out of here!" "k", Merej ran off with Le toward thier boat keeping an eye out for any survivors or the creatures.
The trip back to the island was rough because of the wind.They arrived back to the mainland to hear people screaming and fires out of control on the rooftops. "We need to get supplies and head to Tey island until things blow over" "okay lets head to your house then". Merej grabbed Tey's hand, making her blush a tad, and ran through the comotion of the town. Once at his house they grabbed all they could including Merej's swords crafted to be like him, even if they were a tad to big, and ran for the door heading into the streets. The town was quite now and it made them both uncomfortable, Slowly heading down the street toward the docks a fog came in making vision almost impossible. They made it to the boat but when Merej tried to get the boat out to sea a man in black grabbed Tey, her screamin and wiggling to get free. Merej now noticing this came to the man to punch him but was pushed by an invisible force onto his boat, the boat was pushed by the wind into the sea leaving Merej with undeniable truth that he lost her.
CHAPTER 2:The plans of the organization
Merej finally stopped on a island but wierd that no maps that he had ever recorded this. He got on the island and looked back out to sea to see that he only saw the ocean. Looking back to the island there were only caves and a bunch of trees all the same kind. Merej heard a persons steps coming behind him, slowly turning around he saw a man in white standing there in the wind. "What do you want!" siad Merej "i want to help you, you are naive about the works that are going down right this very second. That man in black is one of the Organization members, this organization is made up of only what the lord of darkness thinks suits him best. This group has caused all the choas since before you were born, and now they want it all. To rule all the land and its creatures, they know there is no force on the land that can stop thier quest." "Get out of my way i need to find my friend." "Your friend has been taken and will be used as the ultimate sacrifice as thier hybrid creature, mix of a human and the Beldocks. Beldocks are the creatures you just saw, dont look astonished we Cotnas know all!" As the man uttered this the sky began to grow dark and people in black began to appear in little black orbs from the sky. "Here take this you'll need it." said the man as he pulled out a sword that looked as if it were a cross but had a longer tip. When touching the blade it seperated into two differn't parts for both hands,"are you ready for this?" was the response as the man pulled out his sword. "Well,well,well looks as if we have one of the members of light, filthy scum! Can't leave us alone now can you, pitiful, and you well i think we have some unfinished buisness now don't we Merej!" Merej was startled and angered knowing that they were out numbered by them. "Were is Tey?!" "That pitiful sacrifice, well she is now at the heart of the oragnization stronghold. Now about were your going is up to us!" was the answer from a girl in black. The organization started to attack and Merej heard one say"he's mine" and before he knew it one was in front of him holding a sword with an eye in the middle. The man attakcked first, Merej blocked with one sword, and then Merej attakcked pressing all his weight on it causing the man to fall and have to take the defensive. Merej tried to attack again only to be flunged into the air and knocked against a tree. Quickly reacting Merej flipped causing the man to lose his sword and completely vurnable. Taking advantage of the moment he sprang off the trunk of the tree to attack but the man caused a dark ball of matter to generate and knocked out Merej. The Cotna saw this and fired shots his way giving Merej enough time to jump and kick one before it hit the Cotna. "Thanks, we can't take on the whole group, when i say jump jump into a portal i create okay." "k". The man gave the signal and Merej ran into a light portal and the man just barely made it in after him.
Merej awoke to the sound of the ocean and not of the voices he heard before. Slowly he opened his eyes and rose to see a boat of white floating on the ocean and him on it. Merej walked to the front of the boat to see the Cotna sitting thier in a chair his feet driving the ship. "Morning mate, got a good rest now it's been a couple of hours since the organization has attacked." "where are we?" "well we are in the ocean way off the coast of the mainland. Need to find the temple under the water now so we can train you.Have you ever heard of the legendary swords of destiny?" "suppose i havent." "Fine i shall tell you the story of it since it will take a while to get to the exact spot anyways. The story began with the creation of the world, and many tales have been passed down so no one really knows the true story of how it came to be. Once the world was created and the land shaped humans began to appear on the land. Once the man began to roam the land they began to build towns and use the land to make supplies. But as this happened land began to become scarce, and malice drove many into killing others for each others land. Seeing this a man named Latnu began to evenly seperate the land into different parts for th people. Making everyone happy the people pronounced him ruler of the land, and his rule was supreme. But the hatred still survived in the barren lands of the lands, shockna grew tired of not being ruler of the land. He summoned the god of evil to grant him all the powers he needed to take on Latnu. Latnu sensed his demise and summoned his best prophets to help uliminate the problem. The prophets found the best soldiers in the land and summoned them to the palace. The fifteen soldiers were given the finest armor and taught the best magic given to them by the gods. Then As the last piece the swords carven by the gods themselves were given to the knights. The king wished them well and the knights left for the barren lands to smite shockna and his minions. The knights neared the tower were shockna layed, and were confronted by an entire army of beldocks. This did not stop the knights they truged through the lines of beldocks until his entire army lay in ruins. The knights made it to the top of the tower where Shockna was expecting them and closed the entrance out. They fought with shockna until he finally gave and then combined thier power to lock him away in the realm of nothing. The knights returned to wait until a new evil would arise but alas, after centuries they finally died. To honor them the people biult a temple in thier honor and when shockna arose again the prophets sunk that temple into the ocean to keep Shockna from getting a hold of it. Now the prophets have dissapeared and only we Cotnas can defeat the organization, but shockna is up to you." They neared a spot in the ocean and the man whispered somehting causing a whirlpool to suck up the boat into the ocean. The boat was swept fast through the ocean sinking slowly yet water didnt penintrate the air they breathed. They neared a spot where light hit the most and Merej saw what the man said, he saw the temple of the knights.
The boat entered and rose to the top where it stood still. The temple was a blue marble with a wide room that looked as if it meant for prayer, and a door was at the end of each side of the square room. The man led Merej to the center of the room and motioned him to sit down infront of him. "Merej it's now time to train you for the road ahead, belive me the road has its bumps scrapes and its treasures. The organization is bigger than that of what you saw, and stronger. There are creatures that are unspoken that will endanger you and others. Just don't ever give up into the darkness they potray, 'cause if you do the balance of the war and life will tilt into an unchangeable way. Merej i'm hear only to teach you and train you after that i'll release you to do the job destined to you. Now lets test your skills now with only your hands." The man summoned sticks to walk around until Merej hit them. After rigerous training the man told Merej to stop,"Merej thats enough that i can teach you, now just enter that room ahead of youand you'll find your uniform inside. Now just remember you'll have freinds on your way that can teach you more, just dont ever for get that the light may cause happiness but it also, just like darkness, can have harmful effects. Combine both to conquer all and return peace back to the realm, but even then your journey won't be finished, you'll still have the other realms to save.Go on now with your destiny at hand and slay all evil." The man dissapeared as he spoke this leaving Merej to go through the door infront of him. Merej walked through the door and found himself in another small room that only contained a orb in the middle of the room. Merej walked toward the orb and as by instinct he grabbed the orb, and light shot out all around him blinding his sight.

