A short poem. please read and review! ^_^

[Akatsuki Ai]

Goodbyes

When you miss me,
Look beyond the stars,
and dream beyond your wildest dreams,
There i will always be,
Waiting...

I konw, it's short, and yeah....  

[AzureFlame]

I really like it. ^^ It's beautiful, short, and certainly sweet. I like how it offers a sense of hope, because no one likes to say goodbye.  

[Ginakage]

Aww! I liked it. It was short and sweet. Plus, TTOBI'S A GOOD BOY! XP lol Sorry... it was a moment. But the poem is still really good.  

[matchrane]

that was a cool poem i realy liked it  

[Nostalgic Escapism]

Short and sweet. ^^

 

[Archfiend Azrael]

Wow. Short and sweet, like everyone say, and I like it. But I have found that all poems need a slightly deeper value than what they seem... I'd lyk to post one of my own.

My Pot
I have a pot.
And in my pot,
I put everything.
And I heat it up, hopeing
to make some yummy soup
but the stuff I put in my pot
isn't very yummy
so when I take the lid off
it smells bad
and looks ugly
so I put the lid back on
and make sure
no one ever
opens it
again.

My poem (this is to those who don't understand it) is about someone pushing everything in thier lives deep down. Into the "Pot" and it get yucky, so they should throw it out, or talk about it, but they just push it down and put the lid on it. ^_^
PM me if u lyk it!  

[Xthe uncertain confessorX]

in a a dark world
where when
tragedy strikes is a daily report
angels wander in a human skin
trying to stop a battle that will soon begin...
and try to save the souls in need
and help the do that special deed
be one of the angels
in jesus name ,amen