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The God Of Thunder! SHOCK! (Pt. 1)
Breathing deep…I saw him…he was looking away…then he turned around and faced me with his demonic smile…
“Long time no see…brother…”
Then I spoke, “to soon if you ask me!”
“Well lets get this over with!” he then closed his eyes and stuck his hands in his pockets, taunting me!
I then ran at him and jumped with my fist clenched…he quickly opened his evil green eyes and blew me away!
I rolled on the ground and got back up…what was that…he didn’t even need to move…
“Lets make this more interesting…” he spoke as he created waves of shock…
The waves then made a giant lightning demon slowly rise from the ground…about 2x bigger then me!
He then started trashing at me…his punches felt like huge hammers swinging at me! I felt my ribs and chest break apart with each blow he delivered…because he was so fast I couldn’t even defend myself! Blow after blow! Hitting me from my face to my stomach!
Throwing me into a wall he finally threw one giant!
I jumped on his arm and began punching his face in!
The monster then foamed away…I looked at Shock…
I threw a right hook…only to have my throat grabbed…he was going to do it…
“Electric Choke!” he grinned as he sent static knives into my neck!
I began to twitch and drool blood as he held for what seemed like forever!
Then I closed my eyes and stopped moving…
He dropped me on the floor…
“See you later bro...” he began to walk away…
I got up and smiled…
“You think I was serious?”
His grin turned to disgust…
“And I was?”
I prepared myself…
“Then lets get serious!”

We drew are swords and ran at each other!

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rc804
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commentCommented on: Fri Jun 01, 2007 @ 11:04pm
dude come on none of the gang was in that story stare
we were with u in the last one
do u realy think we'd let u fight alone? rolleyes


commentCommented on: Sat Jun 02, 2007 @ 02:47am
if you read the last chapter you would understand.... stare



Diaz Slayer
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rc804
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commentCommented on: Sun Jun 03, 2007 @ 03:09am
ok i understand
but i realy dont think any of the gang would let u fight alone
especialy not after wat happened while u were fighting gutz
i mean almost getting killed on the tombstone if it werent for me
thats all im sayen


commentCommented on: Fri Jun 08, 2007 @ 01:40pm
eek Wowsa.....THAS WAS AWESOMNESS!! I LOVE IT!!! WRITE MORE WRITE MORE!!!! XD!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! (glomps and huggles you) YOU'RE AWESOMNESS!!!!!!! XD



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Keke Kayko
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commentCommented on: Sun Sep 09, 2007 @ 11:29pm
Cool....you're great!! so...interesting....*eyes glued to screen*


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