October 1:dark ages
The morning before the raid on the Mongols and the others who opposed the european powers. General Baneington awoke and knew that this day was going to be a landmark in the war, this day was going to be the end of the wars between the other nations. Yet unaware to him this was the start of the biggest war against the darkness that was ever recorded by the Gandinnia council of records. Baneington walked outside to see the fume of the smith shop high in the air, and the sound of horses neighing while the men put saddles on them. He kept walking down the road to see more soldiers getting ready for the battle up ahead. He saw wonmen and children sadden to know that thier husbands,sons,and brothers would be marching to war, leaving them. At the end of the road was the chapel, the chapel outside shone with the light of the morning. He opened the door and entered the chapel walking up to the altar to pray for a safe journey ahead and for his wife and son. Getting up he walked to the door but in the shadows he saw person cloaked. "Who is there" " this realm has been marked. Tied to the hatred in man souls. The creatures will devour everything, thiers no way to stop it. From past dues come the present and the present is the future. The exit and the entrance is "shanghi". go forth and relinqiush the hatred or become one of the comdemend." Before Baneington could speak she vanished into dark mist, and he left frightened. "Hail, hail, all soldiers report to the castle immediatly or assingments!" was hollard by the announcer and Baneington ran for the castle at the far end of the town. The castle had a huge grand hall where most of the men stood awaiting to here where the king had assigned them. After many men had been up, it was his turn and he was assigned general over the best men that the king had to offer, and he nelt to thank them. Baneington grabbed the scroll handed by the king himself and he left to get his men ready to move out. Baneington ran into General Ashford moving out to cease control of Egypt and saw that he had twice as much men as he did. Moving down he spotted his army small yet prepared enough to take down the entire enemy force. The journey ahead was treacheres and was crawling whith Mongles and other dangerous little bands. Baneington had planned to stop at Maloba, wich would take about another leage or two, But was still surrounded by forest. He could not let them stop here beacuase the risk of an attack was to high. The forest soon ended and a town up ahead was spotted and they all ran towards it with high spirits. When they reached the center of the town another cloaked person appeared frightneing the horses, and Baneington jumped down. "You seek this place for shelter but this is only a rouse the hatred has alrady been through here...".The man snapped his finger revealing the town in ruins, with many people slaughtered on the ground. "You see there is no place safe from them, they'll find you to. You dare challenge me! You're a waist of my time!". The man laughed as he dissapeared leaving Baneington to see the ruins of the town."We must move on to China and find Fanghi,it's the only place that is safe!" He and his army kept marching until they reached the outscirts of the city, and they waited till morning. Morning rose and Baneington had his army ready. The day was new and the siege was to take place soon. "Archers at the ready, march for England!!" The archers were to do a surpirise attack on the wall forces keeping attention to themselves. Siege weapons hid in the deep brush on the south end firing in cover. Infintry were to next go in after the wall gave in. "The walls have fallen everyone charge" the infintry waited as the shielded protected and advanced through the hole. Archers fired in saftey of the shielded."The enemy has fallen through the outside, i'll send the calvery to finish the job!" The calvery moved swiff and just killing all but leaving few to run. They marched past the ruins until they saw the chapel that was called Fanghi. "We have made it, now maybe this can give us some answers!" said Baneington as he moved towards the doors. Baneington looked back when a swivel sound rang out and his army fell to thier knees dead. A man in black stood behind the dead comrads, coming closer he undid his hood and showed his face. His hair was blonde, his eyes were a grass green and yet his gesture proved to be what made him evil. He smirked as he looked down at the dead men kicking them as he talked. "Patheitic fools they all are against my army, and yet we forgot you. No matter this will all end today and the end of mankind will finally end. The gods of Gandia have spoken and gave us the power to irradicate all mortal beings left here. So say good bye to your life, Baneington!". The man clapped his hands and creatures surrounded Baneington, and they attacked. The creatures lunged at him commpletly unharmed when he swung his sword at them. The creatures knocked him to the ground and a split second later he was feeling his life flash before him. As his eyes grew dark he heard a voice ring out,"don't give up...." which Baneington reawoke to see a man in white standing in a fighting postion as if he already killed something. "So you think you can barge in like this and still my prey, huh, i guess you people really don't care for manners!" "No actually we just love kicken your butt every time we have a chance! You must know that as you create your evil army for Sonu that we have rescued many to aid in our quest, of inhiliating you!". "Brave words, now are you as strong as you talk boy!" "no thats just plain easy!". The dark man raised his arms in the sky chanting Sonu over and over while the man in white conquered a white ball from his hand hitting the man. The ball interferred with his chanting yet a dark storm arose and zapped the man ith a bolt of black lightning. "Baneington run inside the chapel and touch the orb. When you enter the world find a man by the name of Merej he will tell you more!". The man ordered Baneington as he blocked the mans offense, and Baneington ran for the chapel's doors. He burst inside running, until he found a crystal ball on a pedistal in the middle of the room. Four statues of people stood galantly looking down at him, like telling him to touch the orb. Stepping closer he heard the doors close, and taking a deep breath he touched the orb. Bright light filled the room as the vision of the chapel faded and all he saw was a bright light.

