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I wrote a daughter of evil poem,wanna hear it?

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PostPosted: Sat Oct 02, 2010 8:27 pm
This is a poem based off of the three daughter of evil songs.Hope you like it!! and please don't critique too harshly...
Daughter of evil-Servant of evil-Message of regret
In a kingdom,ruled by a queen
a vicious young girl,of only fourteen
she cares for herself,granting no one's wishes
having her meals served on the best of silver dishes.

Her servant is kind,and never mean
of the same age,of only fourteen
he crushes on the green-haired girl,taken by the blue-haired man
while the queen swears to get her blue lover back any way she can
So the servant kills his green love,because he must follow orders of his queen up above
and the queen is overjoyed,while the servant weeps in sorrow
neithet aware of the rebellion tommorrow.


So,her people come,to give her what she gets
this is her last day alive,any opposite bets?
Her servant does not agree,so he makes a choice
because they are of twins,separate only by voice
so he dies in her place,and now she is in sorrow
writing her wish,to be sent tommorrow.


A message in a bottle,it is said some where
when put in the water,in the ocean air
if it does not break,then you get this,
a message in a glass bottle,a granted glass wish.
And she does just this,one very late night.
With the faint ocean breeze,stars shining bright.
"If I am reborn," she wishes silently,
"I want to be with him,living peacefully."

He looks up from his book,and dries his wet eyes.
Then turns to see,in silent surprise
A young girl,a girl very lean,
a girl of his age,of only fourteen.
 
PostPosted: Wed Oct 27, 2010 6:15 pm
eek You have talent...  

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PostPosted: Wed Oct 27, 2010 8:46 pm
Oh maii. That was excellent ^^ -applause-  
PostPosted: Thu Oct 28, 2010 11:54 am
Thats..Amazing! This was done very well! :>  

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PostPosted: Sat Oct 30, 2010 4:31 am
Want. :3
 
PostPosted: Sat Oct 30, 2010 6:35 am
That was cute biggrin  

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PostPosted: Sat Oct 30, 2010 7:44 am
amazing!  
PostPosted: Sat Oct 30, 2010 7:56 am
very cool  

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PostPosted: Sun Dec 12, 2010 10:56 am
wah,i was afraid no one would care to post.thank you~  
PostPosted: Sun Dec 12, 2010 11:05 am
That was amazing ^ ^  


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PostPosted: Fri Jan 27, 2012 4:40 pm
Thats awsome biggrin 3nodding  
PostPosted: Thu Jun 13, 2013 10:22 am
Gosh, amazing ( can you do one for servant of evil the story from Prince Raleo check the video on YouTube, ( Type in servant of evil english dub by that user )
Like I said your amazing!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!  

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