Coco and Kiki talks about the ECONOMY! (comic)

[Lokun]

After reading the silliest of arguments about the 5% tax raise (in Site Feedback), I decided to make an attempt to explain the situation in as simple terms as possible...
So I made a comic about it. biggrin

(I wanted to post it here first, since I really like this guild, and I want to know if there's anything that needs to be changed before I share it somewhere more "public"... sweatdrop )

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[Lokun]

Marc Gosgosh

Nice one, I like it. Both the look and how it describes it.

Thank you so much! 4laugh That really means a lot. 3nodding

(Had to change a minor spelling error in panel 4, but if anyone spot any grammatica irregularities, please tell me and I'll try to fix them. sweatdrop )  

[xx I met my fate xx]

It's amazing!! Aside from one or two very minor typos it looks fantastic and I think it's a wonderful way to explain the economy!  

[Lokun]

xx I met my fate xx

It's amazing!! Aside from one or two very minor typos it looks fantastic and I think it's a wonderful way to explain the economy!

Wow! I'm so happy that you like it! biggrin And please tell me which typos you found so that I can fix them. 3nodding I want people to concentrate on the message in the comic, and not my deficient english... sweatdrop
Thank you for your kind words~ heart  

[Pwnder]

Lokun

Sorry, sometimes and can be Nazi like sweatdrop

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This is the super cutest comic on inflation ever emotion_kirakira

It's simple and explanitory wink  

[Lokun]

Pwnder

Lokun

Sorry, sometimes and can be Nazi like sweatdrop

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This is the super cutest comic on inflation ever emotion_kirakira

It's simple and explanitory wink

No no, don't apologize! D: I'm seriously grateful that you took the time to do this! 3nodding English isn't even my first language, so I really need to know these kind of things in order to improve myself. xd So if you saw anything else in the other panels, please let me know! Give it to me! biggrin

And thank you so much for your kind words! 4laugh  

[Pwnder]

Lokun

Pwnder

Lokun

Sorry, sometimes and can be Nazi like sweatdrop

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This is the super cutest comic on inflation ever emotion_kirakira

It's simple and explanitory wink

No no, don't apologize! D: I'm seriously grateful that you took the time to do this! 3nodding English isn't even my first language, so I really need to know these kind of things in order to improve myself. xd So if you saw anything else in the other panels, please let me know! Give it to me! biggrin

And thank you so much for your kind words! 4laugh

Haha, well, your English looks and reads better than most native speakers gonk

The only other thing I noticed was in panel 2

"....when other items starts (START) climbing in price"

You are quite welcome. When you get it all finalized can I copy it to my gaia reference guild for public veiwing?  

[Lokun]

Pwnder

Haha, well, your English looks and reads better than most native speakers gonk

The only other thing I noticed was in panel 2

"....when other items starts (START) climbing in price"

You are quite welcome. When you get it all finalized can I copy it to my gaia reference guild for public veiwing?

There, fixed it! 3nodding And if that was the last error, then I think this baby is ready to meet the world outside the guild. cool

Thank you so much for all the help! heart And if you want to use it somehwere else, I would be honored! biggrin As long as you throw in my name somewhere (for credit), I'm absolutely fine with it. 4laugh  

[Lokun]

Okay, I have now made a topic in Gaia Guides and Resources where you can read the whole comic in it's edited form. biggrin

If anyone would ever want to link the post in all its simplified glory, here it is:

 

[Ebania]

This... is... phenomenal. I'm blown away.  

[Izzy Derp]

I love it <3 good job.  

[Lokun]

Ebania

This... is... phenomenal. I'm blown away.

*blushes* redface That's so kind of you to say! 3nodding
Thank you, thank you alot! heart  

[Lokun]

Izzy Derp

I love it <3 good job.

Thank you! biggrin It means so much to me if other people like it too, so I really appreciate your comment! 4laugh  

[Darius Runan]

I'm Darius Runan and this is my favorite comic on the citadel....

*Bad Mass effect impersonation sweatdrop *