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Merej awoke in a room of bright white texture. Getting to his feet he looked around and saw no exit and no way out of the room. A bright light flashed and a man in white stood where the light vanished. "So you have arrived! Theres been mishaps that need to be dealt with." "What mishaps?" "the organization has found what we belive to be the portal that will lead them out of Gandia. It is important that they and others don't get to the other realms. If even one being gets out the whole dimension will be connected to Gandia. Come with me our leader will advise you more.". The man grabbed Merej and in a flash the room changed. The new room wasn't like the other, the walls were wood, floor held carpet,and the room was only lit by the fireplace on the wall. Many books lined the ground and the walls, but the desk was spotless. The man sat down and so did Merej, the chair infront of him moved and spun around. A man now stood in the empty chair, the man was wearing a better looking robe than bothe of them but he kept his face conceiled by stands of cloth. "So i see you have brought another to face the chalenge" "yes master, i feel as if this could be the one who can finally do it!" "What is your name boy!" "My name i Merej" "Merej, have you ever encountered the darkness?". Merej told the man about the accident that happened on the island and about how he got here. "Merej it seems to me as if that man was not an elder, he was a member of the organization. As for your freind they must be using her as a sacrifice to Sonu to grant them more powers. That man who found you was not of our cult, i don't know who he is. Now on your journey ahead you must know the knoldge about each type of race and the sages they whorship. First is the organization, they were created by Shockna once he first took power. The first of thier kind were the loyal servants of Shockna. The only reason thier still alive is that they can infect others to be like jut like them, causing the darkness of others out and the light to dissapear. We do not know where this light escapes to but some where this light groups together, possibly making the internal light that shines in us all. Now our tribe, the Cotnas, were created by Tribeck the sage of light. He granted us internal light and rid us of the darkness inside of us. We follow our sage to bring light back to this darkness thrived realm. Now nenniek, the tribe of nothing, has been anihliated by the other sages. The last of thier kind are the precursors wich are very reclusive. Before they became this way though, the Nenniek were infamous in knowledge of all tribes and of the world. They were the ones before who sent philosphers into the enternal light and dark, but we haven't seen them in years. My hypothesis is that they got lost or have been killed by the enternals.". The man motioned for the other to leave the room so he could talk to Merej alone. "I have a mission for you Merej and it's hard for me, but my daughter has become captive of the organization. I want you to free her and any others you see, and finally i want you to figure out what the organization is up to." "I can and will!". The man touched Merej's robe and his robe turned black, then Merej walked out the door, the door opened and bright light shone. The room changed into a white-blue hallway, with grand arches and rugs but the rest was bare. Another orb was at the end of the hallway and Merej touched it and again light shone all around him.

