[HELP/ADV] Zombie Dawn

[Sasori00923]

Well I took this bad boy off the hands of one my friends after he lost to me in a duel and did some major adjustments like reducing it from 60 cards to it's present state and needless to say I'm pretty happy with it, but as always I want feedback and suggestion. so here it is:



Total Cards 47:



Monsters 23:

Vampire Lord x1
Vampire Gennesis x1
Fushioh Richie x1
Great Dezard x1
Paladin of the Cursed Dragon x2
Mezuki x2
Goblin Zombie x2
Zombie Master x2
Doomkaiser Dragon/Assault Mode x1
Plaguespreader Zombie x1
Immortal Ruler x2
Malevolant Mech - Goku En x2
Vampire's Curse x1
Pyramid Turtle x3
Spirit Reaper x1


Traps 11:

Assault Mode Activate x1
Trap Dustshoot x1
Mirror Force x1
Bottomless Trap Hole x1
Phoenix Wing Wind Blast x1
Dimnesional Prisson x2
Raigeki Break x1
Solemn Judgement x1
Torrential Tribute x1
Call of the Haunted x1


Spells 13:

Zombie World x1
Cost Down x1
Book of Life x3
Call of the Mummy x2
Heavy Storm x1
Brain Control x1
Book of Moon x2
Foolish Burial x2



Extra Deck 2:

Doomkaiser Dragon x1
Archfiend Skull Zombie x1



and so here it is please give feedback suggestions whatever you like, and I'm also working on a warrior deck so I'll have that up soon too  

[armycat jockamoe]

Sasori00923

Well I took this bad boy off the hands of one my friends after he lost to me in a duel and did some major adjustments like reducing it from 60 cards to it's present state and needless to say I'm pretty happy with it, but as always I want feedback and suggestion. so here it is:



Total Cards 47:



Monsters: 20
Honest x3
Paladin of the Cursed Dragon x3
Malevolent Mech - Goku En x3
Chaos Sorcerer x2
Mezuki x2
Goblin Zombie x2
Pyramid Turtle x2
Plaguespreader Zombie x1
Zombie Master x1
Sangan x1


Spells: 13
Zombie World x3
Book of Life x3
Book of Moon x2
Foolish Burial x2
Heavy Storm x1
Brain Control x1
MST x1

Traps: 7
Trap Dustshoot x1
Mirror Force x1
Solemn Judgement x1
Torrential Tribute x1
Call of the Haunted x1
Bottomless Trap Hole x2






and so here it is please give feedback suggestions whatever you like, and I'm also working on a warrior deck so I'll have that up soon too

47 still to big. Changes in quote...  

[ZanoShiran]

Competitive zombie build FTW!

Monsters: 20
Dark Armed Dragon
Gorz The emissary of Darkness
Caius the Shadow Monarch x 2
Mezuki x2
Goblin Zombie x2
Zombie Master x2
Blackwing Gale the Whirlwind
Plaguespreader Zombie x1
Krebons x 2
Necro Guardna x 2
Dark Grepher
Pyramid Turtle
Spirit Reaper
Sangan



Spells: 12
Burial From a Different Dimension x 2
Instant Fusion
Mystical Space Typhoon
Emergency Teleport
Book of Life
Heavy Storm x1
Brain Control x1
Book of Moon x2
Foolish Burial x2

Traps: 8
Trap Dustshoot
Mirror Force
Bottomless Trap Hole x 2
Phoenix Wing Wind Blast
Solemn Judgement
Torrential Tribute
Call of the Haunted



Extra Deck: 15
Magical Android
Ally of Justice Catastor
Brionac Dragon of the Ice Boundary x 2
Doomkaiser Dragon
Revived King Ha Des x 2
Goyo Guardian
Black Rose Dragon
Stardust Dragon
Thought Ruler Archfiend
Colossal Fighter
Red Dragon Archfiend
Mist Wurm
Darkfire Dragon

This is a competitive build similar to the ones being used at SJC and regionals. Some are slightly different, using the Destiny Hero Engine or the Diva engine, but this should suffice for now.  

[Sasori00923]

both builds are highly appreciated but the problems is, that I don't want to stray from the zombie concept by running dad, psychics, bw, or other none related monsters....I mean yeah those suggestions work wonders because they have great effects and good playability but they stray from the concept, this deck isn't a competitive deck it's just a good deck to have fun playing my friends and winning some bets, Honest i can see the purpose cause of the lights in the deck, adding chaos would be feasible and running another goku-en is feasible too, thanks for the suggestions to both of you...now all that's left is to revise and fix