Dream Avi Tuning?? Please Help

[A TOXIC JUJUBE]

Hey everyone I have 1 of my dream avis that I feel needs some tuning. I keep buying and then selling things for it, because I'm not sure whether that will be my finished look. Here is what I have now:



Do you think it looks fine the way it is or does it need any changes. Here is my guidlines for this if I see something I take an interest to:

1.) It must be remotely the same as one now, but you know with a little add or minor change

2.) No clutter - I hate avatars with un-needed items on it, I keep things simple, but fairly shown.

3.) Limit - under 1.5 mil

4.) **Note: Last items I need for this avi are Grim Reaper, Malice Punk, Oculus Mythica, and SDPlus Real S32 Kichigai M

Thank you to anyone who makes comments. I would like to know what others think. My other dream avi is basically all in place so I don't need any changes, just need a Dullahan's Edge and Alruna's Rose 4th gen.

If anyone makes an avi that I take a liking to 5K will be your reward. Thank you for your time and effort as well. 3nodding  

[A TOXIC JUJUBE]

No comments yet. crying  

[Sabaism]

Hm, this is a hard avi to work with... mostly because I'm unfamiliar working with this kind of color scheme.

It's a good avatar, but I think what bothers me about it is the SDPlus doll, but that's just a personal bias. I've never liked them much. I like Kottan Bell, though. It provides a good contrast. If you could find another (small) pale yellow item to work with it, the avatar would look even better!  

[urAq7]

this is what i think it should look like 4laugh

Total Value: 1,312,190 Gold
Item List: Ghoul's Acre Grim Reaper Kottan Bell Black Goth Boots - M Midnight Gothic Bat Trousers Anesidora's Woe Oculus Mythica Malice Punk  

[Sabaism]

Um.. I don't really know...

Total Value: 1,631,918 Gold
[Item Information]

Item List:
Dutiful Butler's Red Shoes
Red Tribal Left Arm Tattoo
Red Tribal Right Arm Tattoo
Those Black 90s Gloves
Gilt Thorns
Summer Groom
Grim Reaper
Kottan Bell
SDPlus Real S32 Kichigai M
Midnight Gothic Bat Trousers
Oculus Mythica
Malice Punk  

[Toadette25]

The only thing that sets me off it the hair. I normally like a little more toned down hair when it comes to size. Bigish, spiky hair puts me off though. The color of it is good though, same with the rest.  

[A TOXIC JUJUBE]

1-ANIME GIRL-1

this is what i think it should look like 4laugh

Total Value: 1,312,190 Gold
Item List: Ghoul's Acre Grim Reaper Kottan Bell Black Goth Boots - M Midnight Gothic Bat Trousers Anesidora's Woe Oculus Mythica Malice Punk

No offense, but I hate backgrounds now. xd People always try to hide behind them, so I never really liked them any more. Nice try though. o.o  

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Sabaism

Um.. I don't really know...

Total Value: 1,631,918 Gold
[Item Information]

Item List:
Dutiful Butler's Red Shoes
Red Tribal Left Arm Tattoo
Red Tribal Right Arm Tattoo
Those Black 90s Gloves
Gilt Thorns
Summer Groom
Grim Reaper
Kottan Bell
SDPlus Real S32 Kichigai M
Midnight Gothic Bat Trousers
Oculus Mythica
Malice Punk

Tattoos and skin kind of showy. Not my style, but it looks nice though.  

[A TOXIC JUJUBE]

I'm thinking more or less I should change the hair and have a different companion to my understanding from some of you. o.o