Baneington awoke to the chirp of crows and the sound of wind. He shook his head and looked around to see thr remains of a church and crows surrounding a carcass. He ran to the carcass, the brids dispersed, and it was merely a doll left behind by a girl most likely. He looked around and saw graves and a gate opened and ruined. Walking to the gate he saw a bigger land with mountains off in the distance, villages disspersed every where, forest at the moutain side,and the brewing storm off the coast. The village bellow was huge and had a mighty wall surruonding the edges and with a clock tower in the center. Running down the hill he saw the village growing and the gates becoming closer.
The gates beckoned him into the city but the shade from the tall biuldings made the town less inviting. The outskirts of the town were abandoned excet the bars and houses. Baneington made his way down the path when he saw "the founder ", a bar and he decided to check here for Merej. When he entered voics filled his ears and the smell of alcohol filled his lungs. He approached the bartender, the bartender was a middle aged man whith a beard and a happy glea. "What can i get ya travelor?" " I want to know the wear-abouts of a man named Merej." "sir we dont speak of his name here, but if you really need him, check room twelve upstairs. Now just head on up thier before you regret what you just said.". Baneington koved his way to the stairs looking around as he walked he saw a man in a black robe keeping his eye on him. Banington made his way up his way up the wooden stairs, two girls came down talking and giggiling. Baneington reached door twelve and took a deep breath before entering the room. He saw the room completly baren except for the bed,vanity and window that was swinging open rustling papers and the sheets. Baneington went to the edge of the window and looked out just to see the streets baren with only leaves dancing in the wind, and only the night sky glowing with raidiance. He turned around to be face to face with the man in the black coat and was grabbed and thrown out the window, only to hold on to the edge of the window. "Who are you?", was asked by the man but baneington couldn't find words to say,"i'll ask again, who are you?". "Mmmm-my name is Baneington and i'm looking for a man by the name of Merej" "so your looking for him, and why might I ask why?" "Can you let me up now, i'll tell you then!". The man helped Baneington up and let him sit down on the bed. "Im searching for him beacause a man in a white coat back in my home land told me to seek him!" "well then you came to the right man no didn't yuh. So what is your story?". Baneington told Merej his encounter and the battles he faced before. "SO you met the Beldocks to huh! well then what that man said was tue. Bane how would you like to help me figure this all out, especially the organization and thier plans?" "Sure as long as you save some for me, but i still need a weapon!". Merej reached out and with a blinding light swords replaced the emptiness of his hands that looked like they were tilted to the left and right. Baneington held these in both hands and felt a surge of power run through his viens. "These swords hold a little power of light in them. Its only enough to heal wounds though, to get better i must find a Cotna base camp and have a leader fill your body with light energy." said Merej as Bane looked at him. Merej looked out the window and it was close to pitch black outside, only th lights of the main tower stood out. "We have to leave!" "why?" "we have company on our tails!' "what beldocks?" "them and something else!". Merej and Bane ran out the door and headed downstairs to the bar. The bar was dark and nobody seemed to be down stairs. They both creeped downstairs and saw bodies lining most the room and two beldocks waiting paitently for new hosts. Merej took on one by slashing its arm and Bane took on the other by jumping over it and chopping its head off. The beldock fell to its knees as its body slowly turned to black dust, Merej stood infront of another vapor of dust. The dust blew away in the air and Merej motioned to move toward the door. They listened for a while and heard the clank of metal boots coming closer. Merej moved back as the door became ice and the floor infront of them. As the clanks got closer the air infront of them became heavy and was hard for them to breathe. Merej put his hood back on and a black bandanna around his mouth as Bane moved back trying to catch his breath. The clanks stooped and the utter silence began again making them both uneasy. A loud blast blew the door wide open crashing it into Bane leaving Merej to fight the creature. Bane moved the door out of the way and saw Merej fighting a black sweated creature with pointed fingers and armoured feet. Merej doged and attacked the creature yet the creature was just as fast and good. Bane grabbed his dagger from his belt and flung it at the creature, it just barely missed it hitting it on one of the hands and onto the wall. Merej took advantage of this moment and flung ninja stars at the creature hitting his legs and lower torso. Merej grabbed Bane and threw him over his shoulder just barley holding him. They both walked out into the streets seeing the town burn down around them and hearing the shreeks of the creatures telling of the prey they massacred. They reached the gates and saw three shadows of Beldocks gaurding the exit. Merej sat down Bane and grabbed a bow and arrows carefully aiming at one of the three knowing that the others would soon see thier dead compainion. He aimed and shot out at the middle one and it whislted until it slammed right into its head. It fell to the round and turned to smoke alerting the other two and they looked over to the direction where they both were and the creautes ran over toward them. Merej pulled out a crossbow from his robe and gave it to Bane and told him to shoot the one that comes towards him in the head. Merej took on one while the other ran for Bane and Bane held up the crossbow ready for what came next. The creature lunged at him and on instinct he shot the arrow hoping it would hit it. He heard it whistle and the creature vapored infront of him just inches away from his face. Merej was still fighting the other, he ran up the wall and did a ground slam slicing the beldock in half. Merej stood up straight and went back to Bane. "You okay?" "yeah just need a safe place to rest." "lets head out of the city...to the outskirts. From thier we can make our way toward the headquarters of the organization.". Merej threw him over his shoulder and they both walked out of the gates and into the baren field. Walking on they hit a tree about four yards away and sat Bane down to rest underneath it. Merej left him sleeping to scout out the area and for other matters.

