Alright. ♥
Well honestly, I liked it. I like it alot infact, you perfectly wrote my characters the way their personalities should be. The story was alright, I mean.. Yeah it was real good for something I didn't have much information about. So yes, I did enjoy that alot. It was great having to read my characters in a story for the first time. Though I think one little thing that bothered me about the story was the usage of their names. I kinda think you used 'Hideaki' and 'Ume' to much, mhm. But other than that, I really liked it. Thank you. >v<