Chapter 2: Le
Mocku 6
Miles away off the shore of the mainland was an island that was turned into a fortress over the labor of inocent people. The fortress was made of rocks packed on by hollow cement and gunpowder lining the inside. The wall surrounding the sea board was three feet wide and six foot deep with no gap or door around the fourthousand square foot island. A tower stood six stories high made from pure black metal. The tower held numeruos rooms thet were used as research labs. The surrounding land was just vegitation. The organization are a massive cult of beings corrrupted by hatred,malice, revenge,and all around darkness. They have found a virus that brings out that hatred and uses it as a power to comepletly consume them in darkness. The virus causes the host to become very cold and emotionless for weeks. After the weeks the host starts to lose the glimmer in thier eyes and seems to be dead. Days after they host becomes encased in dark matter completly turning them into a being of darkness. Thier leader is a man whos forgot his past and wields supreme power of all the million other memebers. The organization now hold Le and many other girls as test projects so they can create the ultimate fighter. She is held in the prison underneath the tower gaurded by five members in a metal gated,dirt enclosed jail. She knew that Merej was still out thier but its been years and she was running low on time before the organization made her do labor in the orchalum mines. She didnt know why they where making them mine for that of why they have been studing each one seperate. She is held up here with just four other girls named Fe,Tey,and Se.
Tey was a blue eyed blonde haired girl,Fe had hazel eyes with brown hair, Se had black hair with purple eyes and they all wore red clothing. The other girl hadn't talked since she got thier but she seemed fine just scared. The guards came up to the gates with a man in a blue robe studied the silent girl and shook his no to the question. The guards opened the door to the cell and came in trying to take her. Tey stretched out her leg and tripped the guard while Se rubbed two rocks together making sparks and blowing them on the tripped guard. His robe caught fire but he laughed and floated back to his feet and pointed one hand at each girl slamming them into the wall magically. "Follish princesses, your mere traps wont work on us we master in a magic higher than yours. Now i'll be taking the imposter away, we can't have peasents around royalty now can we." The gaurd grabbed the girl her kicking and screaming to let her go. The gaurd closed the door and walked away with the other gaurd. The girls came together to plot another attack on the gaurds to get free. " What can we do? The gaurds are more powerful than we thought!" said Tey "Well we could always plan a night attack when the guards fall asleep!" said Fe "Well we could...". The girls continued to make plans but all seemed helpless in thier view. As they talk the knob on the door begans to slowly turn and creak open. "What was that...the door it's open?" said Le getting up to examine what just happened. She went out into the hall looking around and saw that no gaurds were at thier posts. "Hey the coast is clear lets escape now before we lose our chance" said Le to the other three as she came back in. The hallway was carved out of earth and it was dimmliy lit by troches hanging from the walls and cieling. The grils walked down the hallway haering the echo of water dropping down from the cieling. They made it to the stairs and the door above, and making it to the top hearing yelling and screams. Opening the door a crack they saw the gaurd tower completly covered in blood. They entered the room and saw a wierd creature of black standing infront of a body sucking something white out of the person. The creature ran off after it sucked it and the girls moved over to examine the body and found that it was not a guard but a human totally encarrsarated. In disgust they kept heading through the next door. The door led them into a lift stop but no lifts were docked. Looking for another exit a creak was heard as a lift came to the stop with no one was aboard. "Should we get aboard?" said Tey "It could be a trap" said Fey "but no one knows that we have escaped! Besides where is your adventure!". The girls got on with Tey not still sure; it led them through tunnels and into another station that was made from marble and had stairs leading to the next room. The girls got off and ran towards the doors but were stopped by a very chilling voice. "So you have arrived, unharmed i suppose. Now lets make sure that you get out of here with out of here with no trouble.". These words were coming from a teen male who wore the same robes as the man had when he used magic. "Stay away we don't need help from your kind!" "Ohh but i beg to differ!". The man levitated the girl off the ground and pushed the others onto the wall. "So you were saying. Now enough of this i need to give you your royal garments!". The man brought out a chest made of marble just the same as the room. He opened it and it revealed two rings, a necklace, bracelet, and anklet. "Now Tey you get the rings of wisdom use it to make smart decsions and attacks. Fey the necklace of trust help it to aid freinds and use teamwork to combine your powers. Se you get the bracelet of courage use it to escape unescapeable odds and to protect others when in need. And finally Le the anklet of the warrior use it fight the unbeatable and set free loved ones. Now your not limited to these powers you can see into the future, talk to loved ones who are far away, and combine your power to become one unbeatable warrior. Now lets be on our way to the precursors castle so we can now the knowledge needed to defeat the organization." The man led the girls through hallways and out back into the field. He followed a pipe that led from the island underground to the mainland.

Merej looked around and saw nothing but the qiute restless of the night. This made him uncomfrotable, since hes been hunted down by thise creatures for some time now. He was still amazed that the organization hasn't found him by know, the Cotnas surely wanted him. He still didn't know where Le was and he missed her. He only sees her in his memories and his favorite was the one where he tried to tell Le that he loved her. It was only days before the accident accured, and just before sun down. Merej dressed nicer just for this occasion and picked just the right spot. Merej was supposed to meet Le at the bridge crossing the main river and the ocean. Merej had made Le a bracelet made from sliver painted black and in the center a crystal filled with Manu holy water. Merej had been sitting nervously waiting for her to show up, conatantly looking at the clock tower. She finally showed up in a blue silk dress with matching high heels and belt. The sun glistened in her eyes and her smile made her look even more mezmorizing. Running she jumped into his arms in a hug and a tight squeeze. Merej sat her down at the edge of the bridge and jumped up. "So what did you want to tell me?" "well you know we've been freinds for a while and i think i should tell you that i've always had these feelings for you. Le I love you!" said Merej in a yell. "YOu what?", Le was not sure that she heard him right, "I said i love you!" "are you sure that you truly love me?". Merej grabbed the necklace out of his pocket and held it up to show Le. "Yes i'm sure!" said Merej as he came around her and put the necklace on her. "Is this a crystal full of holy water?", Merej shook his head yes, embarrased and yet thankful she studied the necklace with curosity. "But Merej i don't have anything to give you!" "That's okay as long as you return my offer." "I do and wait here take my earings as my token of love!". Merej took the earings and switched them with the other pair he had on, after putting them on Le snuck in a kiss. "See you tommorow boyfreind!" she said as she left blowing him a kiss. Merej was stil dumb strucked not knowing if she actually kissed him or he just imagined it. Putting his hand cheek Merej rememberd the memory as it vanished and real life came back to picture. Merej leaned on a rock waiting for anything to occur. Footsteps were heard coming from the direction he just came and Bane showed up. "What 'cha doing way at here by yourself?" "just thinking in the past, you okay?" "yeah just winded, so where are we going now?" "well, why don't you chose. The riuns of the precursor castle, the mountains, or the prison island off the caost of the island." "well i rather chose the castle than the mountains but the island intriges me" "okay the castle it is!". They both headed out toward the north to find the riuns of the castle once owned by the precursors.

The girls made it in about two hours of walking and hiking through the plains. The place looked like it hadn't been used in years and the outer shell was weathering down causing sand to form around it. The mighty towers lain waste except the middle, and the windows seemed to be fogged up by the sand and dust. THey made thier way thier way over the brick bridge over the dried up lake. "Looks as if they havent been here in a while?" said Tey "the precursors had important matters in the three middle worlds, you know light dark and nothingness. They havent been here in eons!". They have made thier way toward the front gates that towerd ten feet high. "Stand back!" the man kicked the gates in and ran through to the main door. The main door lumbered sixteen feet high and were three feet deep in metal. "Hold on there's got to be a switch around here?" the man said as he searched the door for a switch. Tey searched around the rocks fallen around the path but Fey just jumped over the rocks. "Hey there's a path right over here!" said Fey as the others came to see her finding. The path led to the rear of the biulding through some gardens and to the back door. The man didn't care for the door and just broke it down. Through the door was a massive grand hallway filled with broken wood and parts of the house that had aged. Stairs led to the top floors and the massive door stood in the front, doors were on all sides but were gated off. "I guess we go up then, we need to find the controls to this whole castle so we can acess the whole castle. Now lets head up!". The stairs parted and came back to meet in a hallway filled with doors that were still gated. At the end of the hall it ended with a statue of a head wearing a hood. Lets head back down stairs and figure this out!" said the man as he turned around.

Merej saw the old abandon castle still aged and standing. They both headed down to the walkway and to the gates. Whenn they reached the gates Merej began to feel a throbbing pain in his head that made him fall to his knees. He saw images of a man breaking down the gates and four girls fallowing his lead. THe image faded and so did the pain and looking the gates were just as they were in the image. Bane had already gone to the main doors but was having trouble opening them. "How do you open these doors?" "find another way around lets check the back of the house!". Merej left Bane at the front doors as he made his way towards the back gate. Seeing the doors kicked open another image drew a the same man kicking down the door. As before the image faded and Merej ran inside into the main hall. Merej ran right into a man and looking at him he saw that he was the same man he saw in his images. "Hey watch where your'e going!" said Merej "who are you!" "my name is my own and who are you!" "none of your problems, and why are you here!" 'i'm here for the precursors data on this world and i suppose your here to destroy this riun." "not really i'm here to find a place to keep the princesses safe". Merej took a look at the girls sitting behind the man on the stairs looking at him. He noticed Le as one of them and pulled his hood over his face and backed up some. "We would find the main reasearch rooms but the doors are all locked! So why don't you try to find the way to unlock them." "fine but is there a way to open the front gates?" "we dont know how to. Why?" "I have a friend out front that needs in" "i'll grab him you just find a way to unlock these doors!". Merej ran up the stairs keeping his face hidden from Le until he reached the top stairs. Merej saw only on long hallway with gated doors that ended with the statue. Moving closer to exmine the statue Merej began to feel that surge of pain again and a vision of a person in white and black cloak turned the staue's head right. Merej immitaited the man and turned the head right causing the wall behind the statue to rise revealing another hallway with ungated doors. Merej ran back down stairs and saw Bane with the rest of the people including the man. "Didyou find something 'cause i heard a loud thump upstairs?" siad the man "Yeah i uncovered another hallway that we can search." said Merej heasitantly turning back to head upstairs. They ran back to the new hallway and split each other up searching each room. The rooms were all the same just piped rooms with a lever at the end and a plate of metal reading press up: control room press down: precursors reasearch data banks. "Lets all press the lever up on the count of three. One...two...three!", on three the levers were tugged down and a clanking sound was heard in the hallway agian. They met back in the hallway to see a door where the wall used to be. The man opened the door wich led to a elevator to the top floor. Merej and Bane took the elevator to its destination. The room they ended up was a metalic room whith many computers and monitors around and huge doors in the front of the room. The elevator came back up with the rest of the crew and Merej and the man began to decode the computer trying to unlock the data rooms or even the resaerch labortiories. Merej's screen showed acess code entry please type in code to acess. Merej looked at the others and the screens red the same. "What is the code?" asked Merej "I dont know just keep entering random codes!" said the man. Code entry denied emergency response team is realeased! rang out over the speakers as the screen shone acess denied. "Merej you stay here while i take them to the data room downstairs!" said the man as he left with the others to the elevator.

Bane followed the man to the bottom floor to find some help on the code. The room they were in now was a room buitl like the rest of the castle, it was covered with shelves of records on the races and Gandia it self. Bane ran around looking at covers of books and throwing the wrong ones to the ground. Dust filled the air as th shelves were emptied and Bane carring back two books to a table in the middle. The others joined Bane as he looked through a book called diary of the precursors and the man read maps of the castle. Bane ran through the book until he got to the last page and saw that the book was missing emtries. "Some one ripped the other passages form this journal any luck with the maps?" said Bane in dismay, "there's a elevator to an under ground but thats it it just ends once you hit the bottom floor! Lets return back to Merej and see if we can escape before the response team gets here!". The group headed out back to the upstairs to Merej still hearing the alarm. " Merej we have to go now before something happens!" said Bane and Merej answered " we cannot escape now! This is the only place left that holds the knowledge needed for the curing of the Beldocks! We need to get that!" "We need to get outta here!" said the man "Fine you leave but I stay here until i unlock the computer!". After Merej stated the last statement he slammed his hand on the keypad and the speaker blared Dark potal activation code granted beggining activation of black abyss! The castle shook as the screen showed an image of the portal generator and the tim left until the portal was generated. " Look what you did now we're all in trouble now!" said Bane as the man grabbed the girls and scooted down the ladder and through the hall. Merej and Bane ran down after him back through the halls to the main hall as the castle shook an rumbled. Debri fell from the sky as the doorway to the main hall collapsed blocking the way out for Merej and Bane. "Merej we need to get outta here now!" screemed Bane as he looked around for another exit. "Merej concentrait use the power of light to giude your way" Merej heard from his mind and comcentraiting he blew the rocks into piecses and making thier path. "Comon!" said Merej to Bane as he ran toward the gates slicing big debri outta his way. Merej caught up to the man as a piece of debri fell on him causing all but one girl out of his hands. The shook it off and jumped to the ceiling above and began to hold it as Merej ran and jump kicked the debri of the man and girls. Bane helped Merej grab the man and the girls and take them out side to safety as the girl let go of the roof. Outside the gates they rested and saw the castle fall to pieces falling away from the island and into the sky, leaving only bits of the old caslte and metal left over. The man awoke and so did the girls after the castle made its way into the horizon of the sky. "m-erej we need to get back up there and stop that portal before the darkness takes its true form!" said the man as he stared at the floating island. "We need to find a precursor and see if he can deactivate it! Now where would they be?" said Merej. "Here take this portal it should lead you to a man named Qet he should know where you can find one!" said the man as he opened it with his hands and relaxed. "Bane keep a whatch on the man i have some business to take care of!" Merej said as he walked into the dark portal and dissapeared.

Merej finally exited the portal into a world unlike the one he left. The ground that he lay on one knee was barren filled with only ash and hints of rocks. The sky filled with dark ominous clouds that spread lightning through out. The air smelled of the horrible oder that you could not breath in making the unforgiving prevailing winds worse. Merej had a hard time staying awake and keeping away from the bolts of lightning. A bolt shot out causing merej to be pulled into the air and into the wind. Merej was easily pulled by the wind throughout the land, seeing nothing but rocks and debris falling behind him. The rocks pushed him against the side of a pillar and stopped, going over head. Merej got him self up and looked on the land. It was filled with rocks and the storm lay low in the canyons, above it all was a castle laying upon a moutain peak. The castle was shrouded with flying beldocks and other types completly surrounded. Merej lept across the canyon to the outter wall of the castle, qiuckly running to the side of the wall. The guards moved above oblivious to his presence, giving Merej the oppertunity to sneak to the gates and inside. Merej now stands looking at the main hall, empty and abandoned. the room over looked the courtyard below and the rest of the land, yet it seemed like no presence was felt. Merej walked up to the throne and found dust biuld up that looked yeons old. Merej turned back toward the door when a voice rang out through the hall. "What scum dares defile my sanctum! Gaurds aproach the perpitraitor and bring him to me!" A man oldler than time was in the place of the dust stitting on the throne and two beldocks surrounded his sides. A wave of his hand the beldocks jumped at Merej but to no avail Merej doged and shot arrows into thier back, dissapearing into the air. "So you know these creatures. I feel the hatred in your soul and the darkness is strong enough to be of my use. You cant kill them all they reapear here once destroyed, you see they are the inhabitants and obientiant servants of me and this world. I suppose you thought that they were created by the darkness in your heart, then your correct and the world of light will be the place for harvesting my army onto the realm of the gods. I wont rest until the debt is paid of my imprisonment. And your the key my freind!" Beldocks fell from the ceiling and climbed through the walls circling Merej, but Merej had out his swords ready for the first move. Beldocks jumped from all directions like a flood of blackness, and the more Merej attacked the more he grew tired and felt a pain in his chest. "you see the more you resist the darkness the more the light of you will fade out of your body. Until the darkness is left to control the body, its the nature of all who enter this dominion. Now is your last breath as a light being, Merej, god bye." The king rose and stabbed Merej in the chest completley realsing Merej from his body. Merej stood thier looking at himself unoticed from the others that surrounded him. "So now Merej i need your qualifications to help lead the war on the land of Gandinainium. To help avenge me, you have control of my army. Just take care of the gaurdians and especially the organization members that have not sworn their loyalty to me. Now go so that my rath will be complete." Merej watched as he walked out the door with the beldocks leaving Merej with the king. The king got up and opened three portals and entered all three, and Merej picked one to the left. Watching the world around him callapse into a green sereen fores.

chapter3:forest of Fallador
Merej ended up in the middle of a forest surrounded by trees and fog. Merej helplessly walked through the froest not knowing what to do or even how to return from the state he's in. The deeper he walked into the forest the more he relized that the land was doomed from the start and now he peyed the price to cause the end of it. Walking on he heard the melody of a harp being played in the distance. Merej ran toward the music ending up in an opening were light rays shot out on a stone in the edge. The music played louder as he neared the stone, and a voice echoed out. "Spirit of a forgotten hero here me. I'm the spirit of the forest and have seen what the king of darkness has done to you. He has taken your body and using your darkness to over throw the gods of this land. Now the army is battling the other creatre of this land as we speak to enter the sanctum of the heavens. This war will wage on until the sanctum is breached and all the land taken by darkness. The protectors of the land have forseen this and have locked the doors of this sanctum with thier powers to keep all evil out. Locsha the evil king now looks to destroy the sages grasp on this sanctum and even as we speak is defiling thier temples and destroying thier septurs. We need you to reserect the warroir of destiny and aid him throughout this war. Head to the dessert and..." The spirit stopped as it dissapeared into a mans hand. The man was wearing the organizations robes and rode a black horse back toward the east of the woods. Merej ran after the man leading him to a giant temple protected by a sheild barracade. Merej walked up to the sheild and it broke into pieces and Merej entered the main door leading him into a gaint room covered with pedistals depicting the sages and gods of the land. This place was beaten up by the vegitation around it and was covered in it. Merej ran to the front of the room and dusted off the pedistal in front of him. The pedistal read the one of great courage can awaken the door into the void of the gods. Merej looked and saw the reat written in wierd lanuage, hcear rof eht latsidep fo eht sdog. After Merej pronounced these words a light shot out from the pedistal and covered the room turning the room back to its past look. The room was once whole again and full of people praying and conversing, Merej whatched as the place of whorship became a battle ground and the temple was burnt to the ground and in its place the many people who prayed to this god were burnt in a pile while men in black robes stood laughing at the massacre. One looked at Merej and a wierdish glow covered his body and his eyes shot out in menacing colors. The man pointed a finger at Merej and instantly Merej was thrown into a black abyss.

Opening his eyes he found the land surrounded in dark matter and creatures of the darkness crawled throughout the area. Merej kept whatching to see a woman trying to defend her child against the creatures and the shreiks of the creatures brought the woman to her knees. The creatures stood over her and Merej got in front of the woman just in time to block the attack gashing merej over his shoulder. Merej fell and grasped his shoulder seeing tenticals crawl out and covered his arm and the ground below him dissapaered leaving him to fall into nothingness. Merej shook it off and looked to see the light side of him staring at him and when Merej tried to touch him it shattered. The pieces floated and then reunited and he saw the dark side of him agian and Merej backed off. Merej put his hands over his eyes and when he reopened them seeing that he was in another realm. "My freind you have followed me here and try your best against the demon that plauged my land. I am the protector of the forest and im asking your help agianst the demon. The demon has taken my power away and banished me here to die. I suspect my bretheren have fallen to thier power as well. As we stand here the humans try to fight an unspeakable darkness. The deamons throw the world into darkness and cuase the humans to bring out thier true form as good or evil. The good are left helpless as the evil are turned into Beldocks. I know that your body has been taken but you can be present in the realm bestoned by darkness. Your soul may have been split but you still have power over your other side. As we speak it now hunts you down and it will until you find the queen of the darkness, kill her and a rift in realms will apear killing the darkness for some time. Now head to the center of darkness from here and kill her, may your journey fail. Desian of light."The words trailed as Merej was once agian back in the dark world.

Bane looked as the castle stood in the air and a shroud covered the land. He was heading to meet with the council of the Cotnas to plan an evacuation. The man that protected the girls had teleported to somwhere he didn't know and the girls has gone to the riuns of the castle to stop most of the darkness from spreading. Bane planned to stop at a small town Quet on his way to restock on supplies. When he arrived the town seemed a little too quite for his taste and he just made his way through the shops. The only shop that wasn't closed he entered and had a look a around. None seemed to be around, it was as if none has been in this town for years. Bane heard a crash from above and saw beldocks coming through the roof

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iDosty
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Sat Jul 21, 2007 @ 05:58pm


wow thats long... I don't have enough ime to read it all now but ill finish it later... I got all the way up to where it says
october1:dark ages
Its really good so far...


iDosty
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Mon Jul 23, 2007 @ 07:31pm


My fav part of the story is when merej gave le the necklace and told her he loved her... i thought it was a great thing to put as a memory. heart I didn't like how you cut off the ending...

Bane heard a crash from above and saw beldocks coming through the roof


what happend to the rest of it?!!


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Fel_Natalis
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Sat Jul 28, 2007 @ 10:15am


it is indeed long but fun! You really got a lot going on in your mind. rofl


shinkanleader
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Sat Jul 28, 2007 @ 09:09pm


wat do u mean by that


iSporks
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Fri Aug 03, 2007 @ 03:59pm


wooow! really long but really good!! ur really good at writing long stories, most people have trouble w/ long stories like this 1. nice job 3nodding


born2fiddle
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Sat Aug 04, 2007 @ 01:56am


ok can sombody fill me in on what that was all about i don't have time to read all of that


shinkanleader
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Sat Aug 04, 2007 @ 02:00am


for any question or filling ins just PM me ok thank u.


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Wed Nov 21, 2007 @ 08:08pm


omg great story good wuk wit the next aprt since ur not even done xDDDDDDDD


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